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== John's Roast Pork ==

[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=John%27s_Roast_Pork&type=revision&diff=811983139&oldid=743593480 This edit] is flat out vandalism if you touch articles in this manner you well be banned period. [[User:Valoem|<b style="color: DarkSlateGray;">Valoem</b>]] <sup>[[User talk:Valoem|<b style="color: blue;">talk</b>]]</sup> <sup>

[[File:Information.svg|25px|alt=Information icon]] Hello, I'm [[User:Valoem|Valoem]]. I noticed that you recently removed content from [[:John's Roast Pork]]&nbsp;without adequately explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an accurate [[Help:Edit summary|edit summary]]. If this was a mistake, don't worry; the removed content has been restored. If you would like to experiment, please use the [[WP:Sandbox|sandbox]]. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on [[User_talk:Valoem|my talk page]]. Thanks.<!-- Template:uw-delete1 --> removed cited sources is vandalism. [[Special:Contributions/Valoem|<b style="color: Green;">contrib</b>]]</sup> 07:15, 5 December 2017 (UTC)
:If it was not vandalism you would response not revert so you know what you did. Reverting source material is vandalism. Consider this warning if you can't nominate this for AfD. But you CANNOT remove information to make it look less notable that is what you did reverting this edit will cause me to report you. [[User:Valoem|<b style="color: DarkSlateGray;">Valoem</b>]] <sup>[[User talk:Valoem|<b style="color: blue;">talk</b>]]</sup> <sup>[[Special:Contributions/Valoem|<b style="color: Green;">contrib</b>]]</sup> 07:21, 5 December 2017 (UTC)

Revision as of 07:26, 5 December 2017

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PLEASE ADD YOUR MESSAGE AT THE BOTTOM and generally, I will reply here so please watch this page for a response. Unless it's an AfC page, where I'll usually comment there and you will get a notification for that. If I have taken time reviewing your draft, please be patient and I will get to it as I am quite busy with other tasks but am certainly willing to look at it and will not need reminding.

New users: If you want to learn the basics of Wikipedia, my page for new users here contains useful information. Information such as citing sources, submitting images and changing & deleting username. If that page hasn't answered your question(s), contact me here.

07:04:47, 22 November 2017 - Immervision draft submission

Thanks for the clarification. However might I ask you to printout those sections/paragraphs/passages or even specific word use that gives the impression of it being a sales pitch or not as neutral as it might otherwise be? The issue of tone & style were not at any time brought into question before your comment, so the sudden appearance of this as a comment left me puzzled. I've read the WP:Deletion policy through carefully the Wikipedia Spam[1] page and am not sure which words give it the appearance of being biased. Any insight as to specific content in my article that creates this impression would be greatly appreciated. ADDENDUM: I'd noticed this morning that the draft page had been deleted and this without any discussion and without a reply to my repeated requests for help in pointing out which sections/words were written in an NPOV style. I have written several posts in my talk page concerning this, and they too have gone unanswered. I acknowledge my greenhorn Wikipedia contributor's status, and so perhaps this was not the place to initiate a discussion of this matter. Looking forward to hearing you thoughts. Thanks! Jacquesdav (talk) 12:09, 22 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

13:24:38, 5 June 2017 review of submission by Rhish

I've added a range of published articles about her could you review these? —Preceding undated comment added 13:24:38, 5 June 2017

22:26:40, 19 June 2017 review of submission by Helen1921


I'm not sure why you are saying that the newspaper articles are not reliable sources. Many are too old to be found online but they definitely exist and are published sources. This organization has a very long history. What kind of sources are you looking for?

06:12:28, 21 June 2017 review of submission by Queensonu


{{SAFESUBST:Void|}

I have submitted my Wikipedia page 28 days ago by the name "Farah Siddiqui Matin" but till now it has not been published or reviewed? can I know the reason please?


13:50:18, 28 June 2017 review of submission by Lukendo


Hi, I am confused, this has not been accepted as it does not have independent recognition. In the United Kingdom since 1901 The British Psychological Society (BPS) is the recognised body for Accrediting Psychometric Tools and Training for publishing. Identity is a Personality Profiling Tool Accredited by the British Psychological Society and as such users have to have a Level 2 Test User: Occupational Qualification to purchase and to interpret the tool. The BPS have extremely strict criteria and ongoing accreditation reviews and would not give their Accreditation if the Identity Tool did not reach their standards and verification requirements. Identity has been Assessed by and is registered with the British Psychological Society Psychological Testing Centre (PTC).

