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Happy editing! I dream of horses (t) (c) Remember to {{ping}} me after replying off my talk page 20:32, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

May 2020

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Information icon Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Cherrelyn Animal Hospital, from its old location at User:ThumpLocal/sandbox. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. KylieTastic (talk) 13:42, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cherrelyn Animal Hospital (May 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by KylieTastic were:
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
"Articles generally require significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the topic" (see WP:42)
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
KylieTastic (talk) 13:43, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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Hello, ThumpLocal! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! KylieTastic (talk) 13:43, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cherrelyn Animal Hospital (May 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AaqibAnjum were:
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Aaqib Anjum Aafī (talk) 21:02, 12 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cherrelyn Animal Hospital (August 13)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Eternal Shadow were:
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
I thought about rejecting this but I will give this one more chance before rejection. I personally doubt this is notable but if you can find enough sources it will probably be accepted.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Eternal Shadow Talk 18:03, 13 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Cherrelyn Animal Hospital

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Information icon Hello, ThumpLocal. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Cherrelyn Animal Hospital, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 20:02, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Cherrelyn Animal Hospital

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Hello, ThumpLocal. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Cherrelyn Animal Hospital".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 19:22, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cherrelyn Animal Hospital of Englewood, CO (December 20)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Loksmythe were:
This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.
This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Loksmythe (talk) 14:10, 20 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Cherrelyn Animal Hospital of Englewood, CO

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Cherrelyn Animal Hospital of Englewood, CO, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. Loksmythe (talk) 14:11, 20 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Control copyright icon Hello ThumpLocal! Your additions to Draft:Cherrelyn Animal Hospital have been removed in whole or in part, as they appear to have added copyrighted content without evidence that the source material is in the public domain or has been released by its owner or legal agent under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license. (To request such a release, see Wikipedia:Requesting copyright permission.) While we appreciate your contributions to Wikipedia, there are certain things you must keep in mind about using information from sources to avoid copyright and plagiarism issues.

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It's very important that contributors understand and follow these practices, as policy requires that people who persistently do not must be blocked from editing. If you have any questions about this, please ask them here on this page, or leave a message on my talk page. Thank you. Tol (talk | contribs) @ 00:25, 21 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cherrelyn Animal Hospital (December 21)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Tol were:
This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.
This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Tol (talk | contribs) @ 18:22, 21 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cherrelyn Animal Hospital (January 14)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by JSFarman was:
This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
To establish notability, references need to be via independent, reliable sources, and they need to provide non-trivial coverage of Cherrelyn Animal Hospital.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
JSFarman (talk) 04:19, 14 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Cherrelyn Animal Hospital, located in Englewood, Colorado, opened in 1957 and is still located there currently.[1] The hospital serves the surrounding areas of Centennial, Littleton and Denver.

History

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Cherrelyn Animal Hospital was established in 1957 by veterinarian Dr. Donald D. Ramsay who ran the hospital until his retirement in 1978.[2] The building for the animal hospital was built on the same road as the route of the Cherrelyn Horse Car also known as the Cherrelyn Trolley.[3]

Following Dr. Donald D. Ramsay's retirement[2], the hospital has changed ownership four times and is currently owned by Laurie Dinsdale, BBM and Jerry Koster, DVM.

Operations

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Cherrelyn Animal Hospital works with animal shelters to offer clinical treatments for injured or sick animals as well as to provide vaccinations.[4]

Notable Patients

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Cherrelyn Animal Hospital works closely with Eagle Scouts of America, Girl Scouts of Colorado, Golden Retriever Freedom Rescue, and Colorado Division of Wildlife.[3][6]

References

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  1. ^ "HistoricEnglewood.org". Englewood Historic Preservation Society. Retrieved 2023-03-29.
  2. ^ a b "The Haxtun Herald July 25 Page 2". News Paper Archive of the Haxtun Herald. The Haxtun Herald. Retrieved 2 February 2023.
  3. ^ a b Nicholl, Ida May. "History Cherrelyn Animal Hospital". Historic Englewood Newsletter. Vol. 11. Retrieved March 27, 2023.
  4. ^ a b "AFRMA - Medical - Rolling Mice; Rat/Mouse Health Questions; Theiler's Murine Encephalomyelitis Virus (TMEV)". www.afrma.org. Retrieved 28 December 2022.
  5. ^ Preheim, Cheryl. "Investigators Call it an Outrageous Case of Animal Abuse". 9 News. 9NEWS. Retrieved 2 February 2023.
  6. ^ "Community Involvement". Cherrelyn Animal Care. Retrieved 2023-03-27.
* Official Website of the Cherrelyn Animal Hospital
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April 2023

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Information icon Hello, I'm JSFarman. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Draft:Cherrelyn Animal Hospital have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted; Wikipedia articles should be written objectively, using independent sources, and from a neutral perspective. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thump Local appears to be a digital marketing agency. JSFarman (talk) 17:33, 2 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your response. This is a business in a historic location and we believe it is noteworthy and therefore worthy of being listed on Wikipedia. Please consider this recent article published on the Englewood Historic Preservation Society website's home page. The website is here for reference https://www.historicenglewood.com/ - if you scroll down, you can see the article. We can certainly edit this down to meet the standards needed, but asking that you please consider this additional information. Thank you in advance. ThumpLocal (talk) 18:01, 3 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I just moved the article back to draft. You need actual references via reliable, independent sources to demonstrate notability. They do not seem to exist; I am an animal fanatic; I looked. More than once. If you feel that you can find more valid references, add them. If you move it back into the mainspace it will very likely be speedily deleted. JSFarman (talk) 16:50, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the feedback. This article on page two linked here was recently published by the Englewood Colorado Historic Preservation Society, and so I added it to the references on this article. This is a historic business in a historic location. Please let me know if this helps. Thank you again. ThumpLocal (talk) 16:57, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, thank you for your help and guidance along the way here. Much appreciated! CAH has now been acknowledged on the City of Englewood CO website on their timeline, referencing when they opened (1957). The link is here for reference. By adding this, can it be reconsidered for publication? Thank you again. ThumpLocal (talk) 17:31, 5 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Hello ThumpLocal. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are extremely strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:ThumpLocal. The template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=ThumpLocal|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message. Theroadislong (talk) 17:00, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I am simply trying to help this business to achieve a long-standing goal of having an article on Wikipedia documenting their historic location. I am not being paid to write this article. I am part of a company that has worked with them for years, and so I have had the opportunity to get to know the great people there, over the years. Knowing them and their story makes me strongly believe it is worthy of such an article, and this is now a personal mission for me to help make this happen. If there is anything specific that you can share, that might help to make this a reality, it would be so greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance. ThumpLocal (talk) 17:40, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
So you have a very clear conflict of interest which you need to properly disclose on your user page. The draft was rejected so there is nothing further you can do here despite your "mission". Theroadislong (talk) 18:14, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Understood. Thank you for the fast response. ThumpLocal (talk) 18:22, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Cherrelyn Animal Hospital

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Hello, ThumpLocal. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Cherrelyn Animal Hospital".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 16:46, 10 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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