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I've added a category for Islamic organizations based in the United States. [[User:Doug Weller|Doug Weller]] ([[User talk:Doug Weller|talk]]) 16:03, 14 December 2015 (UTC)
I've added a category for Islamic organizations based in the United States. [[User:Doug Weller|Doug Weller]] ([[User talk:Doug Weller|talk]]) 16:03, 14 December 2015 (UTC)

Greetings Doug. We just want the information to be correct. For instance, where it states:

"Chapters 20 through 45 are from the Rosicrucian work, Unto Thee I Grant and are instructions on how to live, education, and the duties of Moorish Americans."

This was thought to be the source for many years until more diligent research proved that this was not the case, As cited in my comment above, there are 3 other sources besides the words of Prophet Noble Drew Ali himself used to complete the Holy Koran of the Moorish Science Temple of America, also called the Circle 7 Koran. The specific one in question was ALSO adopted by the Rosicrucian order in 1925 but it predates that order by hundreds of years. I give all of the references in the above comment. Please consider the sources and follow the links provided and you can vet the information for yourself.

We do not want to fight you on this, but we have to, this is our livelihood at stake here. Peace.

Revision as of 09:36, 24 December 2015

Wallace Fard Muhammad

I'm not so sure that Wallace Fard Muhammad claimed to be a member, I've read otherwise. --Irishpunktom\talk July 5, 2005 15:37 (UTC)

I don't think he ever claimed to be a member, but it is usually thought that he was one. Paul B 18:14 5 july 2005 (UTC)
Wallace Fard Muhammad was never a member He is Independent of such a group. He hasn't followed any group before this and He never will He shouldn't be mentioned and He never claimed to be Noble Drew Alis reincarnation and surely this is a trick from the mischief makers to bring in falsehood to dilute the truth and make it cloudy. Don't listen to a word of what has been said here about Wallace Fard Muhammad. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 209.254.250.9 (talk) 22:53, 6 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The aforementioned statement is true. Wallace Fard Muhammad aka Wallace Dodd, never claimed to be Noble Drew Ali. He, according to my studies claimed to be the physical maninfestation of God, Allah, in the flesh. The Honorable Elijah Muhammad was a former member of the Moorish Science Temple, and later founded the Nation of Islam, heralding Wallace Muhammad as Allah in the Flesh. Neither Fard Muhammad nor Elijah Muhammad were ever members of this group. Elijah Muhammad said that he was quite aware of this group and even addressed them on several occasions but was never a member. We should take him on his word for his own account of his life and experiences. Why should we assume him a liar. It stands to reason that He and Fard may have been influenced by them to a degree, but that doesn't mean they were members at any time, and there is no evidence to support such claims. And to use that image-processed picture of Elijah wearing the fez is nothing but a cheap trick; hardly evidence at all. Peace!Hotep —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.58.133.62 (talk) 08:40, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The sentence concerning Wallace Fard Muhammad comes from several sources and has 2 citations. I myself only know what I read. Mr. Harman (talk) 03:09, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Fact check?

When was he born? Other references I've seen say January 8th, not January 6th:

http://www.geocities.com/spirit_of_blackness/nobel_drew_ali.htm

or

http://www.geocities.com/Heartland/Woods/4623/moors.htm

Symmetric 23:33, 8 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]


I don't know how to post, so I am editing this to post, everything before edit remained as it was. We have to remember we are dealing with a Euro-centric resource of 'information'. Fact is opinion and opinion is fact. Look at the language that is used in this article; the malevolent intention can be clearly seen.

"A primary tenet was the belief that there was a Negroid-looking population of aboriginal paleo-Americans that existed prior to the transatlantic slave trade that was subsequently confused with African people."

"he labeled all whites as European."

Free White Persons: “Free White Persons” referred to in Naturalization Act, as amended by Act July 14, 1870, has meaning naturally given to it when first used in 1 Stat. 103, c 3, meaning all persons belonging to the European races then commonly counted as white, and their descendants, including such descendants in other countries to which they have emigrated. Free White Persons includes all European Jews, more or less intermixed with peoples of Celtic, Scandinavian, Teutonic, Iberian, Latin, Greek, and Slavic descent. It includes Magyars, Lapps, and Finns, and the Basques and Albanians. It includes the mixed Latin, Celtic-Iberian, and Moorish inhabitants of Spain and Portugal, the mixed Greek, Latin, Phoenician, and North African inhabitants of Sicily, and the mixed Slav and Tarter inhabitants of South Russia. Free White People does not mean Caucasian race, Aryan race, or Indo-European races, nor the mixed Indo-European, Dravidian, Semitic and Mongolian peoples who inhabit Persia. A Syrian of Asiatic birth and descent will not be entitled to become a naturalized citizen of the United States as being a free white person. Ex parte Shahid, D.C.Or., 6 F.2d 919, 921; Ex parte Dow, D.C.S.C., 211 F. 486, 487; In re En Sk Song, D.C.Cal., 271 F. 23. Nor a native-born Filipino. U. S. v. Javier, 22 F.2nd 879, 880, 57 App.D.C. 303. Nor a native of India who belonged to Hindu race. Kharaiti Ram Samras v. United States, C.C.A.Cal., 125 F.2nd 879, 881.

