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::I can see the Wehrmachtbericht being included in the article of a military soldier or as to a military action when relevant. As for inclusion here, I can see your point. I did not add it so I leave it to that editor to comment. [[User:Kierzek|Kierzek]] ([[User talk:Kierzek|talk]]) 17:02, 1 June 2016 (UTC) |
::I can see the Wehrmachtbericht being included in the article of a military soldier or as to a military action when relevant. As for inclusion here, I can see your point. I did not add it so I leave it to that editor to comment. [[User:Kierzek|Kierzek]] ([[User talk:Kierzek|talk]]) 17:02, 1 June 2016 (UTC) |
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:::"Showing toughness" may have been a euphemism for murdering innocent civilians during the Warsaw Uprising. I think it should come out. It's propaganda put out by the OKW. — [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]] ([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 21:28, 1 June 2016 (UTC) |
:::"Showing toughness" may have been a euphemism for murdering innocent civilians during the Warsaw Uprising. I think it should come out. It's propaganda put out by the OKW. — [[User:Diannaa|Diannaa]] ([[User talk:Diannaa|talk]]) 21:28, 1 June 2016 (UTC) |
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::::I actually think it should stay in, as should all Wehrmachtbericht references, but with the addition of a full explanation of what the Wehrmachtbericht was (it wasn't just propaganda, just like the BBC World Service wasn't just propaganda, despite it being censored by the British Government). In addition to its role as propaganda, is was also a source of actual armed forces news for the civilian populace, and after 1940 the mention of a named person was the nearest thing the Wehrmacht (and Waffen-SS) had to the London Gazette mentioning a serviceman in dispatches. Kallis' 2005 book on Nazi propaganda tempers the idea that it was mere propaganda and also points out that Nazi propaganda wasn't as all-pervasive as some think. While a mention in the Wehrmachtbericht did not itself result in the award of a worn device like the oakleaves of a mention in dispatches, it was noted in the person's records and had a similar function in drawing the attention of the German public to the actions of an individual. The nature of the Wehrmachtbericht itself actually changed progressively during the course of the war, and had a different spin. In this case it may have included euphemisms for criminal actions, but it may equally have been referring to bravery in combat against armed fighters of the Home Army. Cheers, [[User:Peacemaker67|Peacemaker67]] ([[User_talk:Peacemaker67|click to talk to me]]) 04:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC) |
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Update: please also see discussion at [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view/Noticeboard&oldid=730695440#Extensive_quoting_from_a_propaganda_source:_the_Wehrmachtbericht_in_articles_on_World_War_II_German_officers NPOV noticeboard on the topic]. According to feedback there these quotations fail [[WP:UNDUE]]. [[User:K.e.coffman|K.e.coffman]] ([[User talk:K.e.coffman|talk]]) 03:11, 21 July 2016 (UTC) |
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:I have reconsidered my position on this, I believe the quotation is undue, but the article should state how many times the person was mentioned and what action they were mentioned for (in plain terms), just as we would for a mentioned in dispatches. Cheers, [[User:Peacemaker67|Peacemaker67]] ([[User_talk:Peacemaker67|click to talk to me]]) 03:27, 21 July 2016 (UTC) |
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German - Polish name
There is no significant evidence to show that this fellow and his family were anything other than wholly Germanised citizens of Prussia and that they spelt their names accordingly. The blatant Polish spellings in this article should all be changed to the correct ones. Also, someone who was, according to this article, so positively evil and responsible for tens of thousands of deaths and yet never charged for any of them seems too good to be true. I shall investigate some of the Western histories on this. Regards, David Lauder (talk) 20:55, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
The 'Slavic origin' part of the article is based mostly on the Polish wiki art, which, in turn, was based on works of Von dem Bach's biographer - Marek Dzięcielski. He uses "Żelewski" were his sources (mostly Church documents) are using that form. And the name of von dem Bach's father - Otton Jan von Żelewski is spelled with a "Ż". It is highly probable that Erich von dem Bach knew both Polish and Kashubian, as he attended schools in Wejherowo, Chojnice and Brodnica and to most of his school mates Polish and Kashubian were their mother tongues. 87.206.96.114 (talk) 11:30, 6 April 2008 (UTC) (sorry, forgot to log myself in ;-) Barry Kent (talk) 11:31, 6 April 2008 (UTC))
Don´t get me wrong, but I don´t think that in an official Prussian registers around 1890 anybody would write a name like “Elżbieta Ewelina Szymańska”, as the letters “ż” or “ ń” are unknown in German and these registers are written in German. As well the name “Szymanska” is the Polish female version of Szymanski, while in German names aren´t declined. Most probably his mothers name in the official records is “Elisabeth Eveline Schimansky” or something like that. I´d really like to see the original register. And that´s just the same with “Otton” , isn´t it rather “Otto” (Ludwik / Ludwig)? This section seems to be a translation of Polish WP, declining the original names ( as usual in Polish ) as a proof that these people were Kashubians, but this “evidence” is just a soap bubble.
