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info on Lewis Carroll v. that on Alice Liddell

When reading both pages, the information found on one page is different enough to lead to much more confusion than is necessary. I've encountered this problem at many other page groups on Wikipedia, but this is the worst I've seen by far. An editor should really take the time to clean up the differing/contradicting/confusing info on the Lewis Carroll, Alice Liddell and related pages. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.170.84.191 (talk) 10:45, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

One of the best

This is one of the best written articles in the entire Wikipedia. I can't help but suspect that others have come afterwards and added punctuation crutches for the only thing needing work is punctuation which is way in outer space.

Annoyance At Night

I've heard some speculation of what Carroll meant by this. Some say he was molested and that's what that means. Does anybody know? It sounds like whatever it was contributed to three years of misery.

Pronunciation

The IPA transcription indicates a silent <g>, ie that 'Dodgson' should be pronounced the same as 'Dodson' would be. Is this correct or a typo? Echobeats 00:52, 6 September 2007 (UTC)

It's correct.Mikeindex 13:21, 6 September 2007 (UTC)

As no one's responded, I'm gonna assume it's a typo and change it. garik (talk) 11:56, 10 January 2008 (UTC)

I did respond (see above). —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikeindex (talk • contribs) 08:40, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

Ah, sorry! My mistake. I've taking the liberty of tabbing our responses to make them clearer garik (talk) 12:39, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

General tidying

I moved the Alice Ottley info into 'trivia' as it seems too minor a point to have it's own section. MikeLeach1956 09:45, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

Missing pages in diary

Avoid weasel words.

'However, there has never been any evidence to suggest this was so, and a paper[15] that came to light in the Dodgson family archive in 1996 provides some evidence to the contrary.'

Some evidence? What some evidence? For all I know, this is 'some' evidence of the former. That he had proposed marriage and his family wanted to cover it up.

Hey Anon I'm not sure what the problem is. The nature of the 'some evidence' is gone into elsewhere and anyone can check the listed source. This isn't the place for an in-depth analysis of one piece of paper. We summarise the situation and link to a source for more info. --Mikeleach56 13:06, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

Also it offers an 'alledged summary' would be the correct way to write it. You will pretty much have to use weasel words if you want that crap in there. Until the pages are recovered it's just a note claiming alot of things...

The cut pages in diary document was discovered in the Dodgson family's own archive and was identified by Philip Dodgson Jacques (Carroll's great-nephew) as having his handwriting on it and also the writing of his aunts Menella and Violet. Its provenance has never been disputed, nor has its authenticity ever been brought into question. It's quoted in the Wakeling edition of Carroll's diaries and accepted by him and by all other scholars as a genuine document. As it is the only record of what happened on June 27 1863, its value is immense, even though, of course, the summary can only give us an approximation of what happened on that day. MikeLeach1956 09:41, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

Lewis was a very bright man a real man 4 woman and his real name was Rev.Charles Litwidge Dodgson —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.194.236.235 (talk) 03:44, 29 February 2008 (UTC)

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And in the next paragraph regarding paedophilia---------

'But there has never been much evidence to support such an idea'

There has never been much? So there HAS been evidence, or? How much is much?

Actually there isn't any firsthand evidence at all - so maybe that should be more clearly stated --Mikeleach56 13:06, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

'and the 1996 discovery of the 'cut pages in diary document' (see above) seems to imply that the 1863 'break' had nothing to do with Alice. However the document's provenance has been disputed and its final significance is unknown.'

No. You are implying the break had nothing to do with it. The notes provenence has rightly been disputed since its significance cant be proven or disproven until the pages are recovered. (Not bloody likely huh?)

Seriously...

To my knowledge the notes provenance has never been disputed - (see above) --Mikeleach56 13:14, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

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Very well said, Anonymous Person. I had to fight hard to even include that the document's provenance is disputed. Apparently if you accept NONE of Leach, some treat you like an ostrich... --Viledandy 04:56, 16 March 2007 (UTC)

How does an ostrich get treated? :) --Mikeleach56 13:06, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

Mistakes in the Annotated Alice

I made an incorrect correction to the page the other day. Dodgson's date of death in the jacket of the new edition of Martin Gardner's 'The Annotated Alice: The Definitive Edition' is listed as July 14th, instead of January. You'd think a mistake like that wouldn't be in the definitive edition of anything. I also seemed to remember reading somewhere that Dodgson died when he was 66 and a half years old, which he would have been in July of 1898.

