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Reordering sections prior to adding new content[edit]

I intend to add a few comments from Mike Loades new book "Longbow", mainly around modern experiments. However, when I came to consider how best to do this, I concluded that the current structure of the text was somewhat confused. I've therefore done a bit of preparatory work in advance and will try to add a few pieces of information down the week.Monstrelet (talk) 17:41, 27 October 2013 (UTC)

I have completed the bits of editing I intended although, having worked on the armour penetration section, I have some concerns (below)Monstrelet (talk) 18:49, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Revising armour penetration section[edit]

I have given the experimental sub-section a bit of a make over but both contemporary evidence and summary sections lack a developed argument. Both are weak on cited sources and the summary section comes across as a bit OR to me. If anyone thinks they could make these sections better, it would greatly improve the article. Monstrelet (talk) 18:56, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, I think I wrote most of that section some years ago (although I didn't give it the heading "Summary", which makes it sound more definitive than I perhaps meant). I'd write it differently now, with more references for a start. I've just rewritten the Summary to be less OR, although it still needs the references.
The rest is not incredibly straightforward as a lot of the most recent research is not in widely available reliable sources. I think Bane's stuff is fine as far as it goes, especially his summary of other people's research, but it's not a published book. Strickland and Hardy is probably the most authoritative, but it is a little out of date. Having said that, they came to fairly similar conclusions to later writers, if you ignore the outlying Primitive Archer test. Rogers' stuff looking at armour thickness on the limbs is also interesting, but again, it's in an appendix of another work. I might have a go at seeing if I can pull it all together when I have time. --Merlinme (talk) 10:32, 1 November 2013 (UTC)

Edwin of Northumbria[edit]

We seem to have some difficulty with the incident of Edwin's death. It currently occurs in the lead section, which may give it undue prominence, especially as we have no evidence of longbow usage. It could usefully be mentioned in the section on history,however, if we expand commentary on pre-Norman archery. Monstrelet (talk) 08:30, 15 November 2014 (UTC)

As an addendum, it appears it was Offrid, son of Edwin, who was killed by the arrow. Edwin died in the same battle, exact cause of death unspecified. No effect on use of the story but we should get it right. We could use a good source to cite for this - it is quoted across the web but it is difficult to pin down a reliable source to reference. Monstrelet (talk) 12:56, 15 November 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure what the source could be. I looked up the two primary sources for the battle—Bede and the Welsh annals—and they don't mention an arrow at all, let alone that it certainly came from the Welsh and not their allies the Mercians. Where did you see that it was his son Offrid? Something reliable or just another Wiki page? — LlywelynII 15:19, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
We need a source and consensus, and while I'd personally accept reference to Dark Age arrows as coming from longbows (on the assumption that the European longbow tradition was the only one around) others might be more fussy. I'll remove Edwin from the lede for the time being. Richard Keatinge (talk) 16:24, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
I've been unable to track down the original arrow story - I have checked Bede, the Anglo-Saxon chronicle and Geoffrey of Monmouth (just in case) but, although Offrid (or Osfrith, which he is sometimes called) clearly died, there was no detail. The best secondary source I have is Robert Hardy's Longbow (p.30)where he states clearly we don't know whether the arrow is Welsh or English or whether it came from a longbow. I think we have enough to place it as a "first example" in a sentence/para on pre-Norman archery but I wouldn't put it in the lead paragraph.Monstrelet (talk) 17:46, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
Interesting. Indeed the arrow detail isn't in either the Chronicle or in Bede. A quick Google search for the words "Offrid" and "arrow" brings up statements going back at least as far as Tobias Smollett, but no further. Did Smollett simply add a touch of color? Anyway, in this case I think we should await a really reliable source, a scholarly comment specifically supported by primary sources, before we add anything here. Richard Keatinge (talk) 11:01, 16 November 2014 (UTC)
Interestingly, Smollett references the AngloSaxon Chronicle as source, which it certainly isn't in. For completeness I've done a few more histories - Henry of Huntingdon, Florence of Worcester, William of malmesbury - looking for an embellishment of Bede or AS chronicle but nothing has turned up. So, looks a bit unreliable at this stage. But a good referenced comment in a reliable secondary work could change that in the future. Monstrelet (talk) 12:37, 16 November 2014 (UTC)

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The bot link was alas faulty but I tracked the real link to its new location on the University of York website and put that link in Monstrelet (talk) 18:31, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

Reference style[edit]

Could an editor of a technical bent have a look at the referencing of this article? We seem to use a mixture of styles - full citation in the reference and a reference list. Ideally, we should use one style - I would go for the reference list.Monstrelet (talk) 17:54, 22 April 2016 (UTC)