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  1. Korukonda Indian village, very short. Hillbillygirl 10:48, 16 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  2. Kushiro Shitsugen National Park Japanese national park. Short. Hillbillygirl 11:13, 16 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done this was almost perfect before I proofed it.Cricketgirl 11:47, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  3. Karlal Pakistani ethnic group. Hillbillygirl 11:44, 16 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done this still needs work on citations, but the copy-editing is fine now. Cricketgirl 11:47, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  4. Karol Scheibler's Chapel in Łódź Polish mausoleum and chapel. This was a heavy edit, for quirks from the Polish translation. It really needs another eye. Hillbillygirl 10:29, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done major referencing work still needed, but copy-editing done. Cricketgirl 13:32, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  5. José Reinaldo de Lima - Very short, didn't need that much (to me). Peace, ♣Tohru Honda13♣ 23:22, 23 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done needs major expansion to become a decent article, but as it stands, is grammatically and stylistically fine. Cricketgirl 14:38, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  6. Gérard Chaliand: An expert in armed-conflict studies. Short. Galena11 19:59, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  7. Hedwig Kohn: Female Jewish physicist who fled Germany in WWII. Galena11 20:37, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  8. Howard E. Scott: Frontman for the band War. Galena11 21:42, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  9. John Glines:Well-written, but may be slight POV concerns. Would appreciate a fresh pair of eyes. Dev920 (Have a nice day!) 13:37, 28 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • These eyes didn't see any major POV issues. Galena11 22:47, 28 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
      •  Done Unless someone can figure out how to make the commas go before the footnote links - the article goes a bit nuts when I try to... Cricketgirl 19:28, 2 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  10. Hair prosthesis - copy-edited it as much as I could - this article is very incomplete, but I think this is the best it'll be for a while. Cricketgirl 16:33, 26 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  11. Wellington, Herefordshire I structured the local features into bullet points because I couldn't think of a better way to write all the nice stuff about the pub there! very short - will take a 5 min proofread. Cricketgirl 22:59, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  12. Rock Springs Massacre: Currently working on this article (all written by myself) in hopes for an eventual FA bid. Would benefit from an outside pair of eyes looking for grammar, prose, syntax, spelling and other minor mistakes. Thanks ahead of time. IvoShandor 15:22, 20 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Copyedit is as complete as this pair of eyes can make it. I think it's ready for final proof by a different pair of eyes. Unimaginative Username 01:16, 22 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  13. Simeon I of Bulgaria: current WP:FAC which I'm absolutely determined to bring to FA status. Although my English is fairly good, I'd still appreciate a thorough copyedit by a native speaker, preferably someone who's got some knowledge of history. You know, there are some peculiarities that only a native speaker may be able to detect. Of course, multiple copyedits by several users would be more than appreciated! By the way, bear in mind that it's an European topic and this means it should use British English. Thanks in advance! Todor→Bozhinov 09:42, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Note that this article is now featured. Happy copyediting, S.D. 10:55, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
  14. Franz Liebkind: The fictional author of "the worst play ever written", Springtime for Hitler, in The Producers. Galena11 19:40, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  15. Phoebe Buffay "Marriage" and "Trivia" sections were the only ones copyedit requested for, those are the only ones I did. ~ Otterpops 19:14, 30 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done copy-edited entire article, put all 'in-world' material in present tense, and pre-series/real-world material in past tense. Cricketgirl 22:44, 6 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  16. Against Jovinianus - organized it and some slight cleanup. BrokenSphere 01:53, 24 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  17. Encyclopædia Britannica: The key remaining objection at FAC appears to be copy-editing. In particular, Tony has called for a thorough copy-editing by other editors. Also, some of its sentences may be too long and perhaps old-fashioned in style; there may be ways of clarifying its intended meaning in some places. One of your number, TimVickers, has already gone through the article, but a second review might help in resolving Tony's concerns. Thank you very much for your help! Willow 13:00, 5 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    In progress. –Outriggr § 04:22, 6 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done (Do we remove this entry or what?) –Outriggr § 23:00, 6 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  18. Economy of Tibet Supershow Seems like an interesting topic, but it may need work. I did what I could, a start, there could possibly be more work done. Showmanship is the key 00:04, 30 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done patched this up a little bit but it was pretty good already. Cricketgirl 19:44, 7 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  19. Kitadake Japanese mountain. Hillbillygirl 11:09, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  20. Lake Shikotsu Japanese lake. Hillbillygirl 11:42, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done was pretty good when I got to it. Having a problem with the [edit] link in the top RH corner of each section getting displaced - anyone know how to deal with this? Cricketgirl 19:44, 7 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  21. Kingdom of Laos Up to Government. Rintrah 15:48, 10 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Ran into trouble on this one. The article heavily relies on passive voice, obscuring important information. I can't find a way of expressing the sentences more clearly, for I don't know the missing information. I give up on this one. Rintrah 09:47, 11 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
