Talk:British Agricultural Revolution/Archive 1
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Credibility issue
This article is lacking in sources to qualify the information, unless this is corrected, anyone is free to nominate the article for deletion. 90.196.221.60 (talk) 08:09, 20 August 2008 (UTC)
no one cares —Preceding unsigned comment added by 91.108.152.23 (talk) 22:29, 9 February 2011 (UTC)
Oh, contrare! We do care. This article is written from a biased perspective. The phrase "life, liberty and property" pops up too many times to be innocent. To mention the origins of the agricultural revolution without proper consideration of how enclosures violated all three (sometimes, too often) reveals the bias.Beau in NC (talk) 17:28, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
- The article has been largely rewritten, with much reference to Overton (1996), a high quality source.Phmoreno (talk) 18:18, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
- It can however be improved, by more precise dating: the open-crop system we now know from the strip-farming found in England to be pre-Celtic, not mediaeval, and the three-crop rotation possibly of Arabic origins, imported in the spanish translations of the 13th Century.
- You should also add a link from the Agronomy meme. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 176.252.227.106 (talk) 16:38, 25 January 2015 (UTC)
Expert
Is this article still in need of review by an expert after the recent edits of the past 1-2 weeks? --Galaxydog2000 00:39, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
- As I said below, I'm no expert... But you can probably safely remove the expert tag, as I think the outstanding problem at the time of tagging, that a possibly discounted historical view was being presented as definitive, is now resolved. I think the lead is now sufficiently vague... --Tsavage 02:40, 3 February 2006 (UTC)
- The article is now in reasonably good shape. This discussion should be archived.Phmoreno (talk) 18:21, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
Traditional interpretation
This is a traditional interpretation of the 'Agricultural Revolution', a top-down perspective focussing on the effects of innovative landlords. Historiography on the subject has developed a great deal, and nowadays the 'yeoman's agricultural revolution' interpretation is more fashionable: that small yeoman farmers were the driving force behing the changes that allowed agricultural probuction to keep up with the population boom of the nineteenth century. Recommend a rewrite. --81.136.125.40 01:38, 5 Jan 2005 (UTC)
- I'm no expert, but I do understand the problem. I've started the realignment with some additions to the lead. --Tsavage 01:54, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
It's more fashionable amongst leftist historians (the bias is fairly obvious, they of course want to discredit evil upper class landlords and make everything a "[people's revolution etc), obviously the viewpoint should be accounted for, but that doesn't mean a rewrite, just additions. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.185.35.67 (talk) 12:14, 22 January 2014 (UTC)
How massive is "massive"?
I came ot this article to try to answer a question on the topic: how greatly did agricultural yields rise over history? The article starts by noting the English system resulted in massive increases in yield, but there is no number put to this claim.
Anyone know? There has to be a good chart out there somewhere. A friend who used to work in Uganda claimed it was something like 3 bushels per acre of corn there vs. about 22 in Europe, but that's against the most modern European methods. Maury 11:48, 10 Jun 2005 (UTC)
I added a statistic:
- In 1870, Britain was producing three times as much food as it was in 1700.
--LakeHMM 00:46, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
Request for help
I've just added Expert and Agri-stub tags to the article, after briefly trying to edit the opening paragraphs. This article needs more work to bring it up to encyclopedic quality IMO, and I hope it will get it. Cheers, Madmagic 20:27, 13 December 2005 (UTC)
Terrible threshing machine pun
That really is a horrible pun regarding the threshing machine being the last straw. It really should be replaced with a more, um, professional? statement... Thoughts? 142.176.115.63 (talk) 01:51, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
Content outside of time frame
The current mechanization of agriculture section discusses various modern agricultural technologies, such as Caterpillar D4's and Model F tractors, which is irrelevant to the British Agricultural Revolution between the 15th century and the 19th century, as they fall within the 20th century. TastyGrue (talk) 03:45, 3 April 2012 (UTC)TastyGrue
- I have removed it for the reason you state. cheers Geopersona (talk) 06:41, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
Geographical scope
Hello, this article is about developments in British agriculture, however developments on the Continent are also mentioned. The article is linked to articles in other languages with a broader geographical scope, like fr:Révolution agricole and de:Landwirtschaftliche Revolution. I think this is confusing. History of agriculture has a section "Europe" but this is about the Middle ages, there is only a very small and global section about the Early modern period. I think this is an omission. Bever (talk) 21:31, 21 September 2013 (UTC)
- I agree, and with the points raised above about time period. All of this pales into insignificance beside the lack of sources and poor quality of the prose. I tried to start a copy edit today, but I abandoned the effort as the current text may be irredeemable. I am not quite sure what to suggest: we could take out the irrelevant non-British and out of period stuff and go from there or we could just go grab some basic books and start all over again with a concise and reliably sourced version.--SabreBD (talk) 21:40, 21 September 2013 (UTC)
Needs major revision
