Talk:Sleeping sickness of Kalachi, Kazakhstan

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Requested move 26 December 2022[edit]

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

It was proposed in this section that Sleep hollow be renamed and moved to Sleepy hollow (illness).

result:
Not moved. See below a somewhat confused consensus, but a consensus nonetheless, to not move this article to the proposed name. No prejudice if editors continue looking for a better title, so a new move request can be opened at any time as long as it's not a rename to "Sleepy hollow", either uc or lc, unless that name is inarguably determined to be the common name. Thanks and kudos to editors for your input; everyone stay healthy! P.I. Ellsworth , ed. ^put'r there 10:02, 10 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Sleep hollow → Sleepy hollow (illness) ~~Sleep Hollow (illness)~~ – Most references I've viewed shows this subject/topic as using the word "Sleepy" with a "y" at the end. Higher quality references use "Sleepy" but there are others that use "Sleep". Although this illness has been disproven as something unique, likely either an airborne or water chemical contaminant, using the colloquial term is appropriate. Certainly would not mind some MEDRS editors to have a look and drop an opinion either way. ☾Loriendrew☽ ☏(ring-ring) 22:23, 26 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I thought they'd settled on this as Carbon monoxide poisoning from the old mines. Perhaps it should be merged to the town, if there is anything worth preserving that isn't already in Kalachi, Kazakhstan. WhatamIdoing (talk) 02:05, 27 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Sure looks like it according to the cited sources. Most if not all the content is probably worth preserving, to keep the alternative explanations/viewpoints. Yes, move the content to Kalachi, Kazakhstan. Jaredroach (talk) 16:44, 27 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Not with uppercase 'H'. No justification was provided for that. —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 01:19, 28 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose: Also, looking at the sources cited in the article, I didn't find any that call this illness "sleep hollow" (or "Sleep Hollow"). Most of them do not name it. One of them (Yahoo) refers to the village as "sleepy hollow" but does not name the illness that way. A hollow is ordinarily a place, not an illness, so it makes more sense to refer to the village this way. See wikt:hollow, which defines a hollow as "a small valley between mountains". Yahoo refers to the illnesss simply as "sleeping sickness" (with quote marks around the term). There is one cited source (Inquisitr) that refers to the illness as "sleepy hollow" (not "sleep hollow"), but it seems like a low quality source. We should strive to use more medically authoritative sources when discussing diseases, not just grab a neologism used in low-quality websites. —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 07:43, 28 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Confused, is there an error in the nomination? Should it be to Sleepy hollow (illness)? Otherwise the proposal to capitalize the "h" seems inappropriate as its not a proper noun and its not clear why disambiguation is needed. Crouch, Swale (talk) 18:50, 28 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Gah! Yes, fouled that one up nicely, I meant Sleepy hollow (illness) (or capitalized ~~Hallow~~ Hollow since the moniker was probably culled from the story.) What is the proper course of action, as this has already been commented on: retract and resubmit, or change the wording? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Loriendrew (talk • contribs) 23:55, 28 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I would still oppose that, since I have only found one source that uses that term for the syndrome (regardless of capitalization), and it is a low quality source (Inquisitr). I suggest something more simply descriptive, such as Sleeping sickness of Kalachi or Sleeping sickness of Kalachi, Kazakhstan. (The title of the Washington Irving story uses Hollow, not Hallow, but in either case, it is referring to a place.) —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 00:06, 29 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The latter works for me. "Sleep hollow" made no sense to me, +y improves it, but as there has been no medical phrasing for this I would agree that Sleeping sickness would be much better.--☾Loriendrew☽ ☏(ring-ring) 02:02, 29 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I'll update the nomination to Sleepy hollow (illness). Crouch, Swale (talk) 19:14, 29 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose. This is not a distinct disease. It is important not to elevate it to that status by giving it a distinct article. It is a paragraph for another article. It could be folded into the Carbon monoxide poisoning article. It should not be called either Sleep Hollow or Sleepy Hollow, regardless of capitalization. Too easily confused with the Irving story or a place name. Hollow is not a synonym for disease. Jaredroach (talk) 01:15, 30 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Requested move 10 January 2023[edit]

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The result of the move request was: page moved to Sleeping sickness of Kalachi, Kazakhstan. Arbitrarily0 ^(talk) 13:50, 18 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sleep hollow → Carbon monoxide poisoning incident in Kalachi, Kazakhstan – or Sleeping sickness of Kalachi, Kazakhstan. There was a consensus just declared not to move this to Sleepy hollow (illness), but it is also clear that the current title is not appropriate. Unless the article is deleted or merged into some other article (e.g. Carbon monoxide poisoning or Kalachi, Kazakhstan), it needs a new name. —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 18:33, 10 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Support per nom.--Ortizesp (talk) 19:10, 10 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support move to Sleeping sickness of Kalachi, Kazakhstan. With a newer theory of chemical contamination, it may be better title than CO poisoning. (Also, humbly apologize for the confusing RTM above.)--☾Loriendrew☽ ☏(ring-ring) 19:16, 10 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

After reading the cited source about the chemical theory, there seems to be no clear evidence for it. No chemicals were identified; it was just a speculative suggestion based on epidemiology analysis. On the other hand, it's questionable whether the carbon monoxide poisoning hypothesis is really well proven or not as well, so I support Sleeping sickness of Kalachi, Kazakhstan. —⁠ ⁠BarrelProof (talk) 23:27, 10 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Support per nom—blindlynx 21:30, 10 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.