A following quote from Federal Directive 15 Race and Ethnicity that this fraud is based partly upon.

"This Directive provides standard classifications for record keeping, collection, and presentation of data on race and ethnicity in Federal program administrative reporting and statistical activities. These classifications should not be interpreted as being scientific or anthropological in nature, nor should they be viewed as determinants of eligibility for participation in any Federal program."

You talking about facts, but your entire opinion is based upon federal classifications.

FRAUDS.

"reliable source" means approved by academic frauds. None of these frauds can show a treaty where as an equal freely agreeing party (threat and duress principle) did we call ourselves black, negro, colored, african american, etc. Nor can they cite anything else.

— Preceding unsigned comment added by RetroactiveFrauds (talkcontribs) 01:24, 29 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Problems

There is absolutely no mention of the various controversies related to Moorish Science. In particular the fraudulent money schemes such as "redemption theory" that have landed "Moors" in jail. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.52.215.28 (talk) 20:39, 14 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, there is quite a bit that can be added about the Moors from Drew's death to the present. Mr. Harman (talk) 03:11, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Questions

Respectfully, my two questions, one why is this group discussed in the past tense when they still exist? Not only do they have a temple in Albany NY but about 7 years ago I met a woman who was a Moor. Signs with Noble Drew Ali on them were carried at the Million Man March in the 1990s. Should there not be at least some reference to this organization today? The entry makes it look like the organization no longer exists. (Note, I am not qualified to discuss this but wish to learn.)

Secondly, why are they not mentioned under African-American religions on the index? Thank you. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.110.133.104 (talkcontribs) (00:32, 5 June 2008)

It's added to the list in the article Afro-American religions.--Parkwells (talk) 19:36, 28 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

This group is heavily active in the Michigan Prison system.99.180.72.142 (talk) 19:10, 9 January 2009 (UTC)Officer[reply]

Article needs significant editing

The article needs some significant editing to clear up NPOV issues, weasel words, generally poor grammar, and lack of coherency. I, unfortunately, have no knowledge of the subject matter (I came here looking for information myself). I could make edits to improve the quality of the writing, but I would be guessing in a lot places, so I'd prefer it if someone with more background could take the first crack. Let me point out some of the problems:

Noble Drew Ali's Beginnings First, this section really isn't appropriate for an article on MSTA. While discussion of the founder is important, the specific details of his life history either belong in a separate article or should be removed. Compare to other Wikipedia article on religion, such as Islam or Latter Day Saint Movement.

Second, a number of weasel words, such as "apparently," "wonder," and "supposedly" appear here. These add POV and obscure the quality of the information. It's okay to state that such and such a source claims that something is true, but not to hedge about whether or not it is true.

Early History and The Death of Drew Ali These sections seems good--relevant information, well-sourced, and readable.

Succession and Schism POV language: "But the truth of the matter" and "The question that baffles the communities," Sentences that just don't make sense: "But neither the less there is no minutes of record to ever prove that E. Mealy El was removed." "In addition to the names also used Moorish Holy Temple of Science Moorish Temple of Science, and the Moorish Divine and National Movement." I have no idea what these mean (they are not grammatically correct sentences). Confusing section: "There has been just recently discovered ... proof to show the Central Authority of the Moorish Science Temple of America." How does this relate to the rest of the section? I don't understand exactly how a court case can determine leadership of a religion. Courts could make rulings about who possesses the rights to use certain names, copyrighted works, or images; or they can determine who has legal custody over an organization (in a business sense), but in a religious sense, the courts would have no jurisdiction. So this section needs to be clarified and better integrated.

The 1930s Chronologically this section is awkward, since the death of Drew Ali falls in this time frame. My guess is that the best solution is to move the Death of Drew Ali and the Schism information here. Also, it is better to characterize periods based upon relevant events, not based upon a decade.

El Rukn connection? No title should have a question mark in it--encyclopedias contain verified content, not questions. I think someone needs to examine the source documents more clearly to determine more specifically how the possible connection is currently perceived.

Practices The whole third paragraph doesn't belong here. It's discussing the history of various Splinter groups, not the practices of any of those groups. This information should either be moved elsewhere or deleted. My guess is that we don't actually need an exact accounting of every single split and splinter--again, compare to articles on other religious denominations. Major events deserve discussion; minor schisms provide too many details. The paragraph also ends with an extreme POV statement that needs to be removed.

