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Week 1 / Assignment 1/Chenjshi

Hello professor, This is Chenjshi(Yuqiong), it is my first time editing Wikipedia, i hope i can learn a lot from this part. Chenjshi (talk) 19:12, 24 October 2021 (UTC) Chenjshi(talk) 01:07, 12 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chenjshi Welcome to Wikipedia! Make sure to add a space before signing, as it did not capture your full Wikipedia name (it was not turned into a link). --- FULBERT (talk) 21:49, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Chenjshi Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. Make sure to preview it and confirm you are logged on first. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:07, 24 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Nenenie

Hi, everyone. Here is Haoxuan Nie's week 2 report.

1. I found that my assigned article is rated C level, which means there is a lot to fill in. The article uses a number of sub-headings to describe in detail where this climate exists on different continents. The content of the article is also related to the topic, but the whole article does not cite many reliable sources, which needs to be added.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Humid_subtropical_climate

3. I think actively adding in-text citations in every sentence of the article can enhance the professionalism and credibility of the article, making it a good entry. A good article requires a neutral tone, a clear structure, balanced content, and good citations. --Nenenie (talk) 22:51, 14 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nenenie Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:43, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Dear professor, I completed the article evaluation, here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nenenie/Evaluate_an_Article --Nenenie (talk) 00:07, 19 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Nenenie, Nice work. Current for this week. FULBERT (talk) 22:47, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week2-Assignment 2 - Amber MWY

Hello, everyone, this is Amber. 1. I found an article that talked about the Chinese language, but its timeline is not very clear. The 1950s is very important for the revolution of the Chinese. so I edited it be highlighted in bold. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_language 3. A good article should have very clear. A good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview.--Amber MWY (talk) 14:59, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Amber MWY, Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:44, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, Hi professor, I did it but I do not know why it did not show that https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article--Amber MWY (talk) 11:45, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Amber MWY, The page this sent me to was not your completed evaluation. Please review the training as the link to do it is in there. Ping me when done. FULBERT (talk) 22:48, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, Hi professor, I found this page. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article. Please check it, Thank you.--Amber MWY (talk) 14:01, 23 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Amber MWY, OK, now answer some of the questions for the evaluation itself. It asks you questions on the top of the page so answer some of them on the bottom. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 13:47, 24 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT,Dear Professor, I answered it again. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article Thank you!--Amber MWY (talk) 15:04, 25 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Amber MWY, This is still a bit short, but good enough for now. Week 2 is done. FULBERT (talk) 01:47, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, Thank you, Professor!--Amber MWY (talk) 03:59, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Gdaymate011

Hello, I hope you are all doing well, this is Kai Wu's report for the week 2 assignment. This article I assigned to myself is related to stock market protection. It's a class C level article so there is plenty of room for improvement. For this article, I found that it has a daily average of 146 views. there are some issues of the content are lack of evidence and support, the stock analysis method is currently missing, such as the current ratio, Return on Equity, etc. None of these important methods for stock market analysis are listed; moreover, these content will be added on.

Link to my article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stock_market_prediction

what I have learned in the process is by adding technical content into theoretical content can better enhance the credibility of the article.Gdaymate011 (talk) 01:20, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gdaymate011, Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:44, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor, the link of evaluation, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gdaymate011/Evaluate_an_Article Gdaymate011 (talk) 04:13, 19 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Gdaymate011, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon ": " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 22:50, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
User:FULBERT fixed format
Gdaymate011 I will mark this as completed, but please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Assignment 2 is now current. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:26, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Second Post / bl2240

1. The article that I choose was "Asian Hip Pop". This is currently a level C article and needs many improvements. The history background part seems to be incomplete and many key figures and people were not added to the article. The citation also has some issues and some do not contain one. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bl2240/Evaluate_an_Article 3. I learned that all articles should be reviewed and evaluated before sending to the public. If not, others would get incomplete or false information. --Bl2240 (talk) 07:01, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Bl2240, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:49, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERTHi, I just assign myself the article in the Dashboard. Please check it out, thx! --Bl2240 (talk) 05:20, 19 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Bl2240, Nice overview, and current with this week. FULBERT (talk) 22:51, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Third Post / bl2240

1. The article that I copyedited was "Changpeng Zhao" (The CEO of Binance). 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Changpeng_Zhao&type=revision&diff=1050501631&oldid=1047007898 3. I learned that Wikipedia is free for all to edit, yet we should be extra careful when doing our editing. In this case, the original writer did not provide the DOB for Changpeng Zhao. --Bl2240 (talk) 07:07, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Bl2240, I would ordinarily revert your edit with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE" because the source you used is not as credible or reliable as would be ideal. However, being your first edit, I will accept. Nice learning to edit, though please use a more credible source (a journal article, Statista, NYTimes, etc.) next time. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:52, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Bl2240 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here and it will then be complete and with your credit. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:53, 18 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, Thanks and I added this one in the Dashboards. --Bl2240 (talk) 05:26, 19 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Bl2240, You actually added a citation, so beyond what was needed for this week. You are current. FULBERT (talk) 22:52, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Second Post / Jjjjdddd199704

Hello, this is dongjunjie's second week post

1. I found that the articles I assigned belong to the Academic disciplines category. This article answers very rigorously. This article is defined and recognized by the academic journals that publish the research results, as well as the academic groups and academic departments or faculties in the colleges and universities where the practitioners belong. At the same time, it has a very comprehensive references as a support, so that readers can obtain a lot of useful knowledge from it 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cross-cultural_communication 3. I learned how to add citations in the text correctly in this article to enhance the professionalism and credibility of the article. 4.the link of evaluation, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jjjjdddd199704/Evaluate_an_Article#Evaluate_the_article --Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 04:24, 20 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jjjjdddd199704, Nice overview. Current with this week. FULBERT (talk) 22:54, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Third Post / Jjjjdddd199704

1. The article that I copyedited was "Ren Zhengfei" (The CEO of Huawei). 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ren_Zhengfei 3. Because everyone can edit the wiki, I afarid to provide errors Information, and I checked my reference again and again. In this change, I found that the original text did not mention Ren Zhengfei’s ranking and wealth in Forbes, so I added "In April 2021, the Forbes Global Rich List was released, and Ren Zhengfei ranked 2378 on the list with a fortune of 1.3 billion US dollars. "this sentence. 4. the link of "Ren Zhengfei"'s Bibliography, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jjjjdddd199704/Ren_Zhengfei/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography --Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 04:48, 20 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jjjjdddd199704, Great! Current with this week. FULBERT (talk) 22:54, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 1/ Assignment 1/ TFMonk19970531

Hi everyone! This is Tianhao Fu. This is my first time editing with Wikipedia and I am very excited! TFMonk19970531 (talk) 07:39, 20 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

TFMonk19970531, Welcome to Wikipedia, and I hope you find this an interesting experience! FULBERT (talk) 22:57, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ TFMonk19970531

The article I found needs to be updated is Atua(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Atua). The article is rated stub and I found this article needs expansion both in content and structure. Each god can be explained more with research. Besides that, citations could be better developed and need to be more reliable. Basically everything could to be better. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 14:11, 20 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

TFMonk19970531 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --FULBERT (talk) 01:25, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

FULBERT Hi Professor I have assigned myself an article. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 12:46, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

TFMonk19970531 Please remember to indent your replies with one colon "  : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply
FULBERT Got it! --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 06:08, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Where is the link to your article evaluation per the assignment? Please reply to me here with it and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:25, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ SABA90S

Hi, This is Saba. I did assign an article for this week, and then I evaluated the assigned article. Please see the below link of the sandbox I created to see the process of what I have done. --SABA90S (talk) 15:58, 20 October 2021 (UTC) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SABA90S/Evaluate_an_Article[reply]

SABA90S Nice work! Current. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:27, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Cloi929

Hi everyone! Here is Ruijia Liang. I am so excited to editing Wikipedia. And Let's be "Wikipediar". --Cloi929 (talk) 12:38, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cloi929, Welcome to Wikipedia; I hope you find this a valuable experience! FULBERT (talk) 01:28, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week2/ Assignment2/ Cloi929

As Covid-19 spreads across the United States, the number and duration of school closures increase. Children from families that depend on school food, may be further disadvantaged by insufficient nutrition. And I learned, even short-term food insecurity can lead to long-term developmental, psychological, physical, and emotional damage.Cloi929 (talk) 04:57, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cloi929, Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. FULBERT (talk) 01:31, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

1.https://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/nejmp2005638 2.Child hunger has been one of the major health problems in various parts of the world. With the emergence of the Covid-19 pandemic, the problem increased severity as more members of the society suffered the blow. My initial impression of this article is that the pandemic is a very uncertain factor. When schools are closed, children will miss at least $30 worth of food services every week. This has a long-term effect on their health. 3.This article was published in a medical academic journal. It is authoritative and credible. I think everything is related to the topic of the article. The tone is neutral. The citations are all valid. I think there will be some lag in information. It is mentioned in the article that all schools are closed and students will not receive school food subsidies. The current situation is that most schools are back to normal, and students can eat at school. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cloi929/Evaluate_an_Article--Cloi929 (talk) 01:00, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cloi929, Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:16, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Cloi929, This is now fine, though please do this as a reply to me after my comment. OK for now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 17:35, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week1/ Assignment 1/ Beccabubu