Hope this helps, many thanks.


notability criteria for page Jubilee (DJ)

Hi SwisterTwister, I wanted to ask about your comment about the page for Jubilee (DJ). I included 12 sources, 11 of which Jubilee is the primary subject (either an interview with her or a review of her music). The sources include extremely reputable publications with very large followings, most of which also have a print publication- Brooklyn Magazine, The Fader, Spin, The Guardian, and Complex.

These are some of the most reputable sources that would cover a contemporary electronic musician, and I fail to see how they don't meet the notability criteria.

Luvtoucans (talk)luvtoucans

23:35:23, 6 July 2017 review of submission by Doramensah1971



What do you mean by the subject does not meet the notability standards. All the articles I added focus on the subject. I can add 100s more. This is one of the biggest stars in the Nigerian film industry!

18:20:13, 7 July 2017 review of submission by KBVI




I am genuinely confused as to why the article I wrote about attorney Catherine M. Stanton was rejected. I have seen many similar articles about many other attorneys on Wikipedia.

I provided legitimate news sources about attorney Stanton. The article is not an advertisement. It's about an accomplished, female lawyer in the highly competitive market of New York City.

Any additional feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you,

KBVI

18:58:36, 7 July 2017 review of submission by Poutnikl


I admit I am very confused now, if and how can I ever improve the references to meet the criteria, or if I should ever try.. :-(. Perhaps this my first attempt will be my last one. Why is the single source PC Magazine in https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bridge_router considered better than wiki database of OpenStreetMap, combined with multiple admitedly less notable sources ?

19:05:13, 8 July 2017 review of submission by Heystack



Would you please review William M Gayton once again? We are not sure why there are other "Scouts" that have Wikipedia pages that haven't held Director of Scouting positions nor have they been involved w/ as many decisions. Thank You!

10:35:22, 9 July 2017 review of submission by Jamesrawson79


thanks for taking the time to review the draft. I have added reviews of the person practice and career written on significant, independant and mainstream news sources such as the Guardian Newspaper, Wired Magazine, Filmmaker Magazine and Creative Applications. These sources are both in their field and in mainstream media all significant third party and verifiable major sources that meet wikipedias guidelines for independance and significance. I have included references to works written about the authors work on the BBC, another significant independant news source and one such article was part of BBC's Best of 2015 list. In the exhibitions section i have included references to one of the works produced by the art group found by the person of note which was acquired by the Victoria and Albert Museum in London. I have also summarised the position of these mainstream news references and included them in the article to make it clear why the works are significant. Together with the existing extensive links and references all to verifiable thrid party sites like the Independant, Creative Review, a BAFTA nomination, and extensive profiles of the individual on major news and industry sites. I trust that all these changes demonstrate sufficent notability. thanks.

15:13:26, 9 July 2017 review of submission by MSmuzynski



Hi SwisterTwister, Thank you for reviewing my article! Unfortunately, it was declined for lack of notability on the subject. I cited 10 articles from independent, reputable national news and international publications that wrote about the attraction/company. It has been featured in many, many more so I am happy to provide additional sources. How many would you recommend including in the article to meet notability guidelines? Thanks so much for your help! This has been a great learning experience.

I have added five more sources and additional information to the article draft to improve notability. Would you mind reviewing it again and letting me know if more improvements need to be made? Thanks again for all of your help!

Request assistance for Draft:Unigma

User:CorbuleacM (talk) - 12:20, 10 July 2017 (GMT)

Hi SwisterTwister,

I've added several more independent sources to Draft:Unigma. All of them are unique now. I've read and followed Wikipedia guidelines and I am trying for more than a year to get the page published. Please let me know.

Best regards,

Mihai.

14:24:31, 10 July 2017 review of submission by Bronagh1


I am not requesting a re review, i AM JUST A LITTLE CONFUSED ABOUT THE COMMENT! IF I COULD JUST GET A BIT MORE CLARIFICATION THAT WOULD BE GREAT!

