Talk:Alan Campbell (pastor)

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Quotations section[edit]

Briefly, it's enormous; it's surely much too long for an encyclopaedia article, and it unbalances the article (shifting it away from a neutral pioint of view). Could someone cut it down? I'll try if no-one else can, but someone who knows more about the subject might be able to do a better job. --Phronima 11:52, 24 January 2006 (UTC)

Seems rather biased[edit]

"instead teaching what he sees as the Biblical view" Shouldn't this be worded, what he sees as the Biblical view, or something along those lines?

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Sabbath is Sunday in Calvinist Circles[edit]

When Alan Campbell talks on Sabbath, him is talking on Sunday, no on Saturday. Fundamentalist Calvinists as Him or Paisley considers Sunday as Sabbath from Christians. Eliecer Guillen. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 190.75.114.156 (talk) 19:42, 29 May 2009 (UTC)