Don´t get me wrong, there were several noble families with kashubian or slavic ancestors in that region, but most of them wouldn´t define themselves as Kashubians as they where assimilated to German / Prussian culture long before, so the whole section gives a wrong impression.(HerkusMonte (talk) 13:35, 16 April 2008 (UTC))
As I have written earlier - most of the sources were CHURCH documents, written probably in Polish or Latin. Barry Kent (talk) 22:55, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
- Church documents in Prussia were´nt written in Polish or Latin.(HerkusMonte (talk) 05:55, 7 July 2008 (UTC))
- And you know that from...? They were written in Latin FOR SURE. Plus: Most catholic priests in Prussia were Polish, so it is highly probable that they used their native tongue at least from time to time. Barry Kent (talk) 20:28, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
- His mother (“Elżbieta Ewelina Szymańska”) was Lutheran, not catholic, and Lutheran church records were neither written in Latin nor in Polish.(HerkusMonte (talk) 07:06, 9 July 2008 (UTC))
An interesting article from 2006 on his biography in Polish by Tomasz Żuroch von Piechowski is available here. --Lysytalk 23:10, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
Can somebody please help me out? It says in this article "In July 1943, he became commander of the so-called "Bandenkampfverbande" ("Band-fighting Units"), responsible for the mass murder of 35,000 civilians in Riga...." But the Riga Ghetto page states "An account from the year 1943 lists 13.200 Jews in the ghetto" Xiare (talk) 17:42, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
Change of name to "von dem Bach"
The article is not consistent with the timing of the addition of "von dem Bach" to his full name. First, it states the change was done in the late 30's then, later on, it says the change was made in 1925. Someone should determine which was correct and update the page accordingly.
AJ. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.85.64.199 (talk) 22:58, 25 May 2010 (UTC)
Ethnic Pole
The article should say it explicitly, he was pro-German, but an ethnic Pole. 173.169.90.98 (talk) 12:56, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
- and i've read he saved chopin's heart from destruction. FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 22:05, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
Polish "history"
Polish "history" is fanatically biased and on a page such as this is just out of order. English-language Wikipedia should have readily available English-language references. The minute you permit those with an axe to grind onto pages like this you are in trouble. Lastly, Kashubians are NOT Polish. this is very important. Also were the villages his father owned in Pomerellan or Pomerania. A serious distinction should be made. Did they have German names at the time and if so that is what should be cited, not names which no-one recognises except raving Polish nationalists. 86.165.190.197 (talk) 17:36, 1 August 2015 (UTC)
Wehrmachtbericht reference for Bach-Zelewski
Bach-Zelewski is listed as having been mentioned in the Wehrmachtbericht (Wehrmacht's daily propaganda report):
Military personnel referenced in the Wehrmachtbericht
I'd be curious to see what it say. Does anyone have access to this reference? K.e.coffman (talk) 03:09, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
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Wehrmachtbericht report
I removed the reinsertion of the report. It was originally removed with this edit on Jan 19, a day after it was added: diff and no one objected, thus representing a consensus as I understand it. New consensus need to be achieved to have this reinstated.
The section itself is citing from the OKW propaganda report, the Wehrmachtbericht. This appears to be either WP:OR or extensive quoting from a WP:Primary source. In either case, the section is citing verbatim (including in German) a piece of Nazi propaganda that has no informative value; all such reports were approved by the Reich Propaganda Ministry and were meant solely to instill optimism in the German population.
The exact wording removed was:
- During the suppression of the uprising in Warsaw, fighting forces of the Army, the Waffen-SS and the Luftwaffe under the command of SS-Obergruppenführer and General of the Police von Bach under the leadership of Major General Rohr have particularly distinguished themselves by showing toughness and audacious recklessness.
Please let me know if there are any concerns. K.e.coffman (talk) 15:02, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for doing this, K.e.coffman. Indeed, one brief propaganda mention on the Nazi radio during murderous suppression of the Warsaw Uprising under his command has no place in Wikipedia. Brief mentions of this sort are as far as can be from Wikipedia:Neutral point of view. Poeticbent talk 16:27, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
- I can see the Wehrmachtbericht being included in the article of a military soldier or as to a military action when relevant. As for inclusion here, I can see your point. I did not add it so I leave it to that editor to comment. Kierzek (talk) 17:02, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
- "Showing toughness" may have been a euphemism for murdering innocent civilians during the Warsaw Uprising. I think it should come out. It's propaganda put out by the OKW. — Diannaa (talk) 21:28, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
- I actually think it should stay in, as should all Wehrmachtbericht references, but with the addition of a full explanation of what the Wehrmachtbericht was (it wasn't just propaganda, just like the BBC World Service wasn't just propaganda, despite it being censored by the British Government). In addition to its role as propaganda, is was also a source of actual armed forces news for the civilian populace, and after 1940 the mention of a named person was the nearest thing the Wehrmacht (and Waffen-SS) had to the London Gazette mentioning a serviceman in dispatches. Kallis' 2005 book on Nazi propaganda tempers the idea that it was mere propaganda and also points out that Nazi propaganda wasn't as all-pervasive as some think. While a mention in the Wehrmachtbericht did not itself result in the award of a worn device like the oakleaves of a mention in dispatches, it was noted in the person's records and had a similar function in drawing the attention of the German public to the actions of an individual. The nature of the Wehrmachtbericht itself actually changed progressively during the course of the war, and had a different spin. In this case it may have included euphemisms for criminal actions, but it may equally have been referring to bravery in combat against armed fighters of the Home Army. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:36, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
- "Showing toughness" may have been a euphemism for murdering innocent civilians during the Warsaw Uprising. I think it should come out. It's propaganda put out by the OKW. — Diannaa (talk) 21:28, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
- I can see the Wehrmachtbericht being included in the article of a military soldier or as to a military action when relevant. As for inclusion here, I can see your point. I did not add it so I leave it to that editor to comment. Kierzek (talk) 17:02, 1 June 2016 (UTC)
Update: please also see discussion at NPOV noticeboard on the topic. According to feedback there these quotations fail WP:UNDUE. K.e.coffman (talk) 03:11, 21 July 2016 (UTC)
- I have reconsidered my position on this, I believe the quotation is undue, but the article should state how many times the person was mentioned and what action they were mentioned for (in plain terms), just as we would for a mentioned in dispatches. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:27, 21 July 2016 (UTC)
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