Finally, I think this article would strongly benefit from a clearer explanation of what it is that MSTA actually teaches--an "Articles of Faith," "Summary of Doctrine," or other similar information, assuming such information is publicly available.

I'm going to check back here in a week or two and see if anyone else has been able to make any progress on these issues. I would really really prefer someone else with actual source material knowledge start undertaking these edits. As it is now, the page probably should have Warning tags (POV, Weasel Words, etc.). —Preceding unsigned comment added by Qwyrxian (talkcontribs) 02:26, 13 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]


[Lending Assistance with Edits] First, Happy New Year to you all and good morning! I have made edits and included additional external references to the introductory paragraph. Your review and feedback would be greatly appreciated. When I get more time I will take a look at the points raised above as they appear to require more time than I have right now to address.

I have secured a copy of the MSTA's Holy Koran (religious text) and need time to produce a "Summary of Doctrine" for review by this group. From having studied numerous religions, although a practicing Eckist recently, it seems that Noble Drew Ali was attempting to reconstitute what was believe to be an older, more holistic religion that was split into what we call separate religions now; hence the appearance of borrowing from multiple paths. Neser 07 (talk) 13:58, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for coming to help. Unfortunately, some of what you added had to be removed. Specifically, all of this:
A recent article in the American Journal of Human Genetics[1] which refutes the multiple migration theory may lend some credence to the Moorish Science Temple of America's claim / religious beliefs where it states in the abstract "[...] all Native American haplogroups, including haplogroup X, were part of a single founding population, thereby refuting multiple-migration models." It is well known that Paleo Americans do not phenotypically resemble American Indians and precede them in habitation of the Americas. Although prognathic[2] Moundbuilders are phenotypically similar to Paleo Americans, it does not generally appear that Adherents to the Moorish Science Temple of America ever refer to, or incorporate, or also self-identify as Paleo American or Mound Builder; which would better align scientifically with their religious belief system as a 'science' temple.
The problem is that all of that information, while interesting, is what Wikipedia calls original research. Nothing in either of those articles is related to the MSTA. While it's very interesting that you're able to connect new research in genetics with the MSTA's beliefs, doing so is your own personal analysis, and cannot, as such, be added to a Wikipedia article. If a reliable source makes that connection (i.e., the church itself, a scientific journal, etc.), then we can include that info here. But we cannot present our own original analysis.
Similarly, there is no need for you to go through their Holy Koran and attempt to summarize it. Doing so would again count as original research. In fact, any time you have primary sources, and you interpret what they mean or connect two or more sources together, you're very likely conducting original research. Instead, what you can/should do, is look to secondary sources, most likely written by MSTA itself, that explain the teaching of the primary religious document, and then summarize what those teachings say. Since the MSTA appears to be fractured, we may even need to include more than one interpretation so that we account for all of the factions. But we cannot ourselves engage in the act of reading the original holy document and figuring out what it "really means". Qwyrxian (talk) 01:22, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

[Response] I was awaiting to see what the review would be for the portion that you removed, as listed above, as I was not exactly certain whether it would fit directly within the context of this particular article.

Based on first-hand interviews with Sheiks at the MSTA, referring to them as "African-American" in this article is a big No-No. What can be done to amend this article as to comply with their religious beliefs and the Racial Hierarchy Code entry R1.01.052.004? Black is a different code: R3.01. And, it was a surprise to me that "African American" is not the same as "Black" in the hierarchy code either: R3.02.

When asked on what basis they claim R1.01.052.004, they often refer to UN Declaration on the Rights of Indigenous Peoples and they appear to be pulling from [a/res/61/295] Article 2 mostly. Neser 07 (talk) 19:56, 17 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Fagundes, et. al. (March 2008) "Mitochondrial Population Genomics Supports a Single Pre-Clovis Origin with a Coastal Route for the Peopling of the Americas" The American Journal of Human Genetics 82, 583-592.
  2. ^ Allen, Harrison. 1896. Crania from the Mounds of the St. John's River, Florida: A Study Made In Connection With Crania From Other Parts of North America. Philadelphia: Academy of Natural Sciences. Pg 446-447

Factions

I removed the following from the article, and bring it here for discussion:

There are three major factions of the Moorish Science Temple.

