Talk:Loved (video game)
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Loved (video game) has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: December 14, 2014. (Reviewed version). |
A fact from Loved (video game) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 August 2014 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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[edit]I was going to review the DYK, but I see it isn't up yet. A few suggestions—(1) the gameplay currently covers the psychological aspects more than the actual mechanics of what the player does during the game (what are the levels and platforming like, etc.), (2) applause means clapping so did you mean "praise"? (3) Punctuation goes outside the quotation marks. (4) Images? Interesting little article czar ♔ 13:11, 28 July 2014 (UTC)
- @Czar: I was going to submit it to DYK after cleaning it up, but maybe next time I'll submit it straight afterwards. I'm going to fix the gameplay section, and I changed "applause" to "praise". AFAIK all the punctuation with quotes exists in the original sources, so that should conform with MOS:LQ. Thanks for your suggestions. 23W 18:51, 28 July 2014 (UTC)
- DYK nom is now up: Template:Did you know nominations/Loved (video game). 23W 19:18, 28 July 2014 (UTC)