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Generation
[edit]Is this 10th generation? --Jobu0101 (talk) 16:12, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
No. 115.66.29.26 (talk) 11:47, 29 August 2016 (UTC) 115.66.29.26
Using "the"
[edit]Hello, everyone
While the use of articles in English can sometimes be tricky, I expect any editor should know the basic rules of it. For the starter, you can study WP:THE and the Grammar Girl article "When to Use Articles Before Nouns". For a more thorough reading, you can consult a grammar book like Advanced Grammar in Use chapters 44 through 47 or Modern English: A Practical Reference Guide chapter 7.
But the basic rule is: Proper nouns, definite names and plural nouns do not need a definite article. So, most of the times, it is "iPhone" not "the iPhone".
There are two exceptions:
- When "iPhone" is not the core noun, and so "the" applies to the core noun that appears after "iPhone. e.g. "the iPhone design". The core here is "the design".
- When metonymical deletion occurs, i.e. "the iPhone" really stands for "the iPhone device". e.g. "My father bought us three iPhones. One of them stopped working that night. We couldn't make it work so we returned the iPhone for repairs." This applies only to computer hardware; computer software are totally exempt from this rule. e.g you never hear "Red Alerts"; it is always two copies of Red Alert.
Best regards,
Codename Lisa (talk) 14:15, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Codename Lisa:, I invite you (and other editors who may be interested) to read these two articles which were written by an English teacher. They discuss using the definite article with the names of manufactured products and inventions. The second one specifically discusses the iPhone.
- http://masteringarticles.com/inventions-product-names/ (See Rule 6.6)
- http://masteringarticles.com/definite-article-iphone/
- 2601:5C2:100:9A1:3D84:8C90:84FC:BC34 (talk) 02:11, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- Hi. These articles seem to come from a self-published blog with no by-line, no date and no identification means whereas my sources are books by reputable publishers (Cambridge University Press no less). They could very well be your blog posts!
- You'd forgive my skepticism but I also see that your IP address resembles the IP of certain troll that only seeks to dispute me. (He once claimed he is just trying to edit like everyone else, but he has certainly not offered any assistance.)
- Best regards,
- Codename Lisa (talk) 08:47, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Codename Lisa: The Grammar Girl article doesn't address this situation since it is only discussing time. Do the others discuss product names specifically? If so, can you please narrow down the reference to specific pages or rules that apply to product names?
- On the other hand, here is a Wall Street Journal article which also specifically discusses the iPhone as well as Apple's history of improper grammar use in marketing:
- http://www.wsj.com/articles/SB10001424053111903895904576546910525327024
- 2601:5C2:100:9A1:98ED:C19:4902:B940 (talk) 11:42, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- I didn't know WSJ cares about linguistic articles. Nevertheless, it says "Place No Faith in Articles" and "They're going AWOL". It says sentences like "Kindle is succeeding" and "buy iPhone" are getting common. I will use this source the next time I removed articles. Thanks a lot. :)
- Advanced Grammar in Use specifically talks about hardware products but it has no guideline brand names except the general rule: No definite articles before definite nouns, proper names and plurals. It would be ideal to have a source that explains why people once used "the" before hardware brand names in violation of the general rule. But as WSJ says, they don't violate anymore.
- Best regards,
- Codename Lisa (talk) 12:19, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Codename Lisa: Nice try, but to quote from the above article:
Branding gurus defend the "the" omission. "When you can drop an article, the brand takes on a more iconic feel," argues Allen Adamson, managing director of WPP Group PLC's branding agency, Landor Associates. But grammarians disagree. Theodore Bernstein's 1965 tome "The Careful Writer," dedicates two pages to omitting articles, which he called a "disfigurement of the language." He warns: "When the writer is tempted to lop it off, he should ask himself whether he would as readily delete the other articles in his sentence. Would we write, 'Main feature of combined first floors of new building will be spacious hospitality area'? Obviously not." The Wall Street Journal style calls for inserting articles before product names, except in quotations, even if companies omit them, says stylebook editor Paul Martin."
