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/* New World Record dives */

Biography needs expansion after new world record dives in Mariana Trench. See https://www.cnn.com/travel/article/victor-vescovo-deepest-dive-pacific/index.html and https://www.bbc.com/news/science-environment-48230157 plus Victor's blog at fivedeeps.com for background. https://fivedeeps.com/home/expedition/pacific/live/ --Brad Patrick (talk) 15:33, 13 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

add recent dive to Five Deeps Expedition

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On 7 May 2019, Vescovo completed a dive to the bottom of Sirena Deep, about 128 miles northeast from Challenger Deep. Among the samples retrieved was a piece of mantle rock from the western slope of the Mariana Trench.^[1]

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References

^ "Texas explorer completes deepest ocean dive in history". UPI. UPI. 2019-05-13. Retrieved 24 May 2019.

Not done

Please provide your copy exactly how you want it either in a "replace x with y" or "add y at x" format, where "y" is the copy exactly as you want it with properly formatted references, and "x" is the location in the article. Thanks. John from Idegon (talk) 00:21, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The date of 7 May 2019 given in the requested prose is not confirmed with the provided reference. Regards, Spintendo 00:24, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Clarified location of prose and updated citation for confirmation: add On 7 May 2019, Vescovo completed a dive to the bottom of Sirena Deep, about 128 miles northeast from Challenger Deep. Among the samples retrieved was a piece of mantle rock from the western slope of the [[Mariana Trench].^[1] at end of Five Deeps Expedition section.--177.67.80.61 (talk) 02:40, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ "Deepest Ever Submarine Dive Made by Five Deeps Expedition". The Maritime Executive. 2019-05-14. Retrieved 3 June 2019.

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Siren Deep Dive on 7 May 2019

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--Naadobea1776 (talk) 14:44, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

add On 7 May 2019, Vescovo completed a dive to the bottom of the Sirena Deep, about 128 miles northeast from Challenger Deep. The time on the bottom was 176 minutes and among the samples retrieved was a piece of mantle rock from the western slope of the Mariana Trench.^[1]^[2] to end of Five Deeps Expedition section --Naadobea1776 (talk) 14:35, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ "Deepest Ever Submarine Dive Made by Five Deeps Expedition". The Maritime Executive. 14 May 2019. Retrieved 15 June 2019.
^ "Victor Vescovo Makes Deepest Submarine Dive in History". ECO Magazine. Retrieved 15 June 2019.

Reply 15-JUN-2019

Edit request implemented Spintendo 22:33, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks!Naadobea1776 (talk) 22:55, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Please replace in infobox,

from

| image = File: Victor Lance Vescovo.jpg

to

| image = File:VV Mariana Trench Profile(2).jpg

Regards, Naadobea1776 (talk) 14:32, 21 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Naadobea1776: done. BlackcurrantTea (talk) 11:26, 23 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Add Chief Scientist information to Sirena Deep Dive

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Hello, in the Five Deeps Expedition section please replace:

The time spent there was 176 minutes and among the samples retrieved was a piece of mantle rock from the western slope of the Mariana Trench.

with

He was accompanied by Dr. Alan Jamieson and the time spent there was 176 minutes. Among the samples they retrieved was a piece of mantle rock from the western slope of the Mariana Trench.

The same source already cited supports this inclusion of the Chief Scientist, https://www.maritime-executive.com/article/deepest-ever-submarine-dive-made-by-five-deeps-expedition . The inclusion Dr. Alan helps explain the research in the Hadal zone in the Sirena Deep.

Thank you, Naadobea1776 (talk) 17:33, 26 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 27-JUN-2019

Edit request implemented Spintendo 04:44, 27 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Omega Watch Dive Record

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Please add this new record to the end of the Five Deeps Expedition section:

In May 2019, Vescovo brought three Omega Seamaster Planet Ocean Ultra Deep Professional watches on his dive to the bottom of the Mariana Trench, attached to the outside of the submersible DSV Limiting Factor and a lander vehicle. This dive set the new record for the deepest diving watch which passed the previous record by the Rolex Deepsea Special, made in 1960.^[1]

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Naadobea1776 (talk) 21:33, 7 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

^ Davis, Johnny (2019-06-21). "Omega Just Set An Unbeatable World Record For The Deepest Dive Watch Ever". Esquire. Retrieved 2019-07-07.

[1] "Texas explorer completes deepest ocean dive in history". UPI. UPI. 2019-05-13. Retrieved 24 May 2019.

[2] "Deepest Ever Submarine Dive Made by Five Deeps Expedition". The Maritime Executive. 2019-05-14. Retrieved 3 June 2019.

[3] "Deepest Ever Submarine Dive Made by Five Deeps Expedition". The Maritime Executive. 14 May 2019. Retrieved 15 June 2019.

[4] "Victor Vescovo Makes Deepest Submarine Dive in History". ECO Magazine. Retrieved 15 June 2019.

[5] Davis, Johnny (2019-06-21). "Omega Just Set An Unbeatable World Record For The Deepest Dive Watch Ever". Esquire. Retrieved 2019-07-07.

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+== Omega Watch Dive Record ==
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+Please '''add ''' this new record to the end of the '''Five Deeps Expedition''' section:
+In May 2019, Vescovo brought three [[Omega Seamaster]] Planet Ocean Ultra Deep Professional watches on his dive to the bottom of the [[Mariana Trench]], attached to the outside of the submersible ''DSV Limiting Factor'' and a lander vehicle. This dive set the new record for the deepest diving watch which passed the previous record by the [[Rolex Sea Dweller|Rolex Deepsea Special]], made in 1960.<ref>{{Cite web|url=https://www.esquire.com/uk/design/a28129852/omega-just-set-a-world-record-deepest-dive-watch-ever/|title=Omega Just Set An Unbeatable World Record For The Deepest Dive Watch Ever|last=Davis|first=Johnny|date=2019-06-21|website=Esquire|language=en-GB|access-date=2019-07-07}}</ref>
+Thank you,
+[[User:Naadobea1776|Naadobea1776]] ([[User talk:Naadobea1776|talk]]) 21:33, 7 July 2019 (UTC)