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Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: It's always interesting to hear about ice cream. Thanks for starting this article :).

Clovermoss (talk) 01:42, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk01:43, 23 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Mx. Granger (talk). Self-nominated at 10:45, 11 July 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Good job with the article; it is well-written, sourced, neutral, plagiarism-free, long enough, and new enough. The hook is interesting too. Link20XX (talk) 15:33, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Mx. Granger and Link20XX: From reading the article, it seems like the listed ingredients are actually favours of ice cream, so I think a more accurate hook would be:
Thoughts? Z1720 (talk) 15:24, 20 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not opposed to any of those hooks. I previously stated that I think the article is fine (which I stand by), and since that is a bit more accurate, I can't see any reason to oppose. Link20XX (talk) 15:26, 20 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Link20XX: If the above hooks are approved, can you add another green tick below so that the preppers know this is ready? Z1720 (talk) 15:37, 20 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Should be good to go. Link20XX (talk) 15:41, 20 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The alt hooks are fine, but I prefer the original hook because it more precisely follows the sources – aged cheese is both an ingredient and a flavor, but bird's nest is only mentioned as an ingredient (a filling in one of the ice cream products) in the cited source. I also think the original hook is more "hooky", but I suppose that's a matter of opinion. —Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 20:14, 20 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]