User talk:SeungjuLee
Hi I am SeungjuLee
re: Hello professor, I'm Seungju Lee
[edit]Good job! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:55, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
re: Wikipedia Assignment Subject Selection
[edit]I think that the topic of History of baseball in Korea is notable, through there already is some content at Baseball_in_South_Korea#History and KBO_League#History. If you think you can expanded it into so that it is 2-3x as long as it was before, with reliable references, then you can chose this as your topic. Likewise, the same is true for Korean_drama#History, but History of Korean drama can be written as a subarticle. I do think both of those topics are important and surely each deserves a book, so they are possible for expansion, but keep in mind you will have to write few thousands words on this, with references. If you think you can do it, you can do it. Let me know if you decide to chose one of those topics for expansion. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:28, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
- Ok, history of Korean drama is a good topic, I am sure there are plenty of sources. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
April 2020
[edit]Hello, I'm Mattythewhite. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Laurent Koscielny, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Mattythewhite (talk) 19:37, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
It's a good start but as noted in my videos, I recommend you develop drafts in your WP:USERSANDBOX. The article now is very short, and the citations are unclear, so it could be deleted. I recommend you move it (copy it) to your sandbox. Regarding deadline 3, you should 1) add a reference to article OTHER than your planned project and 2) the reference has to be correctly formatted. Right now your reference does not contain information on the publisher, author's name or date. Please use WP:CITATIONTEMPLATE and fill in as many fields as you can. Let me know when you try again! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:53, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
Deadline 3
[edit]I see, pretty good, good job! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:42, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
Good job
[edit]Making your weekly 10 edits. Keep it up! If you make more than 10 edits, each extra 10 edits (on average) will count for an extra credit point. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:40, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
Good job starting the outline! Please format the references so that they have the name of the author, publisher and date. Please see videos on how to add references for more 'how to do this'. Good luck! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:14, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
Expanding History of Korean drama
[edit]From what I see User:Mcampany redirected this to Korean_drama#History because at that time the article was less informative] than the target section (btw, MCampany, I think you should update the redirect to target the section, not just general article). However, your sandbox draft is expanding nicely, and when you copy it to the mainspace, replacing the redirect, I am sure nobody will delete it. Btw, regarding your draft, I'd recommend you try to incorporate (merge) content from Korean_drama#History to your draft. Keep up the good job! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:19, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
Feedback======
Leaving feedback
[edit]Good job leaving feedback to your fellow colleague. The only thing missing is your signature, please read WP:SIGN.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:00, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
Feedback "History of Korean drama"
[edit]Hello, I'm Cha Juhee from the Collective Intelligence class. I will read your article and leave feedback. By summarizing the history of Korean dramas by year, it has made it easier to understand Korean dramas. Sorting by age not only makes it look good, but also makes it easier for users to find the information they need. Of course, this article is about the history of Korean dramas, but I think the article's quality will be further improved if the article is utilized on the characteristics of Korean dramas. Juhee Cha (talk) 06:38, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
Collective Intelligence deadline 5. Review and feedback
[edit]Hi, I'm Hanane Ben Abdeslam from the major Journalism and Mass communication, and I'm also taking the Collective Intellingence class. I've read your article about "Korean Drama" and while I was reading your page, I understand more about this subject then before. So my compliments for using good reliable sources to make the article understand better. However, I think some specific information could be added. For example in the paragraph "International reception" there is a short summary about K-drama on television in Europe. I do believe that K-drama is increasing and there are a lot of reliable sources about the percentages of where and how much it airs on tv. So if you want you can add it to the article.
I hope that this suggestion is helpful for you.
Kind regards,
Hannae Ben Abdeslam Xhananexx (talk) 09:24, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
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Feedback on your project for Collective Intelligence class
[edit]History of Korean drama is looking pretty good but there are some fixes needed. 1) Make sure each paragraph has a reference 2) please format the images on the bottom so they resemble those in other articles (smaller, located on the right, with captions) 3) please add a translated title to each reference (don't replace the Korean title, just add English translation), also make sure each reference lists the author, publisher and date. For example, [1] should list 정양환 . Good job doing our weekly 10 edits! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:29, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
- You are almost done, please add the lead/intro/abstrat at top (see WP:LEAD), make image captions more descriptive, and make sure references are formatted so that they include information about the author, date, and the title is both in Korean and English for Korean references. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:33, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
June 2020
[edit]Hello, I'm Pablomartinez. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —specifically this edit to History of Korean drama—because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help desk. Thanks. PabloMartinez (talk) 12:36, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
- @Pablomartinez: Hmmm, Pablo, did you got by any chance confused by reading the title of an obituary? Because you reverted helpful series of reference expansions/additons, as far as I can tell. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:35, 12 June 2020 (UTC)