Talk:Melbourne Castle
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Key information?
[edit]the addition of NHLE details has been removed from the infobox - why is this not considered to be worth including here? EdwardUK (talk) 17:26, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
- MOS:INFOBOX gives some helpful guidance here. An infobox should selectively provide the reader with the most important highlights on an article. I don't think that in this case that includes the full details of their NHLE - does the average reader really care about what date they were put on the register, for example? Other than the legal government listing - which has to by law! - I've never seen a source bother highlighting these facts about this castle. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:13, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
The dates may not be too significant, but I would have thought that the fact it's a scheduled monument is important, and the infobox seems an appropriate place to highlight this (even if without all the details of the listing) - as well as proving a reference to a website with a good architectural history of the castle. - Would it be reasonable to include just the designation type and number as I think this would enhance the article EdwardUK (talk) 18:38, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
- Its classification in UK conservation law doesn't seem to be a fact that other websites or books pull out as being prominent, and if we were looking for additional relevant facts about the castle to highlight to a busy reader, surely there have to be better ones? Hchc2009 (talk) 19:19, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
- I accept that most sources focus on the history of the site rather than its present status, and maybe facts about this could be added as well/instead - currently the data in the infobox seems very limited - and as a quick reference doesn't provide very much information - I am aware that the infobox should be complimentary rather than a distraction from the main text, but think adding more facts (whether they be on events/battles or conservation) would be helpful to readers - and it would be possible to reduce the size of the map to compensate for any changes - EdwardUK (talk) 23:21, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
Map
[edit]What value has that wretched map? It (like many others on Wikipedia) tells us almost nothing. AnthonyCamp (talk) 08:05, 20 June 2017 (UTC).
This is a really fine piece of work
[edit]Excellent article, really impressive.
Does anyone know if any of the archaeologists have attempted to map out a castle plan, even a speculative one? Would be interested to see the shape. --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 08:33, 20 June 2017 (UTC)
- Dweller, I was greatly assisted in getting sources for this by the then conservation officer for South Derbyshire. I think if such a plan existed, he would have known. Much of the archaeology, as the text indicates, is in any case buried below the streets and buildings of Melbourne. As far as I know, all we know about the overall structure is the old drawings Jimfbleak - talk to me? 12:30, 20 June 2017 (UTC)
- I thought so. Shame. Thanks for the reply. --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 13:41, 20 June 2017 (UTC)
- Dweller, I was greatly assisted in getting sources for this by the then conservation officer for South Derbyshire. I think if such a plan existed, he would have known. Much of the archaeology, as the text indicates, is in any case buried below the streets and buildings of Melbourne. As far as I know, all we know about the overall structure is the old drawings Jimfbleak - talk to me? 12:30, 20 June 2017 (UTC)
Unexplained revert
[edit]Having been reverted by Ian Rose without explanation (apart from noting that the change was previously undiscussed), I figure I should bring the matter to the talk page. The following changes were reverted (and my apologies in advance in case I inadvertently overlooked any other changes):
- The addition of commas to "Mary, Queen of Scots," when used mid-sentence, in line with uses of similar titles in the article;
- The moving of the Greenway reference to the bibliography section and the significant correction of the citation itself (which I'm surprised was necessary in a featured article);
- The addition of anchor links to short citations in the footnotes (while maintaining the less commonly used format with parentheses in accordance with WP:CITEVAR);
- The addition of {{page needed}} to the Usher (1991) footnotes as the page range for the entirety of the article was currently being cited;
- The addition of an external link to a freely available copy of the issue of Derbyshire Miscellany being cited, the addition of the journal's ISSN, and the addition of the article's page range in the bibliography;
- The combination of footnotes in three instances;
- The replacement of ISBN-10 with ISBN-13 and the addition of the appropriate hyphens (in accordance with WP:ISBN);
- The addition of missing internal links to the biographies of authors and editors in the bibliography;
- The addition of {{full citation needed}} to the reference to the Journal of the Derbyshire Archaeological and Natural History Society in the bibliography as it does not so much as list the article it is referencing;
- The correction of the format for the listing of an illustrator in the bibliography (in accordance with Template:Cite book/doc);
- The addition of the name of an author who was inexplicably omitted from the Magna Britannia reference in the bibliography and the corresponding correction of the footnotes;
- The standardisation of the format for listing volumes in the bibliography;
- The correction of the author of Melbourne Conservation Area Character Statement as at no point in the work was Mel Morris credited as an individual (unless I'm missing it); and
- The addition of an internal link to the article about Magna Britannia.
About which of these changes do you have concerns, Ian Rose? 142.160.131.202 (talk) 19:48, 20 June 2017 (UTC)
- There having been no objection to the specific changes made (and no explanation of the reversion in question), I have restored the changes while ensuring that edits made to the article over the past three days are retained. 142.160.131.202 (talk) 04:41, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
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