Charles Kirkman-Bey became the head of what would eventually be the largest group, and which currently claims the name "Moorish Science Temple of America, Inc". Reportedly the largest faction, as of 1996 MSTA Inc. had 130 temples.[39] This faction of the Moorish Science Temple of America has been particularly successful in the prisons.[citation needed]

Another faction developed into the Reincarnated Temples, led by the Prophet’s former chauffeur, John Givens El, who thereafter called himself "Noble Drew Ali, Reincarnated". Givens El, and the brothers Richardson Dingle-El and Timothy Dingle El who succeeded him. Taught that the Prophethood of Noble Drew Ali remained intact. and passed on to them at the death of each before them. Similar to the succession of authority from father to son or grandson in Shia Isma’ili Islam.[citation needed] From the work of the Dingle El brothers came the splits of the Temple No. 13, and the creation of a faction headed in Baltimore, MD, called the Noble Order of Moorish Sufis [2] in Baltimore. Founded by the former Grand Mufti Sultan Rafi Sharif Bey on July 7, 1957, this group later led to the founding of the Moorish Orthodox Church and the Moorish League. The Order of the Resurrection with its Second Heaven Order of four degrees was co-written by Sheik Rafi Sharif Bey and Sheik Timothy Dingle El. This faction has since reportedly split into seven factions, and as of 1994 were represented by 30 affiliated temples.[40]
The third and smallest faction was lead by Bro. E. Mealy El as the Grand Sheik/Supreme Grand Sheik. This faction is still in existence, but with probably the fewest adherents out of the three; this group claims true lineage to the teachings of Noble Drew Ali, and has various followings by a few separate factions formerly held together by Sister D. Mealy El's step-grandson D. Bailey El (ex Grand Governor, now expelled for embezzlement). Succeeded by Sheiks in Chicago that Bailey El appointed prior to his official termination as Grand Governor and Sheik.That particular grand body headed by the Supreme Grand Council.
Currently headed by Grand Sheik and Chairman Emmanuel.Braswell Bey D.M., This group began with a few temples. But throughout the country the Prophet’s temples are re appearing throughout the US and abroad. Their quoted mission is to broadcast the prophet’s original authority to all 4 corners of the earth. In addition, are continuing the works of Noble Drew Ali. Temple #1, #7, #16, #21, #23, #24, #25, #33 and other study groups through out America and Abroad and they included in the States of Alabama, Maryland, Washington D.C., Virginia, Louisiana, New York, California, Ohio, Missouri. Illinois, Florida, New Jersey, Louisiana and Wisconsin. There are many inquires about the Original teachings of Noble Drew Ali. There are many inquires about the Original teachings of Noble Drew Ali. There are even acquires about the Moorish Divine movement in Africa, Europe and also in Canada and also islands of the off the coast of the Atlantic. The whole purpose of the Moorish Science Temple of America is the uplifting of Fallen Humanity.

First and foremost, none of this is referenced. Second, it is very problematic, especially with this subject, to start talking about the very schisms in the absence of reliable information. The opportunity exists for flagrantly POV edits promoting one "faction" over another. This has to stay out until it can be accurately sourced. ---RepublicanJacobiteThe'FortyFive' 00:06, 4 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Alt URL for FBI documents

http://wayback.archive.org/web/20040315000000*/http://foia.fbi.gov/foiaindex/moortemp.htm

WhisperToMe (talk) 05:38, 6 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Negligence

The Moorish Science Temple of America, in its contemporary incarnation, is perhaps best known for its prison gangs that operate under the guise of religion. This article wholly elides this aspect of the Moorish Science Temple of America and is thus akin to an article that describes the tail of elephant without reference to the remainder of the mammoth beast. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.42.69.190 (talk) 18:33, 5 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If you can find references in Reliable Sources that support this assertion, please use them in the article. Thanks, Mr. Harman (talk) 02:39, 28 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
It is worth mentioning, yes. However, it is clearly not the intention of the religious group. None of the teachings support this. Very similar can be said for prison gangs that operate under the guise of Islam or Christianity. What should be mentioned is that this religious group, like any other religious group that free men follow, is open to exploitation. I reject your notion that part of the group turns it into a "mammoth beast". Early movements like this one (which dates back to the 19th century) is what started many of the movements that led to the shift in attitudes towards African-Americans in the mid 20th century. (110.33.252.92 (talk) 14:43, 28 March 2012 (UTC))[reply]

Reversion of recent (March 26/27) work

Sheik Way-El:

I have reverted (removed) your recent edits to Moorish Science Temple of America. Why? Well, They violate a number of rules here at Wikipedia. In this instance, your recent edits are at odds with these particular rules:

  • Reliable Sources. Unfortunately, your own self-published book is not considered a "reliable source". This is not to say that the information in your book is not reliable or correct, but rather it means that your book does not qualify as a reference here at Wikipedia because it was self-published.
  • Neutral Point of View. Your recent material attempts to prove a number of points (e.g. African-Americans are really Moorish-Americans]]. We need to approach this subject without attempting to prove anything. Just the facts, please.
  • Conflict of Interest. Because you are a member of and advocate for the Moorish Science Temple, you may be seen as having a conflict of interest. To quote: "Adding material that appears to promote the interests or visibility of an article's author, . . . employer, associates, or their business or personal interests, places the author in a conflict of interest."

I would be happy to work with you on improving the Moorish Science Temple article, but we need to be scrupulously neutral and use "Reliable Sources".

P.S. I love the photo. Great shot.

