Talk:Fred C. Koch

MIT Alumni database

Reviewing the MIT Alumni database, I was unable to find any records for a Fred Koch either attending the Institute or recieving a degree. If his degree was awarded under a different name, that should be clarified. For now I have removed the reference. Amasa walker III 13:53, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

Did you try Fredrick C. Koch? -- Petri Krohn (talk) 17:21, 31 August 2010 (UTC)

Proposed revised article

{{request edit}}

As the template message at the top of the current article indicates, it could use a lot of work. So, I have done a lot of work tracking down information and finding verification to improve it. The result, I believe, is a much more focused and readable article, and you'll find it in my user space here. Among many changes, the article now includes an infobox, corrects his place of death and includes the exact date, includes more background info, provides a more detailed summary of his business career, and includes more about his political views as well. The only thing I have axed is the paragraph about his son's art collections; they have Wikipedia articles and that material may or may not be worth covering there, but it doesn't belong here.

Because Koch Industries is a client of my employer, I'd like for someone else to review the article and agree or disagree that it is worthy of replacing the current version. Likewise, I'd hope you would move the article into place yourself, or give me the nod to do so. I just want to make certain I have consensus before implementing a wholesale revision. Thanks, NMS Bill (talk) 22:32, 5 May 2010 (UTC)

 Done by Shirik (talk · contribs) Spitfire^Tally-ho! 16:15, 10 May 2010 (UTC)

Business career

"The process threatened the competitive advantage of established oil companies, and Koch and its customers were sued for patent infringement." Implies without proof that the suits had no merit in law. Violates NPOV

"Although the firm eventually won all of these lawsuits" 1st source is from a book written by a family member and current CEO of Koch Ind. Violates NPOV 2nd source, claim not supported by what's on page and reading the rest of information requires that you buy it for $69. There are records of these suits and their outcomes. Court documents or something that references them are the only reliable sources on a claim like this.

Another issue. I'd love help filling in the missing years after 1932, especially where he was and what he was doing during WWII. Jackhammer111 (talk) 21:58, 25 February 2011 (UTC)

The second paragraph of this section is essentially plagiarized from its source. The sentence structure is the same, with a word added here and there. It needs to be replaced and verified.--24.6.203.151 (talk) 22:24, 7 September 2013 (UTC)

Merge request

Greetings. The article Koch family is not needed. I think the content could be in Fred C. Koch. Thank you. -SusanLesch (talk) 17:49, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

Nope. That makes little sense to me. Please explain. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 10:16, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

Why do you have so many articles about the same people? Wikipedia does not do this for anybody else, not even George Washington. Why do we need separate biographies for Fred and each of his four children, their company, their foundations, their political activities, and this one for their family? -SusanLesch (talk) 15:04, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

Because someone wanted to have everything potentially bad about the Koch brothers in as many articles as possible? Actually, I'm not going to check the move/merge history, but I believe Koch family was originally at Koch brothers, as the activity of one is frequently attributed to the other, and, together, they own almost all of Koch Industries, and all of Mayer's innuendos were listed on both of the brothers' articles and at Koch Industries. Now that (almost all of) the innuendos are only at "political activities", there may be no need for the intermediate merge.

Seriously, perhaps only the list of family members should be moved to this article, and the rest of the nonsense left to the other appropriate articles. But it would leave political activities of the Koch family as a subarticle of a non-existent article, and it would be absurd to rename that political activities of the sons of Fred C. Koch. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 17:02, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for the history. If you would like to list the family members, the disambiguation page Koch would be a good place if you object to listing them under Fred. Much like we do with another confusing family, the Cowles. -SusanLesch (talk) 19:26, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

I found a counterexample, the Bush family which is in Category:Business families of the United States among a few family categories. -SusanLesch (talk) 16:12, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

See also: Kennedy family. 203.35.82.171 (talk) 23:06, 26 July 2012 (UTC)

See also: Mars family. 203.35.82.171 (talk) 23:09, 26 July 2012 (UTC)

I support this merge. The small amount of information on the Koch family page is already repeated in multiple other pages. There's a small section on political activity, which isn't necessary since there's already an entire article on it. The only other section just lists Fred Koch's four sons, which is already done on his page. I understand the usefulness of the Kennedy family and Bush family pages because there is a huge number of notable family members who also have pages and a large amount of content that can be presented regarding the families. The Koch family page is just being used to repeat political activity. AdventurousSquirrel (talk) 17:49, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

Also, it looks like Political activities of the Koch family is likely to change to Political activities of the Koch brothers. So that would solve the issue of not having a parent article if we merged this. AdventurousSquirrel (talk) 17:51, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