Why He Did Not Proceed To The Priesthood

In more of than biography I have read, there was some speculation that Dodgson also had a theological issue with church teaching, specifically that he could not persuade himself to believe in eternal damnation. I cannot cite the source for this material, as I read it too long ago.

I read it had something to do with his stutter in another wiki article. In fact, this article does not mention his stutter. Did he actually have one?

There is no direct source for this material. Dodgson's reasons for not taking orders can only be assumed or deduced from his available circumstances, as he made virtually no direct comment upon it in himself.--Wicked-Witch-of-the-East 13:55, 20 September 2006 (UTC)

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Hi, Charles did have a stutter. I am researching Charles right now for a paper, and all the books mention it.

About damnation, here is a quote from Charles that I found in a book:

"I believe God is perfectly good. Also I believe that such infliction of [eternal] punishment would be wrong. Consequently I believe that God is not capable of acting thus. I find that the Bible, in the English Version, seems to tell us that He is capable of acting thus. Yet I believe that it is a book inspired by God, and protected by Him from error in what it tells us of the relation between God and Man, and therefore that what it says, according to the real meaning of the words, may be relied on as true. Consequently I hold that the word, rendered in English as 'eternal' or 'everlasting,' has been mistranslated, and that the Bible does not really assert more than that God will inflict suffering, of unknown duration but not necessarily eternal, punishment for sin."

Here is a citation I did for the book I got this from: Jean Gattégno. Lewis Carroll. New York: Thomas Y. Crowell Company, 1976.

(page 237)

Picture

Is this picture (of the nude girl) really appropriate for this article?

Yes, it is; the section in which it's placed discusses Dodgson's nude photographs at some length. Septentrionalis 18:32, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

Has anyone verified the authorship of Dodgson? Quoting user JayW @ 19:38, 23 July 2006 (UTC) Is this really by Lewis Carroll? Where did you get it?. With that said, I also think that the caption (rare archive by Dark111) is deeply inappropriate. Is Dark111 famous or something? If somebody verifies the authorship I will be glad to support its inclusion in the article. -- Pichote 19:37, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

Dark111 is just another Wikipedia user and should not be in the article at all. The photo is authentic. In fact, the girl herself has her own Wikipedia article under the name Alexandra Kitchin. -- ShinmaWa^(talk) 07:46, 21 August 2006 (UTC)

Having said the above, I'm thinking the article is better without the photo. -- ShinmaWa^(talk) 00:04, 22 August 2006 (UTC)

Peer review

I think this article is a diamond in the rough. Specifically, I think we can being this article up to featured status with a little work. To get us started on this path, I've opened this article up for a peer review so we can get some feedback on ways to improve this article. -- ShinmaWa^(talk) 20:05, 21 August 2006 (UTC)

Failed GA nomination with invitation to renominate

As stated in the above peer review post, this article is a diamond in the rough. Specifically I've failed the nomination over citations: two of the most controversial matters - possible drug use and child pornography - need better documentation. Stubby one and two-line paragraphs also detract from the article. Some of the material here would probably be better covered in summary style with branching articles: more space gets devoted to his artistic hobbies than to his actual career as a mathematician or to critical receptions of his writings. On the whole, this article loses its balance over what I would call the Sally Hemmings effect: legitimate concerns over sensational topics can steal the spotlight away from other substantive issues. This man is chiefly memorable as the author of some of the most enduring and respected children's literature in English. Durova 18:29, 5 September 2006 (UTC)

That is some very valuable feedback. Thank you Durova! -- ShinmaWa^(talk) 01:30, 6 September 2006 (UTC)

Perhaps Dodgson's work on sets and symbolic logic might be covered as well as the gossip and speculation around his private life? He was in his time, after all, a mathematician and logician. Daen 10:11, 14 September 2006 (UTC)

At the same time. Since the current understanding of LC is in a state of flux, shouldn't Wiki reflect that current state?