17:41:11, 10 July 2017 review of submission by Seporche


I am confused as to how the Trial Lawyer Hall of Fame, Texas Monthly, National Review, National Law Journal, D Magazine, and Dallas News are not considered significant sources for notability. The subject is a leading lawyer in her field and, although she is associated with notable persons, is an independently notable figure. Would you recommend expanding upon any certain sections of the article to better demonstrate this notability?

00:39:59, 12 July 2017 review of submission by Jamesrawson79

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Hello, I dont know if you have had a chance to re review my draft submission but in lieu of your comments i have no added a series of articles that are directly about the subjects work/projects from independant and significant sources such as The Guardian, BBC, Wired Magazine, Filmmaker Magazine, The Independant, The Belfast Telegrapgh, Popular Science, Tank Magazine and IMDB in adition to the other web based references I had included previously. I trust this meets your notability criteria now. Thanks so much for your help through this process.

03:11:10, 12 July 2017 review of submission by 36.102.227.121


Hello, I Would like you to please advice me on a possible way to make my article look less like an advertisement. can you please point out some specific areas you would like me to change? Thanks

06:29:11, 12 July 2017 review of submission by Andreei


Hi! I am a user of this software that I personally find really fine. But also I found out that there is no Wiki page about it that was a little bit strange for me because the product is absolutely notable to be included into Wikipedia. That's why I decided to write an article about it. I spent more than 5-6 hours reading your guides and rules how to create a proper article. I stronly believe that the way I wrote it is neutral with no commercial or advertising nature. It's just the description that you can't write in a different way. What concerns sources. I found them in the Internet in a few minutes. It means that the product is widely presented on the Web with reviews from different people and sites. Yes, I agree that some reviews are similar. But those reviews describe the functionality of a product. If the product does have this or that feature, it won't be described differently. The description will be the same, words can differ a little bit. But still, as this tool was my reliable handler during several months and now I have some spare time, I do want to go on with creating Wikipedia page for it. Please, help me to improve it. I will appreciate it!

03:58:02, 13 July 2017 review of submission by Jamesrawson79


Thats fantastic!! Thanks so much for your patience and guidance with this. Do you mean i need to do something regarding the page move myself? Or is this now out of my hands now and I just need to wait? thanks again,

16:17:15, 14 July 2017 review of submission by 70.171.176.153

I am the person who gave the Omaha Black Music and Community Hall of Fame Awards in 2011, and was inducted for my work with many bands including Rhythm Machine. You can google Rhythm Machine Donald Harris for an interview I did years ago with Larry Grogan (music historian) on funky16corners.com - My information on wiki was incomplete and vague. I wanted to give concise information. I have never submitted a complete list to wiki of the recipients of the awards in 2011, but would be more than happy to. I am uncertain of who provided the information you have, but it is incomplete and leaves several people unmentioned who should be reflected as honorees on wiki. Thank you

16:44:55, 14 July 2017 review of submission by Trepanationsolution


Can you provide more info on why the newspaper articles and the edited book on his work don't count as evidence of his notability? The previous editor stated that the book IT'S ALL ALLOWED wasn't appropriate as a reference, even though it is published by Intellect and the Live Art Development Agency (and by University of Chicago Press in the US) and is a peer reviewed academic publication. This evidences notability, as does the number of obituaries in broadsheet newspapers (including one that calls him the subject a "legend"). Other references are all single-focus articles in peer-reviewed scholarly publications. Are there specific aspects that require additional evidencing?

17:27:13, 14 July 2017 review of submission by Vlaurentius


Thank you very much for your clear explanation. Would it be better if I write an article about his ancient nobility background? and leave out any business related activities. Maybe I could just mention his advisory role to key politicians?

20:08:22, 17 July 2017 review of submission by Gospitt


Hi there regarding

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:James_Evans_(Historian)

I have used 3 references that detail reviews of James's work 

Milton, Giles (Nov 2013). "Route to Riches". Literary Review. Retrieved 17 July 2017.

Jump up ^ Finlayson, Ian (28 Sept 2013). "Merchant Adventurers". The Times. Retrieved 17 July 2017. Check date values in: |date= (help) Jump up ^ Gulliver, Katerina (8 July 2017). "How the Puritans, not the Pilgrims, colonised America". The Spectator. Retrieved 17 July 2017.

These are 3 reviews from 3 of the most eminent publications in the United Kingdom.

Do I need to include further reviews?

