Talk:Ivor McIntyre

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ivor McIntyre/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 05:31, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

I will review this one. Initial comments as follows:

  • No inappropriate dupe links (there is one in the lead but that's allowable).
  • Image tags checked and look OK.
  • All cites correlated to references.
  • Presentation of references appropriate.

Comments on text to follow. Zawed (talk) 05:31, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

  • Lead - is it really necessary to have the bracketed text regarding future ranks in the lead itself? Maybe move them into the main body of the article?
  • "...promoted to flight lieutenant effective from 31 March." Was this a back dated promotion or was it to be effective from 31 March 1925?

And that's it for me. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 08:05, 29 March 2016 (UTC)

Made changes, tks for reviewing! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 12:56, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
Looks good, passing as GA. Zawed (talk) 01:02, 3 April 2016 (UTC)