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Its not just one source. [[User:Slatersteven|Slatersteven]] ([[User talk:Slatersteven|talk]]) 14:48, 5 February 2024 (UTC) |
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:Assuming you are replying to me: are you stupid? Are you even capable of answering anything without distorting and answering something completely different? I asked about how is analysing randomly sampled sources cherry picking, and you answer with even more cherry picking (linking to articles that show up in a "Russian Pyrrhic victory" Google search). If you weren't replying to me with those links, please say so and I'll strike through this reply. [[User:Alexiscoutinho|Alexis Coutinho]] ([[User talk:Alexiscoutinho|talk]]) 14:58, 5 February 2024 (UTC) |
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Request for comment on first sentence of lead and scope
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Should we change the existing first sentence of the lead from the present wording here:
The battle of Bakhmut is a major battle taking place between the Ukrainian Armed Forces and the Russian Armed Forces in and around the city of Bakhmut during the larger eastern Ukraine campaign.
to the following (or something similar):
The battle of Bakhmut was a major battle in and around the city of Bakhmut between the Russian Armed Forces and Ukrainian defenders for capture of the city during the larger eastern Ukraine campaign.
Alexis Coutinho (talk) 13:48, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
Cinderella157 (talk) 05:52, 3 December 2023 (UTC) emphasis added Cinderella157 (talk) 00:55, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
The essence of the proposal is to amend the scope from being broadly defined as in and near the city to being more narrowly defined as fighting for the capture of the city. Cinderella157 (talk) 05:53, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Diff fixed, etc. by me. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 06:49, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Rationale/background
Whether the battle is over or not has been a contentious issue since the end of May. An RfC (closed in July) was held to determine whether the battle should be considered to be over (see here). The consensus at the time was that the battle was not over. This was largely based on the scope of the article as defined in the first sentence of the lead: that the battle was defined as fighting in and around the city of Bakhmut
and, since fighting around the city was continuing, the battle was not over. The closer noted: Despite a general recognition that the outcome here should be based on consensus in reliable sources, there has been no analysis of any sources in this discussion.
At its creation on 27 May 2022, the lead defined the battle as being near the city. By early January, the lead sentence had change to the wording in and near the city (see here) As this has been a current event, defining the scope of the article has largely been one of editor discretion rather than one guided by WP:RSs and the further limitation that most sources fall to WP:NEWSORG.
A search of Google news since the start of July 2023 gives 559 hits for the exact string "battle of Bakhmut" (see here) while a similar search for "battle for Bakhmut" gives 742 hits. As a general observation, these would refer to the battle in the past tense and that the fighting was for capture of the city. Searches of Google scholar (here and here) do not appear to be particularly productive nor does a search of JSTOR (here and here). Cinderella157 (talk) 05:53, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Notified at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Military history and Talk:Russian invasion of Ukraine. Cinderella157 (talk) 06:18, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
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Comments
Please place comments (eg support or oppose) below this. Editors are asked to comment on the essence of the change rather than the exact wording of the proposal.
- Support. This would be a much more concrete and encyclopedic scope than an overly vague notion of fighting "near" (in an undefined way) the city, which has entirely or mostly fallen to Russian occupation for some time (to the extent it has not been destroyed and abandoned). IF something major changes, then the lead can be rewritten again later. — SMcCandlish ☏ ¢ 😼 06:56, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Support Per SmcC above. Focused is much better than vague. GenQuest "scribble" 07:26, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Comment It seems to me that this will just move argumentation to interpretations of which sources support "for capture of the city", assuming discussion will be about sources instead of the continual OR it currently devolves into. (Hohum @) 15:13, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Support based on "Cinderella157 (talk) 12:57 pm" analysis of sources below. diff. (Hohum @) 13:16, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- Comment Discussions about the end date of this battle have been a nightmare simply because of this arbitrary scope definition in the lead. Using the word for makes the editors' task of objectively analyzing RS much easier and does the very important thing of tying sub-battles/fights/events by purpose and goal, not by an arbitrary notion of being near (that isn't endorsed in any RS) which disregards the difference in scale of fighting. Note that the RfC proposal doesn't impede an Aftermath section from being created to house some of the information after 20 May. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:51, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Support vehemently, based on my comment above and responsibly backed by my analyses. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:45, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
- Well, it’s maybe an improvement. But if we disagree about one unsourced geographical bounds, we may continue to disagree about another. Why not say “battle at the city of Bakhmut,” since this is already implicit in the name? (Separate issues: change “Russian Armed Forces” to “Russian forces,” since Wagner Group was significant. Don’t write “for capture of the city” at all, because that is only a Russian objective. Ukrainian objectives included its defence and the attrition of Russian forces.) —Michael Z. 15:54, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Oppose. These discussions are hyperfocussed on relatively insignificant factors because some editors want an infobox saying “Russian victory” or whatever neat, tidy conclusion on a specific end date, hour, and minute. But reliable sources don’t dwell on defining the battle as “of,” “for,” or “in” the precisely surveyed lines of the city limits. Source after source tells us that possession of the city is of little or no strategic value, that its value became symbolic, and that the major results have been the attrition of 100k Russian casualties and the pursuit of a victory that became a hollow one over the ruins of a razed city completely void of its 70k population (and the following self-immolation of Prigozhin’s Wagner as a force). The subject should be defined as the fighting at Bakhmut in less specific terms. There should be no result listed, unless we can agree on “inconclusive.” —Michael Z. 15:02, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- We all know what's really behind your vote. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:19, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- Oppose. These discussions are hyperfocussed on relatively insignificant factors because some editors want an infobox saying “Russian victory” or whatever neat, tidy conclusion on a specific end date, hour, and minute. But reliable sources don’t dwell on defining the battle as “of,” “for,” or “in” the precisely surveyed lines of the city limits. Source after source tells us that possession of the city is of little or no strategic value, that its value became symbolic, and that the major results have been the attrition of 100k Russian casualties and the pursuit of a victory that became a hollow one over the ruins of a razed city completely void of its 70k population (and the following self-immolation of Prigozhin’s Wagner as a force). The subject should be defined as the fighting at Bakhmut in less specific terms. There should be no result listed, unless we can agree on “inconclusive.” —Michael Z. 15:02, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- Oppose as I am unsure this solves the basic problem, how do we define the scope of the battle? It must be either the city (and nothing else) or other areas around the city. Anything else is not even shifting the gaolpoats just calling them something else. Slatersteven (talk) 15:57, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Oppose as Slatersteven says. This would solve nothing - and indeed is there anything to solve? This may well be best left until the fog of war lifts.Lukewarmbeer (talk) 16:08, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Comment As long as this request concerns the lede, then it is malformed. The changes should be made in the article body and summarized in the lede. In addition, timeline in the article is very confusing. from the top, the narrative move toward June, 2023. At that point, the narrative jumps back to 2022. This is no way to run an article. To bring up another massive battle, Battle of Stalingrad, which may be an apt comparison: very little of the city (a strip a few hundred feet deep in front of the Volga) remained controlled by the defenders. By early the next year, Paulus' 6th Army had capitulated. Perhaps because the area deep behind the Volga had not been watched. There is a lot of work to do before even considering the lede. — Neonorange (talk to Phil) (he, they) 02:48, 4 December 2023 (UTC) Neonorange (talk to Phil) (he, they) 02:48, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- Oppose per my comment just above. — Neonorange (talk to Phil) (he, they) 02:53, 4 December 2023 (UTC) —
- Oppose. Short explanation. This RfC asks if the battle for Bakhmut should be described as currently ongoing (a) or completed long time ago (b). According to best RS on the subject, such as Institute for the Study of War, there were various attacks and counterattacks near Bohdanivka (6km northwest of Bakhmut), Khromove (immediately west of Bakhmut), Klishchiivka (7km southwest of Bakhmut), Andriivka (10km southwest of Bakhmut), and Kurdyumivka (13km southwest of Bakhmut) on December 11." [1]. "immediately west of Bakhmut". Hence, the battle is still ongoing. The answer to RfC is (a). My very best wishes (talk) 15:32, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
- A longer explanation Currently, this page covers "Battle of Bakhmut", i.e. not just the city, but also the surrounding areas and the timing up to today. Therefore, it includes section "Resumed fighting around the city (14 June 2023–present)" and a couple of others. Should we narrow down the current scope of the page?
If so, then the recent fighting around the city might be included as an "Aftermath" section. It is true that many/most sources treat the subject as the battle for the city of Bakhmut, while others leave this open to interpretations, as was noted at talk [2]. However,simply looking at the map, it appears that the fighting is currently ongoing in the Western suburbs of the city. Therefore, I think all of that should be treated at the same page, i.e. this page, with the current scope. More important, the battle for the city of Bakhmut apparently is still ongoing, even after the city was taken by Russian forces, e.g. [3]: "Even today, Ukraine deploys more forces in and around Bakhmut than any other point along the front line." My very best wishes (talk) 19:46, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- This is why I think we should wait until much later, and historians can judge it in hindsight. Slatersteven (talk) 16:47, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
- I agree with this. My very best wishes (talk) 22:21, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
- That quote does not imply fighting is taking place in Bakhmut right now. Super Dromaeosaurus (talk) 23:09, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
- Yes, it does not imply "in the city of Bakhmut". It say this is a battle for the city of Bakhmut. A battle for a city can be conducted around the city. The Ukrainian forces were trying to retake the city recently - according to their statements. My very best wishes (talk) 16:56, 6 December 2023 (UTC) (see "Inside Ukraine's Fight to Retake Bakhmut" and "Ukrainian troops vow to take back Bakhmut, for example). My very best wishes (talk) 16:07, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
- RS (and Telegram on both sides) were quite clear that Ukraine’s operational-strategic goal of recapturing Bakhmut was supposed to be based on a double envelopment, rather than Wagner-style frontal attacks. These operations (last I looked) are covered at 2023 Ukrainian counteroffensive.
- For at least the past couple of months, if not since the end of May, no part of the city itself has been seriously contested. In fact, as of this writing most Ukrainian and Russian primary sources (eg deepstatemap) have Russian troops controlling even the gardening and dacha areas beyond the garage/MiG area, and advancing at a snail’s pace from there toward Ivanivske.