As I could include.

http://geographical.co.uk/reviews/books/item/321-merchant-adventurers-the-voyage-of-discovery-that-transformed-tudor-england-by-james-evans

https://www.irishtimes.com/culture/books/james-evans-as-arctic-ice-melts-an-old-dream-resurfaces-1.1990796

and he is featured at multiple literary festivals.

http://yorkfestivalofideas.com/2017/talks/why-english-sailed-new-world/

Your input is appreciated.

Best

Oli

08:04:01, 18 July 2017 review of submission by Captterra


Hi SwisterTwister, I saw that you declined my page on Basement Pong because I do not have any references. In fact, this is a game invented by me and some friends, we play it a lot. Therefore, there are (for the moment) no official references that exist. How can we solve this problem?

Regards,

14:08:58, 18 July 2017 review of submission by Coverdale1234


Please could you let me know which references are troubling you? I have sourced neutral and credible websites to back up my article. Please clarify what you mean by 'notability can not be inherited'.

Thanks

19:15:39, 19 July 2017 review of submission by Rebeccaswanson

I wanted a rereview because I want the notoriety of Michael Toombs examined as more of a community figure versus an artist, as he participates in more community upbringing projects and art projects that benefit Kansas City as a whole versus primarily contributing to his own personal practice, hence why his work is not in a museum's collection, but instead it is found as public art and murals around Kansas City.

Draft:Visar Mulliqi decline

Dear David,

The issue about the decline is, you will not be able to find any Balkans (South-Eastern Europe) artist with world-renowned Museums containing their art collections. Moreover, there is no major art review that can be cited as for any of them, since all the WikiPedia articles of the artists in the Balkans are based on local sources.

The source that you have declined is an Academic Personnel at the main University of the Republic of Kosovo, in the Faculty of Arts section. Moreover, he has recently held 2 exhibitions in Paris, which are well-sourced and documented, with a lot of pictures in the sources, text and even the Galleries confirming the events.

Please be aware of the circumstances before coming up with such decisions.

I have added another source from the Ministry of Culture, Youth and Sports of the Republic of Kosovo (Governmental official source), and resubmitted the article.

Thank you.


P.S. The person in the article (Visar Mulliqi, painter) has also held an exhibition in the Museum of Kosovo in 2011, if that helps. It is cited in the CV of the official website of the Faculty of Arts at the University of Prishtina, where he currently lectures 'Painting'.

06:04:04, 20 July 2017 review of submission by Asmita93


Hello sir, Please help me in improving this article.

12:39:16, 20 July 2017 review of submission by Jogideep



Hi,

I have updated my article as per wiki guidelines. It would be great if you can review my draft again. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Assetz_Property_Group

14:54:31, 20 July 2017 review of submission by Minerva567


Hi SwisterTwister, Thank you for reviewing my submission so quickly. I am submitting this draft for re-review after taking into account your edits. I looked at your comments and saw some flaws in the draft with the references, as there were some interviews and two paragraph profiles. I have since taken those sources out and replaced them with reliable sources or deleted them entirely if they weren't able to be backed-up by clear evidence. In your comments you said, "Overly suggestive of an advertised business profile both in information and sources", I hope my edits show that I improved the draft in this area. I searched many other CEO profiles such as "Jeff Immelt" and believe this article is of the same notability as far as sources and has the same tone as many CEO and President pages. I understand that the business executive articles are tough pages to write as they often come off as advertised business profiles because of the type of information. Hopefully the updated version is strong enough, let me know. Otherwise, I am willing to do more edits as I believe Isaac Rodriguez is extremely notable and others would like to know about more about him, as I see his name everywhere. Any advice on how to improve this article is greatly appreciated. Thank You.

Submission by Furious.lion declined on 17 July 2017 by SwisterTwister

Hi SwisterTwister. I am learning the process and sorry for multiple resubmission. Regarding your comments, I've edited the reference section and added several 3rd party sources such TV channels, newspapers, magazines that cite Oktay Arslan's work. Since this is my first wikipedia page creation, I've mainly inspired from similar Kurdish scholars' wikipedia pages such as Azad_Bonni, Nadir_Nadirov etc.


12:51:16, 25 July 2017 review of submission by Tkhandelwal


Thank you for reviewing Electrical Transient Analyzer Program Page. I tried to make this page based on the content that seems to be approved for Ansys. Can you please let me know which parts need to be deleted and improved in order for this article to remain on Wikipedia? My goal is to link all references and resources for ETAP software to this page.