Hi everyone, this is Huachen Bu, I'm really excited at the opportunity to contribute to Wikipedia! Come along! --Beccabubu (talk) 12:01, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Beccabubu, Welcome to Wikipedia; I hope you find this a valuable experience! FULBERT (talk) 01:29, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Crazytoppp

Hello everyone, this is Mengfei Han, It is the first time I edit in Wikipidia. I am glad to talk with everyone here!Crazytoppp (talk) 21:55, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Crazytoppp Welcome to Wikipedia! Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. Also, please revise the heading as this should be for assignment one. -- FULBERT (talk) 01:33, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Copyedit an Article/ Nenenie

1. My Copyedit article is "A Madman's Diary". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Madman%27s_Diary

2. I just added some details and change some words that can make the article more specific. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=A_Madman%27s_Diary&type=revision&diff=1051127236&oldid=1045458837

3. I was worried about revising the article at first. I was afraid I didn't know enough about it and would make mistakes. So I chose a topic that I particularly liked and knew well. I think by adding some details, readers can better understand the main idea of the article and feel the feelings the author wants to express. Make the story described in the theme more vivid. --Nenenie (talk) 18:47, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nenenie, This is fine for now. You may want to add a citation to this as well given the amount you contributed, though I think this is good enough for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 01:35, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / EricaLiu1260

Hello folks,

Hope you all are well this week. This is Erica Liu’s assignment for week 2. The article I assigned is ‘tasting menu’. My topic is about changing the menu and it is related. However, it is a Class S-level article and has an average of 52 views every day. In my opinion, there are some places needed improvement. For example, the effect of the tasting menu and the famous example of the tasting menu can be added in this article.

I would say this article is still helpful for my study and the tasting menu can be used in my real-world practice. This is the link to the article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tasting_menuEricaLiu1260 (talk) 23:27, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

EricaLiu1260, Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. FULBERT (talk) 01:31, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
EricaLiu1260, This has still not been complete. Please finish before the end of the day today. FULBERT (talk) 18:05, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 1 / First Post/ Wikisun1952

Hi, this is Jieni. It is my pleasure to meet you guys. This is my first time editing Wikipedia. Wikisun1952 (talk) 05:45, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikisun1952, Welcome to Wikipedia! Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week (including the training) and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply.
Hi Professor, I have finished all the assignments for week one. Thank you. User:FULBERT Wikisun1952 (talk) 01:06, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Wikisun1952 Nicely done. Current with Week 1. --FULBERT (talk) 18:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Copyedit an Article/ SABA90S

I have chosen an article relevant to the travel business as I am passionate about this topic. I have read this article and went through it to see if there are any mistakes. However, it was hard for me to try to find something in a professional article at the beginning. I have realized a couple of pronunciation and grammar mistakes. I edited and modified all of the mistakes I found and published the changes. Here is the article link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/COVID-19_pandemic_on_cruise_ships

And also my bibliography page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SABA90S/COVID-19_pandemic_on_cruise_ships/Bibliography. --SABA90S (talk) 14:27, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

SABA90S, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 17:03, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, Please see the below link of the diff. --SABA90S (talk) 18:03, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=COVID-19_pandemic_on_cruise_ships&diff=1051278608&oldid=1051271324

SABA90S, I am not sure how you got the coding around your reply, though next time please just use " : " with replies. This is fine, though did you see the change that was then done with your edits? It is fine for this week (current with Week 3) though Wikipedia articles maintain either British or American English within an article, however it was initially written, for consistency. Good enough for now. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:46, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Cecilia haha

1. This article describes the disruption of shipping routes caused by the pandemic among shipping companies worldwide. I added the effect section in the 2021 Global Supply Chain Crisis.

2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article

3. In this process, I have gained more directions and a deeper understanding of the part I researched, and at the same time, I can help others understand the influence of the Supply Chain in this process.--Cecilia haha (talk) 20:16, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cecilia haha, I see that you created your review page, though I do not see you answering any of the questions you have there. Please answer some of them as part of your review and then ping me here and I will come and review them. FULBERT (talk) 11:00, 23 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, I answered the questions. Here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article#Why_you_have_chosen_this_article_to_evaluate%3F Please look at it. Thank you!Cecilia haha (talk) 22:21, 24 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Cecilia haha Where did you answer the questions asked from the top of that page? For example, did you answer the questions, "Is the article neutral?" or "Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?" --- FULBERT (talk) 23:28, 24 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am sorry about that! I rewrite the evalutation and here is my update.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article#Evaluate_the_articleCecilia haha (talk) 00:13, 25 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Cecilia haha, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon "  : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:29, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, I added the colon: before each level--Cecilia haha (talk) 03:20, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Cecilia haha, Great! Week 2 is current. FULBERT (talk) 16:00, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Notkc01

Hi everyone, this is Kyle. I am glad to be here and have my first editing experience with Wikipedia.Notkc01 (talk) 06:52, 23 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Notkc01, Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this an interesting and exciting experience! FULBERT (talk) 10:56, 23 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

week1/assignment1/Jw6740

Hi professor, this is Jing. It is my first time editing the wiki and I am excited to learn more skills. Jw6740 (talk) 17:43, 23 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jw6740, Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find learning to edit to be interesting! FULBERT (talk) 13:44, 24 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Third Post/ Cecilia haha

1. I copyedited Jack Ma's wiki. Here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jack_Ma

2. The link after i edited: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Jack_Ma/Bibliography 

I edited two sentences in Jack Ma's biliography. 1)"In April 2021, Jack Ma ranked 26th in the "2021 Forbes Global Rich List" with a fortune of US$48.4 billion." 2) "In August 2014, according to the Bloomberg Billionaires Index, Jack Ma has a net worth of US$21.8 billion, making him the richest man in China."

3. Since I changed the bibliography, I need to go to the official website to ensure his information is correct and reliable. Although Jack Ma is a very famous person, I found that Wikipedia still had some omissions when I searched for his life records. I discovered that although Wikipedia has records for many things or people, the records are not very comprehensive.Cecilia haha (talk) 23:32, 24 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cecilia haha, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 01:30, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jack_Ma&diff=prev&oldid=1051675767 I edited the article two times, so it look similiary sometimes.--Cecilia haha (talk) 03:23, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Cecilia haha, Great. This is now fine. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 16:02, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Week 2/Assignment/Chenjshi

Hello everyone, this is Chenjshi (yuqiong)’s assignment 2. 1. The article I assigned is QR code payment, and this is a way of mobile payment. The topic of my article is the discussion about mobile payments, and they are related. 2. In my opinion, some mobile payment applications can be added to the article, not only in transportation, such as in daily life and store payment. We can use mobile payment to buy goods in the supermarket, and merchants can also provide a QR code for the payment. (Venmo, Quick pay and Zella). 3. This is link to the article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/QR_code_paymentChenjshi (talk) 02:48, 25 October 2021 (UTC) 4. This is the link of evaluation, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chenjshi/Evaluate_an_ArticleChenjshi (talk) 01:22, 29 October 2021 (UTC)Chenjshi(talk)[reply]

Chenjshi, Please fix the structure of your reply here and then ping me again and I will review. Right now, it is difficult to read as there are few spaces between sentences and it does not follow the steps of the assignment. FULBERT (talk) 01:33, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Chenjshi, OK for now. Week 2 is current. --- FULBERT (talk) 16:07, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 1 / Assignment 1/yf2196

Hello professor, I am YiFan Feng. This is my first time editing Wikipedia and I am very excited. I don’t know why the content I uploaded disappeared. This is the second time I have written this content. I hope it can be saved and let me complete my learning goals. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yifannn (talk • contribs) 04:19, 25 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yifannn Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:34, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week2 / Assignment 2/yf2196

Hope you all are doing well this week. This is YiFan Feng assignment for week 2. This should be my homework for the second week. I don't know why I couldn't find my homework for the previous two times. This is the article I found about brunch. It says British brunch is around eleven o 'clock, and I don't think there's a standard time for brunch.

This assignment is based on the evaluation of Wikipedia, and I have learned a lot in the process of finding and evaluating Wikipedia. I hope I can continue to learn about Wikipedia. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Brunch&action=edit&section=3

Yifannn Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:35, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

What is using four ～～～～ for tilde？ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yifannn (talk • contribs) 06:12, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yifannn When you use ~~~~ at the end of your post it automatically signs your posts. Please use this as a reply and see / edit your other assignments for Weeks 1-3 as they are not yet complete. Please make sure to also assign yourself your articles, and have this along with Week 4 complete by tomorrow. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:52, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have assigned my own article.... 