- And along those lines, if so then perhaps we should be thinking about creating Battle of Chasiv Yar, which I personally feel would be more than a little premature.
- RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 08:30, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, it does not imply "in the city of Bakhmut". It say this is a battle for the city of Bakhmut. A battle for a city can be conducted around the city. The Ukrainian forces were trying to retake the city recently - according to their statements. My very best wishes (talk) 16:56, 6 December 2023 (UTC) (see "Inside Ukraine's Fight to Retake Bakhmut" and "Ukrainian troops vow to take back Bakhmut, for example). My very best wishes (talk) 16:07, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
- Support. I agree with the proposed stricter scope, however this RfC shouldn't only focus on provoking changes in the lead. Also, I am expressing my support for the change of scope, not for this exact wording, we can determine that later. I've argued more my point of view in the discussion below. Super Dromaeosaurus (talk) 23:02, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
- Support. Agreed with Super Dromaeosaurus and SmcC. I do believe that the fighting on the outskirts of Bakhmut should be clarified as being considered part of an ongoing battle of Bakhmut, while the result section specifically delineates the fighting within city limits. Jebiguess (talk) 22:37, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- Your justification seems a bit contradictory. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 00:07, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
- I sucked at phrasing it, but essentially I support the status quo. Jebiguess (talk) 01:01, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
- Then you oppose the change, not support it. Slatersteven (talk) 11:51, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
- I sucked at phrasing it, but essentially I support the status quo. Jebiguess (talk) 01:01, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
- Your justification seems a bit contradictory. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 00:07, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
- Support Seems supported by RS (see above) and is a good starting point. De novo it seems better than the current. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 11:58, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
- Support. Per arguments of u:Super Dromaeosaurus. Alaexis¿question? 08:32, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
Discussion
Does this solve the issue, as how do we define near? Is not the outskirts "near" the city, so if there is fighting in the outskirts its not over. Slatersteven (talk) 15:54, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- It does solve the issue because, then, we would finally be able to discern what fights on the outskirts of the city actually are part of the "battle of/for Bakhmut" and which aren't. A scope based on goal is much better than one defined on arbitrary proximity. For example, the Russian attack on Khromove recently, despite being right next to Bakhmut would not be part of the "battle of Bakhmut" because the goal there isn't to capture or get closer to capturing Bakhmut, it's something else, likely to try to get closer to Ivanivske. On the other hand, the second battles for Klishchiivka and Andriivka could be part of the "battle of Bakhmut" because one interpretation is that their goal was to encircle and, in the long term, recapture Bakhmut. However, if it's concluded that their goal was simply to tie Russian troops, then they would not be part of the "battle of Bakhmut". Further analysis of RS would be necessary regarding these specific 2 cases. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 16:10, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- OK, but that all looks like OR. How do you (or I) know what the goal is of any military operation, its not as if they are going to state it. Also Khromove is part of Bakhmut urban hromada, so why does it get excluded as part of the city? Slatersteven (talk) 16:18, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
but what that all looks like OR
the part about interpreting the objectives of the Khromove attack might be, but the proposition of lead change isn't. The thing is, the scope change would lay the ground for future, actually productive discussions of RS. We don't need to talk about Khromove in the article (or other article) right now. I've used that example more like a thought experiment to show you the implications of constraining the scope and to give you an idea of how/what future analysis might look like.Also Khromove is part of Bakhmut urban hromada, so why does it get excluded as part of the city?
Because nobody has ever stated that this is the "battle for the Bakhmut urban hromada". Alexis Coutinho (talk) 16:29, 3 December 2023 (UTC)- And I have stated I disagree, and we will just have the very kind of discussion we are having now, what defines "near the city" and why does "actually being part of the city" not count? By the way this is the "battle for Bakhmut" not "the Battle of Bakhmut city", a point made more than once, this is the battle for the area. My last word on th8is, I do not think this will fix anything. Slatersteven (talk) 16:35, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
we will just have the very kind of discussion we are having now, what defines "near the city" and why does "actually being part of the city" not count?
you, are trying to revive this kind of discussion that leads nowhere. The whole point of this RfC is to try to escape from that discussion and actually talk about goals. Being near or not is less relevant than goal. So what if Russia didn't capture Khromove until (possibly) now? Advocating for 100% confident control over a large city like Bakhmut to admit it's over is pedantic and OR.this is the battle for the area
you probably didn't mean these exact words, but they are wrong nevertheless. This is the Battle for Bakhmut yes, not the general area. The city of Bakhmut has the most strategic importance and is the only that matters for PR. We only include the battles of surrounding settlements because you need to pass through them to reach and encircle Bakhmut. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:06, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- And I have stated I disagree, and we will just have the very kind of discussion we are having now, what defines "near the city" and why does "actually being part of the city" not count? By the way this is the "battle for Bakhmut" not "the Battle of Bakhmut city", a point made more than once, this is the battle for the area. My last word on th8is, I do not think this will fix anything. Slatersteven (talk) 16:35, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- OK, but that all looks like OR. How do you (or I) know what the goal is of any military operation, its not as if they are going to state it. Also Khromove is part of Bakhmut urban hromada, so why does it get excluded as part of the city? Slatersteven (talk) 16:18, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Lol, I missed the most important point of your initial comment:
how do we define near?
we don't as we can't objectively do that. That's exactly the motivation of this RfC. We're trying to distance ourselves from that mindset/subjective question (like chicken vs egg first: we can't satisfactorily answer that, that's why we shouldn't be discussing it). Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:37, 3 December 2023 (UTC) - Btw, I don’t think anyone here would seriously claim that the battle was already underway when the article was speculatively created in May ‘22. Cinderella157 helpfully linked the initial revision there and it’s self-evidently a piece of utter bovine feces and copy-pasting that should have been AfDed and SNOWed with prejudice.
- I think there’s a basis in sources to say that the battle began in August or September.
- But in any case I’d like to draw attention to the fact that the current infobox gives a (sensible) start date months after the article was actually created. We are dealing with a Franken-article that never had a clearly defined scope to begin with.
- Cheers, RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 08:32, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
@Lukewarmbeer: Why are you opposing an objective step in the right direction simply because it isn't the perfect solution?! There is no magic pill here. SlothingInaction in general wouldn't be helpful/constructive here as this has already dragged for many months and even the counteroffensive is starting to be considered over. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 16:14, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- If I could see that step and if it was in the right direction I'd take it. It seems pointless to me. I am always open to persuasion and may not understand the finer points here so if you can give me something to reconsider with I will do just that. Lukewarmbeer (talk) 16:20, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, well sorry for being a bit rough. If you take a look at #This battle should be considered over you might understand how difficult/problematic/unproductive/vague the previous discussions were. They mostly went around in circles because we couldn't escape the limitation of a vague scope. Any fight around Bakhmut could be interpreted as continuing the months long battle despite the tone in RS being that the term was a done deal. It is a fact that there are still fights around there, but are they really the same battle that Wagner fought? Analysis of RS back then was limited to how they used the term "Battle of Bakhmut", but then many times the analysis would be inconclusive because they would say something like "battles still continue around the city" or "fighting still continues" which doesn't explicitly link it to the subject of this article, only to the general location. Finally, a benefit of defining scope by goal is that that's something that's actually analyzed in RS recently. For example, the ISW said a few days ago that Ukraine went on defensive everywhere except southern front. This would mean that Ukraine would stop its attempts to encircle Bakhmut and whatever battles took place there from now on would actually be Russia trying to expand its control and move past Bakhmut to other settlements like Ivanivske. As I explained to Slatersteven above, considering the objective of fights allows us to discern what is for the capture of Bakhmut (and thus what goes in this article) and what isn't. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 16:49, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
@Mzajac: Don’t write “for capture of the city” at all, because that is only a Russian objective. Ukrainian objectives included its defence and the attrition of Russian forces.
It's implied, of course, that the defender's objective is to defend the city. Furthermore, both sides had this objective of grinding down the other, so I don't see an issue with the RfC's proposed wording. The objective of grinding the other could be explained elsewhere in the article if it isn't already. But if you remove “for capture of the city”, which is the core of the proposal, what would you suggest instead? It would still need to be for something... Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:28, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
- No, I don’t think it does have to be explicitly for something. And if it is, then it should be reliably sourced. Is there something unusual here? Everywhere along the 2,000-km front the two sides objectives include control of territory and destruction of the enemy. This being a battle includes these by implication. —Michael Z. 18:49, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
then it should be reliably sourced
it is much more reliably sourced than the current definition. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 19:24, 3 December 2023 (UTC)- Where? —Michael Z. 01:09, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- In the sample of sources in that table of the previous discussion, for example. Besides, the rationale already explained the overall background. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 01:19, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- No they don’t. Nor does the background, which says nothing about rationale apart from mentioning the Donbas as a strategic objective, and only relates a series of military actions.
