Talk:Murder of the Bologna family
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[edit]The whole article sounds vague and sounds like a news article, I tried to fix it a little but I am no sure, will need more opinions here. I suggest it to be properly re-written or removed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.148.168.213 (talk) 02:14, 29 November 2008 (UTC)
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[edit]Should probably remove Jamie Martinez' name. I personally don't think it's appropriate to have a gang member turned informant's name listed, even if it is published elsewhere. High risk of retribution that I don't think should be perpetuated. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 139.168.121.207 (talk) 08:40, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
Change of title means the article needs a rewrite
[edit]This article needs to be rewritten because the title has changed from being focused on the perpetrator to focused on the victims of the crime of murder. As a result the article is no longer a [criminal] biography but a criminal incident or event. I have modified the WikiProject list accordingly but the article also needs to be rewritten, too, to focus on the victims. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 06:39, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
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