User talk:Hewsonshane

Welcome![edit]

Welcome to Wikipedia, Hewsonshane! Thank you for your contributions. I am Keithbob and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Wikipedia:Questions or type {{help me}} at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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October 2013[edit]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Virtual Military Training (October 31)[edit]

Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Rankersbo (talk) 11:03, 31 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Hewsonshane, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there!

Your submission at Articles for creation: Google+ vs. Facebook (October 31)[edit]

Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Rankersbo (talk) 11:07, 31 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

December 2013[edit]

Hello, I'm Keithbob. I wanted to let you know that I undid one or more of your recent contributions to List of state leaders in 1263 because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. — Keithbob • Talk • 00:32, 12 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Google+ vs. Facebook[edit]

Hello Hewsonshane. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Google+ vs. Facebook".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Rankersbo (talk) 19:13, 28 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Virtual Military Training[edit]

Hello Hewsonshane. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Virtual Military Training".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Rankersbo (talk) 12:37, 6 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Visiting Ireland as a American (October 29)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MatthewVanitas was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 00:28, 29 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your articles[edit]

Hi Hewsonshane: I see you've tried to write us a number of articles but they have not been accepted. Thank you; we need new articles, there is still a lot left to write about. But it looks to me as if you are not clear on what kind of articles an encyclopedia needs. The basic requirements are summed up (with links to fuller explanations) on this page. There's also a long list of examples of the kinds of things we don't normally include, here. The essentials are: the topic needs to be "notable" (either written about in lots of books and newspapers, or obviously something an encyclopedia should include, like a country, an ocean, or a historical person), and it needs to be presented neutrally, with references to sources, so that readers can get the essentials from the article and go looking for more info if they wish. That means we don't include essays, like on why Americans should visit Ireland, and if we include an article on Google vs. Facebook, it should be about what others have said on the topic, something like Google-Facebook Rivalry, with references to several articles in newspapers and business magazines and on tech blogs that are mostly or entirely about the rivalry. If you want to write your own opinions, I'm afraid this isn't the place (This section of the second page I linked to). For the Ireland topic, have a look at Wikivoyage (homepage here); they want detailed articles about each place, but you may find it interesting to add things about places you know. As a general rule: you need references in your articles for them to be accepted here. If you cannot think of a useful reference, that means there is a problem with the topic. Virtual military training might be a good topic; did your draft have any references? Perhaps have a look at some of our existing articles (for example, History of Google), and at what kinds of references are used? Some articles badly need more references; you could look for some and add them as practice.

You've been around for a while, but I don't see that anyone has pointed you to the Teahouse, a friendly space for new editors to ask questions and get help; the people working there are good at explaining things. You can also contact me on my talk page, User talk:Yngvadottir, and I'll do my best to help.

I hope this advice and info is useful. Thanks again for joining us :-) Yngvadottir (talk) 19:06, 30 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed deletion of Hesh 2 Wireless headphones[edit]

Hello, Hewsonshane. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Hesh 2 Wireless headphones, for deletion because I don't think it meets our criteria for inclusion. If you don't want the article deleted:

edit the page
remove the text that looks like this: {{proposed deletion/dated...}}
save the page

Also, be sure to explain why you think the article should be kept in your edit summary or on the article's talk page. If you don't do so, it may be deleted later anyway.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Ueutyi (talk) 01:41, 17 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

MfD nomination of Draft:Visiting Ireland as a American[edit]

Draft:Visiting Ireland as a American, a page which you created or substantially contributed to, has been nominated for deletion. Your opinions on the matter are welcome; you may participate in the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:Visiting Ireland as a American and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~). You are free to edit the content of Draft:Visiting Ireland as a American during the discussion but should not remove the miscellany for deletion template from the top of the page; such a removal will not end the deletion discussion. Thank you. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 05:54, 14 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Visiting Ireland as a American[edit]

Hello, Hewsonshane. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Visiting Ireland as a American".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Brustopher (talk) 00:33, 18 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Driving a 1998 Honda Civic[edit]

Hello, Hewsonshane. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Driving a 1998 Honda Civic".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Anarchyte (work | talk) 10:54, 9 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]