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Your submission at Articles for creation: Zvika Shwimmer (July 6)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Curbon7 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Zvika Shwimmer and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Zvika Shwimmer, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Curbon7 (talk) 15:55, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @Curbon7,

I would love to know what can I change in my article so that it can be accepted.

Could you please help me with this?

Thank you so much! Leave A Fact (talk) 12:12, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

? Leave A Fact (talk) 14:36, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Leave A Fact! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Curbon7 (talk) 15:55, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Zvika Shwimmer (September 7)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Entire sections are unsourced. Thank you for your WP:PAID disclosure. Please expand it to clarify payment for this submission, as you are required to disclose both the firm, and firm's client/s.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Zvika Shwimmer and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Greenman (talk) 20:43, 7 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @Greenman, I've acted according to your comments and deleted any unsourced sections (including sections where the only sources were in Hebrew), while also adding more English sources throughout the article. I hope that this will suffice to create the page, but if additional changes are necessary I would love to know exactly where and what.

Another question - where should I expand about the WP:PAID disclosure? On my own page? In the article?

Thank you very much. for your help. Leave A Fact (talk) 13:19, 8 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Leave A Fact: On the talk page of any article you create/edit on behalf of a client, you should put the {{connected contributor (paid)}} template on its associated talk page.

For example, for your draft article Draft:Zvika Shwimmer, you should put the following on its talk page, Draft talk:Zvika Shwimmer (omitting any "code" or "nowiki" tags):

{{connected contributor (paid) |User1=Leave A Fact |U1-EH=yes |U1-employer=Leave a Mark |U1-client=Zvika Shwimmer |U1-otherlinks=Disclosure on userpage. }}

When rendered, it will appear like this:

The Wikimedia Foundation's Terms of Use require that editors disclose their "employer, client, and affiliation" with respect to any paid contribution; see WP:PAID. For advice about reviewing paid contributions, see WP:COIRESPONSE.

Leave A Fact (talk · contribs) has been paid by Leave a Mark on behalf of Zvika Shwimmer. Their editing has included contributions to this article. Disclosure on userpage.

This clearly discloses that the article's subject paid your employer (and therefore, you) for your contributions to the article. --Drm310 🍁 (talk) 14:39, 8 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much @Drm310! Leave A Fact (talk) 11:07, 15 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I've done as you've suggested, I hope this helps to get the page to be published finally! Thank you both @Greenman@Drm310 Leave A Fact (talk) 11:09, 15 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome, although I must inform you that I deleted your company info from your userpage. You can't use Wikipedia to advertise your company or attract potential customers. Please consult the userpage guidelines for more detail about what is and is not considered acceptable content. --Drm310 🍁 (talk) 14:16, 15 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Zvika Shwimmer (September 16)[edit]

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reasons left by MaxnaCarta were: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: Brand new paid editor with a disclosed COI has been given feedback on multiple occasions regarding the need to prove notability.

Further, the article reads like a resume/business article rather than an encyclopaedic article.

WP:BEFORE of news, web and books. No significant coverage appears to exist and so no amount of editing can fix this article.

If article creator reads the general notability guideline for individuals then leaves a source assessment table on the talk page for me to review with multiple reliable sources covering this company in-depth then I will undo my rejection and accept the article.

MaxnaCarta (talk) 02:53, 16 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Zvika Shwimmer[edit]

Hello, Leave A Fact. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Zvika Shwimmer, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 03:02, 16 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Zvika Shwimmer[edit]

Hello, Leave A Fact. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Zvika Shwimmer".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 03:02, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]