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Hello,

I'd like to leave some suggestions on here that you could possibly implement into your page.

1. the overall organization of the page

I think that it would be beneficial to look at some of wikipedias top rated articles and see how they organize their subheadings and how the information is split up. I think you try to takle to much with one subheading, grouping topics that could be split into two subheadings together. In your programs and guiding phisophy subheading you start with a reference to the aim your organization has which was detailed in a different subheading. I think a restatement of the aim would be beneificial.

2. Stronger citations

A lot of your refrences are to your own website. Having a variety of sources will make your page stronger.

3. Information

Your organization has been around for a long time, I'm sure there is more you can add in terms of what you have accomplished. This would help make your page a little lengthier and more intrieguing.

4. Basic edits

in your 3rd program? there is a section where you start with a ' and and with a " and there is no citation.

Mtlang13 (talk) 03:29, 30 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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