I really feel that the current Koch family article doesn't provide anything useful that isn't already included in more appropriate articles. It repeats political activity information that is already listed on the Political activities of the Koch brothers page as well as the individual pages for Fred C. Koch and both brothers. It then lists the family members which are also already listed on Fred Koch's page. I'm going to be bold and go ahead with the redirect to jumpstart the discussion process (if one is needed). If others disagree we can follow WP:BRD. AdventurousSquirrel (talk) 18:06, 15 August 2012 (UTC)

(outdent) I don't support the merge, per counterexamples above (Mars family et. al., which certainly fulfill WP:NOTE and are not content forks) and Arthur Rubin's related comment (the last sentence of his post dated 17:02, 9 July 2012). (Although my personal belief is that the Koch's advocacy of climate change pseudoscience[1] for apparent personal gain is propagandistic evil of the first order, I presume it's obvious that stating the facts about their advocacy -- without speculation about motives or value judgments, but including, where necessary, proper balancing material on climate change per WP:FRINGE -- is entirely within WP's policies.) So, I'm restoring the original article per BRD. It looks like it could be improved along the lines of the Mars family article.

AdventurousSquirrel, your actions on that page are puzzling. You're sophisticated enough to merge articles, yet you don't seem understand what WP:LEAD means:

• you revert an addition to the lead reflecting the article body: diff; ES: "rvt. no need to incluce the same sentence twice in such a small article."
• I un-revert, with rationale in ES, and paraphrase in body to address your concern about repetition: diff; ES: "Restore sentence about contributions to lead, per WP:LEAD -- lead section must summarize article. Tweak text further down to avoid identical wording."
• you re-revert, restating previous ES and ignoring my rationale: diff; ES: "there r only 4 paragraphs in the article. we don't need the same statement in 2 of them."

Nearly all experienced editors know that the lead section is meant to summarize the article's salient points, so repetition isn't an issue. Anyway, now you do know, so I imagine you won't be removing the sentence about conservative advocacy from Koch family's lead unless you can find persuasive support for your preference in WP policy. Thanks, Middle 8 (talk) 06:45, 18 August 2012 (UTC)

I understand those policies, it just seemed to me like common sense that it wasn't necessary to say the same thing twice (about one sentence apart) in such a small article. Without that sentence in the lead it is still clear to any reader that they support conservative and libertarian groups since the only section of the article is on that topic. I won't remove it again; I'm only explaining my reasoning.

I'll also give further reasoning for the merge. The only section of the Koch family article covers political activity of the Koch brothers. Since there is already an entire article on that topic and the topic is repeated on each of their individual pages, I don't see any unique purpose for the Koch family article. The Mars family article also doesn't have much content, but because there are many notable family members, it serves a purpose to link to those pages and show the relationship between them. The Koch family page only has 5 notable members and the relationship and links are already included in the Fred C. Koch article. If we are to keep the Koch family page, what do you suggest we expand it with?

I really would like to discuss this civilly and come up with a consensus after others weigh in. I don't know if it was your intention, but some of the phrases and wording in your comments above come off a bit derogatory towards me. I apologize for reverting before discussing the lead sentence, and, as I said, I'll leave it be. AdventurousSquirrel (talk) 17:54, 20 August 2012 (UTC)

A lead is, by definition, just going to repeat what the body of the article says, only more briefly. Duplication is therefore unavoidable. StillStanding (24/7) (talk) 20:39, 20 August 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I understand that and that issue is resolved. I still believe the page should be made a redirect and have stated my reasoning above. Does anyone else have good reason to keep this page? What could we expand it with beyond the political activity of the brothers (which there is already an abundance of on Wikipedia) and the relationship between family members (which is a father and sons relationship that is already explained on the Fred C. Koch page)? AdventurousSquirrel (talk) 20:27, 23 August 2012 (UTC)

There hasn't been any response or opposition in over a week, so I will go ahead with it. AdventurousSquirrel (talk) 15:50, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

What would you suggest for the current material? I'd rather it not be lost. I'm StillStanding (24/7) (talk) 21:03, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

• There are several notable figures in this family. I don't understand why the encyclopedia would be better served by redirecting this content to just one of them. The lineage and family connections are significant, notable and important. I would expect similar coverage for a family like the Waltons. The family itself is notable. Candleabracadabra (talk) 00:40, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

And sure enough, there it is: Walton family. Candleabracadabra (talk) 00:41, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