Yifannn (talk) 19:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yifannn You must assign your own articles in the Wiki Education dashboard, at the top of [dashboard home page]. Please do this and then ping me here and I will review. --FULBERT (talk) 23:04, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikidata weekly summary #491

Here's your quick overview of what has been happening around Wikidata over the last week.
  • Other Noteworthy Stuff
    • QID ("Initialism of Q-identifier, a unique identifier for an item in Wikidata. [from 2012]") now has an entry in Wiktionary
    • The 3rd edition of the Coolest Tool Award is looking for nominations (see announcement on wikimedia-l). Please submit your favorite tools by October 27th. The awarded projects will be announced and showcased in a virtual ceremony in December.
  • Development
    • The new WDQS Streaming Updater now fully shipped to production. This will help the Query Service better deal with the amount of edits happening on Wikidata. (more information)
    • Mismatch Finder: Continuing work on the results page where mismatches are shown for review. We are focusing on showing all necessary information for a mismatch to make a good determination if it is a mismatch in Wikidata, the external source or neither.
    • Finishing the work on the new change dispatching system that improves how Wikipedia and the other Wikimedia projects are notified about edits happening on Wikidata that affect them. Currently tying up some lose ends.
    • Preparing for WikidataCon.

You can see all open tickets related to Wikidata here. If you want to help, you can also have a look at the tasks needing a volunteer.

Read the full report · Unsubscribe · Mohammed Sadat (WMDE) 14:31, 25 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Gdaymate011

Hello, this is Kai Wu's third assignment 1: My copyedited article is the "Opium War".this is the link to my assigned article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Opium_Wars.

2: I have added one paragraph regarding the history of the opium war in order to make the article looks more detailed. this is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Opium_Wars&type=revision&diff=1051895188&oldid=1050470888.

3: The reason I am doing this article is that I'm very interested in history. Therefore, I hope to make this historical article more complete through my own contribution. Through my reading of this article, I found that many parts are not quite complete. I added some historical background at the beginning, hoping to make the article more detailed.

4: The link for the article "the Opium War" bibliography:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gdaymate011/Opium_Wars/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography Gdaymate011 (talk) 06:22, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gdaymate011, Nice work. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 01:44, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/assignment 2/Huilin826

The article is the Australian Jazz Museum was held at the Whitehorse Hotel, Melbourne, in August 1996. It is also accredited by the national film and sound archive of Australia as being part of the national material, Australian Jazz Museum is open to the public on Tuesday and Friday. It is a sign of Australian Jazz, creating more platforms for jazz music. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Australian_Jazz_Museum

Huilin826 Please remove the extra information at the end of your signature (you do not have to repeat it) and then ping me here and I will review. Please first do Week 1. Ping me when done. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:41, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Okay, I think is right. Huilin826 (talk) 23:25, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Huilin826, This is ok for now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 16:26, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/assignment 3/Huilin826

The article I found related to music history because I am so interested in any type of music, such as pop, rock, and jazz. Different types of music bring specific feelings to audiences. This is my first time editing it, it is so hard for me. I must find some mistakes in the grammar and pronunciation. There is a link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Music_history

Huilin826 Please remove the extra information at the end of your signature (you do not have to repeat it) and then ping me here and I will review. Please first do Week 1. Ping me when done. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:41, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Huilin826 (talk) 23:24, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Huilin826, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Huilin826 (talk) 23:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Huilin826, Please remember to indent one more than the current indent when replying. Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --FULBERT (talk) 23:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Music_history&type=revision&diff=1052937900&oldid=1052877954Huilin826 (talk) 23:51, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week2/ Assignment 2/ Beccabubu

The article I assign is “communication studies”. Good communication skills are essential to allow others and yourself to understand information more accurately and quickly, so I find it is interesting to learn more about this area.
There are some issues with this article, so I made some adjustment advice below: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Beccabubu/Evaluate_an_Article
I think the whole process of evaluating a Wikipedia article is fun and challenging; it gives value to my knowledge and helps me learn about new things. --Beccabubu (talk) 13:53, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Beccabubu, Nice work. Please do not indent your initial posts here; only indent replies. OK for now and Week 2 is now current. FULBERT (talk) 01:39, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This Month in Education: October 2021

This Month in Education

Volume 10 • Issue 10 • October 2021

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In This Issue

About This Month in Education · Subscribe/Unsubscribe · Global message delivery · For the team: ZI Jony 15:40, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Growth Newsletter #19

Welcome to the nineteenth newsletter from the Growth team!

The Growth team's objective is to work on software changes that help retain new contributors in Wikimedia projects.

Structured tasks

"Add an image" prototype, showing suggested image for the article
  • "Add a link" is the team's first structured task. It uses machine-learning to suggest wikilinks as easy edits for newcomers. It was deployed in May 2021 on four Wikipedias and then in July on eight more Wikipedias after we evaluated the initial results. So far, we've seen a high level of engagement from newcomers. Communities that have the feature suggested valuable ideas for improvement. We'll work on improvements and then contact more communities to deploy it.
  • "Add an image" is the team's second structured task, currently in development. It is an editing task that suggests Commons images for unillustrated Wikipedia articles. We have conducted many community discussions and tests. Then, we've decided to build a first prototype. We'll first deploy it only to our pilot Wikipedias, to learn whether newcomers can be successful with the task. The project page contains links to interactive prototypes. We are very interested to hear your thoughts on this idea as we build and test the early versions. These prototypes have already been tested by newcomers, in English and Spanish.

News for mentors

  • The Mentor dashboard is available at our pilot wikis: Arabic, Czech, and Bengali Wikipedias. It will soon be available at a few more volunteering wikis, as a test. [1]
  • At wikis where the mentor dashboard is deployed, a new filter is available for mentors. Mentors can monitor their mentees' activity in Watchlist and RecentChanges, so they can help support their mentees' work. For privacy reasons, this filter can't be accessed by someone else than the mentor itself. This filter only filters mentees assigned to the mentor. This filter is not visible for people who are not listed as mentors [2]

Community configuration

  • Communities now have the ability to configure how Growth features behave on their own wikis. At Special:EditGrowthConfig, community members can add a list of volunteer mentors, alter the templates used for suggested edits, update help links, and more. This special page is editable by administrators and interface admins.

Scaling

  • We are proud to announce that all Wikipedias now have the Growth features! Thank you to all the community members who helped the team build the features and bring them to their wikis. The only exception is Chinese Wikipedia (zh), for technical reasons. [3]
  • The wikis that have Growth features deployed have been part of A/B testing since deployment, in which some newcomers did not receive the new features. Now, all of the newcomers on 280 of the smallest of those Wikipedias have the features. [4][5]
  • A test is undergoing at English Wikipedia: 25% of newcomers receive the Growth features. The results from this test will be part of a discussion of how to proceed on that wiki.
  • Now that Growth features are available at Wikipedia, the Growth team considers to extend them to other projects. Some Wikisource users have expressed some interest in getting Growth features. There is currently a discussion about implementing them on Wikisource.

News for communities

  • Do you have questions about the Growth features? This translatable FAQ contains answers to the most common questions about the Growth team work.
  • The Growth features were recently used in a test amongst Latin American donors to give donors the opportunity to learn to edit. You can see the results here.
  • Interface translations are important for newcomers. Please help for your language, by translating or copyediting interface translations for the Growth features.
  • Help:GettingStarted was a feature developed in 2013, which directed newcomers to articles that needed editing. We recently removed this feature from all wikis, because it has been replaced by the Growth features.

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18:36, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Tzc0725

Tzc0725 (talk) 22:34, 26 October 2021 (UTC) What I Did and What I Learned[reply]

This week I have created a Wikipedia Account by going to the homepage of Wikipedia and clicking ‘Create account’ in the homepage’s top right. After that, I have entered all the necessary personal information, including my preferable username and a strong 10-digit alphanumeric password, and clicked the "Create your account" tab to create an account on Wikipedia. From this, I have learned how to create a personal account on a digital platform to interact with people across the world through data and information.

68.132.244.48 (talk) 00:19, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Tzc0725 (talk • contribs) 22:32, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Tzc0725 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:36, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:24, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tzc0725 This is now fine. Current with Week 1. --- FULBERT (talk) 16:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Tzc0725

Tzc0725 (talk) 22:37, 26 October 2021 (UTC) How to evaluate a Wikipedia article[reply]

For evaluating the quality of a Wikipedia article, the text and references used in the article, the talk page of the article, and the history covering page editing are required to be focused.

How to edit a Wikipedia article

For editing a Wikipedia article first step is to look for the edit link which is provided on the right side of every section of the article and then click on the next to the paragraph to revise.

Selected article to evaluate

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Online_shopping

Evaluation of the above-selected article

The text used in the Wikipedia article on Online Shopping is easy to understand and grammatically correct, and a lot of references are used therein which are accessible. The talk page of the article provides spaces for editors to discuss the required changes in the article and also, the article is not edited many times which makes it a good article. Though, the article needs to include some more real-life examples of online shopping from the past two years and how online shopping tendency has grown in the COVID-19 pandemic.

What I Did and What I Learned

I have selected a Wikipedia article on Online Shopping and evaluated it by considering the text and references it used, its talk page, and history showing the number of edits made on this article. There was no such real-life example of online shopping in the selected article and thus, I have added some real-life examples on online shopping from the past two years and how online shopping tendency has grown in the COVID-19 pandemic to the selected article. I have learned about the areas to consider while evaluating a Wikipedia article.