I don't think it's about being sensational. It's about trying to accurately reflect current realities, so people coming here for info get a balanced idea.

I think it's crucial for the 'controversies' to be well featured as they reflect most accurately the current nature of LC and his biography. So much is unknown or in dispute. And the 'carroll Myth' has an impact on his work as much as his life, don't you think?

Maybe we could do with linked feature swctions on some of his best non-Alice work?--Wicked-Witch-of-the-East 14:00, 20 September 2006 (UTC)

Article To-Do

Based on the feedback from the Peer Review and the GA review, I think I can break down the things to do into a smallish bullet-list:

• Slightly de-emphasize and summarize the controversial issues (drugs/pedophilia) - perhaps subpage?
• Increase exposure of Carroll's academic/mathematics pursuits.
• Give considerably more weight to Carroll as an author (for which he is best known)
• Some general prose cleanup (stub paragraphs and the like)
• For the stuff that remains after the above, references references references....

Feel free to add to this list as needed. -- ShinmaWa^(talk) 03:31, 6 September 2006 (UTC)

No, I don't agree. If the article is dealing with Dodgson's biography then the controversies belong right there on the main page, because his entire biography is 'controversial' right now isn't it?

His 'pedophilia' especially. When we consider that almost everything said about his life and work has to some extent reflected the idea of his obsession with children, then I don't think we can peel off 'pedophilia' from any other aspect of his life or genius. The controversy about it is centre stage and needs to remain there.

Likewise the whole 'Carroll Myth'. It is central to what Dodgson is and what he is perceived as being. To de-emphasise it is to give a quite false image of the state of our present understanding.

What we need is sub-pages to do with his literature. This is his biography page and should reflect that fact first and foremost.

--Wicked-Witch-of-the-East 14:08, 20 September 2006 (UTC)

• • With regard to your 'Increase exposure of Carroll's academic/mathematical pursuits' - I can't find any of it on the web, but in a book at home I have some of the mathematical problems (set theory, I think) that he gave to his students. The Carrollian wit and surrealism shows in the way they are written. I'll put some examples in the article (or here) as soon as I can get the book and a computer in the same place. Robin Johnson (talk) 11:02, 14 September 2006 (UTC)

• As a reader, I would just comment that the 'The Carroll Myth' section seems to just be a summary of a single work about Carroll. It may be a prime example of scholarly work in regards to him, but it strikes me as a bit odd that a single author's comments on a topic would be the sole one mentioned directly and further be the second largest section in the article. It seems more like either a page should be made for the book or move the text to Mrs. Leach's page (or the views of further authors be included.)

A selection from symbolic logic

Here we go. These are titled 'Sets of Concrete Propositions, proposed as Premisses for Sorites. Conclusions to be found.' There are several dozen of them, but I shall quote the first...

1. Babies are illogical;
2. Nobody is despised who can manage a crocodile;
3. Illogical persons are despised.

Univ. 'persons'; a = able to manage a crocodile; b = babies; c = despised; d = logical.

...to which the conclusion is 'Babies cannot manage crocodiles.' The last, and most complex, of the problems is:

1. The only animals in this house are cats;
2. Every animal is suitable for a pet, that loves to gaze at the moon;
3. When I detest an animal, I avoid it;
4. No animals are carnivorous, unless they prowl at night;
5. No cat fails to kill mice;
6. No animals ever take to me, except what are in this house;
7. Kangaroos are not suitable for pets;
8. None but carnivora kill mice;
9. I detest animals that do not take to me;
10. Animals, that prowl at night, always love to gaze at the moon.

Univ. 'animal'; a = avoided by me; b = carnivora; c = cats; d = detested by me; e = in this house; h = kangaroos; k = killing mice; l = loving to gaze at the moon; m = prowling at night; n = suitable for pets; r = taking to me.