"several notable figures"? There are only five on the page: Fred Koch and his four sons. What "lineage and family connections" can you put into the article other than that (which is already explained on Fred C. Koch)? The Walton family has 11 notable members that are more spread out, so the page is useful for showing how they are related with the family tree. Everything currently on the Koch family article is already repeated on multiple other articles including Fred C. Koch, the political activities of the Koch brothers, and the individual pages for the brothers. What content other than that could this article be expanded with? AdventurousSquirrel (talk) 16:18, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

The family is notable and has been covered extensively in reliable independent sources. As you state, there are at least five notable members. Coverage of the family is appropriate and redirecting the content to an article about one of the five family members isn't appropriate (there is also a somewhat notable wife covered in this article which makes six family members). Candleabracadabra (talk) 17:03, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I agree that the family is notable, but all of the notable aspects are covered in detail in other articles. The notable family members are Fred Koch and his wife and sons, who are all mentioned and have their pages linked to on his page which is why it is reasonable to redirect 'Koch family' to his page. I don't see the Koch family page being expanded further than it is currently, which is just a repeat of political activity and a listing of their relationship which is already on Fred's page. WP:MERGE suggests that if "There are two or more pages on related subjects that have a large overlap", they should be merged. Do you have ideas on what the Koch family page could be expanded with so there is enough information to have it stand alone? I feel like I'm repeating myself a lot here but I don't think anyone has responded to the points I've brought up. AdventurousSquirrel (talk) 23:20, 17 September 2012 (UTC)

fundinguniverse

Using on-line plagiarism detectors - almost everything in it has an older source with the esact same language. Wikipedia does not allow use of copyvios. Collect (talk) 11:49, 21 March 2013 (UTC)

Pamphlet

Pamphlet: A pamphlet is an unbound booklet (that is, without a hard cover or binding). No sources on binding for A Business Man Looks at Communism.--Polmandc (talk) 05:36, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Hi. Nice digs, looks like it might be hard to heat, though. Al Jazeera, who 1st obtained the pamphlet and published it online called it a "pamphlet" and "manifesto." Elevating it to "book" is OR. Hugh (talk) 05:44, 16 June 2015 (UTC)

Mayer, Jane (August 30, 2010). "Covert Operations: The billionaire brothers who are waging a war against Obama". The New Yorker. broadside

Appropriate weight of content drawn from A Business Man Looks at Communism

In my opinion the content in our article drawn directly from summarizing A Business Man Looks at Communism far exceeds the weight of this document in reliable secondary and tertiary sources. Probably it would be best to restrict our content regarding A Business Man Looks at Communism to a fair, neutral summary of what reliable secondary and tertiary sources have said about it, rather than attempt to read the document ourselves and attempt a fair, neutral summary. If we are to summarize content directly from the primary document in our article, we need to be careful not to cherry-pick the most sensible-sounding content for inclusion, we have to include some of the less sensible content as well. Hugh (talk) 20:05, 21 June 2015 (UTC)

The content is fair and neutral. However, I will attempt to find secondary sources for support. Cheers, Comatmebro ^{~Come at me~} 18:06, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

The pamphlet would not be here in our article at all if not for a FOIA from Al Jazeera. We must not leave our readers with the impression that the pamphlet was noteworthy as a popular book title. How the pamphlet came into wide public view is highly relevant context necessary for our readers to understand this paragraph. How the pamphlet came into wide public view is documented in a reliable, secondary source, in contrast with most of this paragraph, which is a paraphrase of a primary source document. Hugh (talk) 19:56, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

I don't find AlJazeera a RS. Lets discuss. Capitalismojo (talk) 01:05, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

Capitalismojo, I have restored your reversion of Hugh's edit. 1. If AJAM is not RS, then it should not be used for factual material at all. But your edit left the AJAM citation in place. 1.a. Hugh's edit is a "according to" quotation, which qualifies it. 2. AJAM has been been on Basic Cable for a few years, so it is probably RS overall. (Several of its anchors have prior careers with more mainstream media.) 3. Perhaps this material can be revised with less reliance on the quoted language -- more of a paraphrase. – S. Rich (talk) 06:02, 27 June 2015 (UTC)

I meant to take it all out. I find that AJA is marginally better that RT and for the same reasons. Capitalismojo (talk) 20:09, 29 June 2015 (UTC)

"The content is fair and neutral." The content being drawn from the primary source document is not fair or neutral. The weight of our article's summarization of the content of Koch's pamphlet is disproportionate to its actual significance. It was not a landmark cogent analysis of a political scientist, it was a screed. The extent of our direct summarization give it far too much credit. The summarization is non-neutral in favoring Koch's more sensible sounding claims, while excluding the less sensible. Hugh (talk) 20:20, 30 June 2015 (UTC)