Tzc0725 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:37, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tzc0725, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Okay. I've just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tzc0725 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week, including the required training, and then ping me here. Be sure to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Ping me here and sign it when you are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:29, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERTOkay. Just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tzc0725, Week 2 is ok. Current. FULBERT (talk) 18:30, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Tzc0725

Tzc0725 (talk) 22:41, 26 October 2021 (UTC) The Finalised Topic:[reply] 

Consumer Behavior

Copyedit the selected article

In order to copyedit an article, the first step is to fix the punctuations and remove any kind of typo in the article. After that, the article needs to be scanned for finding out the errors of the ways by which the article needs to be improved.

What I Did and What I Learned

The Wikipedia article I have selected for copyediting is on Consumer behavior https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consumer_behaviour). . The previous Wikipedia article is on Online Shopping and the current one is on Consumer Behaviour, both rely on each other as online shopping is a modern behavior of consumers related to shop things they need. Further, the difference between the previous week's version and the current one is that the previous version includes an evaluation of a Wikipedia article and the current one covers copyediting of a Wikipedia article. From this week, I have learned about the way to copyedit a Wikipedia article.

Link to the diff:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Consumer_behaviour&diff=prev&oldid=1052751826 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tzc0725 (talk • contribs) 22:10, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Link to the talk page:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Consumer_behaviour#Consumer_Influence_in_Society

68.132.244.48 (talk) 00:23, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Tzc0725 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:37, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Okay. I think this is right.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tzc0725, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Okay. I've just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tzc0725 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week, including the required training, and then ping me here. Be sure to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Ping me here and sign it when you are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERTOkay. Just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tzc0725, Week 3 is now current. --FULBERT (talk) 18:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week3 / Assignment 3/yf2196

Yifannn (talk) 06:41, 27 October 2021 (UTC) YiFan Feng[reply]

The last article was about "brunch" because it said that the English brunch was around eleven o'clock. I think there is no standard time for brunch. Because I should add a time period for brunch in this Wikipedia.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Brunch&action=edit&section=3


This time I upgraded according to the type I selected last time, and the Wikipedia article I chose for editing is this article about "time" content. It's because the previous Knowledge Encyclopedia article was about the time period of brunch, and the current article is the concept of time. What time is the morning defined by people? When is it early in the morning? But there seems to be no answer or standard information on this topic, and I am just participating and guessing. I didn't know about the evaluation of Wikipedia articles before in my impression, nor did I participate in the discussion. This extra points project has allowed me to learn a lot of things I haven't discovered before, and I hope I can learn more later.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Morning&action=edit&section=3

Yifannn Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. Some of the things you did were also not required. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 00:03, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I tink i finished all 4 part Yifannn (talk) 19:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yifannn You must assign your own articles in the Wiki Education dashboard, at the top of [dashboard home page]. Please do this and then ping me here and I will review. --FULBERT (talk) 23:05, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 1/assignment 1/huilin826

This is huilin, this is my first time using Wikipedia and editing it. It will be hard for me, but I will try my best. Huilin826 (talk) 07:04, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Huilin826, Welcome to Wikipedia; hoping you find it an exciting space! FULBERT (talk) 23:52, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Notkc01

Hi everyone, This is Kyle. Hope everyone is having a good week. Here is my Week2 assignment.

1. The article is about physical fitness and it gives people with any level of fitness knowledge with a general idea of the fitness world.

2. The link for the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Physical_fitness#High_intensity_interval_training

3. The article made a good general introduction for physical fitness but I found that each training category was only described by one sentence. For some categories, the information is not accurate and can be revised. Here is my evaluation link for the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkc01/Evaluate_an_Article Notkc01 (talk) 13:15, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Notkc01, Nice work on Week 2. Done. FULBERT (talk) 00:07, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Assignment 2 / Sleep by 11

This week I learned how to evaluate an article and some tools for editing Wikipedia text, including how to use the whole interface, etc. I have discovered that Wikipedia is a powerful tool that allows us to edit the encyclopedia objectively. The system has set up is very good and therefore gives us, the editors, a good sense of independence and objectivity.Sleep by 11 (talk) 15:58, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sleep by 11 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:50, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sleep by 11, This is the last opportunity to fix this for this week's assignment. FULBERT (talk) 17:50, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Assignment 3 / Sleep by 11

This week I learned how to assign an article while looking up references online. I have a better understanding of this editing system, including how to edit an encyclopedia and how to build one. The whole process is as rigorous as writing an academic paper.Sleep by 11 (talk) 16:08, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sleep by 11, Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 23:50, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Assignment 3 / Cloi929

1.my copyedited article is: Steinhardt, N. (2019). Chinese architecture : A history. Princeton University Press. https://www.proquest.com/docview/2193647558/$N?accountid=12768&forcedol=true&forcedol=true[1] 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_architecture&diff=1052774604&oldid=1052686089 3.At first I was nervous, I was afraid that I would make some mistakes, like grammatical errors. But I am happy when I finished. For me, I like ancient Chinese architecture very much. Let more people to have a deeper understanding of ancient Chinese architecture. I think it's great!Cloi929 (talk) 06:41, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cloi929, This source is good though it points to a database. Can you fix it so it points to the book's ISBN? This involves only editing that one source you inserted. Ping me here when you are finished and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:40, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi professor I already make the change, please check! Thank you.--Cloi929 (talk) 23:59, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ TFMonk19970531

1. This article a Chinese Basketball Association (CBA) team Shanghai Sharks. Briefly explained what the team did throughout the years. However I found somebody has added some facts that are not true to this article and I decide to delete that. before the edit, the article states that " In 2021, point guard Alex Fisher had 69 points in a regular season game against the Beijing Ducks". In fact Alex Fisher is a football player. The article also mentions that Ben Simmons is belonged to the team, which is not true. Ben Simmons is a NBA player currently playing in Philadelphia 76ERS.

2.Link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shanghai_Sharks

3. I have learned that some people may take advantage of Wikipedia to edit something that is not true, which may make others believe the fact. I help others not see fake information in the article --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 05:39, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please fix your reply to Week 2 and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
TFMonk19970531 Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Nenenie

1. I added a citation about the commentary to the novel. It roughly describes the social and historical background reflected in the story and thus brings changes to the protagonist, making a protagonist with clear thoughts persecuted and assimilated due to social decay. It was also a chilling instance of the era.

2. Here is the link to the diff of what citation I added.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=A_Madman%27s_Diary&type=revision&diff=1052388228&oldid=1051512079

3. From this task, I found that adding citations can enhance the persuasions and make the language more authoritative and powerful. At the same time, it also increases readers' clearer and deeper understanding of the article. --Nenenie (talk) 22:05, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nenenie, Nice addition. Remember, try to write in an encyclopedia tone, which means avoid conversation or what may be perceived as biased language. Overall, fine. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 15:28, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Tzc0725

Gap identification

The key gap between the article on Online Shopping, and the article on Consumer Behaviour is that there is no such clear discussion on the impact of consumer behavior on online shopping in the article on Online Shopping, whereas the article on Consumer Behaviour includes the behaviors of consumers that influence online shopping. The advantages and disadvantages of online purchase are provided in the article on Online Shopping, but the advantages and disadvantages of consumer behavior are not provided in the article on Consumer Behaviour.

Plagiarism training

Plagiarism is to present someone else's ideas or work as your own, without or with his/her consent, by using or incorporating such work or ideas into personal work without providing full acknowledgment (Oxford Students, 2021). It is considered unethical because it is a form of theft.

Citation of article

The article to edit here is on Healthcare Industry. Citation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Healthcare_industry.

The article to cite is here: https://www.cms.gov/Research-Statistics-Data-and-Systems/Statistics-Trends-and-Reports/NationalHealthExpendData/NationalHealthAccountsHistorical

What I Did and What I Learned

Summary of the cited article:

The Healthcare industry is the integration and aggregation of different economic sectors within a system that delivers products and services for treating patients by different types of care. This industry is contributing around 10% to the most developed nation’s GDP and is the largest and fastest-growing industry in the world. There are several areas of the healthcare industry such as hospital activities, dental and medical practice activities, and other activities related to human health. The healthcare professionals and providers who are engaged in providing preventive, curative, rehabilitative, palliative, and promotional care services systematically way to individuals, families, or communities. This industry delivers primary care, secondary care, and healthcare services at tertiary levels. Beveridge model, Bismarck model, National health insurance model, and Out-of-pocket model are the models that relate to the healthcare industry. Healthcare spending in the U.S. grew 4.6 percent in 2019, reaching $3.8 trillion or $11,582 per person. As a share of the nation's Gross Domestic Product, health spending accounted for 17.7 percent.