Thanks, Mr. Harman (talk) 02:39, 28 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

MOORISH SCIENCE TEMPLE OF AMERICA.

Greetings I have recently seen your response on why the article could not be edited on my behalf. The truth of the matter is, mines is the only public book out on the Prophet Noble Drew Ali and the Moorish Science Temple of America bearing an ISBN and in the public domain. It is one of the reasons that I wrote the book.


I believe it to be in part, a lack of reason, to let non sourced information stand, and let actual sourced information be allowed. For instance, it says in the opening section:


"A primary tenet was the belief that there was a Negroid-looking population of aboriginal paleo-Americans that existed prior to the transatlantic slave trade that was subsequently confused with African people. Although often criticised as lacking scientific merit, adherents of the Moorish Science Temple of America believe that the Negroid Asiatic was the first human inhabitant of the Western Hemisphere. In their religious texts, adherents refer to themselves as "Asiatics".[1] These adherents also call themselves "indigenous Moors", "American Moors" or "Moorish Americans" in contradistinction to "African Moors" or "African Americans"."

There are several things wrong with this section. 1) A primary tenet was the belief that there was a Negroid-looking population of aboriginal paleo-Americans that existed prior to the transatlantic slave trade that was subsequently confused with African people.


Explanation: First and foremost, this cannot be found anywhere in the teachings of the Moorish Science Temple of America as given by Noble Drew Ali. I can personally email you the information that I have, which is the actual documents that have been unchanged since 1927-1928 when they were released. Also, there is absolutely no source for this information and if I edited it, just to change that fact, wiki will remove my edit and ask me for a source, when there is no source given for this particular point and that is completely unfair.


2) Although often criticised as lacking scientific merit, adherents of the Moorish Science Temple of America believe that the Negroid Asiatic was the first human inhabitant of the Western Hemisphere. Explanation: Again, this completely lacks any merit and it was allowed to be posted without asking whomever placed it there for its source. This is not taught in the Moorish Science Temple of America whatsoever.


3) These adherents also call themselves "indigenous Moors", "American Moors" or "Moorish Americans" in contradistinction to "African Moors" or "African Americans"." Explanation: This is completely and utterly frivolous as the doctrine of the Moorish Science Temple of America makes no distinction between Moors. Completely erroneous.


There are so many falsified accounts within the article and it is very unfair that the public is allowed to see such a false representation of the truth. I have no problem editing the article in 3rd person. I even set up an alternate account and re-edited the article and still did not remain. You said that you would like to work with me well if there is anything that I can get to you from my end, so that we can have a 3rd party review my book, which is approved by the members of the Moorish Science Temple of America, then please let me know because this article is very misleading. Thank you in advance. Peace Sheik Way-El — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sheik Way-El (talkcontribs) 04:59, 29 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Sheik Way-El. I can understand how it seems frustrating when you "know" something is true, and a WP article says something different. Unfortunately, Wikipedia articles must be based on what reliable sources say, and self-published books basically never meet our reliable sources guidelines. No third party review of your book will change the fact that, since it was self-published, it didn't have any sort of editorial oversight. In some cases, if the organization itself published something, we might be able to include that, but we would not, at the same time, remove what other, independent sources said. Another way of saying that is just because an organization makes a claim about itself, that doesn't necessarily mean we accept that claim as the "official" answer.
However, if there are specific things in the text that are currently unsourced, then we can certainly flag them and even remove them. I don't have time to look into all of the details right now, but I'll try to check your points above in the next few days, as well as check the article for unverified claims. Note that I've blocked the second account Sheik Way-El created, and explained to xyr why we don't allow multiple accounts Qwyrxian (talk) 07:21, 29 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Disputed

I have recently seen your response on why the article could not be edited on my behalf. The truth of the matter is, mines is the only public book out on the Prophet Noble Drew Ali and the Moorish Science Temple of America bearing an ISBN and in the public domain. It is one of the reasons that I wrote the book.

I believe it to be in part, a lack of reason, to let non sourced information stand, and let actual sourced information be allowed. For instance, it says in the opening section:

"A primary tenet was the belief that there was a Negroid-looking population of aboriginal paleo-Americans that existed prior to the transatlantic slave trade that was subsequently confused with African people. Although often criticised as lacking scientific merit, adherents of the Moorish Science Temple of America believe that the Negroid Asiatic was the first human inhabitant of the Western Hemisphere. In their religious texts, adherents refer to themselves as "Asiatics".[1] These adherents also call themselves "indigenous Moors", "American Moors" or "Moorish Americans" in contradistinction to "African Moors" or "African Americans"."

There are several things wrong with this section.

1) A primary tenet was the belief that there was a Negroid-looking population of aboriginal paleo-Americans that existed prior to the transatlantic slave trade that was subsequently confused with African people.