"I will attempt to find secondary sources for support. " If we were to embrace a discipline of being guided by what secondary sources have to say about the content of the pamphlet, it seems to me we would have to include that Koch included his sitting President, Eisenhower, as part of the Communist conspiracy in America, because Al Jazeera caught that; alternatively, if we are to permit ourselves drawing content from the primary document beyond what is covered in secondary sources, as you have extensively, we could go on to say that Koch also included Senator John F. Kennedy and Vice President Richard M. Nixon in the Communist conspiracy. Hugh (talk) 20:20, 30 June 2015 (UTC)

Those cunning commies! Capitalismojo (talk) 22:24, 30 June 2015 (UTC)

"I will attempt to find secondary sources for support." I count twelve (12) sentences summarizing directly from the primary source document, with no secondary source support for noteworthiness. This is too much. This primary document is noteworthy as a fringy screed written by the scion of a powerful family, but it is presented here as if it were a New York Times non-fiction best seller. Hugh (talk) 13:20, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

@Capitalismojo: Content deleted:

"Koch wrote in the pamphlet that pro-Communist decisions of the Supreme Court of the United States had compromised the internal security of the U.S. Koch wrote in the pamphlet that Communists probably had access to all messages in and out of the Pentagon since unions installed the communications lines."

May I humbly remark that in trimming this content, summarizing the content of Koch's manifesto, you seem to have somewhat pointedly started with some of Koch's fringier, zanier claims, thereby making our coverage even less fair and neutral. In for a penny, in for a pound. If we are to devote a long paragraph to the content of Koch's manifesto, we need to be even handed about it. Let's be clear with each other, Koch's manifesto is not serious political analysis, WP:FRINGE applies here and constrains our coverage. Kindly self-revert. Thank you. Hugh (talk) 14:19, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

I started with the material ref'd only to the pamphlet. I left in material that was dual ref'd. Capitalismojo (talk) 14:27, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

It is appropriate to remove improperly ref'd material, and I have done that. Capitalismojo (talk) 14:33, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

As I remarked, seems a tad odd to me you that of the dozen or so sentences with only primary doc support, you embraced your commitment to secondary sources, only as pertains to some of Koch's fringiest claims. Please reply. Thank you. Hugh (talk) 14:37, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Please respond to my observation that your trims may be biased toward fringe. I think we agree the content in this article drawn from summarizing one primary document, with no secondary source support, is too heavy. However, whatever weight we settle on, I would hope you would agree we have an obligation to balance the sensible with the not so much. It is not Wikipedia's job to clean up Koch's screed, is it? Your thoughts? Hugh (talk) 15:21, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

@Capitalismojo: Content deleted:

In 2014, the pamphlet and letters were published online by Al Jazeera America after their Freedom of Information Act request for Koch's FBI files.

Reference:

Leopold, Jason (July 30, 2014). "Revealed: Koch brothers' politics reflect their father's anti-communism". Al Jazeera America. Retrieved June 15, 2015.

May I humbly remark that in deleting this content from this long paragraph summarizing the content of Koch's manifesto, you have deleted key context necessary for our readers to understand the paragraph, and deleted one of the few sentences in this paragraph with support from secondary sources. The subject of every sentence in an article need not be the subject of the article. We are expected to provide context sufficient that our readers can understand our article. Of course we do not want to leave our readers with the impression that Koch's screed was a New York Times non-fiction best seller. That the only reason we are discussing this pamphlet at all in this article is because of investigative journalism is of course key context in understanding the long section summarizing the content of the pamphlet. Your deletion of this content makes our coverage of this pamphlet less neutral and is not an improvement. Kindly self-revert. Thank you. Hugh (talk) 14:34, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Be clear. You started this section with reasonable concerns as to refs and sources. I have removed the material. What precisely do you wish to include ref'd to which RS? Capitalismojo (talk) 14:37, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Be clear? Immediately above please find some specific content you deleted, and its ref, and that I specifically requested you self-revert. How can I be more clear? I will try bold for emphasis. Hugh (talk) 14:46, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Th fact that Al Jazeera made an open records request is of no use to the reader. None. FOIA is a standard tool of journalists, it is unexceptional. It adds nothing to the biography article of the subject. Would we add a line in an FDR article if a reporter FOIA'd material on FDR? No. This inclusion was odd. Capitalismojo (talk) 14:41, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Oh, come on now, brother. You can't be serious. You've got to be kidding. Love the sense of humor! Ha ha! Our article simply cannot convey through omission that Koch penned a romantic memoir of misspent youth behind the Iron Curtain. The ONLY reason we are talking about this at all is that it was discovered in Koch's FBI file and published online. Our readers cannot run down the their local library and check it out. It is not Wikipedia's job to rehabilitate Koch's literary career. Again, your deletion of the well-referenced context of this primary document is not an improvement; kindly self-revert. Thank you. Hugh (talk) 14:55, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

