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A tag has been placed on Child sexual abuse and suicide requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be an unambiguous copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from https://aifs.gov.au/cfca/publications/long-term-effects-child-sexual-abuse/references. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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May I take you at your word?[edit]

On Talk:Child sexual abuse and suicide you wrote "it is a preliminary draft". I think the article would be better moved to Draft:Child sexual abuse and suicide where you can work on it unmolested. As it is at present, it reads like an academic paper bordering on original research rather than an article in an encyclopedia, which is what Wikipedia is. It needs the sources back, but used in inline citations,[1] not in (Dannlowski et al., 2012) style.

I hope that's agreeable to you. Cabayi (talk) 15:49, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I've moved it.
You may find WP:Refill a useful tool for formatting references. It'll take bare URL references, like <ref>[http://www.mcgill.ca/connectionslab/]</ref> & turn them into well formatted references like <ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.mcgill.ca/connectionslab/|title=The Connections Lab - The Connections Lab - McGill University|publisher=}}</ref> which will then appear as below.[2]
Hope that helps, Cabayi (talk) 16:08, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

  1. ^ Dannlowski, Udo; Stuhrmann, Anja; Beutelmann, Victoria; Zwanzger, Peter; Lenzen, Thomas; Grotegerd, Dominik; Domschke, Katharina; Hohoff, Christa; Ohrmann, Patricia; Bauer, Jochen; Lindner, Christian; Postert, Christian; Konrad, Carsten; Arolt, Volker; Heindel, Walter; Suslow, Thomas; Kugel, Harald. "Limbic Scars: Long-Term Consequences of Childhood Maltreatment Revealed by Functional and Structural Magnetic Resonance Imaging". 71 (4): 286–293. doi:10.1016/j.biopsych.2011.10.021. {{cite journal}}: Cite journal requires |journal= (help)
  2. ^ "The Connections Lab - The Connections Lab - McGill University".

We already have an article on the topic. What you have created here mostly duplicates what is covered on the other page.

Many of the sources do not even mention suicide such as the section on "Trauma Sensitive Schools" and that on "laws". I have thus redirected one to the other. Please work on the main article. Best Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 00:37, 11 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Paraphrasing[edit]

Some of this is simply not paraphrased enough.

You added "TF-CBT is not appropriate for children who have not experienced child abuse or who have no memory of the abuse." and "This treatment is not intended for use with offending parents who have been abusive towards children (please see Combined Parent-Child Cognitive Behavioral Therapy or Alternatives for Families: Cognitive Behavioral Therapy)"

Ref says "TF-CBT is not appropriate for children who have not experienced trauma or who have no memory of trauma(s).

And "It is not intended for use with offending parents who have been physically abusive towards their children[1]

Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 00:42, 11 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]