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questionable paraphrasing

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It was Uncle Warren's 75th birthday party and one of his friends thought it would be nice as a birthday present to give him a table tennis lesson from a coach, and the coach thought it would be funny if there was a little girl to play with them. That little girl was me.

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She met Buffett at age 9 when one of Buffett’s friends retained Hsing to coach Buffett at his seventy-fifth birthday party as a joke.[5]

was quite different. The original implies she just went along with the coach and played with Buffett. The paraphrasing implies she coached Buffett. 50.136.153.214 (talk) 20:55, 18 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

You're right. The description in the Wikipedia article confused the role of Ariel Hsing at the party (coach vs. opponent to Buffett). I've revised that sentence to match the source article. --JamesAM (talk) 22:16, 18 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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