He has no literary career. He's an engineer and businessman. He wrote a pamphlet. It apparently made tiny impact then, if secondary sources are any indication. It is undue to have one third of this biography article of a businessman devoted to an unknown pamphlet. Really? I will not self revert, I will not be inlcuding Original Research from primary sources at this article. Capitalismojo (talk) 15:02, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

"He has no literary career." Exactly. And it is very important that our article not be read that he did through omission. Hugh (talk) 15:15, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

"He wrote a pamphlet." That kind of understates events, don't you think? He wrote a pamphlet, he passed it around to people he thought or hoped might be sympathetic, some of whom wrote to the FBI, which is how we got to read it and discuss it in WP article space. Hugh (talk) 15:15, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

@Capitalismojo: Content deleted:

According to Al Jazeera America, "Koch’s manifesto makes many of the same arguments that Charles and David Koch have levelled in recent years about the direction the country is headed under a president the brothers have accused of being a socialist."

May I humbly observe that this is your second attempt to delete this content. This content was recently restored by our colleague Srich32977. This content is discussed here at article talk, above. When you deleted this content, did you perhaps anticipate it might be controversial with one or more of your fellow editors? The reason I ask is that we are asked to seek consensus at talk before edits if we suspect the edits might be controversial. Also, may I humbly ask why the reactions of sons Charles and David's to their father's pamphlet is included, but that of an independent, neutral, reliable source is not? This analysis by Al Jazeera, relating Fred's political awareness to that of his sons, is perhaps the most significant reason justifying our extensive coverage of the pamphlet in this article. Thank you. Hugh (talk) 15:48, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

First, you don't have to ping here. It's on my watch page. Second, the opinion of Al Jazeera is not neutral or reliable. Third, The inclusion of Original Research is to be avoided. Fourth, the son's remarks about their father's life were published in mainstream RS by mainstream journalists. If they weren't/aren't we should remove them. Fifth, the pamphlet is insignificant and coverage of it should probably be minimal (if any). Capitalismojo (talk) 16:02, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

As you know, our colleague Srich32977 and I disagree with you about the neutrality and reliability of Al Jazeera, and in any case, may I humbly repeat Srich32977's earlier salient point, that the content you deleted was attributed in-text to address concerns of possible bias. And a reliable, secondary source disagrees with your assessment that the pamphlet is insignificant; in fact, the reliable, neutral, secondary source found significant parallels between the politics of the father and the politics of the sons. The pamphlet is significant; however, extended, cherry-picked direct summarizations of a primary source document, unsupported by secondary sources, in inappropriate for our encyclopedia, so thank you for trimming the direct summarization, that is an improvement; however, even now the very brief summarization that remains does not give our readers a taste of just how fringy it is, and so by omission gives a false impression that it might be mostly sensible. We have trimmed our coverage of the content of the pamphlet so far we do not have good context for the Al Jazeera comment. Hugh (talk) 16:47, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

We don't need to spend exceptional time and space in this biography on this pamphlet. This is a biography article. Mentioning the political views are appropriate. Given that he was not a politician or political figure but an engineer and a businessman I find it a WP:COATRACK and WP:UNDUE to put additional info in this biography article. Why not more info on his building a new technology, why not more of the history of building one of the largest privately owned companies? This page has become a morass of politics, he's not a poltician, this is marginalia. Capitalismojo (talk) 19:02, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

The article is well short of page size guidelines, we have plenty of room to be inclusive, thanks. Al Jazeera did not think the pamphlet was marginalia, they thought it was important enough to feature and publish online, and I agree. I agree with Al Jazeera that the pamphlet offers insight into the political activities of the father, and the sons. The subject of this article is not a politician or political figure, but he was politically active, and he raised some boys that were not politician or political figures but were politically active. The article may be deficient in its coverage in areas, but I am sure you do not believe that the rest of the article must be perfected before any additional politics related content can be considered. It is non-neutral for us to pretend this noteworthy, neutral, reliable source, the source that brought the pamphlet to the wider world, does not exist. Kindly self-revert your recent deletion of critical context of how the pamphlet came to be widely known, and Al Jazeera's insightful take on the pamphlet, until we can form consensus on their deletion here on talk. Thank you in advance. Hugh (talk) 19:33, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Koch's motivation in founding the John Birch Society