      •  Done Eilicea had done some great work, so was just a little tidying-up to do. Same problem with the edit links though :( Cricketgirl 19:44, 7 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  22. Magda Tagliaferro Brazilian-born pianist. Short. Cricketgirl 17:00, 2 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 16:42, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  23. Yacht charter - this had tags for wikification, removal of advertisement-like tone, and copyediting. I think it is ok now, but a proofread will just check that. It's very short, by the way. Cricketgirl 12:47, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 16:47, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  24. Bahavian Idol very short summary of an episode of Cory in the House, a Disney Channel show. Cricketgirl 20:08, 2 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 16:50, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  25. When 6021 Met 4267 TV episode of That's So Raven. There were tags for copy-edit, sources and too-long plot summary - I hope I have fixed the copyedit and summary length. Cricketgirl 23:28, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 16:54, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  26. 7 Seeds Did all I could. Lead needs a proof. Copy-editing isn't going to achieve much with the rest of this article, as it's incomplete and contains what looks to be machine translated text. Needs someone who knows the series to rewrite those sections. BuddingJournalist 09:06, 30 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • I'm proceeding with a full copyedit - might as well make it feel as if it has better organization than what it has now. --Sigma 7 02:40, 3 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Done all I can. --Sigma 7 03:31, 26 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 17:07, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  27. Art of Fighting Gameplay section needs attention from a video-gamer. This article was probably the most incredible collection of run-on sentences I've ever encountered: "Released after the incredible success of Street Fighter II, which had by now become the blueprint for fighting games, a blueprint still basically adhered to today and one that Art Of Fighting 2 adhered to then, making it seem more what someone today would expect a fighting game to be like where a player chooses any character from the roster and can play through a simple arcade mode and fight a hidden/unplayable boss." BuddingJournalist 06:34, 2 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Great edit BuddingJournalist! I just made some minor grammatical corrections, but I think it needs another set of eyes to finish it up.Croberts1 04:44, 7 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • 15-year Gamer here. In early March I did a (badly needed) edit for grammar, punctuation, and organization to integrate information about why this game was important (and it was) to the history of gaming and credit to the people who developed it. Immediately reverted, too much "name dropping", also I think someone's picture got removed. Someone else have a go. ~ Otterpops 19:31, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    Gave it a once-over and I think we can call this  Done. Galena11 17:11, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  28. Ben Reilly Some tweaks to punctuation and grammar. Some discrepancies with use of tenses but not glaringly noticeable. Needs careful reading to discriminate between errors and clones but looks OK. Greenglen 19:19, 13 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Don't forget to sign! Rintrah 02:06, 13 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Yep, you're right Rintrah, I did forget to sign. Greenglen 19:19, 13 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  29. Colin McRae Rally is still B-class, but it no longer reads as an informal list of cheat codes and maps. Needs a proofreading because we all know I'm far from talented. If anybody can think of what to add to this article to bring it up to GA status, please let me know. Moralis 21:30, 1 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Good edit. I just made a few grammatical corrections.Croberts1 04:55, 7 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 17:35, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  30. Hitman 2: Silent Assassin Finally finished by redoing the Targets section as Missions (as per Hitman: Contracts). –Dvandersluis 22:07, 15 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 17:41, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  31. Headhunting: Article was actually not that bad, save for the lead section. It is mostly devoid of any sources, though. —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 17:16, 12 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • The Celtic section needs more attention; otherwise, it is good gramatically. As Dvandersluis said, however, it needs work on sources! Croberts1 03:20, 21 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 17:49, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  32. Mansehra District Pakistani district history and geography Hillbillygirl 10:58, 27 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • I didn't see much that needed fixing. Made some minor adjustments and is now ready for proofreading. Galena11 22:30, 28 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 18:04, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  33. Ryan Leaf I'm planning to make this in FAC again, has copyediting issues from last FAC Jaranda wat's sup 03:31, 22 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    Not too much to change; Pretty solid. -- Scientizzle 22:08, 13 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 18:15, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  34. Dominican Republic General history / geography of the country. This one was rated B-class for quality, I think more for the content than style. I've done what I can as a copyeditor. Hillbillygirl 11:02, 20 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 18:47, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  35. Assassins (musical) Needs a little fleshing out but that will come in time, from people who love theater.