- In fact what the lead absolutely should explain, and that is practically missing from the article even though several cited sources discuss it, is what is the goal that the Russians expended such extreme resources for. sources say that the city is strategically insignificant, that some analysts scratch their heads over its emphasis, although that it was likely an attempt to satisfy Putin’s need for a symbolic victory, any victory, after “annexing” Ukrainian lands that Russian forces couldn’t even reach in September 2022 and being unable to make any significant advances. This is one of the key points about this battle and what should be in the lead instead of squabbling over whether it ended in Bakhmut independently from whether it ended near Bakhmut, for the satisfaction of writing “Russian victory” in the infobox when Russia expended 100k casualties to control the flattened rubble of a city of 70k. —Michael Z. 01:35, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- I would be quite happy if the result said "See Aftermath" if the aftermath section was sufficiently robust to support this. Cinderella157 (talk) 01:44, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- The result of this RfC could influence this a lot though. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 02:15, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- I would be quite happy if the result said "See Aftermath" if the aftermath section was sufficiently robust to support this. Cinderella157 (talk) 01:44, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- In the sample of sources in that table of the previous discussion, for example. Besides, the rationale already explained the overall background. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 01:19, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- Where? —Michael Z. 01:09, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- Comment my observation of this discussion is that it has gone off on something of a tangent, focusing on in and around the city of Bakhmut, rather than what I have explicitly stated as the substance of the proposal:
being more narrowly defined as fighting for the capture of the city
. Furthermore, an overview of sources per search results provided would refer to the battle in the past tense and that the city has been captured. The revision is based on how sources have been referring to the battle since the city's reported capture at the end of May. They are referring to the battle in the past tense. They are referring to the battle as being for the capture of the city by Russia. They are stating that Russia has captured the city and they are not reporting that it has been held since. As this is supported by the sources, none of it is WP:OR. On the otherhand, none of the discussion in this section appears to be addressing what the sources are actually saying. Almost all of what I see being said in this section is based on personal opinion, personal analysis of the fighting or a synthesis of defining the city or what in and about means, and that is WP:OR. If anybody seriously contends what the sources are saying, then we can go through these individually - after all, there are only 1301 hits from Google news since the start of July. Cinderella157 (talk) 01:42, 4 December 2023 (UTC)- 👍 Do you think compiling a list of sources and quotes (like this) would be helpful? Alexis Coutinho (talk) 02:24, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- I am starting to work on something but different from that table. Cinderella157 (talk) 02:52, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- Alright, I thought a table wasn't the best format anyways. That's why I made a list there instead. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 02:57, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- I am starting to work on something but different from that table. Cinderella157 (talk) 02:52, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- 👍 Do you think compiling a list of sources and quotes (like this) would be helpful? Alexis Coutinho (talk) 02:24, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
@Neonorange: Regarding your comment about the lead, while you are technically right the that lead should be updated after the body (to reflect the content) and not the other way around, I believe you are missing the most important point: the proposed change in scope. The lead is simply a representation/definition of the scope of the article. In the context of this RfC, the lead could simply be viewed as an abstract guideline for future development of the article. Without this scope/guideline, we are unsure what to aim for the article, what to include or not (i.e. should the battle of Khromove be included?), how to divide sections, when to start a subsequent article, etc.
Regarding the Battle of Stalingrad reference, as far as I know, there's no concrete evidence that Ukraine permanently held/holds (as opposed to raided) positions on the edge of the city. Besides, as Cinderella157 pointed out, sources so far refer to the battle of Bakhmut in the past. Thanks. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 03:36, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- General suggestion: please take into account the #Review of sources when voting. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 18:49, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
@My very best wishes: all sources found by the search "Battle for Bakhmut" also belong to this page.
what do you mean? I do not see any reason for changing the scope.
well, then what do you think of the reason of trying to align the article, which explains what is the term "Battle of Bakhmut", with reality, history and, most importantly, sources? Alexis Coutinho (talk) 19:00, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Most recent sources say that the city was taken, but the battle continue, see for example [4].My very best wishes (talk) 19:06, 4 December 2023 (UTC)- That's from a year ago. And I can see much clearer what sources are saying in the section below. And the general tone is that the battle is over, but that other minor battles/fighting continues. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 19:13, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- Indeed, most sources focus on capturing the city. I simply think that the subsequent military operations around the city should also be covered on this page. My very best wishes (talk) 19:43, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
I simply think that the subsequent military operations around the city should also be covered on this page.
They could, but as a bridge to another article (Bakhmut counteroffensive, for example) or simply as something separate/distinct: aftermath, subsequent counterattacks, Ukrainian response, Ukrainian resistance, other minor battles, etc. Although the proposed change in scope/lead would limit what we consider "Battle of Bakhmut" and how the infobox treats the results, I don't see it intrinsically impeding/excluding the info of the section you're concerned with. Am I correct Cinderella157? Alexis Coutinho (talk) 20:05, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- Indeed, most sources focus on capturing the city. I simply think that the subsequent military operations around the city should also be covered on this page. My very best wishes (talk) 19:43, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- That's from a year ago. And I can see much clearer what sources are saying in the section below. And the general tone is that the battle is over, but that other minor battles/fighting continues. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 19:13, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
- I agree with Cinderella157 and Alexis Coutinho in restricting the article's scope to fighting for the city of Bakhmut. Slatersteven has expressed worry that this might lead to OR, but I think we have the sources to cite this quite fairly. From 1 August 2022 (by the way, is the start date clear?) to 20 May 2023, it is clear that the battle for Bakhmut was ongoing. Ukraine was reported to still hold a small southwestern tip [5] [6] which the ISW said Ukraine had lost by its 22 May update [7]. This would have ended Russia's fighting for Bakhmut since it captured it. Now we'd have to turn to the Ukrainian point of view.
- After this, we had claims from Ukrainian officials denying the fall of the city [8] and claims by Ukrainian officials of counteroffensive measures. This stage overlaps with the start of Ukraine's counteroffensive and saw Ukrainian advances north and south of Bakhmut [9] [10]. They lasted the longest in the south, there were Ukrainian sources claiming advances a bit after the liberation of Klishchiivka and Andriivka. After that, Russia started advancing towards both villages. These advances should clearly not be considered part of the battle for Bakhmut, as Russia already holds the city. The same goes for fighting in Khromove. So, since right now there are no armed forces fighting strictly for taking control of the city, we should consider the battle as already over. The question is when did it end.
- Zelenskyy vowed to recapture Bakhmut during the counteroffensive [11], we could argue Ukraine's counteroffensive aimed to recapture the city. However, Budanov claimed that Ukraine's gains in Bakhmut were mainly aimed at pinning down Russian forces so that they were not send to the south [12], under this interpretation Ukraine did not in fact aim to recapture Bakhmut and thus it would be out of scope. We will have to analyse whether most sources consider Ukraine aimed to recapture Bakhmut during the counteroffensive or not.
- If they do not, then the end date should be, in my opinion, 21 May 2023, the day Russia fully captured the city and a day after its victory announcement. If they do, then it should be, again in my opinion, in late October/early November 2023. According to DeepStateMap updates, 1 November 2023 was the last day Ukraine advanced in the south of Bakhmut. After that, Russia started advancing, thus no armies were engaging for taking control of Bakhmut. Super Dromaeosaurus (talk) 23:02, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
- May I also add, we can also wait until the war is over and things are clearer as some users have suggested. Super Dromaeosaurus (talk) 23:09, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
- Well, given my analogy to 'My very best wishes' below, I don't think waiting longer is actually a good or safe option. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 04:14, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- May I also add, we can also wait until the war is over and things are clearer as some users have suggested. Super Dromaeosaurus (talk) 23:09, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
@My very best wishes: Regarding that latest source you included in your vote justification, it doesn't even have the word "battle", let alone mention "battle of Bakhmut" or "battle for Bakhmut". While I would be ok with it if this article was titled "Battles of Bakhmut", "Battles near Bakhmut", "Fighting around Bakhmut" or similar, I consider it as inadequate given the title here is "Battle of Bakhmut", we should respect the subject. It's not as if you're just including extra, uncontroversial information. Expanding (since the end date is currently open, doing nothing implies expanding) the whole scope of the article beyond the well accepted boundaries completely changes its core and infobox depiction. I think we should only have the liberty to add info outside of the scope if it doesn't alter the article's core structure and conclusions. All sources agree that the period between 1 Aug 2022 and 20 May 2023 is part of the battle, but not all sources agree (in fact, most recent sources disagree as shown in my analyses) that the period beyond May is part of the battle. You could think of this as the article venturing into deeper and more dangerous/controversial waters the farther it goes from the well accepted boundaries all sources agree near the beach. Considering WP:OR, I'm pretty sure articles should play safe when characterizing the scope of subjects. Remember that most of the more recent info could be in an Aftermath section or be moved to pages with more affinity. What do you think? ;) Alexis Coutinho (talk) 04:09, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- Yes, it does not imply "in the city of Bakhmut". It say this is a battle for the city of Bakhmut. The Ukrainian forces were trying to retake the city recently - according to their statements. It does not need to use word "battle". It is enough it says: "For example, Zelenskyy and other officials insisted on trying to recapture the town of Bakhmut, which Russia had conquered after months of bloody fighting. Even today, Ukraine deploys more forces in and around Bakhmut than any other point along the front line." [13]. This is clearly about the successful counterattack by Ukrainian forces, as currently described on the page. Yes, Russian forces have captured the city of Bakhmut, but the Ukrainian forces continue to battle to retake the city.My very best wishes (talk) 17:04, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- While I could have simply argued that that is only a single source in a sea of sources that mostly go against that understanding, I will actually disagree with your interpretation of the article. I've just read most of it and noticed some things. Firstly, the article is clearly focused on something else. The author only does a passing mention of Bakhmut (1 paragraph [actually 2 sentences] out of 20) and as such, I wouldn't really base my argument on so few, superficial statements. I would prefer relying on the ISW for these kinds of statements (where fighting is happening, how many troops are involved, and for what goal). When the author says "in and around Bakhmut" I would immediately start questioning the reliability of the other Bakhmut statements. If he really thought "in" the urban area, that would be a clear mistake which could be explained by him simply not paying that much attention to the details of the current situation around Bakhmut. Afterall, that paragraph is only a passing/supportive comment about Bakhmut to back up his other main statements in the article. The author also says "Zelenskyy and other officials insisted on trying to recapture the town of Bakhmut" which is clearly in the past. Also, just keeping a lot of troops in the region right now doesn't mean Ukraine is attacking. It isn't even certain if Ukraine's armed forces seriously tried to retake Bakhmut right after they were exhausted and pushed out of the city. I don't think we should keep the whole scope of the article tied to such an assumption (that Ukraine's armed forces seriously tried to recapture the city, not just a claim from Zelenskyy), especially a fragile one. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 20:44, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- No, this is not just a single source, and this is not so much about sourcing. The counterattack by Ukrainian forces with the officially stated intention to retake the city is a fact. During this counteroffensive they retook the significant territories to the North and South of the city (as described on this page), to be able to hit the city of Bakhmut using their artillery. This is also a fact. Does it mean that the battle for the city continues? This might be a matter of interpretation, but it seems obvious to me because of the official stated goal of the offensive and because the fighting around the city continues unabated (also a matter of fact). My very best wishes (talk) 21:58, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
No, this is not just a single source, and this is not so much about sourcing.
