Template:Did you know nominations/Kieth Engen
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:27, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
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Kieth Engen
[edit]... that Kieth Engen got his first role, Bluebeard, at the Bavarian State Opera because he was tall, also was the voice of Christ for Karl Richter, and had a pop career under a pseudonym?Source: several- ALT1:
... that Kieth Engen got his first role, Bluebeard, at the Bavarian State Opera because he was tall, had a pop career under a pseudonym, and was Karl Richter's first voice of Christ?
- Reviewed: David Scott
- Comment: He did many things well, - I trust wordsmiths will help to work on a hook, - this is more or less a placeholder
Created by LouisAlain (talk), Voceditenore (talk), and Kablammo (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 07:11, 4 June 2019 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright or plagiarism issues. A QPQ has been done. Although I am approving this, I think the hook tries to stuff in too many facts and would suggest omitting the "voice of Christ" bit. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:17, 2 July 2019 (UTC)
This is what I suggest promoting:- ALT2:
... that American operatic bass Kieth Engen got his first role at the Bavarian State Opera as Bluebeard because he was tall?Yoninah (talk) 21:29, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
- ALT2 misses the irony of Bluebeard and Christ, and the extra of the pop career on which Kablammo worked, - repeating: He did many things well, while the short proposal suggests that being tall was his only qualification. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:37, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
- Right. Well, let's keep this hook to two facts, as Cwmhiraeth also suggested. How about:
- ALT3:
... that American operatic bass Kieth Engen was the voice of Christ for Karl Richter and also had a pop career under a pseudonym?Yoninah (talk) 21:43, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
- Drop "my" voice of Christ then, and leave Voce's tall Bluebeard and Kablammo's pop. Will miss the Bluebeard-Christ antagonism, but may be the only one. I had the TFA today, and a GA, - should be content. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:58, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
- Really? The Franz Kafka article was your FC? Congratulations! I read it the last time it appeared on the MP and was very surprised that his friend disregarded his wishes to destroy everything. Yoninah (talk) 22:10, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
- So we'll go with:
- ALT4: ... that operatic bass Kieth Engen got his first role, Bluebeard, at the Bavarian State Opera because he was tall, and also had a pop career under a pseudonym?
- Restoring tick per Cwmhiraeth's review. Yoninah (talk) 22:26, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
