Talk:Jeff McIntyre

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Review: October 18, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 22:02, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jeff McIntyre/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:19, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 13:00, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

(===...===), level 4 and so on.-->

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Added cats.
"former American" Change to new lead.
"Early life and college career" remove career there. I've been removing those recently, it's a little wordy.
Add the PFA ref to his numbers in the infobox, since they aren't all from the PFR link in the infobox.
"second-team All-Southern California Conference for the 1976 season" add to infobox.
"but the Wranglers made a trade to acquire them" any details on the trade?
"He was signed by the Washington Federals on March 21 to the development squad" to "He was signed to the development squad of the Washington Federals on March 21
"McIntyre transferred to the Arizona State Sun Devils in 1977 and initially played at running back" change to "McIntyre transferred to play for the Arizona State Sun Devils and was initially a running back"

That's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 13:00, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:12, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
All of that is good now but you missed the following comment: ""but the Wranglers made a trade to acquire them" any details on the trade?" ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 21:54, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@WikiOriginal-9: Didn't find any. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:59, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, that's not too surprising. Passing the article. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 22:01, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.