If it's not just a single source, then I would suggest that you do a review & analysis of several sources to support your argument.The counterattack by Ukrainian forces with the officially stated intention to retake the city is a fact.
the way you phrase it seems a bit ambiguous or innocuous, i.e. could be technically/semantically true. But just because Zelenskyy declared something to the press, it doesn't mean that that was actually the objective of the generals on the ground. That's something the ISW would have more credentials to affirm.they retook the significant territories to the North
those weren't quite significant.to be able to hit the city of Bakhmut using their artillery.
WP:OR.This is also a fact.
thus not completely a fact.fighting around the city continues unabated (also a matter of fact).
a fact but for the wrong reasons: it's Russia that's fighting now beyond Bakhmut towards Ivanivske and Bohdanivka.- Then how about we create an article titled something like "Bakhmut counteroffensive" or "Bakhmut Ukrainian counterattack"? I have no qualms about this proposal. You could argue all that in there and we could explore all the different assumptions and implications of Zelenskyy's promise. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 23:55, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- The fighting is described as currently occurring at "on outskirts of Ukraine's Bakhmut" [14]. None of the recent sources provided on this talk page disputes the fact that the fighting continues very close to the city. Is it fighting for the city? The Ukrainian side does not hide the intention to surround the city from the North and South and take it back whenever possible. That is what they openly say. Will they succeed? Maybe not, but they are still fighting for the city. My very best wishes (talk) 19:27, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
they are still fighting for the city.
source? Alexis Coutinho (talk) 19:47, 7 December 2023 (UTC)- A lot of sources say that Ukrainians want/wanted to retake Bakhmut during their counteroffensive, for example Inside Ukraine's Fight to Retake Bakhmut (October 2023), Ukrainian troops vow to take back Bakhmut (September 2023). This is a common place. They could not do it so far, but this is another matter. My very best wishes (talk) 17:39, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
- Those are months old. You can't use them to say what you did in the previous reply (focus on 'recently'/ongoing). Besides, such sources were already accounted for in the review. They weren't ignored but put into perspective: a clear majority of sources consider the battle long over. Why should we ignore all those dozens in favor of those few you mentioned? We shouldn't because that would be cherry picking. When I have the time, I'll try to do another analysis to test my thesis shown in the end of my focused analysis (test the ratio of sources that consider the battle continuing past 20 May over the months). Alexis Coutinho (talk) 23:42, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
- One can use any sources. I noticed you work with ISW reports. OK, let's use them from yesterday [15]. They say: The Russian Ministry of Defense (MoD) claimed that Ukrainian forces unsuccessfully attacked in the Bakhmut direction near Bohdanivka (6km northwest of Bakhmut), Khromove (immediately west of Bakhmut), Klishchiivka (7km southwest of Bakhmut), Andriivka (10km southwest of Bakhmut), and Kurdyumivka (13km southwest of Bakhmut) on December 11. "6km northwest of Bakhmut". All these attacks in 5 places are designed to surround and potentially take back Bakhmut. My very best wishes (talk) 00:40, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
OK, let's use them from yesterday
👍. I've been frequently reading their reports for ages now. They pretty much do these aggregations daily, but they don't mean much in the grand scheme of things. Yes, they help the ISW mark the green circles on their maps to show where fighting is happening, but that happens in almost the entire frontline. This is a major war afterall. If Ukraine sees an opportunity to strike anywhere on the frontline, they will, and so will Russia, even if it's just to improve their defensive positions. And that's basically what Ukraine has been doing, they lost a bunch of ground around Bakhmut recently (mostly northern flank), thus Ukraine obviously will try to counterattack before the Russians consolidate their new positions. The same kind of "active defense" attacks happen in Avdiivka, though not on the Russian side (like Putin or the MoD said, idk). The Ukrainians even managed to pull off a successful counterattack north of the Avdiivka Coke Plant several days ago where they recaptured a few positions. Therefore, your comment hereAll these attacks in 5 places are designed to surround and potentially take back Bakhmut.
is unfortunate as it not only is a bold claim, but it's also mostly incorrect. Even if the attacks around Andriivka and Kurdyumivka (where Russia is mostly defending) kinda go in-line with a flanking attack for Bakhmut, they are expressly long-term at best. You don't fight for a major city attacking with a few squads of soldiers. Once again, just because you're fighting near something, it doesn't automatically mean your're fight for it. Hope this answer was elucidating. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 02:16, 13 December 2023 (UTC)- Whether fighting near Bakhmut is still occurring is immaterial to the question of how sources refer to and describe the event they have labelled as the battle of/for Bakhmut. If the consensus of sources is that the event labelled as the battle of/for Bakhmut finished months ago, then the article should be aligned to follow the sources. If individual editors are arguing that we should ignore the consensus of sources and apply our own definition for the event labelled as the battle of Bakhmut, then that is WP:OR and a WP:NPOV issue. Cinderella157 (talk) 03:58, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
- 👍 Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:09, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
- I think there is no consensus of recent sources "that the event labelled as the battle of/for Bakhmut finished months ago". To the contrary, all RS are saying that the battle for Bakhmut (on the "outskirts of Bakhmut", etc.) is currently ongoing, and this answers the question asked at the RfC. My very best wishes (talk) 17:26, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
- One can use any sources. I noticed you work with ISW reports. OK, let's use them from yesterday [15]. They say: The Russian Ministry of Defense (MoD) claimed that Ukrainian forces unsuccessfully attacked in the Bakhmut direction near Bohdanivka (6km northwest of Bakhmut), Khromove (immediately west of Bakhmut), Klishchiivka (7km southwest of Bakhmut), Andriivka (10km southwest of Bakhmut), and Kurdyumivka (13km southwest of Bakhmut) on December 11. "6km northwest of Bakhmut". All these attacks in 5 places are designed to surround and potentially take back Bakhmut. My very best wishes (talk) 00:40, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
- Those are months old. You can't use them to say what you did in the previous reply (focus on 'recently'/ongoing). Besides, such sources were already accounted for in the review. They weren't ignored but put into perspective: a clear majority of sources consider the battle long over. Why should we ignore all those dozens in favor of those few you mentioned? We shouldn't because that would be cherry picking. When I have the time, I'll try to do another analysis to test my thesis shown in the end of my focused analysis (test the ratio of sources that consider the battle continuing past 20 May over the months). Alexis Coutinho (talk) 23:42, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
- A lot of sources say that Ukrainians want/wanted to retake Bakhmut during their counteroffensive, for example Inside Ukraine's Fight to Retake Bakhmut (October 2023), Ukrainian troops vow to take back Bakhmut (September 2023). This is a common place. They could not do it so far, but this is another matter. My very best wishes (talk) 17:39, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
- The fighting is described as currently occurring at "on outskirts of Ukraine's Bakhmut" [14]. None of the recent sources provided on this talk page disputes the fact that the fighting continues very close to the city. Is it fighting for the city? The Ukrainian side does not hide the intention to surround the city from the North and South and take it back whenever possible. That is what they openly say. Will they succeed? Maybe not, but they are still fighting for the city. My very best wishes (talk) 19:27, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
- No, this is not just a single source, and this is not so much about sourcing. The counterattack by Ukrainian forces with the officially stated intention to retake the city is a fact. During this counteroffensive they retook the significant territories to the North and South of the city (as described on this page), to be able to hit the city of Bakhmut using their artillery. This is also a fact. Does it mean that the battle for the city continues? This might be a matter of interpretation, but it seems obvious to me because of the official stated goal of the offensive and because the fighting around the city continues unabated (also a matter of fact). My very best wishes (talk) 21:58, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- While I could have simply argued that that is only a single source in a sea of sources that mostly go against that understanding, I will actually disagree with your interpretation of the article. I've just read most of it and noticed some things. Firstly, the article is clearly focused on something else. The author only does a passing mention of Bakhmut (1 paragraph [actually 2 sentences] out of 20) and as such, I wouldn't really base my argument on so few, superficial statements. I would prefer relying on the ISW for these kinds of statements (where fighting is happening, how many troops are involved, and for what goal). When the author says "in and around Bakhmut" I would immediately start questioning the reliability of the other Bakhmut statements. If he really thought "in" the urban area, that would be a clear mistake which could be explained by him simply not paying that much attention to the details of the current situation around Bakhmut. Afterall, that paragraph is only a passing/supportive comment about Bakhmut to back up his other main statements in the article. The author also says "Zelenskyy and other officials insisted on trying to recapture the town of Bakhmut" which is clearly in the past. Also, just keeping a lot of troops in the region right now doesn't mean Ukraine is attacking. It isn't even certain if Ukraine's armed forces seriously tried to retake Bakhmut right after they were exhausted and pushed out of the city. I don't think we should keep the whole scope of the article tied to such an assumption (that Ukraine's armed forces seriously tried to recapture the city, not just a claim from Zelenskyy), especially a fragile one. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 20:44, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- I would disagree. The scope of the battle should be all about the consensus in sources and how they referring to it otherwise, the article is being based on WP:OR and WP:ANALYSIS. Cinderella157 (talk) 00:11, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
- Or perhaps the OR and analysis are being conducted to identify a consensus in RS when one does not exist, and to define a specific result and date when there is no firm basis for them. Sometimes war is non-specific. The fact that these discussions have been ongoing inconclusively for how long now supports this theory. —Michael Z. 15:23, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- Why don't you do an analysis yourself then?! I'm tired of your weasel words and loaded replies that only sometimes mask your true motivation. This RfC is bloated with useless arguing. Some people try to highlight the importance of proper randomly sampled analysis while others try to dismiss them and instead focus on cherry picked-sources or personal judgement analysis. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:30, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- Or perhaps the OR and analysis are being conducted to identify a consensus in RS when one does not exist, and to define a specific result and date when there is no firm basis for them. Sometimes war is non-specific. The fact that these discussions have been ongoing inconclusively for how long now supports this theory. —Michael Z. 15:23, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- I would disagree. The scope of the battle should be all about the consensus in sources and how they referring to it otherwise, the article is being based on WP:OR and WP:ANALYSIS. Cinderella157 (talk) 00:11, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
@Cinderella157 and RadioactiveBoulevardier: Should we already make a WP:CR or should we wait for another (3rd) analysis? Perhaps one that shows how the understanding changed over time or one simply considering the most recent sources... Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:37, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- I think that the RfC has run its course. While Michael has posted a recent comment, he is not a new contributor here. Cinderella157 (talk) 23:43, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
@Mzajac, Slatersteven, Lukewarmbeer, Neonorange, My very best wishes, and Jebiguess: Following my latest and last analysis of sources, the 3rd of the #Analyses of sources section, this might be your last chance to amend your votes. Regards. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 03:00, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, Alexiscoutinho, for the ping. I've read all the discussion, some of the sources quoted, and more besides. I no longer think a close of either ended or ongoing is likely. Time is better spent elsewhere.