The subject of this article's motivation in founding the John Birch Society is not in any supplied reference. Without clear sourcing, preferably a first person account or direct Koch quote, it is WP:OR for us to speculate. The society has multiple complex tenets and it is inappropriate for us to select one as Koch's motive. The best we can do given the currently available sources is to say that Koch was a founding member of the John Birch Society and let the facts speak for themselves. Thank you. Hugh (talk) 20:02, 30 June 2015 (UTC)

Done. --Hroðulf (or Hrothulf) (Talk) 21:11, 30 June 2015 (UTC)

Investigative journalism role in wide dissemination of Koch pamphlet

Proposed addition to the "Political Views section, bolded for emphasis:

Koch self-published a 29-page pamphlet "A Business Man Looks at Communism" relating his experiences in the Soviet Union and what he learned from those who survived Stalin's purges. Dozens of readers of the pamphlet wrote letters to the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) fearing communist takeover, and the FBI started a file on Koch. In 2014, the pamphlet and letters were published online by Al Jazeera America after their Freedom of Information Act request for Koch's FBI files.

Reference:

Leopold, Jason (July 30, 2014). "Revealed: Koch brothers' politics reflect their father's anti-communism". Al Jazeera America. Retrieved June 15, 2015.

The deletion of the proposed addition removed key context necessary for our readers to understand this paragraph. The subject of every sentence in an article need not be the subject of the article. We are expected to provide context sufficient that our readers can understand our article. Of course we do not want to leave our readers with the impression that Koch's pamphlet was a New York Times non-fiction best seller. Our article cannot convey through omission that Koch penned a romantic memoir of misspent youth behind the Iron Curtain. It is not Wikipedia's job to rehabilitate Koch's literary career. This pamphlet is not available in any local library, it is available because it was published online as a result of investigative journalism. The only reason we are discussing this pamphlet at all in this article is because of investigative journalism, and this background is of course essential context in understanding the pamphlet. Thank you. Hugh (talk) 17:53, 17 July 2015 (UTC) Comments? Hugh (talk) 01:44, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

• Comment: I wondered why it was deleted. Hugh thank you for pointing out more details about the source. I think this curious detail should definitely be included.--Wuerzele (talk) 03:06, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
• Comment " Of course we do not want to leave our readers with the impression that Koch's pamphlet was a New York Times non-fiction best seller. Our article cannot convey through omission that Koch penned a romantic memoir of misspent youth behind the Iron Curtain. It is not Wikipedia's job to rehabilitate Koch's literary career." Can you clarify this a bit for me? How does the paragraph as it stands leave readers with an impression that Fred Koch's pamphlet was a NY Times Bestseller? Comatmebro User talk:Comatmebro 17:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
• Comment "The only reason we are discussing this pamphlet at all in this article is because of investigative journalism." Aren't we discussing the pamphlet because this is BLP of Fred Koch, and he wrote the pamphlet? Why is investigative journalism relevant to the biography of Fred Koch? Comatmebro User talk:Comatmebro 17:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

* Comment Regarding the sentence you bolded above - multiple sources discuss the pamphlet written by Fred Koch before Al Jeezer's FIOA request and their article published on July 30th, 2014. Here are a few examples from earlier in the year here and here. And here in 2012. If all of these other RS were able to get a hold of the pamphlet, why does it matter if Al Jezzera FOIA'd the pamphlet? Why does that information belong in Fred Koch's BLP? Comatmebro User talk:Comatmebro 17:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

1. Your 1st link: A book review. I agree, of course the pamphlet was not totally unknown prior to Al Jazeera's investigative journalism, obviously Koch distributed the pamphlet in the 1960's, and yes a tertiary book-length treatment of the political activities of the Koch family covers the pamphlet. This takes nothing away from the highly significant fact that a particular news organization was the first to obtain the pamphlet and publish it online and bring it to wide public awareness in 2014. Hugh (talk) 18:21, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Your 1st link above is drawn from a tertiary source, “Sons of Wichita: How the Koch Brothers Became America's Most Powerful and Private Dynasty,” a book by Daniel Schulman. You described it as a reliable source. I notice the book is not used as a reference in this article. A book-length treatment of the lives of the Kochs, doesn't it make sense that there is some content in that reliable source worthy of summarization in this article? Would you be interested in collaborating on incorporating relevant content from this source into out project at this and other articles? Thank you. Hugh (talk) 17:10, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

I have just searched our project and it seems that this reliable source is not used as a reference for content anywhere in our project, even though we have about a half dozen some BLPs on members of this family. Doesn't this seem non-neutral or perhaps an oversight to you? Let us work together to draw content from this source and improve our project. Thank you! Hugh (talk) 17:20, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