- @Codename Lisa: Nice try, but to quote from the above article:
- That's pretty much it. What are you trying to say? —Codename Lisa (talk) 15:53, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- Interesting find. It seems that my intuition with respect to this branding aspect was not that far-fetched after all. WP:THE is not binding here, as that convention deals specifically with lemmas, not body text. It offers no further guidance on the use of articles either and does not even mention this specific case of brand or product names. I suppose that the Manual of Style has no relevant entry either. Maybe this should be discussed at a more general level instead of here. As I mentioned before, this article is now the only one in the iPhone and iPad article series where the definite article is dropped from the lead sentence. I thus propose to undo this change to keep consistency and because of a lack of applicable conventions and conclusive grammar.–Totie (talk) 16:27, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- This article and the history of iPhone article and one other that I forgot. But inter-article consistency is not a valid ground for revert; you revert when you have a reason, not to consistently make the same mistake. Best regards, Codename Lisa (talk) 16:51, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- To be honest I am not sure what is the concern here: Grammar is a set of rules. It doesn't matter if a large body of people ignore it; it is always them that are wrong. Why must product names be exempt from the general rule anyway and have "the"? I also a listed a lot of examples that never receive "the". What about them? Best regards, Codename Lisa (talk) 17:00, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- The exceptions that prove the rule. I do not need to be convinced that the article can be dropped, but I think that it just makes a bit more sense in the context of the iPhone/iPad brand in general – hence iPhone, iPad and History of iPhone (although ‘History of the iPhone line’ in the lead sentence) – and less in articles about specific devices, e.g., iPhone 3G, iPad Air. The point is that the definite article is not required by English grammar, as you point out, but clearly it is not wrong to use it either. As for ‘inter-article consistency’, where is it stated that this is not a valid ground? Wikipedia favours consensus and a consistent style is supporting evidence to that end. Article series are aligned all the time.
- As for your other examples, some of these are titles of works and all are intangible and uncountable software products that do not make sense with definite and indefinite articles alike. You can have a copy of Warcraft, but not a Warcraft. But you can have an iPhone and point to the iPhone on your table. Although this article is not about a specific iPhone SE, I have not seen a grammar rule that states that an article is not appropriate when talking about a specific device in a more general sense. My copy of the OED also mentions one use case: ‘used to refer to a thing in general rather than a particular example’, e.g. violin/the violin.
- Personally, my gut told me that dropping the article is something that has a commercial undertone to it, as the WSJ article explains. I read a fair number of Apple’s documentation and the use of ‘iPhone’ as opposed to ‘the iPhone’ is striking. I am ultimately more concerned with this.–Totie (talk) 17:49, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Totie: To be fair, a lot of what you said makes sense. Okay. Do what you just said. Still, if we met again and you found that I pay no attention to guts when I have rules that I follow, don't be surprised. Best regards, Codename Lisa (talk) 20:01, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- I mostly agree with Codename Lisa with regard to specific model names, but iPhone, iPad, and iPod are exceptions to the rule. These brands use the "i" prepended to 'phone', 'pad', and 'pod'; taken separately, they are "the i Phone", "the i Pad", and "the i Pod", which makes them grammatically correct with the definite article, when used as stand-alone items: "the iPhone is...". Whereas with specific models, such as "iPhone SE", when used alone and without qualifiers ('phone', 'device'), the definite article must be dropped. -Mardus /talk 01:03, 6 June 2020 (UTC)
Fanboy alert
[edit]This article was written by some iphone fanboy who despises that particular model for whatever reasons fanboys despise things. It is far from neutral. Every other sentence implies or even clearly states that this is some "backward" model. Such as "it will be a generation behind iphone 7". It doesn't mention the fact that "a generation behind" actually means "five months ago". It also talks about this model as "entry level" and "low cost" neither of which is true, unless of course you, like all other fanboys, compare the most expensive model of iphone 6s with the cheapest one of iphone SE. In general, this article has a pungent stink of "early adopter" attitude, as in "you idiots still use that ancient 6-months old crap". It also fails to mention the sales success of this model all over the world. Putting it very politely, it's not very encyclopedic. Le Grand Bleu (talk) 08:43, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- Calm down. 115.66.29.26 (talk) 11:48, 29 August 2016 (UTC) 115.66.29.26
iPhone SE 128 GB?
[edit]Rumors are that Apple will announce the iPhone SE 2, or the 128 GB version, by the end of March in a special event in Cupertino, CA. Any information regarding this and any information that should added about this at the moment? 173.170.94.104 (talk) 01:10, 6 March 2017 (UTC)
- To everyone who is reading this in the future
- there is no SE 2 (yet);
- there are new 32 GB and 128 GB versions;
- there are no special events in Cupertino by the end of March 2017 (yet).
- — Peterwhy 07:15, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
Succession box
[edit]The current succession box needs clarification.
If the succession box is based on release date (as shown by the |years=2016
), then {{{before}}}
should refer to iPhone 6S and {{{after}}}
should refer to iPhone 7.
