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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
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Christina Aguilera videography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Simon (talk) 13:23, 11 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Previously it was a part of Christina Aguilera discography, then I re-created it as a separate list. I am nominating this for featured list because I believe that this list meets the criteria for a FL. Simon (talk) 13:23, 11 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from WikiRedactor
- Please include alt. text for the three pictures.
- Done — Simon (talk) 12:22, 20 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- There are a couple shady links that need corrections.
- Not Done: The links are indicated as "registration issue" but still good links though — Simon (talk) 12:22, 20 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Can you make the "Video albums" section sortable by title like the other sections?
- Done — Simon (talk) 12:22, 20 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I see some instances of inconsistent use of Prometheus Global Media or Nielsen Business Media as the publisher for Billboard. I recommend that you pick one to stick with, preferably Prometheus Global Media.
- Done. I have fixed to Nielsen Business Media per Google Books — Simon (talk) 12:22, 20 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I'd also recommend organizing the references in columns of three instead of two as they currently are.
- Done — Simon (talk) 12:22, 20 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Does Aguilera have an IMDb profile? Is that worth including under the "External links" section?
- Done. Thank you so much for your comments — Simon (talk) 12:22, 20 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
WikiRedactor (talk) 15:44, 19 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Support, nicely done! WikiRedactor (talk) 14:04, 22 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Support: (having stumbled here from my FLC discussion page). Very nicely formatted. Looks better after the successful changes addressing comments from WikiRedactor, above. Well sourced throughout. Good job, — Cirt (talk) 03:45, 25 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't love the lead, but I'm gonna focus my comments on the tables.
- Names need to be sorted by last name using {{sortname}}.
- Done — Simon (talk) 11:53, 14 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- As it is a sortable table, each director, album, etc. need to be linked.
- Done — Simon (talk) 11:53, 14 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Christina Aguilera is an other performer on "Say Something"?
- Done — Simon (talk) 11:53, 14 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Is There Anybody Out There? needs to be linked.
- Done — Simon (talk) 11:53, 14 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Should add some type of note that "Genio Atrapado" is Spanish version of "Genie in a Bottle" (same with the other translations).
- The sorting of the video albums table is not appropriate. For example, I can't properly sort the US peak positions.
- Remove Christina Aguilera discography as a see also per WP:SEEALSO.
— Status (talk · contribs) 15:13, 6 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Adabow
[edit]- "33 music videos, four video albums, and four film appearances." - be consistent with ordinal numbers (WP:ORDINAL)
- "In 1999, Aguilera rose to fame with her self-titled debut album with four hits: "Genie in a Bottle", "What a Girl Wants", "I Turn to You" and "Come On Over Baby (All I Want Is You)", all of them have their music videos." - waffly and poorly written
- "In 2001, Aguilera was featured on the music clip for "Lady Marmalade" with Mýa, Lil' Kim and Pink, garnering two MTV Video Music Awards at the 2001 ceremony, Video of the Year[2] and Best Video from a Film.[3]" - it's not apparent that the two parts of this sentence are related. Try 'garnering'→'which received'.
- Please reread the lead for flow. It is quite awkward and certainly doesn't meet the "professional standards" required by WP:WIAFL.
- In sortable tables, people should be listed so that when sorted, they will be sorted by surname (using {{sortname}}). A similar case is "The Voice Within" (should sort be 'V', not 'T').
Some reasonably significant work needed, so I will oppose for now. Adabow (talk) 09:33, 10 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- I will address your comments within a week. Honestly I am currently extremely busy with my homework so please bear with me — Simon (talk) 11:53, 14 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. – SchroCat (talk) 12:27, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.