- What became the goals of each side (2,3)? The fighting in Bakhmut seems over. The important question is how the end should be assessed? Tactical win for Russian, strategic win for Ukraine? (Based on casualties and material losses.) Or some other evaluation. Rubbled city? Have not seen such analyses yet. Too soon.
- — Neonorange (talk to Phil) (he, they) 05:28, 13 January 2024 (UTC) —
- Per above, it seems to seeon to decide who won or when, let the historians decide. Slatersteven (talk) 12:15, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
- Just noting that while this argument of "let's wait for pristine sources" seems neutral at first, it can be disingenuous/WP:POV depending on context. In such case, it would be just like archiving a topic thread after having made the final comment (having "the last word"). It would be too convenient to call for patience and attempt to lock an undestanding when it already satisfies the person. This counterargument ain't new though. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:46, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
- Honestly I'm rocking with Slatersteven on this. We have been having this discussion about the result of the battle for months, and it has gone nowhere. It's best to let historians decide how it ended and an exact timeframe. The current infobox summarizes the situation well in my eyes too. Jebiguess (talk) 03:08, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
Review of sources
The following is a report of random samples from Google news searches for the search string indicated. Every tenth hit was sampled unless otherwise indicated. If that hit was not sufficiently pertinent, made only a passing mention with insufficient detail etc, it was rejected and the next source in sequence sampled. Rejected sources however, have been recorded as hidden text in the report. Reported results were not specifically filtered against WP:RSN, though most would appear to be reliable. Any sources that are not reliable are not likely to be a significant component of the total and therefore, not significant in respect to the result indicated by the review. Any non-RS could be rejected and substituted as indicated above. Cinderella157 (talk) 10:58, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Review results
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For "battle of Bakhmut" Ten search pages were sampled.
For battle for Bakhmut (Nine search pages sampled).
From capture of Bakhmut (only 6 pages of results)
Results fall of Bakhmut (fourteen actual results returned - sampled every fifth)
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Analyses of sources
@Cinderella157: You reverted a bunch of things which I don't see as harmful to the review/discussion/analysis in any way. For example, I included some more quotes which I thought were also relevant and which I planned to use in an upcoming analysis here (wanted to do it today, but those edits that were reverted exhausted me). Regarding the commented out sources which I exposed, I read them carefully and thought some of them had subtle indications/information that could be extracted and used here while acknowledging their limitations. It's not like I cherry-picked them in any way, they're still random, therefore I don't see it as going against the methodology (by the way, I hadn't planned to expose any other sources because that consumed a lot of time, I would only add more quotes to the already exposed sources). Finally, I would like to know if that compilation of sources/review is a "proprietary" work (shouldn't be edited) or collective work (could be improved by others). I'm here to help. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 04:18, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
- Alexiscoutinho, I was going to write this in any case but I have had some RL stuff to do in the interim. As far as I can see, you added three sources that were previously hidden (plus quotes) and amended three with additional quotes. Where I have reported a source, the text quoted is clear an unambiguous in its meaning in respect to what is being discussed here - ie whether the battle is over and whether the battle was for the capture of the city. The quotes you have added are not of the same type - eg "He claimed that Russia was suffering massive losses in eastern Ukraine, equating them with Russia’s losses in the Battle of Bakhmut, considered one of the bloodiest to date" tells us nothing in respect to the question one way or the other. While you see this as not being harmful, I see that it obfuscates the key information. Subtle is not categorical that is why such sources were not reported. Those sources were commented out to evidence the objectivity of the process as described (ie my process can be verified but not if what I wrote is changed by making the notes readable. Consequently, they probably should be considered proprietary, at least to the extent that any change is explicitly attributed. However, I would be against adding material that questionable/arguable. Cinderella157 (talk) 07:03, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
- What is the giveaway from this? Can we draw out a conclusion? This is too long to read for the average user. Super Dromaeosaurus (talk) 23:02, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
Summary of results Super Dromaeosaurus, these results would refer to the battle in the past tense and that the fighting was for capture of the city
, which is a statement I made in the Rationale/background section above. This is a random sample consisting of 27 samples. Only 2 samples (Forbes, 25 July and Euractiv, 19 September) would support a view that the battle is ongoing and has the wider scope. A clear consensus exists in over 90% of sources that the battle was for the capture of the city and this ended (late May) in a Russian victory. ACLED, 2 August stands out as a source, being a detailed analysis of the battle in the broader context of Russian and Ukrainian strategies. Cinderella157 (talk) 00:59, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- That seems a stretch. A source that says, in passing, that the Russians captured the city, does not verify that the source tells us the battle’s over. The Forbes quote proves this, because it says both the one and the opposite of the other. —Michael Z. 02:57, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- That's cherry-picking man. Besides, if you think Cinderella157's summary is a misrepresentation of the sources, you could read my analyses below which do a bit of statistics and still go in line with Cinderella157's conclusion. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 04:21, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- I agree that the Forbes source is ambiguous and consequently unclear. By the review process described, it should have been noted as being unclear and the next source reported. This is the Hindustani Times (17 July):
This as Russia rains fire in Bakhmut, which it captured after the longest battle of war.
The process was made totally transparent so that any questions, such as this one, could be identified and discussed. One source however, does not significantly compromise what the sources (on balance) are telling us. Calling the summary a stretch based on an ambiguity in one source out of 27 is a stretch. The assertion lacks substance. Cinderella157 (talk) 14:04, 6 December 2023 (UTC) - Bu the way, the Forbes source is by David Axe. While as staff he technically passes wp:forbes, his articles on Ukraine tend to vary between POV and overly melodramatic clickbait. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 08:40, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
- Cinderella157, what is exactly the aim of the RfC? Stating that the battle of Bakhmut has ended, or also giving it an end date in May? I agree with the former, but disagree with the latter. Super Dromaeosaurus (talk) 08:41, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- As explicitly stated:
The essence of the proposal is to amend the scope from being broadly defined as in and near the city to being more narrowly defined as fighting for the capture of the city.
Sources are telling us that the scope of the battle is that it was a battle for the capture of the city (per my initial observation at Rationale/background). My summary of the results (and the sources themselves) support this buy directly stating that the battle was for capture of the city or that the battle has ended, be it with the Russian capture/victory. The proposed sentence does refer to the battle in the past tense and therefore, that the battle is over. The proposal also states:or something similar
. Depending on the discussion, a closer might find for the essence of the proposal but the specific wording might require further discussion (ie an iterative process). It does follow from the proposed sentence that there is an end date and there is a result. What these are, might be indicated by the sources but they are not explicit in the proposal. It is not like a referee walked out into no mans land on a specific date, called time and declared a winner. One of the sources (I can't remember which) discusses that the start date of the battle is somewhat fuzzy. My personal opinion is that the same applies to the end date. Regards, Cinderella157 (talk) 12:57, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- As explicitly stated:
Focused analysis
In this short analysis I'll only cover the sources and quotes sampled by Cinderella157 in the review above. I will extract conclusions (tags) from each source and then do some basic statistics.
Extraction of "tags"
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Counting the tags we have: city was captured = 15; past = 5; Russian victory = 5; Russian victory* = 1; goal was/in the city = 4; ended in May = 4; ended in May* = 2; failure = 2; ongoing = 1; ongoing* = 2; would retreat = 1.
Therefore, we can clearly conclude that the city was unconditionally captured as no source implied a "but" or gave any significance to the early Ukrainian claims of control on the edge of the city. It's generally understood that the significant goal was for the capture of the city as, besides the 4 direct mentions, most sources do treat it as the most important subject. In fact, only the #Euractiv, 19 September sample treats Bakhmut with less importance, as a more distant goal. Given the previous conclusion and noting that the terms "battle of Bakhmut" and "battle for Bakhmut" are often used interchangeably, i.e. no source treats the terms distinctly, I will treat the tags with and without asterisk as one. Thus, combining the past and ended in May tags (they are mutually exclusive) we have 11 sources directly treating the battle as over, vs only 3 as ongoing. We also have 6 sources categorically treating the subject as a Russian victory/win.
However, there seems to be an emerging pattern that more recent sources tend to treat the battle as over and revert the end date back to May. For instance, if we filter out the earlier samples from July, we're left with a ratio of 10:1, which equates to a percentage of 91% in favor of being over vs 79% in favor from the previous ratio (considering all samples). This cutoff is not arbitrary, in fact, it's objectively good as more recent sources have a better overview/"bird's eye view" of the situation and tend to be closer to real historic assessments. My theory is that many sources were tempted to consider the battle as continuing in the first weeks and months after 20 May because there was a big expectation that Ukraine's counterattack would be capable of re-encircling the city and possibly recapturing it in a similar scale to the Wagner offensive. After the advance in Klishchiivka and Andriivka stalled (or simply finished/concluded, depending if the Ukrainian goal was to just stop there to pin Russian troops), it became clear that that wouldn't be the case and therefore those sources reverted to the May end date to better portray the difference in scale, scope and goal of the battles before and after 20 May.
This focused analysis therefore supports the proposal of the RfC and my vote.
