Template:Did you know nominations/Pliofilm
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:47, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
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Pliofilm
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A US serviceman with Pliofilm-wrapped rifle
- ... that Pliofilm, a pre-war food wrap, was used to waterproof firearms during the Normandy landings (example pictured)? "rubber-hydrochloride films, more commonly known as Pliofilm, have been used in the packaging of a multitude of food products" from: Illini Horticulture. Illinois State Horticultural Society. 1937.; "waterproof pliofilm bags were used in amphibious operations to protect firearms" from: Hambucken, Denis (2013). American Soldier of WWII: D-Day, A Visual Reference. The Countryman Press. p. 39. ISBN 978-1-58157-200-1. and "perhaps the most interesting detail in this photograph is the presence of almost twenty M1903 bolt-action rifles, many of which are protected by Pliofilm bags" from: Morgan, Martin (2014). The Americans on D-Day: A Photographic History of the Normandy Invasion. Zenith Press. ISBN 978-1-62788-154-8.
Converted from a redirect by Dumelow (talk). Self-nominated at 16:51, 25 January 2021 (UTC).
It's long enough, new enough, the hook is verified, the images are free. Dumelow, I just have one or two things that I hope you can fix before it hits the front page. The lede could do with a bit of tweaking for organization; some groups of references are not in numerical order (look at the refs for hydrochloric acid); and I think you need to tweak that dermatitis claim in the lead, so that it's clear that it's a modified product that caused it. BTW--there's a hook in there as well: to protect one from a sickness caused by the modified product, one protects themselves with the unmodified product. Drmies (talk) 21:35, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks Drmies, hopefully it reads a bit better now. I've reordered the references but I always find it a bit of a faff, some kind soul usually sorts it when its on DYK (hopefully there is a script that does it automatically?). I struggled to make the dermatitis thing snappy enough first time around, but I've had another go - Dumelow (talk) 21:59, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that in order to prevent dermatitis caused during the manufacture of UV-resistant Pliofilm the US Public Health Service recommended that workers wear protective sleeves made from Pliofilm?
- Thanks Dumelow. I don't think there's a script for it; I order them as I write. (I added an AmEnglish comma to the lead, after that introductory phrase.) Anyway, I don't know how to pick a hook; they're both hooky in their own right. Americans and Brits love WW2, but the double Pliofilm hook, that's just lovely. User:BlueMoonset, what do you think? Drmies (talk) 01:08, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that in order to prevent dermatitis caused during the manufacture of UV-resistant Pliofilm the US Public Health Service recommended that workers wear protective sleeves made from Pliofilm?