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I was going to review the DYK, but I see it isn't up yet. A few suggestions—(1) the gameplay currently covers the psychological aspects more than the actual mechanics of what the player does during the game (what are the levels and platforming like, etc.), (2) applause means clapping so did you mean "praise"? (3) Punctuation goes outside the quotation marks. (4) Images? Interesting little article I am no longer watching this page—whisperback if you'd like a response czar  13:11, 28 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Czar: I was going to submit it to DYK after cleaning it up, but maybe next time I'll submit it straight afterwards. I'm going to fix the gameplay section, and I changed "applause" to "praise". AFAIK all the punctuation with quotes exists in the original sources, so that should conform with MOS:LQ. Thanks for your suggestions. 23W 18:51, 28 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
DYK nom is now up: Template:Did you know nominations/Loved (video game). 23W 19:18, 28 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]