13:40:57, 27 July 2017 review of submission by Trainkid4449


Hi, I would just like clarification on what sources are reliable and can prove notability. I tried to used other motorsports venues as a guide, but they seem to be using sources similar to those I used, or in some cases no references as all. Here are a few that I used:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mid-Ohio_Sports_Car_Course https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nelson_Ledges_Road_Course (No Refrences) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Summit_Point_Motorsports_Park https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lime_Rock_Park

Could you give me an example, perhaps from another track, of a reference that proves notability?

Thanks, Michael

23:27:19, 27 July 2017 review of submission by El Capitano81


I am a Newbie and the instructions have a lot of jargon that i am not familiar with could you please explain exactly what is wrong?

15:54:26, 29 July 2017 review of submission by Narayanan, Ananth


Could you please define what is meant by "not suitable for Wikipedia?" Does it mean that Wikipedia does not list such people? We have gone through a number of revisions from notability to technical fixes. However, this comment that "This submission is not suitable for Wikipedia" does not indicate the requirement for any specific fix as the criteria.

The section on what Wikipedia is not is very broad: 2.1 Wikipedia is not a dictionary 2.2 Wikipedia is not a publisher of original thought 2.3 Wikipedia is not a soapbox or means of promotion 2.4 Wikipedia is not a mirror or a repository of links, images, or media files 2.5 Wikipedia is not a blog, web hosting service, social networking service, or memorial site 2.6 Wikipedia is not a directory 2.7 Wikipedia is not a manual, guidebook, textbook, or scientific journal 2.8 Wikipedia is not a crystal ball 2.9 Wikipedia is not a newspaper 2.10 Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of information 2.11 Wikipedia is not censored

Please identify which section in your opinion this content does not meet?

Thank you for your time and effort.

14:38:41, 1 August 2017 review of submission by Jakemadoff210


I need clarification on the word "significant'.

I have linked to notable sources that cover this company. Another company of the same pedigree, "Birchbox" has a Wikipedia page with similar content and quality links.

Thank you.

15:34:05, 2 August 2017 review of submission by UpsideLMS


Dear SwisterTwister,

Thank you for such a quick review. Very much appreciated. However, sad to know that our page got declined.

Also, after review noticed that the Awards Section went missing. UpsideLMS has won a lot of awards and has a lot of valuable resources indicating the same. Request you to review once again and if still any changes are required, please guide us exactly what needs to be changed so that we can incorporate the suggested changes and get the draft approved from your side.

Awaiting response. And many thanks once again.

17:25:30, 2 August 2017 review of submission by Kaityrobertspr


I'm not sure why the references aren't considered adequate. Did I enter them incorrectly? There are links to Elle, HuffingtonPost, etc. Please help me understand so that I can resubmit.

09:09:27, 4 August 2017 review of submission by UpsideLMS


Hello SwisterTwister,

Thank you for your suggestions although I am not quite convinced with the "credible source" comment you have made for the awards as the references mentioned are those of the Awarding bodies itself, which is the most credible source.

Also regd. the "promotional content" comment, while it has not been our intent to do so (and we have referred to and written in line with many competition pages with approved Wiki pages to see how the content is to be written) I am happy to know how we can change/tweak it to make it fit for approval.

Thanks in advance.

20:48:04, 7 August 2017 review of submission by SpokenReasonsFF


Hello, I am requesting a re-review because information on John Brenkus is factual, and to my knowledge, complete. If there is anymore that needs to be added, I would love to know what that would be. Thank you in advance.

17:06:51, 10 August 2017 review of submission by Acmetoys



Thanks for your notes. Friedman's work was produced in the pre-internet period where artists were alternative video artists were largley ignored by main stream media sources. Thereafter stalwart museums such as MOMA have exhibited his work in major shows such as Pacific Standard time

Per your recomendation I have added several references re art galleries, shows, and exhibition reviews of Friedman work (see below) Each one of these articles mentions Friedman's work by name. I have also included several link to U Tube videos that Friedman created for Berlin, Stacy Q, and several other bands. Each band that Friedman directed had a number #1 hit after Friedman directed videos for them.

