Talk:Black Clover season 1
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Possible FL push?
[edit]All right. While I'm working on the article to bring it up to FL status and have just opened a peer review, there are some concerns that we may need to address here. For example, some of the plot summaries in individual episodes per WP:TVPLOT, so that they should not go above 200 words.
If there are any suggestions on how to improve it, please let me know here. Thanks, Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 01:23, 22 January 2019 (UTC)
- You think a copyedit request from the guild would help? FLs and FAs can be quite demanding when it comes to grammar.Tintor2 (talk) 15:17, 2 February 2019 (UTC)
- I noticed this in the first episode "who lacks no magic". It looks like the episode summaries are still a work in progress. How far have you gotten? It's just my opinion, but I'd try to aim closer to 100 words or so with these episodes; can be totally ignored though. The dvd tables seem squished up but it's probably not an issue for FL as well. D.Zero (Talk · Contribs) 03:13, 3 February 2019 (UTC)
- Yep. I'm trimming down the first few episodes as well as the final episodes of the season, and am still working on it at the moment. As we know, the summaries in episode tables are usually 100 to 200 words per WP:TVPLOT. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 06:03, 3 February 2019 (UTC)
Peer review section
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get suggestions from outside editors before I plan to take it to FLC. Any comments on how we can improve this list would be very much appreciated.
Thanks, Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 06:11, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
- Just made a brief check up so I would recommend:
- Wikilink stuff in the lead.
- The section of the lead exploring the plot could be tone down a bit using only the premise of Asta's journey.
- Explain what are some names: What is a Wizard King? This is important for casual readers.
- Will do. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 09:20, 3 February 2019 (UTC)
- Some of the latter episodes are quite long? Does too much stuff happen?
- I'm planning to trim the summaries down to at least 200 words or less per WP:TVPLOT. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 22:46, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
- Update: All of the plot summaries have been trimmed to fit the WP:TVPLOT guidelines. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 05:30, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
Hope this helps. By the way, I'd avise you to review other peer reviews to exchange feedback. Good luck.Tintor2 (talk) 16:26, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
Just a quick update: Miniapolis is currently undergoing a copyedit of this article. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 02:45, 23 February 2019 (UTC)
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