1. Your 2nd link: I'm very impressed that you cited Lisa Graves of the Center for Media and Democracy, and commented that it is a reliable source! This is real progress for the neutrality of our project. I look forward to collaborating with you on integrating highly significant content from CMD into our project in this and other articles. Hugh (talk) 18:21, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
2. Your 3rd link: Thank you for citing the Investment Watch blog post "The Koch/Stalin connection: Where their wealth started" and commenting that it is reliable source. I agree the Koch-Stalin connection is currently under-represented in our article with respect to reliable sources. I look forward to collaborating with you on improving our coverage. But that is an issue for a separate thread. Thanks again. Hugh (talk) 18:21, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Hugh, I asked the following questions in my three comments above, could you please address those questions in a bit more detail instead of commenting on the quality of the sources i used as an example in one of my three comments? I know you hate it when people go off topic in these discussions, so can we keep it related to the material proposed above?

Question 1: "Of course we do not want to leave our readers with the impression that Koch's pamphlet was a New York Times non-fiction best seller. Our article cannot convey through omission that Koch penned a romantic memoir of misspent youth behind the Iron Curtain. It is not Wikipedia's job to rehabilitate Koch's literary career." Can you clarify this a bit for me? How do the paragraphs in the Political Views section related to the pamphlet do that as they read right now? The way I read it, he wrote a pamphlet about anti-socialism and his time in Soviet Russia, he published the pamphlet about anti-socialism, people were frightened by it, and the FBI started a file on Fred Koch. What is so "NY Times Bestseller" about how that is currently written?

It is non-neutral through omission to deliberately exclude highly noteworthy background of context of the story of the pamphlet. Hugh (talk) 19:40, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

It is clear then that we disagree here on the noteworthiness of the background context as it pertains to Fred Koch's BLP. You think it is highly relevant as defined by your conclusions and the wikipedia policies that you believe support including the material. You have your opinion, I have mine. We can continue to go back and forth on this, or suggest input from other editors - your call. Comatmebro User talk:Comatmebro 21:26, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Question 2: You say the only reason we are discussing the pamphlet is because of investigative journalism. Aren't we discussing the pamphlet because this is BLP of Fred Koch, and he wrote the pamphlet? Why is investigative journalism relevant to the biography of Fred Koch? There was detailed information on the pamphlet well before the FOIA request was made, as shown by the RS's i linked to in my earlier comment - it just doesnt seem necessary to me to add sentences about a FIOA request by Al Jazeera on a pamphlet that was released to the public over 50 years ago. I know you laughed at it earlier when User:Capitalismojo stated this but, "The fact that Al Jazeera made an open records request is of no use to the reader. None. FOIA is a standard tool of journalists, it is unexceptional. It adds nothing to the biography article of the subject. Would we add a line in an FDR article if a reporter FOIA'd material on FDR? No. This inclusion was odd." I agree with this rational, and I do not support adding in the information you are proposing. Comatmebro User talk:Comatmebro 19:08, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

"as shown by the RS's i linked to" Thank you again for your characterization of Lisa Graves, CMD, and the "Koch-Stalin" blog post as reliable sources. Hugh (talk) 19:47, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

Trolling much? Comatmebro User talk:Comatmebro 21:26, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

"There was detailed information on the pamphlet well before the FOIA request was made" Obtaining the document in full and publishing it online is a highly significant increase in the level of detail available. Hugh (talk) 19:47, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

The document was available to the public before the FOIA - based on my interpretation of the Al Jazeera article the pamphlet was a small component of the "176 pages" of materials FOIA'd by Al Jazeera (the pamphlet was 39 pages of the entire 176, so roughly 20% of the whole FBI file). While the FOIA did increase the level of detail available for Fred Koch's FBI file, it does not provide more detail than was already available from the pamphlet. With that said I find the information you are attempting to add in violation of WP:Notable and not needed for context in the Political Views section of Fred Koch's BLP. Comatmebro User talk:Comatmebro 21:26, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

If you believe Fred Koch is not notable you may nominate the article for deletion. Hugh (talk) 03:54, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

But "al Jazeera" is not relevant to the discussion of Fred Koch. They can be used as a reference, but the FOIA is not at all relevant, either to Koch, to his pamphlet, or to the (modern) discovery of his pamphlet.

