Talk:Thomas Harrington (died 1460)

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"He accompanied Henry VI for his French coronation in 1436" -- who's "he"? We speak of two Thomas' and a William.
"He took part, under the earl of Northumberland, in the October 1449 border border war..." -- border border? Typo?
"...which culminated in the Battle of Sark and the capture- stuck in 'mire ground'- not only of Harrington himself, but also Northumberland's son and heir, the Lord Poynings." -- a little incoherent which could probably be worded more suitable.

I enjoyed reading this and fixes are, of course, not obligatory. Thanks for starting it. Cassianto ^Talk 17:01, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Done Thanks very much for the useful suggestions, all of which have been incorporated. There's plenty more where they came from ;) Cheers, _Muffled ^Pocketed 17:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, I saw. I'll certainly take a look over the next few days. Cassianto ^Talk 17:50, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]