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Neutrality

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This article doesn't come anywhere close to conforming to Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. Who says his monument is "very impressive"? Who calls him "a modern day Michelangelo"? By whom was he "renoun for the amazing artwork he provided on the bottoms of surfboards"? Please add reliable sources to verify information if possible or, if not, neutralize this text. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 12:00, 19 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I've made tons of improvements to the article. It should now be WP:NPOV and mostly WP:V. Still some missing citations here and there. Maybe [1] has some usable media clippings. (The letters may not be usable, even though some of them could confirm or disprove what is still unsourced in the article, like the letter about the National Space Exploration Monument.[2]) --82.170.113.123 (talk) 22:54, 24 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]