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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Shall review this. MWright96 (talk) 20:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Último Guerrero Jr. (2009)

• "Revealing that he was training for a professional wrestling career." - He revelaled
• "in the case of Último Guerrero Jr." - in Último Guerrero Jr.'s case.
• "it was later confirmed that there was a blood relationship between the two" - It was

Taurus (2011–2013)

• All mentions of Jr. in this section of the article should have the comma omitted per MOS:JR
• "Between 2010 and 2011 only occasionally wrestled matches" - Between 2010 and 2011, he only
• "Taurus teamed up with his older brother Último Guerrero. The team-up indicated the family relationship as they competed in a for Toryumon Mexico" - competed for a Toryumon Mexico
• "Taurus made his in-ring debut for CMLL on June 18, 2012," - Taurus made his CMLL in-ring debut
• "where a rookie and a veteran team up." - pair up for variety?
• "a tournament that focuses primarily on younger wrestlers or wrestlers who work in the lower ranks of the promotion," - or those who work in the promotion's lower ranks,
• "to earn a spot in the finals the following week against Soberano, Jr." - to earn a finals spot against Soberano Jr. the following week.
• "Taurus would team up with veteran Averno and compete in Block A" - Taurus teamed with veteran Averno and competed in Block A

Gran Guerrero (2013–present)

• "During the celebration of Atlantis' 30th anniversary as a wrestler, Último Guerrero appeared after a match to berate Atlantis," - him
• Delink Japanese as the country is a major geographical region
• "initially by accidentally causing them to lose matches due to miscommunication" - to a miscommunication
• "between Niebla Roja and Euforia and Gran Guerrero." - between Nibela Roja, Euforia and Gran Guerrero.
• "and demanded that Niebla Roja had to come up with a new mask" - and demanded Niebla Roja to come up with a new mask
• "followed by defeating Dragon Lee and Místico in the finals on the next day." - followed by beating Dragon Lee and Místico II in the next day's finals.
• "Los Guerreros Lagunero ended Sky Team's 1,223-day reign with the CMLL World Trios Championship as they defeated the Sky Team" - them

Personal life

• "It is traditional for an enmascarado to keep their private lives a secret from the wrestling fans," - to conceal their private lives from wrestling fans,

Championships and accomplishments

• A reliable citation to the claim of FMLL Tag Team Championship (1 time) – with Último Guerrero is lacking here

References

• References 9, 10, 15, 16, 19 are lacking the authors of their respective works
• References 4, 15 and 30 are missing their translated titles
• The trans-title in Reference 26 is not correctly formatting and requires attention
• Reference 28 is incorrectly formatted and needs proper work on it

Those were all the quibbles I discovered. The review will be put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 12:47, 2 February 2019 (UTC)

• Thank you for the feedback, I am working on it now. What it wrong with 28? I cannot see the problem. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:01, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
  • I believe I have addressed all concerns listed here. Thank you. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:25, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
    • @MPJ-DK: Alright then, going to promote this article to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:57, 3 February 2019 (UTC)