Talk:Shelton Eppler

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Review: September 2, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. 123Writer ^talk 20:36, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Shelton Eppler/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: 1TWO3Writer (talk · contribs) 23:51, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Part of August 2023 backlog. Will review tomorrow.

Infobox, Lead, References, Tables

Infobox sourced (in article) and formatted well.

~~Lead is a good overview of subject. All info sourced in article. Broke the paragraph up between career phases.~~ Actually, perhaps it can be expanded into two-three larger paragraphs, including more about the various rewards he has won in his career.

References themselves are formatted consistently.

123Writer ^talk 23:43, 10 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Also, I'd recommend adding a table of his yearly stats if possible, as other GA AF bios seem to have them. Also a table for his US college sports recruiting information. They're a good way to show stats in-brief. Put it at the bottom of the section (if doing it by career phase) or bottom of article (above references). See Dante Lavelli, Calvin Johnson, and Will Rogers (American football) for examples. See Wikipedia:Good_articles/Sports_and_recreation#American_football_people for even more examples (some don't have them, but I think it'll satisfy GA criteria 3).

123Writer ^talk 17:28, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@JTtheOG I see you did some changes, how about the table? (Also be sure to at least comment you're done on the GA review page as otherwise the reviewer will not know you've made the changes). 123Writer ^talk 09:17, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@1TWO3Writer: My apologies, friend. I meant to return to put the table in another day but got caught up in some other things. I'll let you know as soon as I do. JTtheOG (talk) 16:38, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Totally fine! Take your time. Just ping me when you're done. 123Writer ^talk 17:21, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Early life

Spot-check: 1, 3, 9, 12, 16 (says he is a three-star, rating probably changed on other two sources).

Broke that paragraph up. Other than that, no style issues.

123Writer ^talk 17:03, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

College career (Trinity Valley)

Spot-check: 18, 20, 25

No issues.

College career (Northwestern State)

2018 season

Spot-check: 26, 29, 31, 32, 36, 38.

...in school history. -> ...in the school's history, CE.

Other than that, no issues.

123Writer ^talk 20:40, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

2019 season

Spot-check: 40, 42, 45, 46, 49, 52

No problems.

Professional career

Aalborg 89ers

Spot-check: 54, 57, 59

No problems.

Fundidores de Monterrey

Spot-check: 60, 64, 68, 69, 71, 74, 78

Source 69 and the preceding sentence loses focus a little; Eppler is the subject, Justice is not.

Last sentence of section is unsourced.

Personal life

Spot-check: 79

Removed "even".

123Writer ^talk 23:22, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

JTtheOG and 1TWO3Writer, any progress on this review? Been a few weeks of no edits to the review or the article page, and everything seems to be fairly minor. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:35, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Was just waiting for JT. I was planning on pinging them but my own GA nom took my the attention away, sorry. 123Writer ^talk 15:43, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@1TWO3Writer: Done! JTtheOG (talk) 20:28, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Good job. 123Writer ^talk 20:35, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.