If the succession box is based on the 4-inch iPhone series (as shown by the |before=iPhone 5S
), then {{{after}}}
should be empty and iPhone SE is still the newest in line. — Peterwhy 07:28, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
- Fixed. I put it back the way it was a month ago, where it says SE is still current. - Josh (talk | contribs) 21:52, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
Is this article about a series of smartphones or a smartphone?
[edit]The first sentence says it is 'a' smartphone, however it then talks about options for the 'singlular' smartphone. Which is it? --ZhuLien (talk) 23:38, 08 November 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 27.32.141.11 (talk)
Not to be confused with
[edit]I don't think the "not to be confused with' line is needed. They don't sound the same, don't exist in the same context, and are not interchangeable. It's like having "Not to be confused with iPhone 8" on the Galaxy S8 page.
Successor
[edit]Hi We couldn't write that iPhone SE is the successor of iPhone 6s. @Cards84664: continued to add unsourced information and he claim that sources are not needed. All sources, said that iPhone 7 is the successor of iPhone 6s. --Panam2014 (talk) 14:50, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Currently it reads "iPhone XR" which is ridiculous. No current owner of the SE will be jumping to a mega-sized model. The Actual successor should be "none" since Apple discontinued the small form factor, effectively stopping that size. (Also why I might abandon Apple for an SE-sized android model. The 7 or 8 or X are all too large to be proper successors. They don't even fit in my jeans pocket.) --- Theaveng (talk)
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"(Special Edition)"
[edit]Hi, the quote above should be quoted as an opinion/guess instead of a fact because it has never been confirmed by Apple. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Contributer7 (talk • contribs) 14:21, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- Phil Schiller (senior vice president of worldwide marketing) at Apple officially confirmed in 2016 that "SE" in "iPhone SE" stands for "Special Edition".
- https://www.techradar.com/news/phone-and-communications/mobile-phones/what-the-iphone-se-stands-for-and-what-we-think-it-should-stand-for-1317536 — Preceding unsigned comment added by MauritianDino (talk • contribs) 23:06, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
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Render
[edit]Shouldn't a render of the iPhone SE in rose gold color be used instead of the current one, which is in silver and can be easily mistaken for a render of the iPhone 5s? --93.42.68.194 (talk) 16:10, 31 December 2019 (UTC)
- If you can find a copyright-free picture of the rose gold, by all means add it (or point me to it, and I'll take care of it). Hydromania (talk) 01:55, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
Requested move 15 April 2020
[edit]iPhone SE (2016) → IPhone SE (1st generation) – Name should be in line with iPhone SE (2nd generation). Ghostofakina (talk) 22:59, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
- I second that. -◊PRAHLADBalaji 00:28, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
- For what it's worth, iPhone SE (2nd generation) was moved to iPhone SE (2020), WP:COMMONNAME being the reason. So if this page is renamed, the other one needs to be as well. Jlin (talk) 01:54, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
Moved. -◊PRAHLADBalaji 02:09, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
Actually, the related article is called iPhone SE (2020). Moving it back. -◊PRAHLADBalaji 02:11, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
- Move back to the base title. Until reviews and sales figures for the 2020 device have been released, the 2016 iPhone SE remains the more prominent topic by long-term significance and should be treated as the primary topic. feminist Wear a mask to protect everyone 04:54, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
Moved to iPhone SE (1st generation). -◊PRAHLADBalaji 15:34, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
"IPhone SE" listed at Redirects for discussion
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An editor has asked for a discussion to address the redirect IPhone SE. Please participate in the redirect discussion if you wish to do so. King of ♥ ♦ ♣ ♠ 03:11, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
Move it back to iPhone SE (1st generation)
[edit]Apple, a company that made, named, and marketed the iPhone SE, has mentioned in their website that the name of the phone is "iPhone SE (1st generation)."
It's been moved. -◊PRAHLADBalaji 19:24, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
ISO 15
[edit]The wikipage has been edited recently with the following content - "But won’t get IOS 15 in 2021" There is no citation for this info. HardeeHar (talk) 16:10, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
- I've reverted it and notified the editor. Herbfur (talk) 16:38, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
Predecessor
[edit]In the right-hand tombstone, “Predecessor” is listed as “iPhone 5C”. This is wrong. In body it is, severally times, correctly cited as derived based n the “5S”. Please fix the Predecessor in the summary box. 67.81.110.141 (talk) 20:54, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
It released also in finland but it isnt listed
[edit]In 2016 2001:99A:80D:7700:95DB:EDBF:F247:7EEB (talk) 16:52, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
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