Talk:Bruno Freiherr von Brackel
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[edit]I considered the following as I evaluated the article:
- References: Needs one or two more, or needs to show why the one used is of definitive importance.
- Coverage: The article is very brief on his role in the battles in which he participated and the acts of heroism that earned him the posthumous award. As a biography, it lacks any information outside of his military record.
- Grammar and Style: The grammar, strictly speaking, is mostly acceptable for what has been written here. However, I decided to leave it un-assessed until more material is added. Some of the German terminology assumes foreknowledge on the part of the reader. Why is the term "Hauptman" used instead of "Captain"? At the very least, the English term should probably be put in parantheses.
- Supporting Materials: The infobox is adequate, but a photo, if it can be found, should be added. Or perhaps a photo of the Knight's Cross of the Iron Cross.
I look forward to reading more about this person. Good luck! Boneyard90 (talk) 08:08, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
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[edit]Does not meet WP:SOLDIER & sig RS coverage not found link.
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