Alexis Coutinho (talk) 03:12, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
Recent analysis
In this analysis I'll extract conclusions from each source, like in the previous analysis, but I will cover all sources since December 2023 that contain the term "battle of Bakhmut". Since there aren't too many, there is no need for sampling. Note that tags with "*"s mean the conclusions were made based on indirect indications.
Review of sources since December
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The sources below were analysed several days ago and don't currently show up in the Google query (perhaps it's considering them as "duplicate" now?):
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Well, the review speaks for itself. The trend noted in the previous analysis continued and by now, sources as a whole agree with the RfC's proposal. In total, ended in May was concluded 4 times, ended in May* 3 times, ended in May** 2 times, battle over 3 times, battle over* 3 times, counteroffensive is distinct 1 time, distinct battles 1 time and fighting past Bakhmut 1 time. Most notably, no sources say or even imply that the "battle of Bakhmut" is ongoing. And to "add insult to injury" fighting is already clearly past Bakhmut as Russia aims to advance towards Chasiv Yar. Among the sources, the second Business Insider article stands out and gives a comprehensive and pretty historic account of the battle. It also clearly distinguishes the scope and timeframe of the battle and the subsequent counteroffensive.
Therefore, it's very safe to conclude now that the "battle of Bakhmut" is over and ended with a Russian victory in May after the capture of the city. It was then followed by the Ukrainian summer counteroffensive which is considered a different subject in the sources. Once again, a thorough review and analysis (3rd) of randomly sampled sources supports my vote and, most importantly, the RfC's proposal.
Alexis Coutinho (talk) 00:21, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
Talk:Battle of Bakhmut#Request for comment on first sentence of lead and scope
More comments/input would be appreciated at Talk:Battle of Bakhmut#Request for comment on first sentence of lead and scope. This has to do with whether the battle should be considered over or not per sources. Cinderella157 (talk) 03:30, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
- I think it would be great if we did another analysis but this time only considering sources from December. The last time I checked, there were 3 pages in Google search with hits of the term "battle of Bakhmut". Thus I think this month alone has plenty of coverage for a more focused and recent analysis. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 20:38, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
- I hope the uninvolved RfC "closer" weighs in the proper analyses of souces when deciding on an outcome. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:22, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- That discussion appears to be limited to WP:XC, but I will add here that if in the future Ukrainian forces should launch a counteroffensive then we could start a page on the Second Battle of Bakhmut similar to the First Battle of the Isonzo, the Second Battle of the Isonzo, the Third Battle of the Isonzo and so on up to the Twelfth Battle of the Isonzo. KetchupSalt (talk) 15:29, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
So much discussion about the end date – what about the start date?
Greetings all, I've been looking at the Battle of Donbas (2022) article and I'm of the opinion that much of the information there regarding July–September combat in the environs of Bakhmut (e.g. Vuhlehirska Power Station–Novoluhanske, Berestove, Soledar, Travneve–Hladosove, etc.) would make more sense to be included here, for reasons of geographic/time continuity and scope.
One thing that gives me minor pause is that the start date is defined here as 1 August. Normally a few days difference wouldn't really be an issue, but considering the legendary debates this article has had about the end date, I thought it best to check if there was some sort of consensus you all have reached regarding 1 August, or if this date could be a little more flexible.
Regards SaintPaulOfTarsus (talk) 23:28, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that a discussion of the start date is necessary just in case, to build a lasting consensus, though I disagree with this specific proposal for my reasons stated here [61]. If I remember correctly, 1 August 2022 had official Russian statements regarding the start of a new offensive towards Bakhmut, though there was fighting towards the city before. Super Dromaeosaurus (talk) 23:52, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
- Super Dromaeosaurus: I'll try to keep most of our conversation contained to the other talkpage, but with respect to the official Russian statements regarding 1 August, I've just placed a failed verification tag on that claim because the sources (CNN and ISW-CTP) actually say something quite different. SaintPaulOfTarsus (talk) 18:06, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
How should we split the content of this page?
Following the RfC closure, do you agree to move the bulk (keep only some bridging/linking information) of the text about the Ukrainian flanking counterattacks to the counteroffensive page and move all information after it (late November, when Russia regained the initiative) to the eastern Ukraine campaign page? Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:23, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, this seems like a logical way to split the information, although it's possible the Russian military regained the initiative a bit earlier than late November. SaintPaulOfTarsus (talk) 04:52, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- 👌 Alexis Coutinho (talk) 11:58, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- I already made the bulk of the moves. The rest is going to require more elaborate work. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 14:46, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- This should not be used as a way round the RFC. Sorry but until we have a clear consensus as to the scope of this article, its scope should not change. Slatersteven (talk) 14:55, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- This is not the place to contest a RfC closure. Accept it or appeal following the "due process". Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:49, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- As should you "There isn't a consensus to call the battle a Russian victory. Both sides achieved their stated strategic objectives. Russia said it wanted to take Bakhmut, and Ukraine said it wanted to extract a heavy price for Bakhmut and to pin down Russian forces in the area. If this was a Russian victory at all, it was a Pyrrhic one." Slatersteven (talk) 16:07, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- And its now been edited warred back in, it does not matter if it is rememd out, it should not be there. This is just what I meant by circumventing the RFC. We should not say it is a Russian victory. Slatersteven (talk) 16:26, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
This is just what I meant by circumventing the RFC.
Stop trying to distort the situation and framing yourself as "the one following the rules". Then you should have reverted just that part, because reverting everything the way you did was a much greater violation. That "Russian victory" status was there for a while, way before the RfC closure. I just commented out the parts that were seemingly out of scope. What was left was the "Russian victory" conclusion, because "ongoing" definitely shouldn't stay. It's questionable whether the closer should have made a comment/closure on a subtopic that wasn't in the essence of the RfC and which wasn't extensively debated though. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 16:36, 25 January 2024 (UTC)- Actually what was there for a while was not just Russian victory, nor do we get to pick and choose which parts of an RFC we ignore. Slatersteven (talk) 16:54, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- Guess, you'll force us to make another RfC to deal with this... Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:09, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- NO, I am asking you to obey the one we just had. Time for others to chip in. Slatersteven (talk) 17:12, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- Keep in mind that the closer's comment on the result of the battle isn't final as the essence of the RfC wasn't that and not much discussion was made on it. And don't forget that your comment
until we have a clear consensus as to the scope of this article, its scope should not change.
shows an even greater disobedience to the RfC, so don't come at me with this "obey" loaded word. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:31, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- Keep in mind that the closer's comment on the result of the battle isn't final as the essence of the RfC wasn't that and not much discussion was made on it. And don't forget that your comment
- NO, I am asking you to obey the one we just had. Time for others to chip in. Slatersteven (talk) 17:12, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- Guess, you'll force us to make another RfC to deal with this... Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:09, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- Actually what was there for a while was not just Russian victory, nor do we get to pick and choose which parts of an RFC we ignore. Slatersteven (talk) 16:54, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- If my arguably selective commenting out of the, then, "status" parameter bothered you, all you had to do was remove the comment marks or remove/comment out the whole parameter, like it was done afterwards. But no, you chose to revert everything, including the vast majority of which was perfectly fine. So don't try to hide your mistake, I won't hide mine. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:46, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- Only if you believe the obviously fake Ukrainian reports which western journalists that interviewed the soldiers while the battle was still ongoing disputed hard! 2A02:587:E803:3E69:1803:8589:5C6:239C (talk) 12:27, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
- This is not the place to contest a RfC closure. Accept it or appeal following the "due process". Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:49, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- We should have an "Aftermath" section in this article that gives a brief summary of what's happened near Bakhmut since, plus links to the relevant part of eastern Ukraine campaign. HappyWith (talk) 17:16, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- That would be good. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 17:31, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, we should have a section for subsequent operations. This could either be a stand-alone section before an aftermath section or part of the aftermath section. We definitely need an aftermath section to discuss the result. Cinderella157 (talk) 01:58, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
- There appears to be some toing and froeing about the result of the RfC. S Marshall, the closer would state:
If our topic is the Battle for Bakhmut, i.e. the fight to control the city itself, then the battle is over and our article should be written in the past tense. It is a fact that Russia has taken the city, at very heavy cost. ... In the discussion below, Wikipedians reach a rough consensus that the proper scope of this particular article is the battle for Bakhmut, and if we do want to cover the ongoing battle in the general area, then we should do so in a separate article.
- In line with this and what sources tell us, is that the city has been captured by the Russians and that this occurred about the end of May. The closer would also observe that the result is not so straight forward. Many sources do call this a Russian victory but it is qualified because it came at a great loss. Some specifically call this a pyrrhic victory but (per MOS:MIL) we don't use this in the infobox. As the closer observes, both sides achieved their military objectives. There is clearly nuance to the result which prevents us from simply labelling this as a Russian victory. The two options permitted us per the template documentation are Russian victory - see Aftermath section or See Aftermath section. I would tend to the former, since a the consensus of the sources we have at our disposal would label it as a Russian victory, even if it is a qualified one. Adding see Aftermath section tells us that it is not a straight forward victory. Regardless of which of these alternatives are ultimately used, (per HappyWithWhatYouHaveToBeHappyWith) we need an aftermath section discussing the result before we can direct the reader there. Our first task is to bash the article into shape to conform to the revised scope. Then we can deal with the lead, the infobox and the result - not the otherway around. In the mean time, the result parameter should remain unpopulated. If, once we have an aftermath section, we cannot agree on which of the two applicable permitted alternatives to use through discussion, then we may need to take this back to an RfC - but not yet. Cinderella157 (talk) 01:54, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
- 👍. Guess I was too hasty... If only I had waited for your reply to act, that prior engagement wouldn't have happened. 😅
stand-alone section before an aftermath
Do you envision this as a section with a similar level of detail to the section I moved as comment to the 2023 counteroffensive page?both sides achieved their military objectives
After moving the goalposts, any side can claim it achieved its objectives...I would tend to the former, since a the consensus of the sources we have at our disposal would label it as a Russian victory, even if it is a qualified one.