In addition the LA times also reviews Friedmans's work as follows "Bradley Friedman directed an 111/2-minute video of the Screamers in 1981 performing "Eva Braun," a synth-punk song named for Hitler's mistress, in front of TV monitors. He also shot the stern and synthesized Anti-Sex League in 1980 playing a song with an unpublishable title enhanced with blurred-out images from a porn film. It directly related to the name of the band and the lyrics of the song and the performance, and the video was a response to a perceptions of sexual restrictions at the time," says Hyman. "Filmmakers were [manipulating video] to add to the music or add political commentary with the alternative imagery they were bringing. The period between Nixon's resignation and Reagan's inauguration is unique for more than artistic experimentation, but for an overlap between visual arts and music not seen since the Dada movement of the '20s," says MOCA chief curator Paul Schimmel. "I think the punk generation and the artists came through the Vietnam War and Watergate having a very different relationship with the government. There was this antiart art and that was also true with the punk bands … it wasn't intended to be stylish, but to capture raw energy."

http://articles.latimes.com/2012/jan/12/entertainment/la-et-guidefeature12-20120112

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https://sites.google.com/view/bradley-friedman-external-link

https://www.newspapers.com/newspage/169463935/

https://books.google.com/books?id=YCQEAAAAMBAJ&pg=PT45&lpg=PT45&dq=ucla+international+visual+music+f...

https://books.google.com/books?id=ieUoCAAAQBAJ&pg=PA304&lpg=PA304&dq=eva+braun+friedman+screamers&source=bl&ots=IgHP8XUC_a&sig=09eBva4DnDVgXAfJHILFF1XWf_I&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjptLOv_8rVAhUT52MKHRaZB-QQ6AEIKDAA#v=onepage&q=eva%20braun%20friedman%20screamers&f=false

https://www.alternativeprojections.com/screening-series/strange-notes-and-nervous-breakdowns-punk-and-media-art-1974-1981/

https://www.alternativeprojections.com/screening-series/

http://autre.love/journal/2012/01/12/experimental-film-in-los-angeles

References

  1. ^ {{cite news|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=GCQEAAAAMBAJ&pg=PT83&lpg=PT83&dq=bradley+friedman+music+video+director&source=bl&ots=kXaBNCmHip&sig=IBcppoQaeGnqzr16qH4QqBUDwMg&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwij3vSH6crVAhWowFQKHQcpC4UQ6AEIOjAD#v=onepage&q=bradley%20friedman%20music%20video%20director&f=false

16:53:33, 11 August 2017 review of submission by 1398Hygeia


Hi, just looking for more direction on this feedback "we actually need significant independent news, but the kind we need is rarer in company executives. Also, notability cannot be inherited. "

Having a hard time understanding notability as inherited here.

06:55:22, 14 August 2017 review of submission by Valuation1997


I am requesting a re-review because this is not an advertisement. This is a page to make peple aware of the organisation which is a government body and provides help to public at large.Accordingly the idea is to disseminate the information on this office of the government to peaple at large. Kidnly note that this wikipage is for awarness not for any commercial prupose as it is related to a governmetn agency. Its a nascent governmetn body so it can not be termed as advertisement. This will certainly enrich wikipedia by adding information on government bodies. hope you will re-review this. Incase of any query i will be glad to provide the same.

14:34:00, 14 August 2017 review of submission by Jakemadoff210


Hey SwisterTwister, just following up this. I made the necessary changes. Let me know. Thank you!

23:28:04, 15 August 2017 review of submission by LaLoo


I edited the product description to include reliable news sources that support it. Hope this helps.

08:43:33, 16 August 2017 review of submission by Jogideep



Hi,

Thanks for reviewing my submission. As you said '3 of the sources are repeated announcements', it would be great if you can tell me which one you are referring to. As my resources are unique and from reputated sites giving different pieces of information

ET realty M&N Acritique India Infoline Other are two sources are citing company info having good authority. I have seen in other wiki articles citing info from Bloomberg. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Assetz_Property_Group

21:01:16, 17 August 2017 review of submission by AlfredGoodach


Hi, I am requesting a re-review as the artist related to this page (Papamitrou) has performed some notable acts. The album that his music is part off called: "Wins and Losses" by Meek Mill, was No. 3 on Billboard 200 the first week it was released (7/21/17). Also, the 1st song of the album is the tile of the album and it is one of the songs that Nik Papamitrou produced. According to the Wikipedia rules of a notable song writer/producer, this should satisfy that requirement as this song made the top 100 hot song list on the Billboard also. Please review and notify us of your decision.