The conclusion is 'I always avoid a kangaroo'. This is from 'A selection from symbolic logic' in 'Lewis Carroll: The complete works with Tenniel's drawings', Nonesuch Press, 1939. I think these make useful, and entertaining, examples of Dodgson's mathematical work and the fact that the Carrollian wit was present even in the lecture room. Robin Johnson (talk) 23:14, 18 September 2006 (UTC)

Possible drug use

'There has been much speculation that Dodgson used drugs, however there is no direct evidence that he ever did' seems to me enough, if not too much, about something for which there is no evidence. The rest of that paragraph is surely pointless? Richard Pinch 21:44, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

• Of course not, the whole paragraph minimizes existing evidences and not mentions others. What's the point of talking about laudanum and marijuana when you have bugs sitting on mushroons driking tea and smoking water pipes in an immagination, for not to say hallucinogen, land? Frankly, the references in his work are quite obvius. The problem is to infer that the author, besides the characters, used drugs. --El Chemaniaco 15:04, 26 November 2006 (UTC)

The only 'obvious' drug use in the books is the caffeine contained in the tea (and whatever the caterpillar's smoking, but is there any reason to assume it's not tobacco?). Unless you can provide direct evidence of the author's intention or direct correlations with the drug culture of the mid-19th century (not the 20th), it's supposition and doesn't belong in the article. Strephon 21:51, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

His personal drug use aside there was open drug use in England during his times. Opium dens.... Sir Arthur Conan Doyle freely writes about Holmes's use of cocaine. If he didn't use it himself, he knew people or about people who did and how it was done and the effects it had. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.193.37.160 (talk) 06:59, 7 November 2007 (UTC)

Guildford

He dies at his sisters' home, a house which he had bought for them with his royalties. It doesn't make sense to say that he lived in Ch:Ch: at then refer to his home in Guildford.

List of writings?

Why is there no list of his works, nor does there seem to be a link to such a page. 71.237.199.230 07:12, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

Asperger's Syndrome suggestion

Hi, I removed the section speculating that Carroll had Asperger's -- as it was almost entirely one block of unverified, uncited opinion, and if not only that then also original research -- I felt at this time it would be best to remove it, until further discussion of it could be induced. thaaaaaaaaaaanks Spankmecold 07:38, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

I agree. -- Pichote 09:14, 13 December 2006 (UTC)

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I request review of this subject: Rhoel2007 19:34, 23 December 2007 (UTC+7)

There is good anecdotal eveidence to support this condition: Certainly medical professionals and those with the condition fully recognize the signs: Dodgson wore the same style of clothes for years without change, ate the same diet without change, had a flair for mathematics and literal creative thinking, his word play. He also would suddenly leave a crowded room or dinner party - a common trait where AS sufferers are unable to track multiple conversations.

The latest information which supports his condition is the discovery of his bank records: more than 90% of AS people are inept with planning money and understanding the actual consequences or reality of debt.

The original piece I wrote was uncited for the simple reason the majority of biographies were written prior to the condition being publicly known in the English speaking world. Much of what I wrote is not online and therefore un-linkable. It is partly based on private original research but clinical psychologists who have reviewed the pointers agree the hypositis: The case is as strong as that for Albert Einstein, which is accepted.

I believe entering the information under controversies was correct: It at least provides the basis for other researchers to build and comment upon this relatively new information.

I therefore request a review of the deleted material.

Rhoel

Lewis Carroll vs. Charles Dodgeson

Wouldn't this article be better under the name 'Charles Dodgeson' with Lewis Carroll as a redirect? After all, Lewis Carroll was only his pen name, and Charles Dodgeson his real name. It would make more sense that way. 'WiiWillieWiki^{(Talk) (Contributions)} 15:54, 5 February 2007 (UTC)

Not really, because his name was really Charles Dodgson (note the spelling, which does not have an 'e' after the 'g'). Just as with Mark Twain versus Samuel Clemens (your other post today on the same topic), He is better known by his pen name, and given that the 'correct redirection is there, it makes little difference other than extra work for someone. Additionally, other articles linking to a redirection may not be such a good thing. Finally, in this case, you yourself give a counter argument: if you can't get his real name correct after trying to argue for a position, then it is surely better to stick with a pen name that can be readily found in many places if a spelling hint is required.  DDStretch  (talk) 17:18, 5 February 2007 (UTC)

I see little merit in that response; his reasoning is sound, as one will note if one spends less time in criticism of his spelling. The man's identity, if not as an author then as a mathematician, logician, anglican clergyman and photographer, was indeed Charles Dodgson. This article extends far beyond that part of Dodgson's work for which the pseudonym 'Lewis Carroll' was created, and it should seem academically erroneous to anyone seeking information about the person himself to have it named so.