Explanation: First and foremost, this cannot be found anywhere in the teachings of the Moorish Science Temple of America as given by Noble Drew Ali. I can personally email you the information that I have, which is the actual documents that have been unchanged since 1927-1928 when they were released. Also, there is absolutely no source for this information and if I edited it, just to change that fact, wiki will remove my edit and ask me for a source, when there is no source given for this particular point and that is completely unfair.

2) Although often criticised as lacking scientific merit, adherents of the Moorish Science Temple of America believe that the Negroid Asiatic was the first human inhabitant of the Western Hemisphere.

Explanation: Again, this completely lacks any merit and it was allowed to be posted without asking whomever placed it there for its source. This is not taught in the Moorish Science Temple of America whatsoever.

3) These adherents also call themselves "indigenous Moors", "American Moors" or "Moorish Americans" in contradistinction to "African Moors" or "African Americans"."

Explanation: This is completely and utterly frivolous as the doctrine of the Moorish Science Temple of America makes no distinction between Moors. Completely erroneous.

There are so many falsified accounts within the article and it is very unfair that the public is allowed to see such a false representation of the truth. I have no problem editing the article in 3rd person. I even set up an alternate account and re-edited the article and still did not remain. You said that you would like to work with me well if there is anything that I can get to you from my end, so that we can have a 3rd party review my book, which is approved by the members of the Moorish Science Temple of America, then please let me know because this article is very misleading.

Thank you in advance. Peace Sheik Way-El — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sheik Way-El (talkcontribs) 04:34, 29 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Sheik, you raise some excellent points. I have attempted to copyedit the opening paragraphs to remove some of this rather strange and un-referenced material. Please let me know what you think. (Sorry for the slow response) Mr. Harman (talk) 12:28, 31 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Greetings. Yes, at least that portion is much better because it opened up peoples opinions to a falsity about the man in his movement. I would love to find out other ways to work with you on this article particularly in this troubling time when a people are still being persecuted for what they think they are. Peace. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sheik Way-El (talkcontribs) 01:07, 2 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Glad to hear from you. Yes, I would love to improve this article. I did a lot of work on it maybe 3 years ago, but there's a lot more needed, including more history from the 1930s and later and more on the essence/practices/beliefs of the MST -- that is to say that the article focuses primarily and almost exclusively on the history.
The article is also in need of a thorough copyedit.
I was also thinking that we could use a modern-day photo of the Moors. That is, like the article, the photos focus on the 1920s. Do you have a recent/current photo or photos you can upload? Maybe it's a photo of a temple service, or just one Moor.
The article presently gives the (incorrect) impression that the MST "was" instead of "is", something that I think needs fixing.
Anyway, thanks for your suggestions. Anything further? Mr. Harman (talk) 19:55, 3 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Not having heard from you in the past month, I thought I would removed the "disputed" tag. You are, of course, welcome to re-insert this if you dispute some of the material. If you do re-insert, let me know what you're disputing and we can try to fix it. Thanks, Mr. Harman (talk) 20:01, 7 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Three different official websites?

Perhaps two of them are illegitimate and should not be presented in this way, if at all? __meco (talk) 07:21, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It says directly in the article:
"...the governors of the Moorish Science Temple of America declared Charles Kirkman Bey to be the successor to Drew Ali and named him Grand Advisor.[27] With the support of several temples each, Mealy El and Givens El both went on to lead separate factions of the Moorish Science Temple. All three factions (Kirkman Bey, Mealy El, and Givens El) are active today."
-- AnonMoos (talk) 09:16, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

where did he get his surname Ali from?

When and where did Timothy Drew get the surname Ali from? Is he connecting himself and his movement to Ali, Prophet Muhammad's nephew? As a religious leader this would be an important point to raise. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.146.152.102 (talk) 01:41, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I myself do not know and my research has not given me any insight. Sorry, Mr. Harman (talk) 17:48, 23 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No one will correct the misinformation.

It saddens me to come to this particular wikipage and see the blatant misinformation. It is as if a 3rd party can publish what they want and present it is as research and it is accepted by wiki. It is like the wikipage on the Moors of Spain. There no main pictures of Moors on that page and gives the reader the illusion that the Moors were Arabians as they are called now and this is just furthest from the truth. This page is so full of misinformation. We have the actual records of the Moorish Science Temple of America and we cannot edit the page even if we have books out which is absurd because there are those who have a vested interest with keeping this page shown just the way it is. The information about the El Rukn's alone, they have absolutely nothing to do with the Moorish Science Temple of America so it baffles me as to why this particle bit of information made it to this page, but nothing truthful at all. I guess we have to pool our resources and create our own online encyclopedia and present unbiased facts. This is unbelievable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sheik Way-El (talkcontribs) 02:47, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Because, by definition, an encyclopedia must rely on reliable sources. And books published by the organization themselves almost never meet that criteria. Let me draw an extreme example: North Korea officially claimed that Kim Jong il has played golf exactly one time, and, when he played, he shot 18 consecutive hole in ones. Now, do we report on this as fact? Of course not. Now, I'm not saying the MSTA books are necessarily wrong, but they are undoubtedly biased. As such, we need independent, third party sources. If you have some, we'd be happy to include them. Qwyrxian (talk) 03:13, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Sheik Way-El -- In English, "Moor" was a vague and loose term which could encompass all the inhabitants of Muslim North Africa... AnonMoos (talk) 05:28, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Undue Weight

