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Possible improvements

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I have just completed the B class checklist and feel that this article is a Start class article. I believe that it could be improved by the following:

  • referencing: for a successful B class review an article requires at least one in line citation per paragraph or block of information (more if multiple sources are used, or if making multiple contestable points);
  • images: some images could be added to illustrate the article and break up the text (if adding a number of images, you might consider making a WP:Gallery);
  • I believe that the notes sections should go above references;
  • you might like to add an infobox, as per other Biography articles (these can be found by going to Category:People infobox templates and selecting the most appropriate one;
  • expand the text to discuss the person's life and service in more detail.

Just a few ideas. If you want more detailed comments, please go to WP:MHPR. Once you feel that the article is ready for re-assessment, please add it to the list at WP:MHA. Hope this helps. — AustralianRupert (talk) 02:58, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Category:American slave owners

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No mention of slave-owning. I feel that this category should be restricted to people whose slave-owning history was notable in itself. Valetude (talk) 11:24, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]