Talk:Second Battle of the Marne

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This is a badly written article. It seems as if some vigilante with a particular American bias has punched in a few paragraphs. Gotta love Wikipedia for military history :/ —Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 22:12, 9 May 2010 (UTC)

Need info[edit]

Please!!!!!!!! Somebody add some more information to this! I will try to get as much as possible, but there is not much on the Internet.Dogmanice 00:41, 11 April 2006 (UTC)

Writing Style[edit]

I notice that this article is written in a really non-encyclopedic way, such as "but the Germans were by no means crushed." and "In essence the disastrous German defeat led to the stop of Ludendorff's planned assault in Flanders and was the first win in a series of Allied victories that ended the war." are not up to Wikipedia standards. I added the banner for "written like essay or reflection." Faulah (talk) 00:26, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

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