I removed the rather extensive recapitulation of the article in Journal of Race Ethnicity and Religion for several reasons related to Wikipedia:Reliable sources and undue weight. First, I can find no references pointing to the author as an authority on the matter of Timothy Drew's history. Second, the Journal of Race Ethnicity and Religion is a new online-only Journal and is, as well, hardly an authoritative source. Third, whole paragraphs were added to article -- way too much. I did insert one sentence describing the article and leading interested readers to the article itself. However, the article is too new and too speculative to devote so much space in the article, which is about the Moorish Science Temple, to this article's finding. Thanks, Mr. Harman (talk) 21:48, 19 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Recent edits I reverted

Some of the citation needed tags were probably legitimate, many were set next to citations. We don't write "so-called blacks", etc. Ironically unsourced material was added at the same time as the citation needed tags. We can use sources other than the official texts of the Temple. Doug Weller (talk) 16:32, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Or rather Temples, not sure if the texts vary between them. Doug Weller (talk) 16:34, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I hadn't noticed the edit summaries of people reverting this editor in the past nor the discussions above, but they put forward policy and guideline based arugments. Doug Weller (talk) 16:46, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Objective, Bias, and offensive information within this article.

Greetings. Last night, as I sat and read this page, I immediately began to edit many NON-REFERENCED bits of information. I have tried to edit this page in the past and many others pertaining to the Moors (see the Almoravids thread to this same editor/overseer). I would post [citation needed] and would give reasons why a citation was needed. For instance, Noble Drew Ali NEVER referenced himself as Timothy Drew, he referenced himself as Noble Drew Ali. Not only did he and the membership reference him by this name, the public and the media also referenced him by this name. Proof can be shown in the following newspaper article along with MANY others and yet, this Wikipedia article constantly refers to him as "Timothy Drew" and "Drew." This was not the case when this page was first established. Someone was allowed to come onto this page and edit and now, no one can change it. I find that quite odd.

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Chicago Defender reporting on Noble Drew Ali's visit to Marcus Garvey

The use of the name is inconsistent in the article. In some portions he is referenced as Timothy Drew. In others, he is referenced as Drew, and yet still, he is referenced as Noble Drew Ali. There are things within the article that have absolutely NO merit and cannot be found in the organizations religious text or literature. I will list just a few of them here:

  • "...and in religious texts, adherents refer to themselves racially as "Asiatics"."

This can be found nowhere in the religious texts of the M.S.T of A. Please cite your citation.

  • "Traditionally, it was believed that Timothy Drew was born on January 8, 1886 in North Carolina, USA."

This is not guess work or belief, this is from the man himself and his birthday celebrations were reported in the Chicago Defender which can be evinced below:

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Drew Ali's birthday celebration

Poor scholastic methodology was used in this article. Let us continue...

  • "Drew reported that during his travels, he met with a high priest of Egyptian magic. In one version of Drew's biography, the leader saw him as a reincarnation of the founder, while in others, the priest considered Drew a reincarnation of Jesus, the Buddha, Muhammad and other religious prophets. According to the biography, the high priest trained Drew in mysticism and gave him a "lost section" of the Quran."

Who did "Drew" report this to? This can be found NOWHERE in the teachings, literature or oral sayings of Prophet Noble Drew Ali which can be read here

  • "This text came to be known as the Holy Koran of the Moorish Science Temple of America (which is not to be confused with the Islamic Quran)."

This view was obviously inserted by one who holds OBJECTIVE VIEWS to the prophethood of Noble Drew Ali who stated in the M.S.T. of A's religious text that "The fallen sons and daughters of the Asiatic Nation of North America need to learn to love instead of hate; and to know their higher self and lower self. This is the uniting of the Holy Koran of Mecca, for teaching and instructing all Moorish Americans, etc." The full text can be read here.

In this, Noble Drew Ali claimed to UNITE the text as oppose to replace it as this wikipedia article suggests. What this also suggest is that Noble Drew Ali did not bring any Islamic teachings and this too is blatantly false.

  • "Drew took parts of his book from the Rosicrucian work, Unto Thee I Grant, and most of it from The Aquarian Gospel of Jesus the Christ, published in 1908 by esoteric Ohio preacher Levi Dowling."