Link to the sandbox page:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tzc0725/Healthcare_industry

Link to the diff of article citation added

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Healthcare_industry&diff=prev&oldid=1052405609

Things I have learned

From this week, I have learned about the concept of Plagiarism and how consumers' online shopping behaviors impact the healthcare industries of developing nations. Tzc0725 (talk) 00:28, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Tzc0725, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:33, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Okay. I've just done it. Tzc0725 (talk) 23:04, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tzc0725 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week, including the required training, and then ping me here. Be sure to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Ping me here and sign it when you are done. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERTOkay. Just done it.Tzc0725 (talk) 23:04, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Tzc0725, This is fine now. Seems interesting how some edits done right after yours were then reverted back to your edit itself. Nice job! FULBERT (talk) 18:34, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week1/ Assignment-introduction/ Emilyyxx

Hi, this is Emily. It is also my first time editing on Wikipedia. I used to get on Wikipedia to learn materials quite often, and feel excited to actually have an account here.--Emilyyxx (talk) 02:36, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Emilyyxx, Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find learning this to be an interesting experience! FULBERT (talk) 16:08, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week2 / assignment 2/ sunnydayreading

Good evening,

I have done my first article evaluation and posted it to the sandbox. Here is the link to the sandbox https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sunnydayreading/Evaluate_an_Article#Why_you_have_chosen_this_article_to_evaluate%3F


Best, Sunnydayreading (talk) 05:06, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sunnydayreading, Nice article evaluation. You are current for Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 16:14, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week2/ Assignment-Article Evaluation/ Emilyyxx

1. I chose the topic I am interested in and evaluate the article by assessing the contents and the lead by determining whether they have enough reliable resources, if they are structured or not, if the information is clear enough to allow readers find what they are searching for, and whether the contents are well organized.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emilyyxx/Evaluate_an_Article

3. Before working on the Wikipedia pages or when I was only a reader, I never tried to evaluate the contents on Wikipedia, so I often assumed the information are trustful, even though I know it is edited by the public. However, after I went through the Talk Page, I understand that the editors sometimes have different thoughts and have problems with the contents and the references are sometimes not so reliable. Therefore, looking up information on Wikipedia required a careful review. --Emilyyxx (talk) 05:45, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Emilyyxx, Nice job with your article evaluation. Current fore Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 16:09, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ TFMonk19970531

1. The article I edited is Ben Simmons. It briefly explained Ben's career from his childhood to right now. The content gap I found is that the article does not follow up the conflict between him and Philadelphia 76ers. Due to the conflict with the team Ben refused to play for the team, which made the team to fine him each game. The citation I found report that 76ers has stopped fining Ben, which is not updated in the article.

2. the diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ben_Simmons&type=revision&diff=1052448320&oldid=1052196877

3. This week I have learned about Plagiarism and the importance to keep updating the article constantly so readers can get more information. --TFMonk19970531 (talk) 06:08, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

TFMonk19970531 Please fix your reply to Week 2 and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:30, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
TFMonk19970531 Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Notkc01

Hi, this is Kyle.

1: The article I copyedited is "Plyometrics". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plyometrics

2: I have some grammar mistakes in the article to help improve the readability. This is my diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Plyometrics&diff=1052448972&oldid=1034084692

3: The reason I am doing this article is that I go to the gym regularly and I have tried different training methods and menus. Plyometrics is definitely one of the essential movements that one needs to add to his or her workout routine if he or she wants to pursue higher athleticism.

4: The link for the article "Plyometrics" bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkc01/Plyometrics/Bibliography Notkc01 (talk) 06:32, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Notkc01, Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 15:42, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week3/ Assignment-Copyedit an Article/ Emilyyxx

1. [Samoyed] is my favorite dog kind, so I decided to work on it.

2. link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Samoyed_dog&type=revision&diff=1052454840&oldid=1052109728

3. While I was making the minor change, I was also able to review other people's editing history. Although the article is not too long, a large number of minor changes are contributed by many people. It is probably the power of Wikipedia that everyone can make a tiny step and finally complete better organized and informative article to help readers understand the different contents. --Emilyyxx (talk) 07:24, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Emilyyxx, Nice minor edit to that article. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 16:10, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Notkc01

Hi guys, this is Kyle.

1. The article I assigned is "split jump". The link to the article：https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Split_jump_(exercise)

2. This article is very short and there is no citation on it. In order to make people who want to have a deeper understanding of this exercise and its pros and cons, I feel like I need to add some citations. I added one sentence to the article to help elaborate the usage of a certain type of exercise and I also cited a journal article to help increase the credibility. Here is the diff-link of my revision: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Split_jump_(exercise)&diff=1052457297&oldid=744899863

3. Here is the assigned link to the bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkc01/Split_jump_(exercise)/Bibliography Notkc01 (talk) 07:41, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Notkc01, Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 15:42, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week3 / assignment 3/ sunnydayreading

Hi,

I copyedited Uniqlo for the assignment of this week. Because the information about the existing operating number of store is lagging. So, I made changes based on the report of Uniqlo. I modified the of number of stores in Austria, Korea, China, Uk, USA, France, Spain and Philippines. In the beginning, I did not check my work before submission. However, I found several typo from myself. Therefore, I went back to the edit page and made change. For the next time, I will double check it before any submission.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Uniqlo&diff=prev&oldid=1052456267

Sincerely

Sunnydayreading (talk) 07:49, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sunnydayreading Nice edit on this. Week 3 is current. --- FULBERT (talk) 16:14, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Fourth Post / bl2240

Hi All,

1. This week I was working on the article the same as last one, which is "Asian Hip Pop". There was citation missing in 1990's Chinese hip pop on a very important person in the music history of modern China, Cui Jian. I added the reference, which was a journal written by Andreas Steen on Chinese pop music.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Asian_hip_hop&type=revision&diff=1052462043&oldid=1038493053

3. I learn that citation is vital in a published article since it establishes the credibility of the article, especially when it comes to historical events we should pay extra attention to using the references from credible sources. --Bl2240 (talk) 08:33, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Bl2240, Nice source added. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 15:13, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4 / assignment 4/ sunnydayreading

Hi,

I added two citations for Amazon about its environmental pledge under the Environmental impact section. The information under the Environmental impact section contains both positive movements and negative incidents. However, there is not enough information about the environmental pledge. Therefore, I added some statistics, the number of signatories and industries among the world,to make it more detailed. I learned the importance of citations. Citation allows us to incorporate others’ ideas and gives credit to the author. Also, it is important to check whether the citation is the latest. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Amazon_(company)&diff=1052461764&oldid=1052417836

Sunnydayreading (talk) 08:43, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sunnydayreading, Nice addition of the source. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:11, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4/ Assignment-Citation/ Emilyyxx

1. Baotou is my hometown city, and I added a citation for its nickname. The cited source is an encyclopedia website about Baotou introducing the city.

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Baotou&type=revision&diff=1052467786&oldid=1050938784

3. Although citation can be added by one simple click, the research process can be time-consuming. Secondary sources are normally proper for Wikipedia editing since we want to avoid original research. --Emilyyxx (talk) 09:40, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Emilyyxx, Nice addition of the source. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:11, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week2/Assignment2/Jw6740

1. I found an article about electronic business which is related to the topic of my research paper. After reviewing the article, I found it still has room to improve such as the lack of images and references, the content also can be improved as well. 2. Here is the link to my article evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jw6740/Evaluate_an_Article 3. What I learned from this process is the importance of the peer view of any article that will be published for others to look at. With more evaluations, the article can be improved to a more accurate level. Jw6740 (talk) 15:10, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jw6740, Nice overview. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 15:26, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Second Post / bh2278

1.The article that I choose was "Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on the food industry". This is currently a level C article and needs many improvements. The classification of countries could be more organized. The data and the situation of many countries can be improved. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BaixinH/Evaluate_an_Article 3. I learned that to write a good article, many factors need to be considered, including content, typesetting, structure and neutral of the article, which will affect the quality of the article.BaixinH (talk) 19:27, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

BaixinH, Nice review. You are current. FULBERT (talk) 15:54, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4 / assignment 4/ Jjjjdddd199704

1. I cite a description of his wealth, and his main wealth accumulation industry from the forbe website on the Zhong Shanshan wiki profile.

2. This is the link to the citation difference I added. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Zhong_Shanshan&diff=1052549943&oldid=1052549664

3. From this task, I found that adding citations can enhance persuasiveness and let us understand a person more comprehensively.Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 20:45, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jjjjdddd199704, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:22, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT,Dear professor I assigned the article already nowJjjjdddd199704 (talk) 01:01, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Jjjjdddd199704, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon "  : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. OK for this time. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Cecilia haha

1. I added the legend story on the Chinese New Year's red envelopes section to make the origination clearer and more attractive.

2. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_New_Year&type=revision&diff=1052587919&oldid=1052491602

3. I think it is essential to keep the information comprehensive. I believe the professionalism of the article and citation are equally important. Citation can prevent plagiarism. If people are interested in a relevant article, they can check the reference and do more readings. --Cecilia haha (talk) 01:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cecilia haha, I would ordinarily revert your edit with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE" as this source does not seem credible to me. However, another editor has already gone in and edited this one so I will leave it for now. Please focus on more credible sources in the future. Ok for now for Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:05, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Thank you! I will be more careful about the article authority. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cecilia haha (talk • contribs) 16:53, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ yf2196

I added folklore to the origin of the Double Ninth Festival. It is a mythological and very ancient Chinese legend.


2. This is the link to the citation difference I added. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Double_Ninth_Festival&diff=1052619740&oldid=1050268118

3. From this assignment, I found that adding citations or materials can enhance persuasiveness and let us understand a certain event or story more comprehensively. And it’s important to keep the information comprehensive, because people are interested in related articles and will see more references and read more.