I ask anyone if there is a reason beyond that of immediate convenience that the article remain titled 'Lewis Carroll'. Exemplar sententia 03:41, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

Yes. Lewis Carroll is the name he is best known by, and the name people are more likely to look up. This is generally the convention with pen-names: Mark Twain, George Orwell, etc. are article names; Samuel Clemens, Eric Blair and indeed Charles Dodgson are redirects. Robin Johnson (talk) 09:29, 11 September 2007 (UTC)

I understand this. There would be no technical issue, however, for those people if the were simply redirected from 'Lewis Carroll' to 'Charles Dodgson', as the situation would be made clear by the first line of the article.

Yet I suppose convention will be something to which we adhere, at least for the immediate future.  Exemplar Sententia.

At the risk of Wikilawyering, Wikipedia:Naming conventions (people)#Nick_names.2C_pen_names.2C_stage_names.2C_cognomens is pretty clear on the matter. More people would recognise 'Lewis Carroll' than 'Charles Dodgson' - the 'fact' you tend to hear is that 'Lewis Carroll's real name was Charles Dodgson', not 'Charles Dodgson called himself Lewis Carroll when he wrote children's books'. Robin Johnson (talk) 10:20, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

Request for semi-protection

Requested semi-protection on 6th Feb. due to persistent vandalism. --Viledandy 02:15, 7 February 2007 (UTC)

Portraits of Lewis Carroll

I'm thinking that a list of films or books or whatever in which Lewis Carroll is portrayed should be included in the article. I'm not an expert, and I don't know what films/books he has been in, but it would be of interest to people interested in Lewis Carroll to see others' interpretations of him in the media. I added in the Trivia section that Marilyn Manson was making a movie about him, because it is relatively important, and as trivia, it fits right in, but again, a proper section listing his appearances as a character in fictional or non-fictional works would be good. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Donniedarkofan2006 (talk • contribs) 07:28 UTC, 11 June 2007.

Request for Re-establishment of an External Link

|Request for Re-establishment of an External Link talkpage heading |On 18 August 2007 the link, http://justtheplaceforasnark.blogspot.com/, was deleted from the Lewis Carroll page: reason given was: ... removing an external link that pertains to one of his works, not Carroll himself. Several other external links refer to LC's works, therefore, the above deleted link should be restored. Additionally, it seems illogical to apply such stringent parameters to external links, the works of LC are the sole reason for his biography to exist, the man is his work. . 14:31, 24 August 2007 (UTC)}}

On 18 August 2007 the link, http://justtheplaceforasnark.blogspot.com/, was deleted from the Lewis Carroll page: reason given was: - removing an external link that pertains to one of his works, not Carroll himself) Several other external links refer to LC's works, therefore, the above deleted link should be restored. Additionally, it seems illogical to apply such stringent parameters to external links, the works of LC are the sole reason for his biography to exist, the man is his work.

The problem is this article has way too many external links per our guideline at WP:EL. I saw this link and noticed it was more appropriate for The Hunting of the Snark than here. Something pertaining to a work should really be linked from the work -- it's just a way of keeping things organized. Also, we're really not supposed to link to blogs. So for these reasons I went ahead and removed it. Other links on this page that pertain only to a single work of Carroll's should also be moved to that particular page. --JayHenry 14:39, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

(edit conflict) First of all, the first message should be signed (you do it by adding 4 tildes '~' at the end of the message). Now, onto the main issue. I am not sure that the External Link should be re-instated at all. It was removed, but perhaps not for the right reason in my opinion. If one reads WP:EL#Links normally to be avoided, one sees point 11 state that links to be avoided should include: 'Links to blogs and personal web pages, except those written by a recognized authority' I have looked at the external link and it states it is a blog, and I'm not sure how much of an authority the author of the blog is. So, unless some reason can be given that would specifically verify that this blog adds something reliable, relevant, and significant to this article, I don't see how or why the guidance in WP:EL could or should be ignored in this case. In any case, if it does add something reliable, relevant, and significant, then perhaps it is better worked into the text as a reference (not an in-text external link), in which case, it will occur in with the rest of the references. Thus it would no longer be appropriate to duplicate it as an external link in a separate section. Just my thoughts.  DDStretch  (talk) 14:49, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for your explanations, I appreciate the clarity of your reasoning. Sorry about the lack of a correct signature. Lichtenberg 14:43, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

