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This article seems to be in extreme need of copyediting, but the task is near impossible. It appears to be a very badly translated article from another source. Words and large sections of sentences seem to be missing, tenses and genders change mid-sentence, and sentences run on for four or five lines. I've stared at it for about 15 minutes with no idea how to improve it. The associated article on Borghese Petrucci has the same problems, but not quite as severe. JimVC3 (talk) 03:39, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]