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ bh2278

1. My copyedited article is the "Sina Weibo".this is the link to my assigned article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sina_Weibo 2. I correct and error and add the current situation of some company.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sina_Weibo&type=revision&diff=1052620283&oldid=1049343540 3. The lesson I learned is that Wiki is a free and public knowledge platform, we should be careful when we read and edit it. It is our responsibility to take care of the content we write. So I need to check the information through many resource.BaixinH (talk) 06:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

BaixinH, Nice edit. Week3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 15:58, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4 / assignment 4/ bh2278

1. This week I was working on the article talk about Tencent. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tencent. It tells the specific location of Tencent and doesn't provide a reference. So I add the Tencent Annual Report from the Hong Kong Exchanges and Clearing Limited.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tencent&type=revision&diff=1052626028&oldid=1052574928

3. I learn that the editor needs to be careful about every sentence he writes. Every sentence or fact need a reference to support it.BaixinH (talk) 06:52, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

BaixinH, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:58, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
hi, I have already assign myself the article. BaixinH (talk) 16:09, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
BaixinH, Great. Nice edit. Current for Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:16, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

week3/assignment 3/ Amber MWY

1. This is my added article: New energy vehicles https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_energy_vehicles_in_China. I added the article brief and three citations. 2. There are two links about the bibliography and article draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/New_energy_vehicles_in_China https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/New_energy_vehicles_in_China/Bibliography 3. It is a very interesting thing to read an article and edit it. I learned about the importance of citation and a clear brief. It can show the summary of the article to the reader very clearly and necessarily.--Amber MWY (talk) 07:00, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Amber MWY Please remove the odd formatting around your links and have them within the text and not starting on a new line. Please fix that and ping me again here and I will review. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:08, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT sure, I did it. Does it good? Thank you!--Amber MWY (talk) 09:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Amber MWY, All fine. Next, please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 17:03, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week2/ Assignment 2/ hl4288 RickyLiao

1. The article I chose is "Uzi (gamer)". The reason I chose him is that he is my favorite e-sports player. This article is currently at the start-class level, which means there is a lot of room for improvement. This article does not detail the heroes Uzi is good at and the winning percentage of each hero. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RickyLiao1997/Evaluate_an_Article 3. Before this learning process, I thought that many Wikipedia articles were authoritative and complete. Now I realize that there are actually many articles that have shortcomings that can be improved and improved. More importantly, I learned how to evaluate an article from multiple angles and learned the necessary factors for a good article.

RickyLiao1997 Please remove the odd formatting around your signatuve. The easiest way is to delete that portion of the code that is not correct and then without skipping a line sign your post again using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:10, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor, I have deleted the odd formatting, please take a look at it, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
RickyLiao1997, This is fine now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:20, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Second Post / Herry3999

1.This is an article about MACD indicators in stocks. This paper introduces the mathematical interpretation and transaction application of MACD. I put forward some areas for improvement. 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Herry3999/Evaluate_an_Article?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article 3.In this process, I learned that writing an article may have to consider a lot of things, especially explaining the type of article. Because you don't know your readers, you'd better do everything so that readers don't have questions when reading. Herry3999 (talk) 08:16, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Herry3999, Where is your first post? Please enter that as we cannot skip weeks. Then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:20, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, I have already added my first post as the name of week1/Assignment 1/hl3999. Herry3999 (talk) 16:50, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Herry3999, I somehow cannot locate it; can you please link to it? FULBERT (talk) 22:34, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Herry3999, Week 1 is now current, though you have not completed any of the required training. Please complete that and then ping me here and I will review your work. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week3/ Assignment 3/ hl4288 RickyLiao

Hi, this is Ricky.

1: The article I copyedited is "Yoga Lin". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yoga_Lin 2: I found that the article did not cover Yoga’s personal life experience, especially the important information about his marriage, and there are also missing pieces in the single. So I included this information in the article. This is my diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Yoga_Lin&type=revision&diff=1052635772&oldid=1045410072 3: I found that editing these contents is a particularly interesting thing, after successful editing, there will be a unique sense of accomplishment. And I can see other people's edits from the historical editors, compare them, and see the development process of the entire article in more detail. RickyLiao1997 (talk) 08:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

RickyLiao1997, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor,I have already assigned myself this arrticle in Wiki Edu Dashboard, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:25, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
RickyLiao1997, I would have reverted your edits as you made them without any evidence cited to support your claims. However, given another editor improved upon it already, I will leave it as is since others thought it was ok. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:21, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Herry3999

1. My copyedited article is the "Hui Ka Yan".this is the link to my assigned article:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hui_Ka_Yan&editintro=Template%3ABLP_editintro#Career 2. I added a record of his personal life. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hui_Ka_Yan&type=revision&diff=1052636906&oldid=1049541217 3. In this process, I experienced the process of modifying Wikipedia by querying information for the first time. This made me feel very interesting, but also gave me a deeper understanding of Hui Ka Yan. Herry3999 (talk) 08:47, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Herry3999, Where is your first post? Please enter that as we cannot skip weeks. Also, please adjust your username in the heading you created here to include your Wikipedia user name and not the one you have listed here. Then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:22, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Herry3999, Week 1 is now current, though you have not completed any of the required training. Please complete that and then ping me here and I will review your work. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4 / assignment 4/ Herry3999

1. I chose the article about Wang Jianlin this week. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wang_Jianlin&editintro=Template%3ABLP_editintro#Early_life_and_career 2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wang_Jianlin&type=revision&diff=1052795506&oldid=1041607938

3. In this process, I learned that every example should be proved accordingly. This can reflect the integrity and preciseness of the article. Herry3999 (talk) 09:13, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Herry3999, Where is your first post? Please enter that as we cannot skip weeks. Also, please adjust your username in the heading you created here to include your Wikipedia user name and not the one you have listed here. Finally, Week 4 has to be a different article from Week 3 per the assignment, so please assign yourself another article, edit it, and then post that assignment. Then ping me and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:23, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I have chosen a new article. Herry3999 (talk) 03:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Herry3999, Week 1 is now current, though you have not completed any of the required training. Please complete that and then ping me here and I will review your work. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4/ Assignment 4/ hl4288 RickyLiao

1. This week I added a citation on the article about the movie called "you are the apple of my eye" . https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/You_Are_the_Apple_of_My_Eye. The soundtrack of this movie lack a citation, so I add a citation to it.

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=You_Are_the_Apple_of_My_Eye&type=revision&diff=1052639935&oldid=1040961272

3. In this week's study, I realized that the details of the article need to be carefully noted. Sometimes the lack of citations will make the article lack authenticity and reliability. RickyLiao1997 (talk) 09:15, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

RickyLiao1997, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor, I have already assigned myself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
RickyLiao1997, Nice edit overall. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week1 / Assignment 1 / Herry3999

Hi, I am Haoran Lin. This is my first time to edit Wikipedia. I hope I can learn a lot in Wikipedia. Herry3999 (talk) 16:47, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Herry3999, Please edit this and use your Wikipedia User Name in the heading, per the assignment naming requirement for "week / assignment / and your Wikipedia name" - ping me here when you are done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 22:36, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
OK, I have changed it. Herry3999 (talk) 03:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Herry3999, This is now complete. Welcome to Wikipedia! Week 1 is current. FULBERT (talk) 18:14, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week3/Assignment3/Jw6740

1. The article I assigned is Targeted advertising since I am interested in marketing strategies that can effectively attract more customers. The link to the bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jw6740/Targeted_advertising/Bibliography

2. Here is the link to the diff I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Targeted_advertising&diff=prev&oldid=1052697316

3. From this assignment, I learned how the wiki article can be edited and contributed by the wiki users. This is my first time editing the wiki and I corrected some grammar and word spelling issues for the article. I am looking forward to editing more in the future. Jw6740 (talk) 17:12, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jw6740, Nice edit. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 22:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4/Assignment4/Jw6740

1. The article I assigned is "domestic trades". The article is short and only has two references. Therefore, I added a reference with a sentence under the "importance and Role" section to state one of the benefits that domestic trades have compared to international trades.

2. Here is the line to the differences I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Domestic_trade&diff=prev&oldid=1052715166

The link to the bibliography is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jw6740/Domestic_trade/Bibliography

3. What I learned from this assignment is how to add or reuse a citation in the wiki articles, and how we can add the reference and the templates at the end of the article. Besides, I also learned the article on the wiki may be lack supportive references and can be improved as well. Jw6740 (talk) 18:41, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jw6740, Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 22:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / Wikisun1952

Hello, I hope you are all doing well, this is Jieni Zha's report for the week 2 assignment. This article I assigned to myself is related to the cosmetic industry. It's a class C level article so there is plenty of room for improvement. For this article, I found that it has a daily average of 127 views. There are some issues of the content are lack of evidence and support. This article studies the business model and sales of cosmetics in many countries, but it is not comprehensive. The analysis of the Chinese market and the Japanese market is not comprehensive. This paper should analyze the sales and product quality of cosmetics in these countries.

This is the link to my article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cosmetic_industry

This is the link to my evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikisun1952/Evaluate_an_ArticleWikisun1952 (talk) 23:50, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikisun1952, Nicely done. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3 / Assignment 3 / Wikisun1952

Hello, this is Jieni Zha's third assignment

1. My copyedited article is "Broadcasting". This is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Broadcasting

2: I have added one paragraph regarding the history of the opium war in order to make the article looks more detailed. this is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Broadcasting&type=revision&diff=1052767681&oldid=1049623188

3: The reason why I do this is that I like to watch live broadcasts when I rest. I have a lot of knowledge about live broadcasts. I have a deep research on the live broadcast content, mode, and platform. After reading this article, I think some points are not enough, so I added some content to the article.

