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Company Achievements

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There are no citations for this section. These awards and mentions on magazines should be easily citable, or the entries should be deleted. Akuvar (talk) 20:23, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Stores section, methods

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Under the stores section, we had this paragraph,

"Like its sister chain Marble Slab Creamery, it serves its ice cream blend containing 12 percent or more of butterfat, by mixing in various treats into the ice cream including brownies, Snickers, Heath bar, sprinkles, fudge, and others on a frozen granite slab. The granite slab technique is unlike the processes used at other ice cream chains where they serve ice cream with simple toppings such as crushed cookies and sprinkles."

There is no reason to mention Marble slab here, unless you want to list all chains and mom&pop shops that use a frozen stone surface to mix ice cream on. This article is not on Marble Slab. Also, the last sentence implies that these other chains and mom&pop shops don't mix the same way or are somehow inferior. I have altered this paragraph to make it more NPOV. Akuvar (talk) 20:31, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

References

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I removed all four of the references for this page today.

  • A statement about company growth had a reference that was a broken link.
  • A statement about the original headquarters had a link to the company's website "contact us" page.
  • And a statement about the current headquarters had 2 links, one to the company's home page and the other to a census bureau map of Columbia, Maryland.

I'm sure there are valid sources out there for all of these statements, but these links were not them. I have left the statements themselves hoping someone will provide correct references. Akuvar (talk) 20:46, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]