~ Otterpops 18:16, 20 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 18:51, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  36. JChat ~ Otterpops 18:51, 20 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 18:56, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  37. Movladi Udugov it's still only stub-class, but I've reworked it a fair bit from what it was. I have 2 major concerns which are on the talk page. Cricketgirl 19:08, 30 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 19:04, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  38. Yakeen (1969 film) - this required a lot of tightening up for such a short article. Still needs fleshing out and references (seems like all the articles I look at today need this!), but ready for proofreading. Cricketgirl 16:08, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 20:25, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  39. Chana School, on its way to GAC after this, needs outside eyes to help it out. Just had a peer review, I have seen the article too much to give it the effective once or twice over. Sorry to bombard with two requests at once, I just have a lot on my plate right now. : ) IvoShandor 07:55, 21 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • I've copy-edited this twice now, think it's ready for a final look. Cricketgirl 15:06, 2 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 20:42, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  40. Battle of Kollaa short piece about Finnish battle. One sentence at the end which doesn't seem to fit. Cricketgirl 20:01, 2 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 20:47, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  41. Ade Gardner v. short article on a rugby league player Cricketgirl 19:08, 3 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 20:56, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  42. Adam Beattie short article about a Civil War soldier. Cricketgirl 19:09, 3 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 21:05, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  43. Jaws Wired Shut.Konczewski 21:54, 4 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 21:11, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  44. Westwood Country Club didn't really have to do much to it. Cricketgirl 15:28, 8 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 21:23, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  45. Adolf Schlatter took a long time to get the horrible machine-generated German-English translation into shape but I think it's pretty good now. Short. Cricketgirl 22:20, 7 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 21:35, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  46. I'll See You in Court Copywriter000 00:17, 8 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 21:39, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  47. Iron Triangle (South Richmond), Richmond, California Copywriter000 00:17, 8 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 21:42, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  48. Roosevelt High School (Seattle) Seems like a decent article with minor flaws. Any suggestions? Also this will be the last article I'll do for awhile, I'll be back in two weeks. Showmanship is the key 19:00, 6 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 22:07, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  49. Homer's Enemy: The only objection at Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Homer's Enemy‎ appears to be copy-editing. Thank you very much for your help! --Maitch 15:03, 5 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 22:47, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  50. Westworld: think it just needs a quick once over. I massively rewrote the summary, as it had a lot of editorializing.Konczewski 02:21, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 16:38, 12 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  51. Fritz the Cat (film): Current featured article candidate. Please take a look at it, and work on the copyediting. If anyone has any specific questions or comments about the article as it is, feel free to bring them up on the talk page, and we'll discuss it. (Ibaranoff24 01:32, 11 April 2007 (UTC))[reply]
     Done Galena11 21:26, 12 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  52. Jericho, Kansas Not the biblical city. Up to The real Jericho Rintrah 15:20, 10 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    Did my best to make lists into paragraphs and limit some of the exposition. Might be helpful, but not necessary, if someone familiar with the show did the proof.Galena11 17:32, 20 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Otheus 16:46 13 April 2007 (UTC)
    (Added item deleted from Ready for final proofread (completed) via history —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 20:26, 13 April 2007 (UTC))[reply]
  53. Waite Hockin Stirling - I've done the wikification that was necessary, and some copy-editing, but some of it still doesn't flow coherently. Someone with an interest in the subject might do good to this... Cricketgirl 19:04, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Otheus 21:01 13 April 2007 (UTC)
    (Added item deleted from Ready for final proofread (completed) via history —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 14:57, 15 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  54. Baby shower Several grammar problems, fixed as many as possible. Needs proofread. Erythromycin 01:37, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Reorganized article and proofread. --Otheus 17:48, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  55. Black hair --Otheus 14:25, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Galena11 17:51, 16 April #Captain Falcon I found it in the backlog. Since it was up to FA class, I found not many flaws except there is some colloqualism. Showmanship is the key 01:28, 15 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done fixed some problems with in-universe prose, organization --Otheus 09:30, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  56. St John's wort#Botanical description: Just this section was tagged, so its an easy one. Also, they are getting concensus on the spelling--I used the one that appeared to be the winner, but advised them that they will need to change the title and spelling throughout. Galena11 16:54, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done minor fixes to that and subsequent section (ecology). --Otheus 09:45, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  57. Huilliche language: An indigenous language of Chile. Galena11 21:48, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done, however an "expert" should make sure my proofreading still renders an accurate geographical positioning of the spoken language. Comments left on talk art's page, of course. --Otheus 13:44, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  58. Xenosaga Episode I: Der Wille zur Macht: I could use some help copyediting this article. I'd like to get it to GA and eventually FA down the road. — Deckiller 22:30, 2 January 2007 (UTC) (Moved to proofread by Sigma 7 16:04, 11 March 2007 (UTC))[reply]