4: The link for the article "Broadcasting" https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikisun1952/Broadcasting/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliographyWikisun1952 (talk) 00:24, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikisun1952, This is ok for now, though next time you add content please be sure to cite a source for it. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:37, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4 / Assignment 4 / Wikisun1952

Hello, this is Jieni Zha.

1. The article I assigned is "E-commerce". This article does not give a comprehensive introduction to the types of e-commerce, so I added content to the article. It’s located under the section of “E-commerce businesses may also employ some or all of the following”.

2. Here is the line to the differences I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=E-commerce&type=revision&diff=1052772726&oldid=1052303451 The link to the bibliography is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikisun1952/E-commerce/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography

3. From this assignment, I learned how to add citations to Wikipedia and how to correctly find out the reference used in the article. I also learned how to generate citations in WikipediaWikisun1952 (talk) 00:56, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikisun1952, This is also ok for now, though I would have ordinarily reverted it as not being a high enough quality credible source. OK for now, however. Week 4 is done. FULBERT (talk) 18:39, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Gdaymate011

Hello, this is Kai Wu's fourth Assignment Report.

1. The article I assigned to the weekly assignment is about my hometown "Qingdao City", this is the article link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Qingdao. The citation I made is about the Qingdao University ranking detail because I think the university of each city can represent the culture of a city. therefore, I would like to make some contribution to this article.

2. This is the link to my diff of what I have edited: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Qingdao&type=revision&diff=1052771893&oldid=1051581128

3. What I learned from this assignment is the use of citation is to enrich the content of the article and make it more credible. Gdaymate011 (talk) 01:16, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gdaymate011, Great edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:39, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Assignment 4 / Sleep by 11

I am writing the word of this company Tencent, and the citation I added is the address of this company's official website.

With this link below, you can see my writing history, as well as the individual versions. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Sleep_by_11/Tencent&action=history

This week I learned how to peer review someone else's article, which requires a rigorous and detailed process to evaluate all aspects. In addition to this, I also learned how to write my own words, such as how to post my own text, how to edit content inside the sandbox, and how to add citations.I deeply understood that the process of writing Wikipedia is very rigorous and how to write academic articles with the same rigor. It is also important to be responsible for every single word you write.Sleep by 11 (talk) 01:22, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sleep by 11, You did something that appeared more like writing a new article rather than editing the article as was the assignment. Please review the assignment and add a citation to the article you chose exactly as per the assignment. Whatever you actually did was deleted, per an editor's comment on your Talk page. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 17:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 1/ Assignment 1 / Baezoey

Hello everyone! This is Baezoey! It is my first time creating a Wikipedia account and learn how to edit articles. There are some many instructions there and I am trying to follow all of them. Hope my editing can help others to better knowing something finallyBaezoey (talk) 02:46, 31 October 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Baezoey, Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this an interesting and engaging experience! FULBERT (talk) 17:53, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week1 / Assignment1 / Damonmand

Hi, everyone, it is my first time to use wikipedia, and I learn a lot from how to use the sandbox and check the watchlist. I am so exciting to work with my classmate here. Damonmand (talk) 04:14, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Damonmand, Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find editing engaging and an interesting experience! FULBERT (talk) 18:00, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

week 3/Assignment 3/Chenjshi

Hello everyone, this is Chenjshi(Yuqiong), 1. The article I copyedited is "Datong". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Datong 2. I modified the usage of some punctuation and words. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Datong&type=revision&diff=1052810290&oldid=1045272826 3. I modified the usage of some punctuation marks and words, which is more helpful for people to understand the article. Datong is my hometown. I hope that more and more people will know about this city and improve the content of Wikipedia. Everyone will make some positive changes to the article, which will make the content of Wikipedia more and more reliable.Chenjshi (talk) 06:19, 31 October 2021 (UTC)Chenjshi[reply]

Chenjshi, Nice edit overall. Current for Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 17:58, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/Katxzhang/Assignment 2

Hello this is Katherine,

1. The article I assigned is "Taiyuan", the link is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taiyuan. 2. I think this article can be improved by including more detailed information on "Food" section as well as a comprehensive description of the city's present development. 3. The link of my evaluation is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Katxzhang/Evaluate_an_Article. Katxzhang (talk) 05:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)Katxzhang[reply]

Katxzhang, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT Hi Professor, I have just assigned the article, thanks for the heads up!Katxzhang (talk) 18:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Katxzhang, Fine. Now current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:50, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week2 / Assignment2 / Damonmand

1. Hello guys, here is Zaimeng's second post. The article that I pick is "League of Legends Pro League" and it is currently a level C article so it has a lot of improvement space. Since esport is the new industry, the information about it still lacking a lot. This article did not mention the relationship between the leagues from all over the world. Also the citation still need to be added more.

2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Damonmand/Evaluate_an_Article?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_evaluate_article

3. I learned that even in Wikipedia, many articles still need to be keep evaluated even it already be posted. People who read these articles will get more completely information.Damonmand (talk) 06:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Damonmand, You evaluation is a little short, but good enough for now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:01, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Assignment 2 / Baezoey

I chosed an article from my interested area, which is eSports, to evaluate. For my evaluation, I found that this article is not up to date, and it only shows content till 2019. I also noticed that this article cited many content from the social media account.

Here is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Baezoey/Evaluate_an_Article

I learned that even Wikipedia, the largest encyclopedia website, has content that is not updated in time. As users of Wikipedia, we should not only be recipients, but also editors.Baezoey (talk) 06:59, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Baezoey, Nice evaluation overall. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 17:54, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Assignment 3 / Baezoey

1. The article I worked on: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Doinb

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Doinb&diff=1052817209&oldid=1050478402

3.I learned that not everything on Wikipedia is correct. We should always be critical of what we acquire from Wikipedia, whether as an editor or receivers. The magical power of editing those articles is that I can see my adjustments on the website right after publishing changes.Baezoey (talk) 07:44, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Baezoey, This is ok for now, though next time be sure to add a citation to the article to support your claim. FULBERT (talk) 17:55, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, Hi Professor. Is that mean I am current for this week?
Baezoey Yes, current for Week 3. --FULBERT (talk) 22:58, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week3 / Assignment3 / Damonmand

Hi, guys, this is the third post for Zaimeng Xiao.

1: The article I copyedited is "The International 2019". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_International_2019

2: I have some regarding a sentence in the article to help it easier to understanded. This is my diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_International_2019&type=revision&diff=1052817359&oldid=1051555243

3: The reason I am doing this article is that I am a fan of Dota2, The International 2019 is an annual Dota 2 world championship esports tournament and I was watching all the competitions at that year.Damonmand (talk) 07:53, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Damonmand, Nice initial copyediting. Current for Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:01, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Assignment 4 / Baezoey

1. Uzi is one of my favorite professional eSports player of League of Legends. He officially retired from professional play in 2020 so I add a citation for the date he announced his retirement. The source I use is ESPN, which is a famous multinational sports channel in America. Link to article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uzi_(gamer)

2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Uzi_(gamer)&diff=1052821638&oldid=1049552180

3. Citation is the best way for people interested in the content of a Wikipedia article and wants to go deeper into it. It also proves that what we added to the article is backed by reliable sources instead of something we come up with by ourselves.Baezoey (talk) 08:35, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Baezoey, Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:55, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4 / Assignment4 / Damonmand

1. Shantou is my hometown city, and I added a citation for the news about they stop the traditional newspaper and transfer to e-newspaper. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shantou&type=revision&diff=1052822316&oldid=1052432426 3. I learn that add citation is very hard, since wikipedia is been very completely, it takes time to check what it has missed and takes time to search sources.Damonmand (talk) 08:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Damonmand, Nice learning on this one. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:04, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / EricaLiu1260

Hello folks, Hope you all are well this week. This is Erica Liu’s assignment for week 2. The article I assigned is ‘tasting menu’. My topic is about changing the menu and it is related. However, it is a Class S-level article and has an average of 52 views every day. In my opinion, there are some places needed improvement. For example, the effect of the tasting menu and the famous example of the tasting menu can be added in this article. I would say this article is still helpful for my study and the tasting menu can be used in my real-world practice. This is the link of evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EricaLiu1260/Evaluate_an_Article This is the link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tasting_menu ～～～

EricaLiu1260 (talk · contribs) Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:09, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3 / Assignment 3 / EricaLiu1260

1.My Copyedit article is "KFC in China". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/KFC_in_China

2.A certain product on the menu in this article has been removed, so I will make a note later in order to make the article more accurate. At the same time, the Chinese name of some dishes is incorrect, so I corrected it.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=KFC_in_China&type=revision&diff=1052826580&oldid=1052151068

3. At the beginning I was very nervous to edit that. I found out the exact name of the product and the news that it has been removed by consulting the official website of KF China. This can make this topic more accurate. EricaLiu1260 (talk) 09:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

EricaLiu1260, Nice copyediting of this article. Week 3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 18:10, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/Assignment 4/Chenjshi

1. I added a citation about the history of bed bath&beyond. It provides us with more information about bed bath&beyond so that we can clearly understand the achievements of bed bath&beyond.