Relevance, not notability. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 09:17, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

I may have misjudged the particular coatracking you are proposing. It's not that Al Jazeera is irrelevant to this article; it's that the "wide dissemination" is irrelevant to this article. It might be appropriate in Al Jazeera. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 09:29, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

That is the conclusion I am coming to as well after reading through the Al Jeezera article one more time. I think i improperly cited the material as WP:NOTE in my comment above. The FOIA by Al Jeezera was for all of the FBI files on Fred Koch, the pamphlet was a fifth of that content, and had already been released to the public. i will strike my citation of WP:NOTE and replace my justification for not believe the proposed content should be added to WP:COATRACK, per Arthur Rubin's clarification. Comatmebro User talk:Comatmebro 14:38, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

Proportionality of coverage in our articles is proportional to the number of pages in a file, that's a creative interpretation of our due weight policy; please bring that proposal up at policy talk. Hugh (talk) 15:04, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

I reiterate my suggestion that this is not a solid addition to this bio article. Who give a rat's patoot that Al Jazeera made a FOIA request. If it (the most common of reporting techniques) is important, that importance is only to Al Jazeera. As a matter of common sense it is of no importance whatsoever in the biography of a man dead decades before Al Jazeera was created. It is impossible to argue otherwise. Capitalismojo (talk) 19:08, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

Apparently, it is quite possible to argue otherwise. It is clearly irrational to argue otherwise. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 19:12, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

Please refrain from name calling. Hugh (talk) 19:54, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

We have two paragraphs and about a dozen some sentences regarding the history and content of the pamphlet and reactions. How the content of the pamphlet came to be widely known is as significant an aspect of the history of the pamphlet as Koch writing it in the first place. That the pamphlet is available to us in full as a result of investigative journalism is significant noteworthy context. The extent of the converge of the context of the pamphlet is recommended by the extent of our coverage of the content of the pamphlet. It is non-neutral by omission to arbitrarily exclude this significant noteworthy context. Hugh (talk) 19:54, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

I suppose it must be "noteworthy", as a reliable source has noted it. But, "significant"? Not a chance. If there were credible evidence that Fred Koch later tried to hide or disown the pamphlet, then its "discovery" might be significant. But we have three possibly reliable sources which comment on its contents. If the sources are at all reliable, they must have had access. Unless you want to credit all three of those sources in the text (which would clearly be undue weight), emphasizing the one that used a common method to obtain a copy and then "publish" it, would be clearly inappropriate. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 03:23, 23 July 2015 (UTC)

No need to mention Al Jazeera and FOIA. Koch's pamphlet hasn't been a classified document, etc.--Polmandc (talk) 04:29, 23 July 2015 (UTC)

"we have three possibly reliable sources" What three sources are you referring to? Thanks. Hugh (talk) 15:31, 23 July 2015 (UTC)

@Arthur Rubin: Arthur, could you please clarify, what are the three sources you consider possibly reliable? Thanks. Hugh (talk) 16:41, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

@Arthur Rubin: Arthur, you mentioned three sources that you thought were relevant to this discussion that that you thought were probably reliable sources, what were those three sources please? Thank you. Hugh (talk) 21:45, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Striking of comments related to CMD

I struck down my comments from the above thread Investigative journalism role in wide dissemination of Koch pamphlet related to CMD as a reliable source. I did not research CMD before citing it as a reliable source and I was merely trying to use the citation as a way to prove a point. A point that clearly fell on deaf ears. After taking the time to review CMD and it's content, I have come to the conclusion that it is not a reliable source, and that is why I have removed my opinion on the matter. My apologies for the mix up. Cheers Comatmebro User talk:Comatmebro 16:52, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

DRAFT RfC: Background context of Koch pamphlet

This is DRAFT RfC to solicit feedback on the format. Please comment on the format of the RfC and the RfC question. Please DO NOT comment on the substance of the RfC qustion at this time.

RfC question

Should the following content be added to the "Political Views" section?

Dozens of readers of the pamphlet wrote letters to the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), and the FBI started a file on Koch. In 2014, the pamphlet and letters were published online by Al Jazeera America after a Freedom of Information Act request for Koch's FBI files.

Reference

Leopold, Jason (July 30, 2014). "Revealed: Koch brothers' politics reflect their father's anti-communism". Al Jazeera America. Retrieved June 15, 2015.

Summary of previous positions

Support inclusion

1. The FBI starting a file on the subject of the article is significant and noteworthy.
2. Source is reliable for the proposed content.
3. That the wide availability of the pamphlet we currently enjoy is a result of investigative journalism is significant, noteworthy background context for understanding the pamphlet.

Oppose inclusion

1. The FBI starting a file on the subject of the article is irrelevant.
2. Source is not reliable.
3. Irrelevant that wide availability of the pamphlet is a result of investigative journalism.

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