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Under the Reactions section, the paragraph on the Palestinian response is potentially biased as it does not correspond to how the ''Jerusalem Post'' reported the claim of responsibility for the attack. Note that the ''Jerusalem Post'' does not say that Fatah claimed responsibility but rather that Fatah's militia did. It would be best to reword the paragraph to conform to how it's being reported in the press and more clearly distinguish between Fatah and the al-Aqsa Martyrs Brigade. In addition, the paragraph makes no mention of the condemnation issued by PA Prime Minister Salam Fayyad. This too suggests bias on the part of the article.—[[User:Biosketch|Biosketch]] ([[User talk:Biosketch|talk]]) 00:38, 13 March 2011 (UTC) |
Under the Reactions section, the paragraph on the Palestinian response is potentially biased as it does not correspond to how the ''Jerusalem Post'' reported the claim of responsibility for the attack. Note that the ''Jerusalem Post'' does not say that Fatah claimed responsibility but rather that Fatah's militia did. It would be best to reword the paragraph to conform to how it's being reported in the press and more clearly distinguish between Fatah and the al-Aqsa Martyrs Brigade. In addition, the paragraph makes no mention of the condemnation issued by PA Prime Minister Salam Fayyad. This too suggests bias on the part of the article.—[[User:Biosketch|Biosketch]] ([[User talk:Biosketch|talk]]) 00:38, 13 March 2011 (UTC) |
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[[User:Jalapenos_do_exist]], please consider that plastering photos of the victims all over the article is nonconstructive editing. In particular, placing a photo of a victim in the Reactions sections is inappropriate.—[[User:Biosketch|Biosketch]] ([[User talk:Biosketch|talk]]) 01:51, 13 March 2011 (UTC) |
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Palestinian reaction
Under the Reactions section, the paragraph on the Palestinian response is potentially biased as it does not correspond to how the Jerusalem Post reported the claim of responsibility for the attack. Note that the Jerusalem Post does not say that Fatah claimed responsibility but rather that Fatah's militia did. It would be best to reword the paragraph to conform to how it's being reported in the press and more clearly distinguish between Fatah and the al-Aqsa Martyrs Brigade. In addition, the paragraph makes no mention of the condemnation issued by PA Prime Minister Salam Fayyad. This too suggests bias on the part of the article.—Biosketch (talk) 00:38, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
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User:Jalapenos_do_exist, please consider that plastering photos of the victims all over the article is nonconstructive editing. In particular, placing a photo of a victim in the Reactions sections is inappropriate.—Biosketch (talk) 01:51, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
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