2. Here is the link to the diff of what citation I added https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bed_Bath_%26_Beyond&type=revision&diff=1052838003&oldid=1052837431

3. From this task, I learned how to use citations. Using citations can make the article more authentic. At the same time, the correct use of citations can also make the article more convincing.Chenjshi (talk) 09:28, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chenjshi, Nice edit with a credible source. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:59, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/Assignment 3/ Katxzhang

1. The link of the article I copyedited is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_influence_bias

2. The link to the comparison between old and new of the article is:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Social_influence_bias&type=revision&diff=1052812403&oldid=952213718

3. I have learned a lot in this week's work, one of them is that precise punctuation contributes to the composition of a well-written article, it is a factor that can be easily neglected by writers; The accuracy of punctuation can make sure viewers receive information efficiently. I have also learned that prepositions in phrases are able to alter the interpretation of the phrase, therefore, writers should be cautious with their wording. Katxzhang (talk) 09:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Katxzhang, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, Hi Professor, I have just assigned this article, thanks for the heads up!Katxzhang (talk) 18:45, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Katxzhang, Great! Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4 / Assignment 4 / EricaLiu1260

1. My citation article is "Fast food in China". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fast_food_in_China

2. The article mentioned that the amount of instant noodles consumed by the Chinese is huge, but the fact is that the consumption of instant noodles in China is gradually decreasing due to the popularity of takeaway. In order for everyone to understand this issue more objectively and accurately, I think I need to add some quotations. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Fast_food_in_China&type=revision&diff=1052829068&oldid=1034021906

3. This is the link to my citation:https://asia.nikkei.com/Business/Food-Beverage/Chinese-consumers-shift-from-instant-noodles-to-soft-drinks EricaLiu1260 (talk) 09:51, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

EricaLiu1260, Nice citation used. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:12, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

week4/assignment 4/ Amber MWY

1. I assigned an article"Environmental impacts of lithium-ion batteries" and I added a citation to support the "This type of battery is also referred to as lithium-ion batteries. " 2. a link to the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Environmental_impacts_of_lithium-ion_batteries&type=revision&diff=1052829465&oldid=1052659979. This is a link for the bibliography https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Environmental_impacts_of_lithium-ion_batteries/Bibliography 3. when we write an article, we can not write an extreme sentence. we need to give evidence to support it.--Amber MWY (talk) 09:57, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Amber MWY, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 17:04, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week3/ Assignment 3/ Beccabubu

1. The article I chose to edit is "Meituan(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meituan)", it is cheaper to have food delivered than to get it yourself, in China Meituan is an APP known for food delivery service. Personally, I order two or three meals in Meituan a week. So I really want to know more about this app.

2. There are a few grammar mistakes in this article so I made some adjustments. Besides, to generate rich content, I add a section called "Main assets" of Meituan to make the whole content more informative. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Meituan&diff=1052835986&oldid=1049221122

3. Though all the source of knowledge and information shared on Wikipedia is not true, but if you try to identify content gaps and tell what is wrong and right, you can easily make a difference. --Beccabubu (talk) 11:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Beccabubu, Nicely done. Week 3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 17:05, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week4/ Assignment 4/ Beccabubu

1. The article I chose to add the citation is "Tongling" (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tongling). Tongling is the city where I was born, it is a small city in China that barely has any information to introduce it on Wikipedia. So I add the citation of the definition from Encyclopædia Britannica.

2. link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tongling&diff=1052843263&oldid=1051101012

3. Citation is extremely important, a proper citation will allow a reader go back and refer to the original source as they deem appropriate. --Beccabubu (talk) 12:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Beccabubu, You used an encyclopedia article for the source, which is really not the highest level. Next time, please use a higher-quality source. OK for now, so Week 4 is current. FULBERT (talk) 17:10, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/Assignment 4/Katxzhang

1. The article citation I added is a brief summary of BuzzFeed's operating model, the way it makes a profit and keeps on growing its business scale.

2. The link of comparison is: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=BuzzFeed&diff=prev&oldid=1052850965

3. During the process, I learned that it is challenging to write with precision while trying to be concise, therefore, massive research in regard to the topic is of vital importance in order to accumulate more insight that eventually contributes to shaping our words effectively. Katxzhang (talk) 13:33, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Katxzhang, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
FULBERT, Hi Professor, I have just assigned this article, thanks for the heads up!Katxzhang (talk) 18:45, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Katxzhang, Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:49, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 1/ Assignment 1/Katxzhang

Hi everyone this is Katherine Zhang, I just realized I skipped the first post. I am very interested in this project as Wikipedia is one of the most powerful and comprehensive searching engines in the world. I am glad that I am given the chance to contribute to enriching its information coverage that might help later people in the future.Katxzhang (talk) 13:44, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Katxzhang, Welcome to Wikipedia; I hope you find this an interesting experience! FULBERT (talk) 18:17, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jason Zhou Week 1/Assignment 1/ Zhouyu2428

Hi this is my first wikipedia editing --Zhouyu2428 (talk) 19:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Zhouyu2428, Welcome to Wikipedia, and I hope you find it an interesting and engaging experience! FULBERT (talk) 23:08, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/Assignment 2/KwokHy98

1. This article is outdated and more evidence and explanation is needed. 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KwokHy98/Evaluate_an_Article 3. In week 2, I learned what makes an article good. It should have a good structure, a neutral tone, up-to-date content, and reliable references. KwokHy98 (talk) 19:51, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

KwokHy98, A bit short, but it is good enough for now. Week 2 is current. FULBERT (talk) 23:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Jason Zhou Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Zhouyu2428

1. For week 2 assignment, I evaluated an article on the topic of ecosystem. What I have found is that although the organization of the article is concise and accurate and the sources are all reliable, there is a lack of information on this article because it is very short and not many concurrent examples and concepts are on it. 2. Link to the evaluated article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_ecosystem#See_also 3. I have learned how to evaluate a wikipedia article through this process. The evaluation should be thorough and detailed. --Zhouyu2428 (talk) 20:31, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Zhouyu2428, Please review the training for Week 2, as it will have you creating a new page within your sandbox for this evaluation. Please do that through the training itself and then ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 23:09, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 3/ Assignment 3/ KwokHy98

1. Link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Joey_Yung 2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Joey_Yung&type=revision&diff=1052914278&oldid=1052541733 3. In assignment 3 I learn that we need to be careful of grammar and word using when we editing an article in Wikipedia. We should make the article clear and easy to read. KwokHy98 (talk) 20:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

KwokHy98, Nice copyediting. Week 3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 23:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Crazytoppp

1. The article I evaluated is "Video game addiction". The answer to this article is rigorous and neutral, and there is no biased toward a particular position. The article’s explanation of the topic is very accurate and clear. At the same time, a large amount of academic research is used to prove the credibility. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Crazytoppp/Evaluate_an_Article#Evaluate_the_article 3. In the process of evaluating this article, I learned how to analyze the credibility of the article and how to add citations in wikipedia. ---Crazytoppp (talk) 22:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Crazytoppp, Please fix what I asked you to fix for Week 1 and then I will review this. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 22:56, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 4/ Assignment 4/ KwokHy98

1. Because there is no information about the concert in 2019 by Joey Yung, I added it. 2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Joey_Yung&type=revision&diff=1052934568&oldid=1052914278 3. I learned that the information we edit need to be authoritative. The references we use should be reliable sources like professional journals. KwokHy98 (talk) 23:16, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

KwokHy98, Nice edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 23:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week 2 / Assignment 2 / RaymondZqiu

Hi, this is Raymond and it's my second post. 1. My article is "AI for food". I found its content can be richer. For example, adding more details related to the key events of the "AI for food" platform. 2. Here is my evaluation link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RaymondZqiu/Evaluate_an_Article 3. During the process, I have learned what AI practitioners did to improve AI technology. Besides, I realized how to evaluate an article with proper criteria.--RaymondZqiu (talk) 23:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

/* Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Cloi929 */

1.This book is a biography of Liang Sicheng's contribution to the preservation and restoration of ancient Chinese architecture. At the same time, it has made extraordinary achievements in the research and development of ancient architecture 2.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Dougong&diff=1052937224&oldid=1043398010 3.I found that the old Wikipedia didn't mention the Tang and Song dynasties. And I add it. I feel like do Wikipedia is more interesting than I thought. Other people know more because of you!--Cloi929 (talk) 23:52, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This week's article for improvement (week 44, 2021)

Isabel Adrian is a Swedish television personality, producer, author and model. Pictured is Adrian in 2013.
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Isabel Adrian

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Week 4/ Assignment 4/Huilin826

The article I found related to the Chinese New Year because I am so happy to know more detailed information about the Chinese New Year, It is a traditional festival in China. People will use different approaches to celebrate it, such as Chun Lian, and Ya Sui Qian. This is a link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_New_Year This is a diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_New_Year&type=revision&diff=1052941829&oldid=1052620547 There is no more issue cause that describes the history of the Chinese New Year. Huilin826 (talk) 00:17, 1 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  1. ^ . ISBN 9780691169989. {{cite book}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
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