Pedofile who photographed naked girls

Why is not this mentioned, its a well documented fact and should be here as being unbiased--Polygamistx4 15:26, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

it is mentioned: Lewis Carroll#Suggestions of paedophilia — Timotab ^{Timothy (not Tim dagnabbit!)} 15:30, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

Removal of image

I see the image of the 'Cut Pages' document has been removed due to inadequate sourcing.

What is wrong with 'in the Dodgson Family Archive at Woking' as sourcing? If more detail is required (eg catalogue number) it can be supplied, but I can't see the need for removal.

Kudos though to the editors who have been so prompt in remedying all the vandalism here lately. Mikeindex 08:26, 22 September 2007 (UTC)

What a shame there has been vandalism in such case. This is an exceptionally well written article. The original author may very well be picked up by Britannica!

Dodgson as a Logican and Philosopher

Can we please have some discussion of Charles Dodgson's work as a philosopher and a logician? Surely some discussion of his Symbolic Logic is in order and his exploration of Modus Ponens in the Tortoise and Achilles. Some mention of his development of the Dodgson method in voting theory seems appropriate. 139.102.150.47 20:30, 26 September 2007 (UTC)

Carroll Diagram

Is there any good reason why there are no mentions of Carroll diagrams on this page? This is the only thing I knew of Carroll/Dodgson other than Alice in Wonderland before comming to this article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.129.48.129 (talk) 19:52, 27 September 2007 (UTC)

Agreed! And it still reads far too much like a gossip column pretending to be an encyclopædia article. This could be the touchstone for Dodgson the mathematician and teacher. The Dodgson/Carroll naming debate is also rather odd, for Dodgson was his birthname, and it was as Dodgson that he published his academic works. His fame as a pseudonymous children's author/putative pædophile photographer is almost irrelevant to his original profession of mathematician and pedagogue. Daen (talk) 12:19, 20 December 2007 (UTC)

May I suggest (to the first correspondent) that if you think a paragraph about Carroll diagrams would improve the page you write one and edit it in? I've no doubt it would be a worthwhile addition, and this is the whole essence of Wikipedia!

To the second correspondent I'd say that however important maths may be to you personally, Dodgson is famous now for writing the Alice books (and being a paedophile) so obviously those have to be foregrounded in any overview of his life and place in world culture. An article headed 'Charles Dodgson' all about his maths and teaching (a profession he drifted into becuse it was expected of him and seems never to have felt much enthusiasm for) would make about as much sense as one about Winston Churchill devoted to his talents as a water-colourist. Unfortunately popular culture's obsession with its misconceived and ill-researched view of Dodgson's sexuality leaves serious scholars with an obligation to point to the factual evidence in this area just as any other, even at the risk of being derided as gossip-columnists.Mikeindex (talk) 10:21, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

Weak Phrase

I find the phrase "more or less unequivocally" to be somewhat self-contradictory. Perhaps someone could improve that passage. EricTN (talk) 04:44, 3 January 2008 (UTC)

I think in context ('All of these works more or less unequivocally assume that Dodgson was a paedophile, albeit a repressed and celibate one') it's pretty clear: all the works assume it, but how uneqivocally they do so varies from one to another.Mikeindex (talk) 10:01, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

Writing style

This article is badly written and inserts the author's -- or several authors' -- opinions without citation. Someone needs to go through it with a fine-tooth comb and provide line by line citations and remove the point of view language. Far too many "it should be noted" and similar phrases. --Bookworm857158367 (talk) 02:20, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

AGREED. The style on its own isn't bad but by the standards of an "encyclopedia"... Glitterglue (talk) 07:03, 4 February 2008 (UTC)

