Talk:Old Love / New Love
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 11:00, 17 June 2018 (UTC)
Hello, I'll be reviewing this article in the nearby future. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:00, 17 June 2018 (UTC)
Infobox
- On producer: Dennis Herring → Herring
Done
Lead
- them → who?
- music critics → link to music journalism
Done
Background and composition
- Split both sections into their own.
- There is no need to use 4 or 5 sources to back up the same thing, three is more than enough.
- house beat] → house beat
- Jamie Milton described it as a "gigantic trance chorus",[34] and Dan Reilly → I assume they are music critics for magazines but there is no reference to it.
- Could add a sound of the song to the composition section, however, not mandatory.
Done. Noticed the reason for no sample. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:34, 22 June 2018 (UTC)
Release and promotion
- ""Old Love / New Love" was released by Shadow as single" → The last source contradicts the statement you made, as it only says it was only released as a single for the videogame.
- No need to use source 41, just copy the Billboard one (number 36) here.
Done
Critical reception
- "According to him, when it happens it is positive, and also added the conclusion is better," → what is positive and negative and why? I don't understand
- "Alex Young mentioned it was more suitable for the dance clubs than "six-star killing spree." → which publications, magazines they wrote this for?
- " Gerrit Feenstra noted "Old Love / New Love" as "one of the finest tracks" from it, a feeling Pat Levy" → same as previous
- "one of the finest tracks" from the it" → "one of the finest tracks" from it
- "After the release of Eclipse Embling" → After the release of Eclipse, Embling
- "Ian Gormely considered Shadow created a "sublime catharsis"; Heather Phares lauded its contemporary sound" → missing one source.
- Jayson Greene labeled it as "sexy" → from Pitchfork
- Be sure to link every writer to a publication as most of the critics, writer for various magazines.
- "several music critics graded "Old Love / New Love" as a highlight from Eclipse" → three sources is enough.
Done
Track listing
- Fine.
Credits
- Always use small caps to begin the sentence. (Wynne Bennett – Keyboards → Wynne Bennett – keyboards).
- Use – (click to copy and edit)
Done
References
- Ref 28 is dead, use the archive by adding "dealurl=yes" to the parameters.
- The Music Ninja → remove it, doesn't seem like a reliable site.
Done
External links
- Add the lyrics from Metrolyrics.
- I see the reasoning below, accepted. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:26, 22 June 2018 (UTC)
Overall
- Address the comments, ping me when you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:30, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: All done except Metrolyrics', the link is missing the LF logo requested by {{MetroLyrics song}}; the use of – which was already there; and the audio file, as I don't know how to do .ogg. © Tbhotch™ (en-2.5). 23:25, 20 June 2018 (UTC)