Talk:Grace Banker
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Grace Banker has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: June 29, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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A fact from Grace Banker appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 2 May 2016 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:52, 29 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- No copyvio/dablink/external link trouble
- Lead
- Should be at most a para long for an article of this length
- Removed some text and made it into a single paragraph
- but she was not alive to receive this news. Maybe redundant as it is evident from the dates given at the start
- Corrected
- Life
- , and she selected Change to "; she selected"
- Done
- Any clear reason behind her death?
^*Could not find any source for this
- Awards
- Subsequent to the war When exactly?
- Date of issue of order of award given now with two references.
- Thanks for the review. I have addressed all above issues. Please see if any more changes are to be made by me.Nvvchar. 06:42, 29 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks, I can promote this now. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:00, 29 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for promoting the article to GA.Nvvchar. 07:27, 29 June 2016 (UTC)
More Information
Miss Grace Derby Banker was married, on 4 March 1922, to Eugene H. Paddock.
https://www.newspapers.com/clip/4613158/the_new_york_times/
Mr. and Mrs. Paddock had four children, Engene A Paddock, Arthur R Paddock, Stephen B Paddock, and a daughter.
https://www.ancestry.com/1940-census/usa/New-York/Grace-B-Paddock_g2m2s
Grace Derby (Banker) Paddock died on 17 December 1960, of cancer, in Scarsdale, NY, and is buried in Green-Wood Cemetery, Brooklyn, Kings County (Brooklyn), New York, USA.
https://www.geni.com/people/Chf-Operator-Grace-Paddock/6000000076745000322
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