Thank you, Alfred.

05:01:22, 19 August 2017 review of submission by Siddhesht


Anil Lamba is published author by one of the well-established publishers [HarperCollins] Can you point out specific content which should be removed? [Anil Lamba] falls under notable person [1] under section Creative Professional. Refer point 2. He has created concept of 'Finance for non-finance people' I will appreciate your help, suggestions to improve this article to suit wiki guidelines.

References

  1. ^ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Notability_(people)

12:08:45, 21 August 2017 review of submission by Dugbrink


I do not understand why the article was rejected. There are multiple examples of listings that have no external sources or significantly fewer (e.g. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/KLC_Ann_Arbor, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tiara_Yachts, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Basin_Radio_Network, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mike-sell%27s) yet they were published.

It seems ironic Wikipedia only wants to publish articles about topics that are already widely notable. I would expect readership would like to learn about more diverse topics.

Please reconsider.

16:38:44, 25 August 2017 review of submission by Mrwonton06


Wondering what sources would be less trivial than a pair of separate Rolling Stone articles. There are several other sources on the band I can dig up if need be. They charted multiple times on the Americana Radio charts, so I feel like they're fairly notable -- enough to warrant a Wiki article anyway.

15:47:00, 31 August 2017 review of submission by Jakemadoff210


Gotcha. So I can see tangible examples of what you mean, can you please tell me what sources in this article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Birchbox) make it worthy of publishing. This is a company in the same vertical and my post has similar sources.

Thank you.

I've been working on this for awhile and would really like to get this published.

20:08:24, 21 September 2017 review of submission by Drpcgalle


14:32, 28 August 2017 (UTC) review of submission by djgilbert

Incorrect message: Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not intended to be a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. SwisterTwister talk 14:32, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

Response: 

Totally wrong and off base to make your assertion. Rocky Mountain Performance Excellence is a part of the network leading to the U.S. Presidential Quality Award, termed the Malcolm Baldrige National Quality Award established 30 years ago. The article provided information on the Rocky Mountain Mountain Performance Excellence nonprofit that allows organizations a pathway to the Baldrige Award. Please read the Wikipedia article to understand the context: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Malcolm_Baldrige_National_Quality_Award

Your logic would cause the deletion of all websites of state and local governmental affiliated organizations. Totally wrong and misguided. Please un-delete.

15:12:23, 11 October 2017 review of submission by NatalieRoss


Please assist with anything I need to improve to get my submission approved. Thank you.

12:48:13, 1 November 2017 review of submission by Traci Morgan



References and citations are added and edited. They follow the instructions and are much the same as I have seen in many other biographies. Can you look at the specific citations/references and advise which are acceptable and which are not acceptable.

08:27:08, 5 November 2017 review of submission by Jasonwen

  • Jasonowen Finally looking back in, I must say there's simply not enough significant independent news yet and you'll need to emphasis others you can help enhancing it. SwisterTwister talk 04:33, 23 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

11:57:24, 13 November 2017 review of submission by Lidiaratoi


I am requestingare-review on the Matias del Campo age. He is one of the most prominent figures in computational design and the link would prove useful for students and young designers following computational design in architecture, in order to see it implemented and to gather a large data of possible galleries, schools, competitions etc. I have added 2 more references and citation blocks.

07:58:52, 16 November 2017 review of submission by Hpsharon


Hi SwisterTwister,

We proceeded with your recommendations to add reliable secondary sources. Before we resubmit the draft though, we want to see if there is now an adequate amount of sources. Would you kindly let us know if coverage of the subject is sufficient?

