Jump to content

Talk:Murder of Jared Lakey

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

DYK nomination

[edit]

Did you know ...

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk09:01, 20 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: I don't know how to interpret the QPQ check tool report, but I think I'm under the threshold of five initial nominations (I think this is my third), and I have a half-barnstar from 09:53, 26 November 2015 (UTC) for helping another editor with a DYK (re Alcohol in Afghanistan).

Created by BarrelProof (talk). Self-nominated at 23:22, 9 November 2021 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - QPQ has not been completed.
Overall: Article is new and long enough, Earwig looks good, and the hook is cited inline. Both hooks are quite close to the maximum of 200 bytes, so if you wanted to shorten them a bit I think you could leave out "in Wilson, Oklahoma on the Fourth of July in 2019"; just personally, I think ALT0 is a bit more digestible without that bit, though ultimately it's your call. QPQ will be needed as well. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 18:27, 13 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks very much for the review. ALT2 added as suggested, except retaining the year. I'll work on that WP:QPQ. —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 19:17, 13 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
QPQ here for Sjafruddin Prawiranegara. —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 05:43, 16 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
all good! Passing with preference for ALT2. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:13, 17 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified ALT2 to T:DYK/P1

Comparison to restraint

[edit]

This is psychiatric propaganda in defense of involuntary restraint, as if the only alternative would be what these officers did. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oldmanjiminy (talkcontribs) 22:38, 25 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I don't understand the comment. Is there something about the article that should be changed? If so, in what way? —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 06:20, 26 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Race

[edit]

While I believe this addition from two months ago‎ is correct, is it an improvement of the article? And should the race of the police officers also be noted? —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 13:00, 23 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]