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WikiProject Biography Assessment

The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- Yamara 15:00, 4 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

That was seven years ago -- has the article improved? Now that she will star on CBS "We need to talk" sports show by women, there needs to be a photo-portrait-picture of LaForce. -- Charles Edwin Shipp (talk) 19:22, 27 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"We Need To Talk"

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Beginning Sept 30th "We Need To Talk" will be premiering on CBS Sports. [1]. -- A new Wikipedia article, We Need To Talk (CBS Sports) will be justified. -- Charles Edwin Shipp (talk) 20:04, 27 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Neutral Point of View issues

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Hey guys, I’m not touching this article yet, as the issues I have with it requires editing that is beyond my capability to perform, to be honest. But this lady’s article reads like shameless self-promotion, as if she (or persons acting on her behalf) has written the entire thing for her. Not that this is necessarily a bad thing, but it really doesn’t read like an unbiased, informational article to a third party with no opinion – and the entire point of wiki is to be unbiased!

I feel this way due to the superfluous information included in the biography: …guest appearance on some random NBC show? Co-starring in … an exercise and fitness video? Sideline reporting for sportstime Ohio? I mean, is this a biography or a resume here? I’m not saying that we should delete the article, I’m sure people would agree it meets notability, but how the heck does co-starring in “Teen Yoga” matter to anyone!?

Accordingly, I’m throwing up a NPOV tag, so that the steward(s) of this article can at least address this concern to some degree! FelixtheMagnificent (talk) 05:04, 23 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]