Based on reading Overton, Mark (1996). Agricultural Revolution in England: The transformation if the agrarian economy 1500-1850. Cambridge University Press. ISBN 978-0-521-56859-3. I think much of this article is off topic. Phmoreno (talk) 04:12, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
- Then use the source to revise it... but take care of existing sourced material, there may be differences of published academic opinion here. Mind you, a lot of the material is certainly way off the subject, and some sections are entirely unsourced. A bit of slash and burn may be in order. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:56, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
- I think I am rapidly moving in to the slash and burn camp. So much of the current article is unsourced that it is probably too much of a daunting task to improve it. It may be better to go down to a smaller more focused article and work from there with sourced material.--SabreBD (talk) 13:11, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
- OK, we better get on with it then. I've made a first pass - I found that even where there were refs, they were often poor or only marginally relevant, the writing rambling and essaylike. More can be cut. Starting afresh might be best. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:01, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
- I have several pages of notes from Overton (1996) and a good enough understanding of the material to get started with a major re-edit, but I have a busy week ahead and will not be able to do that much. However; I should be able to put together a highlights section following the lede that will give an overview of the important developments. Overton is my only strictly relevant source, but it I believe it may be a standard reference on the subject because I have seen it cited so often.Phmoreno (talk) 03:05, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
- OK, we better get on with it then. I've made a first pass - I found that even where there were refs, they were often poor or only marginally relevant, the writing rambling and essaylike. More can be cut. Starting afresh might be best. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:01, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
- I think I am rapidly moving in to the slash and burn camp. So much of the current article is unsourced that it is probably too much of a daunting task to improve it. It may be better to go down to a smaller more focused article and work from there with sourced material.--SabreBD (talk) 13:11, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
- Then use the source to revise it... but take care of existing sourced material, there may be differences of published academic opinion here. Mind you, a lot of the material is certainly way off the subject, and some sections are entirely unsourced. A bit of slash and burn may be in order. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:56, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
- Hello. Please be mindful to make notes about deleting content with references. Blue Rasberry (talk) 14:23, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
- I will read through the existing article and try to move anything that is well written and sourced to the appropriate section.Phmoreno (talk) 15:21, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
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Reader Comment, shocked at changes
I started using this article as a reference for innovations in british farming in January 2014. Returning to it today in March 2014 I'm shocked at how much material has been removed. I understand that this is done for the most part to improve the accuracy but the devastation to the section on "Advances that helped the Agricultural Revolution" seems to me, as a reader, unnecessary. The section provided a good context for how the change was driven by inventions in both tools and processes. While many of the milestones were not referenced, and I assume that is the problem, they could easily be checked by the reader. The almost complete removal of this section seems like overkill - in the form that the section was presented in January 2014 it appeared to me as a neophyte a good starting place and very relevant to topic of the page.
Dorich123 (talk) 16:06, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
- I read the section "Advances that helped the Agricultural Revolution" carefully to see if anything was salvageable. The problem with it in general is that it discussed a lot of topics that were not related to agriculture. Also, many of the technologies mentioned post dated the 1700-1850 period. Some were invented pre 1850, like the railroad, telegraph, guano and Chilean nitrates, but did not become widespread by 1850. This is especially true of farm implements like horse drawn reapers, binders and harvesters and the threshing machine. If you read the entire article you will see many of the technologies from the deleted section listed in their appropriate new sections. I would also add that my edit is based on Overton (1996), which is one of the standard sources for this topic. If the writer of the deleted section had at least one good reference relating any claim to the British Agricultural Revolution, that claim would not have been deleted.Phmoreno (talk) 19:43, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
Farmer displacement
While giving the figures showing a drop in number of farmers, the article doesn't mention the displacement of farm families. Sam Johnson realizes "something is wrong" on his doubly-chronicled A Journey to the Western Islands of Scotland (by himself and another by Boswell), but insufficiently schooled in agricultural history to understand how what he is observing fits in. Something clearly happened in England some time earlier than Scotland, but not really chronicled. In all cases, families who had tilled the land for generations were kicked off, quite legally, from their leaseholds. Often with no place to go. Some literally starved. Others were booted out in winter and froze. Others, more fortunate, emigrated.