Sincerely, Hpsharon

  • Yes Hpsharon I'm now looking at it but the sources are simply too thin as based on announcements and notices. We need substantial coverage outside anything influenced by this and Notability cannot be inherited. SwisterTwister talk 04:29, 23 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Review of MLF1867

Pleaes clarify what promotional material you are refering to. You left us the following message: "Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not intended to be a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. SwisterTwister talk 18:35, 21 November 2017 (UTC)" — Preceding unsigned comment added by MLF1867 (talk • contribs)

  • MLF1867 The concern was in the article appearing as a sales pitch or with those elements therefore we can't accept them. Overall, this was enough to apply for removal under WP:Deletion policy. SwisterTwister talk 18:52, 21 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Can you please clarify which statements were a "sales pitch" so we can correct them and supply the correct verbiage. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MLF1867 (talk • contribs) 18:55, 21 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • MLF1867 The overdetail in what the company offered or its business, we're highly skeptical in including that in articles here. SwisterTwister talk 13:33, 22 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Review of my draft

Hey David! It's been a while since I've last talked to you. Could you see if you can review this draft that I created? Draft:Oliver Isaacs Thanks man! FiendYT ★

  • FiendYT Hello! I can take a look but, I have some things to share with you and I'll discuss them offwiki, come by IRC #wikimedia-cloud, I'll meet you there anytime tonight and I'll share them with you. SwisterTwister talk 03:00, 24 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    • SwisterTwister Sure! I'm there right now. Would love to talk to you. FiendYT ★
      • FiendYT I'm happy I could help and I actually noticed only now I missed answering one of your questions at the end, if you may remember, "What's the best backlog to use"). One easy answer is actually the articles I've visited in my contributions as that's a good example. Hope this helps! SwisterTwister talk 06:03, 24 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Review my article

Assalam-o-Alaikum, I have heard that you review many pages in a day and that, you are an intelligent reviewer. Can you please review my page, Draft:Bilal Abbas Khan, if you are interested. 😞 Or else, your wish but you shall refuse me by replying. 😔 182.182.53.204 (talk) 10:02, 3 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Rick Millane

Hi, thanks for all your recent scientist biographies. Just to check–do you have a source specifically saying that this person is an American citizen? His first degree is from a New Zealand university and he seems to have spent at least the majority of his career there, so I think it’s likely that’s where he’s from although I haven’t found a source saying it. Blythwood (talk) 08:07, 28 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • Yes, it was a typing mistake given I had repeatedly typed "American". I've fixed it now. SwisterTwister talk 15:36, 28 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Original research

Hello. When you write in the Robin J. Ely article that she is "a highly cited expert in her field" and your cited source is this Google Scholar search, is it not "new analysis or synthesis that reaches or implies a conclusion not clearly stated in the published sources"? Note that I have the same concerns for Andrea Goldsmith, Ju Li and Kenneth Merz. Thanks and regards, Biwom (talk) 08:29, 28 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

WP:PROF explicitly cites any evidence to show expertise in a field and WP:Original research wouldn't be relevant here as those sources are not anything close to original research. GS is certainly not a primary source therefore not original research. SwisterTwister talk 15:41, 28 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Hello. I don't understand. Where is the "published source" that "clearly states" that Robin J. Ely is a "highly cited expert in her field"? Or more reasonably, where is the "published source" that supports that Robin J. Ely is a "highly cited expert in her field"? Thanks and regards, Biwom (talk) 16:34, 28 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
It's the citations that show highly cited numbers and this show significance in the field. SwisterTwister talk 18:40, 28 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Hello. Yes, so to wrap it up, we agree that 1. the citation counts show significance in the field 2. the subject passes WP:NPROF 3. we are not aware of a "published source" that "clearly states" that Robin J. Ely is a "highly cited expert in her field". Thanks and regards, Biwom (talk) 20:33, 28 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I had a similar concern on Michael A. Mallin; I don't agree with your edit summary [1] that it's not OR to describe someone as "highly cited" just based on a citation count -- but I don't disagree with your actual edit which simply states the citation count as a fact. So I think we're all on the same page. CapitalSasha ~ talk 10:36, 29 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

academics

A statement that someone has very high citation as shown by Google Scholar, backed up by a reference to that source, is not OR. So far from that, having such citations is the prime practicla consideration in notability under WP:PROF, because it proves their being recognized as an authority. How else would one possibly show it except by showing the count? Anyone whose count is high enough to meet WP:PROF is highly cited, that's more of less whatthe term means. But it is not necessary to actually say it. DGG ( talk ) 21:50, 29 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Review my article

Assalam-o-Alaikum, I have heard that you review many pages in a day and that, you are an intelligent reviewer. Can you please review my page, Draft:Bilal Abbas Khan, if you are interested. 😞 Or else, your wish but you shall refuse me by replying. This draft is approximately 5 days old but no-one has reviewed it. 182.182.53.204 (talk) 10:08, 3 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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