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JoAnne Graf

Created by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:15, 5 January 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough, long enough, adequately sourced, and free from close paraphrasing. I prefer ALT1 since I'm not sure if "winningest" is an encyclopedic term but also because it sounds more interesting as it focuses on her career. A QPQ has been provided QPQ pending. This is almost ready to go, I just need confirmation if she remains the winningest coach as of 2020 since the source given is from 2008. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:04, 6 January 2020 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Approving ALT1. I'm not sure why the Seminoles or Division I softball aren't linked, though. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 14:12, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg @HickoryOughtShirt?4: @Narutolovehinata5: @Yoninah: I'm reopening this one, because at the time it hit the queue it said the following:
    ... that as coach of the Florida State Seminoles, JoAnne Graf logged the most wins in the history of NCAA Division I softball, with 1,437?
    Which I see doesn't quite match the hook that was approved above, I'm not sure why. Anyway, as stated this is clearly not correct as from List of college softball coaches with 1,000 wins we see that several other coaches have logged higher numbers of wins since her retirement. Also there's a discrepancy between the number on that page for Graf (1,186) and the figure from the article (1,437). Are some games not included in the list? Anyway, I think we need a new version of the hook that makes it crystal clear that the record was held only at the time of her retirement, not as of 2020. ALT1 sort of states that, but it could be clearer. Thanks  — Amakuru (talk) 17:03, 9 January 2020 (UTC)
If there's a discrepancy with her total number of wins, maybe a hook that combined aspects of ALT1a and ALT1b could work?
ALT1c that at the time of her retirement in 2008, Florida State Seminoles coach JoAnne Graf held the record for most wins in the history of NCAA Division I softball?
Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:08, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
Narutolovehinata5, do you approve of the new Alts? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:01, 14 January 2020 (UTC)
As I mentioned above, I'm not sure if ALT1a or ALT1b are wholly accurate considering the number of wins apparently excludes a number of wins, as discussed above. It might be a good idea to ask for a second opinion here; I'm hesitant to give a new tick as I proposed a new hook above. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:01, 15 January 2020 (UTC)
Oops, sorry. For some reason I missed your text and thought you just signed by accident. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 01:26, 15 January 2020 (UTC)