Better chronicled, because it was later and affected more people, was the Irish famine. While the latter was triggered by a potato fungus, it also "solved" in the worst way possible, overfarming and agricultural inefficiencies. In all these cases, efficiency of production was the key to change. The point being that there were "casualties." As today, in the US, the number of farms drops by 1% annually and production continues to go up. At least, the revolution has stabilized. Student7 (talk) 20:28, 3 June 2014 (UTC)
- Note that serfdom was obsolete in England 15th-16th century, resulting in out-migration to cities. Prior to that (12th century, e.g.), villeins, who could manage to run off and spend a year in town, were then free. The King's way of enhancing low wage jobs in town; and he could tax towns a lot easier than rural areas, owned by nobles. But also out-migration from farms. So it had gone on, in other ways for a long time. Student7 (talk) 15:01, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
- Article a bit misnamed as it included England and Wales, but not Scotland nor Ireland. Student7 (talk) 15:12, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
- Be careful about an over-precise definition of serfdom - Flora Thompson's descriptions of the village economy in the book of Lark Rise To Candleford shows that although the legal system may not have allowed the Lord of the Manor to haul a runaway back, none the less the town economy was not always the improvement of living conditions dreamed of - that mechanism is described in many areas in Henry Mayhew's 1851 London Labour and the London Poor (I would like a similar reference for the mill towns: to demonstrate my fundamental ignorance, the closest we may have are Arnold Bennett's fictional descriptions of the Potteries). As regards the mining communities, AJ Cronin's works, particularly The Citadel, take a similar fictionalised documentary role, and were pivotal in the establishment of the National Health Service. There were, and are, more forms of serfdom than the legal. Indeed, if one examines the etymology, the idea of servitude in its different degrees of slavery, bondsmanship, serfdom and life in service reflects the gradual breakdown of the feudal system into a class-based heirarchy - which is another way of saying it hasn't broken down at all in the UK. We still have a number of hereditary peers exercising real authority over the legislature in the House of Lords, and although the class system has to some extent opened, access to it is stil to a great extent restricted by wealth or the more esoteric qualities of leadership. In all instances, the ties include those of family, which can tie generation after generation to the same locality: it was only with the rise of the Social Welfare State model that the dependence of the elderly on their children was eased, and that may not be able to endure.
- The Scottish question was far more bounded by the relative timing of the Industrial Revolution falling hard on the heels on the defeat of the Scottish monarchy, producing a far more restricted Agricultural Revolution as much of the land is far more marginal than suitable for the real benefits to be gained, and with the population less minded to comply, the result was Clearance on a far wider and more brutal scale than the Enclosures in the UK (which should not be read as meaning the Enclosures were not brutal). The situation in Ireland was not dissociated from that either, although it had a pre-conditioning from Tudor times in the growth of Protestantism: there may be a case to be made that in both instances, this may be an early example of the conflict between the power of industrial combines and other loyalties, such as tribal and religious affiliations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 176.25.142.238 (talk) 11:08, 2 April 2015 (UTC)
Timing
In the first paragraph we need an accurate statement for just when the Agricultural revolution was happening? Obviously the historiography gives us different perspectives:
- Marx described the proletariat's perspective, running approx from mid-18th Century to mid 19th. [1]
- although Poor relief was put on a formal national footing from 1601, displaced workers were being controlled through settlement laws from 1666 [2]
- the big Union systems were changed to deter the large number of claimants (1722) or take on huge numbers of dispossessed ag. labs from 1782, throughout the 19th. [3]
- Individual Inclosure Acts were being passed during the C18th & C17th.
- Inventions for mechanization started to arrive from 1701
I'd therefore say from mid C17th through 19th. Anyone advise better? Ephebi (talk) 08:52, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
- I'd expected the article to cover say c. 1750-1850. Johnbod (talk) 21:25, 9 September 2013 (UTC)
- The period dating has been revised based on Overton (1996).Phmoreno (talk) 18:27, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
Clover and turnips were already significant by 1700 and yields above those of European competitors: England had even recently become a significant net grain exporter while prices were generally low. It didn't start in 1700, still less 1750. I've extended the range accordingly. Mark Overton (a fine scholar and a decent chap) has one position on the matter, others have theirs. Some (Greg Clark isn't alone) survey 400 years of output growth and ask "Revolution? Huh??" It really depends what we're measuring: 1700 is a turning-point for aggregate output (but then so is 1470), but 1650 better represents the emergence of new techniques and the upturn in per capita output and more so of labour productivity. Note I kept a vague "between", rather than setting dates. "Between" means it could be considered shorter. Revolutionary or not, it's also part of an evolution, and why anyone should seek to exclude the key early period is beyond me. We should strive to accommodate diverse viewpoints, and we can. Chiffrephile (talk 02:37, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
Major revision
The major revision seems to be underway with much inappropriate and unsourced material already removed. I added a major changes and innovations section after the lede and hopefully will be able to start a subsection on each bullet item in the next few days.Phmoreno (talk) 15:10, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