Yeah, exactly.If, once we have an aftermath section, we cannot agree on which of the two applicable permitted alternatives to use through discussion, then we may need to take this back to an RfC
Given the previous RfC on a much less controversial matter was so heated, I doubt a discussion on the result would be any less. So I urge us to jump straight to formal RfC when the right time comes. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 11:56, 26 January 2024 (UTC)- Without having a close look at what was moved, subsequent operations would be a brief summary. No where near the detail I recall (post May 2023) that was in the article.
both sides achieved their military objectives
This was an observation made by the closer. But there is information from before the fact that the Ukrainian objective was not to hold the city but to pin and bleed the Russians. Cinderella157 (talk) 23:47, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
- Without having a close look at what was moved, subsequent operations would be a brief summary. No where near the detail I recall (post May 2023) that was in the article.
The result is not stated
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it seems that wikipedia can not admit that the russians won the battle 196.114.152.219 (talk) 00:48, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
- Please read the RfC closure and discussion above. This article is still being "ironed out". Alexis Coutinho (talk) 01:57, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
- There's nothing to iron out with respect to the outcome of the battle. The Russians won it for certain. 2600:1702:3163:CA40:101B:AEBC:9F6A:3A02 (talk) 15:33, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
- Not according to those who claim the losses Russia suffered meant they in fact may well have lost. Slatersteven (talk) 15:35, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
- There's nothing to iron out with respect to the outcome of the battle. The Russians won it for certain. 2600:1702:3163:CA40:101B:AEBC:9F6A:3A02 (talk) 15:33, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
Russian Victory
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Russia did win this battle, if its obvious on maps and reports why are others either disputing, delaying or denying it? There are many statements indicating that Russia won, the biggest proof thus far is their control over the city. Even the Western Outskirts on the front line have been push away, further securing their control. SCPdude629 (talk) 01:04, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
- I agree. The Russians handily won this battle and pretending they didn't is ignoring reality. We might not like the outcome but Bakhmut is now solidly in Russian hands. Ignoring reality isn't gonna help us defeat the Russians 2600:1702:3163:CA40:101B:AEBC:9F6A:3A02 (talk) 15:32, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
- Not according to those who claim the losses Russia suffered meant they in fact may well have lost. Slatersteven (talk) 15:35, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
Who is this Slatersteven user?
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And why are they allowed to single handedly derail this article for months on end? 62.4.44.220 (talk) 23:01, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
- RfCs > anchors. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 01:13, 2 February 2024 (UTC)
- I have no desire to get into this Wikipedia 'lingo', just like I have no desire to edit any pages myself. I have been, as a (to the best of my ability) neutral observer of this conflict, drawn to some articles on Wikipedia, and the obvious bias towards one side.
- I have, purely out of curiosity, been following this article for a while. To state that its anything other than highly biased would be a reach. From not acknowledging the battle ended at all, to obscuring the objective of a battle for a town (where, what a surprise, 2 sides fight over the control of said town), to now being an article about a battle that decided to not display the result of the battle anywhere at all.
- And what's next? It is to be declared a Ukrainian victory, as the goal was to lose the town while inflicting casualties on the attacker? I mean, that is comical. Or tragic, somewhere along those lines. Its insane that such a take is even expressed here. Might as well declare all 20% of the Ukraine lost so far as not lost, its all one big bait, part of a master plan to draw the Russians thin :)
- And the great majority of these ukrainian morale propaganda takes comes from a single user, which again, makes me wonder is this user just a regular user like me? Or is it some superuser? Why is this one voice, clearly in discord with most, and in discord with common sense, given this much importance? Why does this one user have this agenda to disrupt an article about a battle for a town, that clearly ended in one side having control of said town, for months on end?
- What is next? Is Slatersteven gonna come here and start a philosophical debate over what victory means? Are we gonna go edit all the Kiev counteroffensive battles as Russian victory, as the Russian retreat was clearly "a gesture of good will"?
- This hurts Wikipedia as a whole. 62.4.44.220 (talk) 21:27, 2 February 2024 (UTC)
- This isn't the place to complain about users. Also, per WP:GS/RUSUKR, "Non-extended-confirmed editors may use the "Talk:" namespace to post constructive comments and make edit requests related to articles within the topic area, provided they are not disruptive.". If you have an issue with a user, take it to WP:ANI. (Hohum @) 23:06, 2 February 2024 (UTC)
It should be called Russian victory
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Sure, thousands of Russian men died to take the town, but so did thousands of Ukrainians die defending the town. In the end, Russians took the town. So it should be declared as Russian victory in the info box. Now, we could argue it came at a high cost of lives for Russians. But, high cost is subjective and relative. For a country of 1 million people, losing 1 thousand men in a battle is obviously quite high. But for a country of 1 billion people, losing 1 thousand men in a battle is obviously not high. Wikipedia should not be subjective. A win is a win. It should be put in the infobox as a Russian victory.
204.197.177.46 (talk) 04:57, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- See talk above. Slatersteven (talk) 12:07, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- There is nothing to see. Its a battle over a town, a town that ended under the control of one side, which is the side that won the battle. Stop coping and delaying, you did the same with the end date, and kept at it for months 62.4.44.220 (talk) 12:54, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- Ther is a discussion above, join that. We do not need 15 threads on the same issue. Slatersteven (talk) 12:57, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- I beg to differ. I think we need 15 more, because its one of the most egregious distortions of truth and facts, and is fueled by 1 user, which is you 62.4.44.220 (talk) 13:05, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- Ther is a discussion above, join that. We do not need 15 threads on the same issue. Slatersteven (talk) 12:57, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
- There is nothing to see. Its a battle over a town, a town that ended under the control of one side, which is the side that won the battle. Stop coping and delaying, you did the same with the end date, and kept at it for months 62.4.44.220 (talk) 12:54, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
Russian Pyrrhic victory
The main argument I've seen for not calling it a Russian victory is that the losses Russia suffered outweighed the worth of the territory they gained, but we have a term for that. A Pyrrhic victory is defined as a victory that inflicts such a devastating toll on the victor that it is tantamount to defeat. So why not just call it a Russian pyrrhic victory? Djodjor (talk) 12:26, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- As I said in the RFC, I would rather wait for historians to judge who won. Slatersteven (talk) 12:37, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- The result of the RfC clearly demonstrated that that is not how it works. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:05, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- Because its not. The only sources claiming that the Russians suffered some tremendous casualties are coming from Ukraine itself, or other sources who are not impartial to the conflict. A pyrrhic victory would mean getting Bakhmut, but in the process destroy the ability to attack again / completely exhaust its forces.
- This is not the case. As of right now, Russia is the one advancing along the entire front. Bakhmut was a hard won fight, sure, but not a pyrrhic victory. Its just a Russian victory, no matter how much it displeases some people. 62.4.44.220 (talk) 14:09, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- Not in fact true.
- So no, not just Ukraine. Slatersteven (talk) 14:13, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- If you actually read what I posted, you would notice I said "Ukraine itself, or other sources who are not impartial to the conflict."
- USA and UK media, just like USA and UK in general, are clearly not impartial, since they poured hundreds of billions into helping and arming one side in this conflict. These articles should not be taken any more seriously than random tabloids from Kremlin itself. Its the same publications that said things like "Russia will be bankrupt in 3 weeks" 2 years ago.
- Besides, you don't have to take my word for any of this, you can just open your eyes. The battle of Bakhmut never prevented Russian forced from continuing the war, from completely stopping the great Ukrainian counteroffensive, to now having the initiative across the entire front, from Kharkiv to Ugledar. In the Bakhmut area, they were never closer to Ivanivske of Chasiv Yar than they are right now. This is not an opinion of mine or any publication, this is represented by both Ukrainian and Russian war mappers, and this factual state of the frontlines is the only thing that can be taken as truth right now, not cherry picking news articles from one side of the fence.
- There are equally as many articles from Russia or Russian leaning media, but they are equally as meaningless, so I won't get into link pasting battles with you. 62.4.44.220 (talk) 18:46, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- We go by what RS say, if you do not think these should be RS take it to wp:rsn, but I think |I can predict the result. Slatersteven (talk) 12:16, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- In the grand scheme of things, Russia was never really exhasted. It captured Bakhmut, had enough manpower to mostly hold the line in the Ukrainian counteroffensive, and now still has quite some gas to advance on all fronts and capture cities/villages in the process. Ukraine, on the other hand, seems to have little prospect of renewed large scale offensives, they are committed to a hard defense. Whoever said the battle was a pyrrhic victory in the past was wrong since clearly Russia could soak in those loses (who were mostly ex-convicts by the way). Alexis Coutinho (talk) 15:01, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- So no, not just Ukraine. Slatersteven (talk) 14:13, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- I wouldn't say it is a Pyrrhic Russian victory. If anything, Bakhmut was a strategic defeat for Ukraine. For one, everyone and their grandmothers who knew about Bakhmut, knew it was a trap designed by the Russians to buy time to entrench themselves for the upcoming counteroffensive. The bait was beyond obvious and it worked because the amount of PR being placed on Bakhmut in the first place, which created a political pressure valve that Ukraine, specifically, Zelensky, couldn't ignore. It was literally admitted by Pringles himself, that the operational goal for Bakhmut was to bait and bleed the UAF pure white. And again, it worked. It has been admitted among some Western sources like the Conversation, that the UAF traded elite, high quality trained troops for cheap, disposable Wagner penal battalions. And it cost Ukraine, a lot. Given the rough casualties as per this page, and given the report from the Conversation, the amount of loss from the elite troops of the UAF was staggering if we were to take those figures seriously. Meanwhile, as aforementioned, Wagner only lost cheap penal battalion units. As far as cost analysis is to be viewed, Russia barely lost any high-trained troops. Ukraine on the other hand, had a number of its very best being bled white. And we know this because of the consequences from Bakhmut. Bakhmut dragged for months which allowed Russia enough time to recuperate and really dig into their vast defensive trench systems, whilst preserving most of their forces. Ukraine on the other hand, lost too much of its elite troops, eventually lost Bakhmut which led to them failing on their counteroffensive (I know other factors played a hand for the failure of the counteroffensive, but the high casualties from Bakhmut played a major factor too). 42Grunt (talk) 15:10, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
Wikipedia would need high quality Reliable sources to agree and specifically state that this was a Pyrrhic victory for it to be included in the article. We don't go by editor opinion or synthesis. High quality sources for this are military historians, military experts, not journalists.
