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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:44, 6 July 2019 (UTC)

Luys i Luso

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Created by Dreamy Jazz (talk). Self-nominated at 18:07, 23 May 2019 (UTC).

  • I have also struck the first 3, as I feel the ones about God will get the page more pageviews, as it leaves more details out (and so leaving viewers wanting more). If a reviewer feels that the hooks about God are not good enough, then I will be open to the idea about using the striked ones. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 18:35, 23 May 2019 (UTC)

the nomination still needs a proper DYK policy review. Flibirigit (talk) 13:56, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

  • This interesting article is new enough and long enough. The ALT3 and ALT4 hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright or plagiarism issues. I prefer ALT4. No QPQ needed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:43, 27 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but the article doesn't mention that he is a jazz pianist, and the album isn't jazz. Yoninah (talk) 20:28, 30 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Yoninah, what about just "pianist"? The source says he is a pianist and seeing that this album isn't really jazz (as you say), it doesn't make sense to say jazz. Those who know who he is will know him primarily as a jazz pianist, but for the uninformed reader this information isn't useful (at least for this album) and would also possibly lead a reader to believe this album is jazz. I'll remove jazz from the hooks. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 16:42, 2 July 2019 (UTC)
  • @Dreamy Jazz: thanks for understanding my shorthand. Could you add a mention of his being a pianist, and cite it, in the article? Then we can change "Armenian musician" in the lead to "Armenian pianist", and then the hook refs will be verified. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:26, 2 July 2019 (UTC)
  • Yoninah, I've added a sentence in performance which says that he is a pianist and performed the piano in this album. Also changed musician to pianist in the lead. Thanks, Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 21:41, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you very much. Restoring tick for ALT4 per Cwmhiraeth's review. Yoninah (talk) 21:57, 6 July 2019 (UTC)