More poorly stated research with absolutely no citations to back it up. The Holy Koran of the Moorish Science Temple of America was compiled using these direct sources:

  1. Lost historical information about the true origins and identity of the Moorish Americans, being falsely called black people in the United States of America by the most Noble, Prophet, Drew Ali.
  2. 19 of the 182 chapters of The Aquarian Gospel of Jesus the Christ By Levi H. Dowling
  3. The Economy of Human Life, Complete in Two Parts, Translated from an INDIAN MANUSCRIPT written by an ANCIENT BRAHMIN. 1806 By Robert Dodsley, Philip Dormer Stanhope Earl of Chesterfield, John Hill (first published by Dodsley in 1745) [This text was copied by the Rosicrucian order in 1925 so the Wikipedia article is wrong. A link to this text can be found here ]
  4. Elegant Extracts: Or, Useful and Entertaining Passages in Prose: Selected for the Improvement of Young Persons: Being similar in Design to ELEGANT EXTRACTS in POETRY. Published in London, 1790. Author unknown. A link to this text can be found here.

Again, this wiki article is poorly sourced and offensive to members of the organization.

  • "Drew claimed to have been anointed Noble Drew Ali, the Prophet."

Anointed by who? Citation needed and yet, my edit for a citation needed was removed by this editor. It seems completely bias and it appears as if this article is trying to shed a false light on the organization and its founder by letting anyone come and make non-sourced claims, and not taking into consideration other sources which counter the claims of the books cited in the article.

  • "Moorish-Americans drink alcohol and eat pork."

This is an absolute, and blatant lie and obviously said by an opponent to the organization. No citation was given and yet, this was allowed to be posted on this cite by apparent opponents of the organization. This is false light and slander as Prophet Noble Drew Ali urged members not to eat any meat accept fish. Prophet Noble Drew Ali expressly FORBADE the drinking of alcohol. If such is not changed within this article, we will in fact begin the process of suing wikipedia for allowing these types of statements to stand unchallenged with absolutely no proofs to back them up.

"Drew believed that African Americans were all Moors who he claimed descended from the ancient Moabites (describing them as belonging to Northwest Africa as opposed to Moab as the name suggests)"

Prophet Noble Drew Ali's exact words were "The Moorish Americans are descendants of the ancient Moabites whom inhabited the Northwestern and Southwestern shores of Africa." (Act 6 of the organization's bylaws). He taught that the Moorish people, falsely called "black" people, TRAVELED FROM the ancient land of Canaan and INHABITED West Africa (Ch. 47 v. 6). You can read the full text here. The wording of this article makes it appear as if Noble Drew Ali made up this claim as if people have not migrated since the beginning of recorded history. Not only have peoples migrated, the places they settle, are usually named after the people themselves like the name Mauritania.

I can keep going and going with the blatant misinformation within this article. If these things are not changed, if you cannot find citations for slanderous statements like "Moorish-Americans drink alcohol and eat pork.", we will be suing this platform for false light as this article makes those interested in our organization not want to join. You have 72 hours to bring your citations or we will commence with a lawsuit in the appropriate venue. Peace. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sheik Way-El (talkcontribs) 19:28, 2015 December 13 (UTC)

Ignoring the obvious nonsense and the legal threat which has led to the editor being blocked, some of the complaints may have merit but thi article is low on my priority list. Doug Weller (talk) 20:27, 13 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome to Sheik Way-El

I'm assuming that User:Sheik Way-El is the Supreme Grand Sheikh[1] of the Moorish Science Temple of America at http://moorishsciencetemple.org/. Some of his points I agree with and I've revised the section on how the Koran was constructed with an academic source. I've given him information about conflict of interest and hope he will follow them and of course our other policies and guidelines, eg WP:VERIFY, WP:RS and WP:NPOV. We can of course present the faith's views, but we can't present them as factual, or use terms such as "so-called". There's a plethora of academic sources for this religion.

We don't seem to have much on the three factions, Kirkman Bey, Mealy El, and Givens El nor is it clear which website represents which faction/sect. However it appears that moorishsciencetemple.org relates to Mealy El.

I've added a category for Islamic organizations based in the United States. Doug Weller (talk) 16:03, 14 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Greetings Doug. We just want the information to be correct. For instance, where it states:

"Chapters 20 through 45 are from the Rosicrucian work, Unto Thee I Grant and are instructions on how to live, education, and the duties of Moorish Americans."

This was thought to be the source for many years until more diligent research proved that this was not the case, As cited in my comment above, there are 3 other sources besides the words of Prophet Noble Drew Ali himself used to complete the Holy Koran of the Moorish Science Temple of America, also called the Circle 7 Koran. The specific one in question was ALSO adopted by the Rosicrucian order in 1925 but it predates that order by hundreds of years. I give all of the references in the above comment. Please consider the sources and follow the links provided and you can vet the information for yourself.

We do not want to fight you on this, but we have to, this is our livelihood at stake here. Peace.