If this discussion continues without the required sources being provided, it should be closed. We already have a discussion thread on the outcome. (Hohum @) 19:24, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- Reliable sources were given above The Kremlin’s Pyrrhic Victory in Bakhmut: A Retrospective on the Battle for Bakhmut | Institute for the Study of War (understandingwar.org) . ManyAreasExpert (talk) 21:01, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- I do consider ISW pretty reliable, the author has credentials in an associated field, but I expect some editors will complain that she is Ukrainian.
- So, that's ONE potential source, which is an outlier if alone.
To put a result in the infobox is speaking in Wikipedia's voice, so it would not only need to be sourced, but be the strongly majority opinion of relevant sources.It could be used in the body of the article as an opinion with attribution though.- Other editors, will, no doubt, have their own thoughts. (Hohum @) 21:30, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- Agree.On the other hand, which sources of the same or better reliability characterize battle as "Russian victory" no strings attached? ManyAreasExpert (talk) 21:32, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- I misspoke. The results section of the infobox shouldn't use terms like Pyrrhic.
- Ref what do ther reliable source say? Go and find out. (Hohum @) 21:45, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- Plenty of sources as shown in the closed RfC. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 22:35, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- Can't find, probably missed it. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 22:43, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- #Analyses by Alexis Coutinho. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 01:22, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- I see there is "world socialist" propaganda website included. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 13:01, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- So what? Have you read Cinderella's method justification? Even if you remove specific unreliable sources and replace them with other randomly sampled sources, the pattern is still the same. That's why dozens of sources were sampled. This is very similar to an argument Michael Z used in the RfC, which was confidently replied/addressed by Cinderella. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 14:25, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- My proposal is to give prerefence to war studies - oriented sources available today like, for example, ISW and IDSA Strategic Digest. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 14:32, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- I don't know if that's the most adequate solution. Even though they are subject matter experts, they're still very "involved" in a sense in favoring Ukraine (I'm assuming IDSA is like the ISW, in fact I know nothing of IDSA). The ISW is notoriosly in favor of continued military aid for Ukraine for example. Therefore, it may be inadequate to rely solely on them for value judgement decisions. We should use them mostly when it comes to reporting of facts. But I think Cinderella157 and RadioactiveBoulevardier would be more qualified to answer this. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 14:52, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- My proposal is to give prerefence to war studies - oriented sources available today like, for example, ISW and IDSA Strategic Digest. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 14:32, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- So what? Have you read Cinderella's method justification? Even if you remove specific unreliable sources and replace them with other randomly sampled sources, the pattern is still the same. That's why dozens of sources were sampled. This is very similar to an argument Michael Z used in the RfC, which was confidently replied/addressed by Cinderella. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 14:25, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- I see there is "world socialist" propaganda website included. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 13:01, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- #Analyses by Alexis Coutinho. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 01:22, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- Can't find, probably missed it. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 22:43, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- Agree.On the other hand, which sources of the same or better reliability characterize battle as "Russian victory" no strings attached? ManyAreasExpert (talk) 21:32, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- The issue of the infobox has been raised at #How should we split the content of this page? and I find I am having to repeat things because new discussions keep popping up rather than continuing a discussion where the topic has already been raised. The key issue is that the infobox (and the lead) must be supported by and reflect the body of the article. There is little point in saying "here are sources" if they are not incorporated into the article. Per WP:INFOBOXPURPOSE we don't write the article in the infobox. This article still needs a lot of bashing around post RfC before we can think about addressing these finer points. What we are lacking is an aftermath section and a discussion/analysis of the result per sources. We really need this before we can contemplate how the result parameter is populated. In short, don't put the cart before the horse. Cinderella157 (talk) 23:49, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- So, could I add a citation to the aftermath section similar to "The bloody battle has been generally considered an important Russian victory. It was the first major city captured since the Kharkiv and Kherson counteroffensives. It was also the major contributor to Russia's net positive territorial gain in 2023."? With proper sources of course. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 01:32, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- A few points. I think you have already found plenty of sources that differ on whether taking Bakhmut was important (miltarily, politically?). Major city? Was it even in the top 50, 40 Ukrainian cities by population? "Bloody" is MOS:PUFFERY, also "major contributor" to a mostly static frontline? (Hohum @) 01:48, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
important
removable;Major city
mostly a fact, it really shouldn't be a big deal whether it is included or not, I think strongly contesting this would be kinda pedantic;"Bloody"
replaceable, just needed an uncontrovertial adjective that showed that the battle was hard fought;"major contributor"
fact for anyone following the maps, a specific ref would accompany it anyways. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 03:09, 5 February 2024 (UTC)- Bakhmut is Ukraine's 58th most populous city. If it isn't major, it's at least reasonably large. If this is still inadequate, it's certainly the largest city captured/recaptured by either side in 2023. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 03:15, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- A few points. I think you have already found plenty of sources that differ on whether taking Bakhmut was important (miltarily, politically?). Major city? Was it even in the top 50, 40 Ukrainian cities by population? "Bloody" is MOS:PUFFERY, also "major contributor" to a mostly static frontline? (Hohum @) 01:48, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- I see it as this: The battle of Bakhmut was fought for control of the city of Bakhmut. The Russian goal of the battle was to take the city. Ukraine's goal was to not lose the city. The Russians took the city, accomplishing the goal, and therefore, a victory. There is no ongoing fighting for control of the city itself. There are no Ukrainian troops inside the city, there is no contest. The battle is over. Now that it is (finally) agreed among editors to be over, there was a result of the battle. What was the result? Russians took the city = Russian objective completed = Russian victory, just like Marinka, etc. Just have the infobox say "Russian victory → Russian forces capture Bakhmut" and call it a day. No "pyrrhic victory" qualifiers are necessary, as the argument that "high russian casualties = we cannot declare it a victory" seems superfluous at best and I'm not sure why we're entertaining it for this article out of all other articles. And no, we do not need to wait another half year for CNN, Hanna Maliar, Shtupun, "historians", or other western RS's to officially, openly, and verbatim declare the battle a Russian victory before editor consensus can update the infobox. But that is my personal opinion. RopeTricks (talk) 06:08, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- That would be common sense. Number of casualties vastly differ from sources on both sides, and while I do not mind both estimates being stated on battle articles, I question their significance considering its all really impossible to verify.
- What is, however, very possible to verify is the the frontline, for which there are dozens of videos that can, and are geolocated every day. Both Russian and Ukrainian leaning mappers agree on the contact line almost to a tee. And from this resource, its pretty clear what happened, day to day, during the battle, and up to today.
- Debating numbers that cannot be reliably verified, numbers that either side "can afford to lose", whether trading a wagner convict for a 47th mechanised soldier is good or not, is at the end of the day all speculation that is preventing this article from stating the obvious - Russia won the battle.
- Implications and consequences can be added later once they are clear, but I see no reason this article should be the only one with no result stated, especially considering its the most known battle of the conflict so far (possibly the single biggest one as well) Jovanmhn (talk) 07:35, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- I generally concur. Just like the infoboxes for the battles of Lysychansk, Soledar, and Sievierodonetsk, and Marinka, this article's infobox should not be held up. Delaying posting the results almost 10 months after the end date is confusing, bizarre, and misleading. Let the infobox reflect the territorial reality: a simple Russian victory, nothing more, nothing less. The casualty figures should barely factor in to it at this point when the city was still taken. "Pyrrhic" has its own implications that needlessly complicate things and just leads to more endless discussion over what should be a straightforward consensus. We do not need "historians" or Ukrainian officials to tell us Bakhmut is no longer contested. There is no ongoing battle. The infobox needs to reflect the results of it. RopeTricks (talk) 08:43, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
The problem is we have sources for all of the suggestions, thus the issue is too complex for one line in the info box. Slatersteven (talk) 12:17, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- You're relying on cherry picking and obstruction for the 100th time. If there's no consensus for a complex definition of victory (one that accounts for losses), then a simpler definition should be used in the interim (one that only accounts for territorial changes). Assessing the impact of past losses in the course of future battles in the War is something only historians can contemplate. As such, it was very premature for the ISW, for example, to call it a pyrrhic victory since the negative impacts to the Russians are yet to be seen. Therefore, we must stick to facts and simpler definitions in the interim as was done in every other article. Nuance can be given in the "Aftermath" section, there's no sound reason to bog this down any further. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 14:34, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- We are all cheery picking sources that support our version. No we should leave it until there is a consensus among RS as to what it was. And no we do not deal in "facts", as facts can change in a fluid situation like a war.14:40, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- How is #Analyses of sources cherry picking?! Alexis Coutinho (talk) 14:46, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- We are all cheery picking sources that support our version. No we should leave it until there is a consensus among RS as to what it was. And no we do not deal in "facts", as facts can change in a fluid situation like a war.14:40, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
So lets have some more
https://www.cnas.org/press/in-the-news/russia-claims-bakhmut-but-some-see-a-pyrrhic-victory
https://theweek.com/news/defence/960925/bakhmut-battle-coming-to-an-end-russia-victory
Its not just one source. Slatersteven (talk) 14:48, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
- Assuming you are replying to me: are you stupid? Are you even capable of answering anything without distorting and answering something completely different? I asked about how is analysing randomly sampled sources cherry picking, and you answer with even more cherry picking (linking to articles that show up in a "Russian Pyrrhic victory" Google search). If you weren't replying to me with those links, please say so and I'll strike through this reply. Alexis Coutinho (talk) 14:58, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
Ukrainian losses "per Wagner"
Prigozhin can be used for assessing Russian losses as he would not say a number which is more than they what lose.
Assessment of Ukrainian losses however is different and he is not a reliable source for this figure. It can be left within article body but I'm removing it from the infobox. ManyAreasExpert (talk) 11:43, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
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