Whatever else the article may be it is NOT badly written and you really shouldn't let your discomfort with any research that challenges the status quo lure you into spurious and incompetent attempts at literary criticism. Point out the places where you think citations are need and and I'll endeavour to supply them.Mikeindex (talk) 09:52, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

I don't have enough of the books or have enough of an interest in Carroll to attempt to edit this myself. I have Donald Thomas's recent biography of him and that's about it. Much of this article -- the latter part, particularly -- is excellent and provides valuable information with appropriate citations. However, I'd say that in-line citations are needed EVERYWHERE in this article where they don't exist, particularly in the first part of the article, and where opinions are expressed, it needs to be rewritten so it is clear which published source or literary critic the opinions came from. If it's a statement where there are two conflicting points of view, both need to be expressed and have in-line citations. Which critic said his first poem was a rather common little poem? Cite the critic; don't just say that because it's your opinion. Who said Jabberwocky was fantastic? It can't be the author of this article. That's POV. It needs to be attributed to a literary critic with an in-line citation. "Poorly written" probably is an exaggeration, but there are problems with POV. If this article is to ever to become a Featured Article it needs attention to those details. --Bookworm857158367 (talk) 15:53, 2 February 2008 (UTC)

The article also seems to use words like "various," "generally" and "widely" a lot - i agree, specificity is missing/needed for accuracy... Glitterglue (talk) 07:04, 4 February 2008 (UTC)

Biased?

It seems like this article is more a series of defenses of Lewis Carroll less than an attempt to be unbiased. Did anyone else get this impression? I feel like counterarguments to allegations are valid but I feel like this is too much - and also prevents insight and speculation about the author. Glitterglue (talk) 07:01, 4 February 2008 (UTC)

What do you think?

What do you think of his books? He also wrote the outline for the last Mimzy if anyone knew that. Another interesting fact: He is my great great great uncle!!(that is true because my grandmas maiden name is dogeson and that is his name and she actually met him at a reunion.):) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.81.252.86 (talk) 03:10, 6 February 2008 (UTC)

Mr Jameson's recent edit

I have restored a lengthy section which was cut from the article because, while based on research which is of recent date and therefore unacceptable to some people, it was about Charles Dodgson, his life, his relationships and the flaws in our received image of him, and therefore belonged in an article about him.

If you think the section is too long, surely the material to be referred elsewhere would be the critical responses to Leach's work, which could reasonably be argued to be 'about' Leach rather than Dodgson.Mikeindex (talk) 12:06, 9 February 2008 (UTC)

I have moved the information to a new page, which I have linked to from the main article. Hopefully that is acceptable to you. Barry Jameson (talk) 21:34, 9 February 2008 (UTC)

Why? It's still about Lewis Carroll - and based on primary evidence, unlike the (myth-based) commentaries by Cohen, Green, Hudson, Nabokov etc. cited in the previous section (which you are content to leave in). Perhaps instead the section in question could be rewritten slightly to make it clearer how many of the assertions it contains are solid fact and not just one writer's opinion.Mikeindex (talk) 09:31, 10 February 2008 (UTC) I have now done this.Mikeindex (talk) 10:09, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

Are you serious? The concept of the "The Carroll Myth" is a fringe belief created by people who are determined to persuade others to think that Carroll wasn't a paedophile. It's pure opinion, not anything remotely similar to "solid fact". Kooky beliefs shouldn't constitute a large part of a biography. Barry Jameson (talk) 14:16, 10 February 2008 (UTC)

Well yes, I'm serious. I appreciate that you have strong convictions in this and related areas, but I'm afraid your zeal is misapplied in this particular case. I would really urge you to read Karoline Leach's book and/or some of Hugues Lebailly's articles - or better, do your own primary research and read CLD's own diaries and letters (with an eye on the 'Index of Correspondents' which gives their birth dates), and then see what you think. Please bear in mind also that the new scholarship is not just about sexuality but about the totality of the received image of CLD (reclusive, socially inadequate, politically/theologically reactionary etc) - all of which the primary sources show to be inaccurate or at least simplistic.Mikeindex (talk) 21:15, 10 February 2008 (UTC)