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Introduction

Mazhar-ul-Qayyum ( 20 September, 1927 - 10 July, 1971) from Village Dandot, Pakistan, was a decorated Lieutenant Colonel in the Pakistan Army who served his nation in both the 1965 and 1971 Wars. He was a legend.

Early Life and Education

Mazhar-ul-Qayyum was born in September 1927 in Village Dandot, District Chakwal, to Raja Amir Ali Khan and Subah Bano. He received his early education in Khewra and Katas, and later attended FC College Lahore, where he excelled academically and athletically (renowned swimmer).

Military Career

Commissioned into the Pakistan Army from Pakistan Military Academy in 1949, Mazhar-ul-Qayyum served with distinction in the 14 Baloch Regiment - Infantry. He demonstrated bravery and leadership skills, quickly rising through the ranks.

1965 War Heroics

During the 1965 War, Mazhar-ul-Qayyum showed exceptional courage and tactical acumen in the Battle of Chawinda, Sialkot. He was awarded the prestigious Sitara-e-Jurat (Star of Courage) award from President Ayub Khan.

Staff College and Presidential Service

After completing a course at the Staff College, Mazhar-ul-Qayyum served in the President's House under President Ayub Khan, further honing his strategic and leadership skills.

1971 War and Ultimate Sacrifice

During the 1971 War, Mazhar-ul-Qayyum was posted in Kharian Cantt and later transferred to East Pakistan. He embraced martyrdom on July 10, 1971, in Comilla, East Pakistan, while enroute to meet another unit for Jummah prayers.

Legacy

Today, Mazhar-ul-Qayyum is remembered for his unwavering commitment to the Pakistan Army, his strong faith, honor, bravery, courage, and exceptional leadership. His legacy continues to inspire generations, and the 33 Baloch Regiment, now known as AL-QAYYUM, remains a testament to his enduring impact on the Pakistan Army.

References

Cloughley, Brian (2016). A History of the Pakistan Army: Wars and Insurrections. Skyhorse Publishing, Inc. ISBN 9781631440397. Retrieved 8 August 2017.

The Separation of East Pakistan | Great setback to Pakistan in year 1970. Story of Pakistan. Islamabad: Nazaria-i-Pakistan Trust. 1 June 2003. Retrieved 8 August 2017.

India Pakistan | Timeline. BBC News. 6 December 1971. Retrieved 27 November 2015.