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The content of the article is definitely related to the topic, however the article positions itself in the lead section to discuss both the engineering and baking side of the individual, yet it only details the baking side of the person which is an area that could be expanded upon. The content is up to date as the sources are as recent as they could be regarding the individuals' current accomplishments. In my opinion, the content missing that could be worked on is the individual's early life, engineering side, the story behind the origins of the bakery, the DC area and the cooking industry, and how she got on Cupcake Wars. The article as a whole provides insight into female business entrepreneurs and the underrepresented group of women in business. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anishsun (talkcontribs) 14:10, 16 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]