- Update: Finished a rough first pass. Planning to rewrite Enclosure, which is going to be complicated and may take several days, possibly a week, depending on my schedule. Also will sort through and revise crop rotation and incorporate some parts of it into other sections where it now belongs after the section title change.Phmoreno (talk) 03:05, 2 March 2014 (UTC)
I've attempted a revision which may or may not be major: there was a lot of nonsense/irrelevance to be corrected/removed. It still needs work. But the title is nonsense. Nobody in the field talks about a "British Agricultural Revolution", because Scottish conditions and experience were so different. That there's a "British Agricultural Revolution" entry (which doesn't address Scotland) and another for "Scottish Agricultural Revolution" should alone show it's nonsense. The two should be renamed "Agricultural Revolution in England" and "Agricultural Revolution in Scotland" (I'd welcome "Agricultural Revolution in Wales" too if anyone's up to starting it. "British Agricultural Revolution" needs to go: it's frankly embarrassing to contribute to. Chiffrephile (talk) 14:54, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
Table deletion
I've deleted the utterly ludicrous population table under "British agriculture 1800–1900". The "Britain" figures were absurd - England alone to 1851, England, Wales, Scotland and all Ireland in 1901, Great Britain and Northern Ireland thereafter, and incredibly with annual growth rates inserted between entirely different areas, at least one of which didn't even relate remotely to the two (bizarrely compatible) numbers it was supposedly referring to. The estimate of 700,000 for London's population in 1700 was far in excess of any estimate I've ever seen, and I've seen most of the intelligent ones and some that weren't. But the crowning idiocy was the "rural" population - England was 64% urban in 1801? Obviously it's an incompetent garbling of the agricultural share of the labour force (though the percentages for 1500 and 1600 didn't even plausibly indicate that, and even the broadly sound 36% in 1801 is now thought a minimum counting family members engaged in production). It's annoying because a few of the numbers were valid and clearly mangled from reputable sources (Mitchell/Deane/Cole and Wrigley/Schofield). Deletion may seem drastic, but am I really to wade through each indicated source (at least one of which was defective, but scarcely claiming academic pretensions for it to be named & shamed), reassemble each aggregate or recalculate each rate or percentage? I doubt anyone has the time to repair this awful mess, which is why it's gone. Chiffrephile (talk) 17:58, 23 June 2015 (UTC)
Geography problem
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This article mentions "Flanders" as being part of present day Belgium, yet the Flanders article, mentions Belgium as well as France and The Netherlands, which is the correct geographical location? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 78.105.213.178 (talk) 01:23, 9 May 2009 (UTC)
"The northwestern fifth of Belgium, the Nord département of France and a small southwestersn coastal strip of the modern Netherlands" would have sufficed, unless you're including Artois. I'll move this rambling piece to the Flanders entry unless anyone has a sensible objection. Chiffrephile (talk) 19:51, 23 June 2015 (UTC) |
Material archived
I have moved old discussions to Talk:British Agricultural Revolution/Archive 1 to make this page more usable. Catfish Jim and the soapdish 14:21, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
Unsupported synthesis tag
Re. Section on major developments and innovations: An unsupported synthesis tag for the following passage:
The British Agricultural Revolution was the result of the complex interaction of social, economic and farming technology changes. Major developments and innovations include:
I'm not sure which sentence the tag addresses; however, Overton (1996) essentially says this. The social-economic change is refers to the ending of feudal relationships, the legal details of land ownership (which are complex), the enclosure movement, the development of a market economy, the elimination of trade barriers, etc. and other changes. I haven't read Marx but he was a good historian who discussed social and economic changes from feudalism to capitalism and perhaps some of his work would be suitable for reference to these points. However: "Marx was incorrect about enclosure driving the proletariat off the land. It was only one factor. The proportion of the workforce engaged in agriculture had been declining." (Overton, 1996, p-192)
If you have a better way to describe this and would like to expand on the short description, then by all means please do so. Anything in the list of technologies/changes not referenced in Overton (1996) should have another reference in a separate section. If not, then a reference needed tag is appropriate.Phmoreno (talk) 12:50, 19 July 2015 (UTC)
I'm not sure either what the tag referred to specifically: the sentence seems fairly uncontentious - vague, but then so are the causes. My only beef would be that the process was driven until the C19 by changes in technique (methods) rather than technology (hardware). I took the liberty of changing "sparked" to "accelerated": the old customary labour was already in retreat by the 1270s (Kosminsky), and the classical order of directly-run demesnes had been changing as early as the C12 with the emergence of "farming", originally the leasing of estates (Dyer). Your Overton quote implies Marx wasn't wrong, just incomplete - but then so was everyone's analysis in the C19 (we're still not quite there yet). It's certainly true though that the agricultural share of the labour force had been in decline for probably centuries - one has only to look at urbanisation, the rise of rural weaving & mining, and the growth of trade that engaged a host of intermediaries from farm to city. Chiffrephile (talk) 02:15, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
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