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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk21:14, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that Jusuf Wibisono, chairman of a labor union, wanted an eight-hour work day – up from seven? Source: Madinier, Remy (2015). Islam and Politics in Indonesia: The Masyumi Party between Democracy and Integralism., p195: "In April 1953, Jusuf Wibisono declared that the working day should be increased from seven to eight hours a day"

Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 17:30, 3 December 2021 (UTC).[reply]

  • Newness fullfilled, hook cited. However, I'm worried about lacking context. There's a lot of people out there, mostly employers, that want to increase the working hours. I think you need to mention the fact that he is a labor union leader. I struggled to find the fact that he is "also technically a labor union leader" in the article, so you might need to point out the fact. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 06:20, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
To T:DYK/P6

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Jusuf Wibisono/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 01:24, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:24, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sources are reliable, though I'm unable to assess one of the Indonesian sources; I'm taking that one on faith.

  • Added the URAA tag.
  • Not really an issue for GA, which only requires that the prose be clear, but you use "also" a lot in the second and third paragraphs of "Minister of Finance". Most, or perhaps all, could be deleted.
  • Removed 3 of them. I left in those that just sounds right.

-- I fixed some copyediting issues rather than list them here. The prose has some occasional issues but it's good enough for GA. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:55, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Mike Christie: Addressed. Juxlos (talk) 03:59, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 12:47, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]