     Done Damn-well written article, especially given the in-game terminology required. Fixed some minor things. --Otheus 15:52, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  59. Affiliated Senior High School of National Taiwan Normal University I've done what I can with this, but it does need a more experienced eye to be cast over it. Cricketgirl 21:27, 14 March 2007 (UTC), Otterpops 19:31, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Otheus 16:18, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  60. Wave board I've made big changes tonight - someone who knows more than me could fix the pictures so that the little [edit] links don't get displaced. Also this had tags for {{tone}} and {{ad}} - I hope I've fixed the article in those respects, but a proof-read will fix this if not. Cricketgirl 20:38, 1 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Fixed pictures by using the <gallery> tag, appropriate in this case. Otherwise, you can't normally (easily) fix the Edit tags. I also standardized on naming it as a "waveboard" and created a redirect from "Waveboard" to the article. --Otheus 16:48, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  61. JLA/Avengers - Seems like a good article to me, but I'm looking for commments if it really needs proofreading to me. Showmanship is the key 00:09, 22 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Trivial amount needed to be done, but I did some reorganization, image cleanup & placement, and tag removal/adjustment. --Otheus 23:45, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  62. Coffee - The only section marked for copyedit was Coffee with food, so that's what I copyedited. Pretty short. —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 20:28, 12 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done had to move a paragraph over to another section. Not sure how it got dangled in that one. --23:53, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
  63. Golden Retriever Few fixes, deleted unness info, not much though. Proofreed needed. Erythromycin 03:57, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done minor changes, but lots of image-placement tinkering. --Otheus 00:39, 18 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  64. Ajo Motorsport short article about a Finnish motorsport team. Cricketgirl 19:56, 12 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done --Otheus 00:55, 18 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  65. North Richmond, California I'm new to this, and would appreciate any suggestments for improvement. Copywriter000 00:17, 8 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done...for now. It needs expansion and sourcing. But it's clear and concise and wikified. --Otheus 15:39, 18 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  66. Jason Aldean country music star, seems a lot better Jollyjoegiant 04:09, 6 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Otheus 16:12, 18 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  67. Disputes in English grammar - Only Arguments was explicitly marked, but I went through the whole article; most of the problems were in that section, of course. —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 21:34, 12 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done I reworked the section and opened the talk page for feedback. Otheus 16:45, 18 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  68. Nasir al-Din al-Tusi Many many fixes, see history page. Proofread needed. Erythromycin 02:21, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Interesting. 13th century polymath. Minor tweaks. --Otheus 17:00, 18 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  69. 4th Grade (South Park episode) Had problems with run on sentences, poor structure. I fixed it the best I could, short of rewriting it. Mr.Z-mantalk¢ 21:26, 13 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done but I think I killed Kenny. Otheus 17:13, 18 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  70. Gandhidham.. Did all i could. The article is still incomplete, but i guess its ready for the Proof Reading. Round 2 Significant overhaul. --Otheus 17:34, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Still needs references though. But that's not league's job :P Erythromycin 22:29, 18 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  71. F.E.A.R.. An article which I helped get to A-class, and am now looking to get featured. The prose has issues, however, and the article requires a thorough copyedit before any nomination can take place. JimmyBlackwing 19:06, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Next edit can begin at Characters and Organization. Pandora 20:58, 19 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • Copyedit complete. Needs final proofread. Pandora 15:13, 20 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Removed some unneeded and unclear text; removed some dates from the lead; minor fixes. Otheus 19:04, 20 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  72. Blue Shield of California --Erythromycin 21:10, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Cricketgirl 19:18, 21 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  73. Hither Green railway station: A train station in England. Galena11 21:31, 23 February 2007 (UTC). Round 2 reorganized and edited according to suggested TODO list. British spelling --Otheus 18:18, 17 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done still article improvement to be done according to talk page, but copyediting is done. Cricketgirl 20:59, 21 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  74. Jaggayyapeta --Otheus 14:22, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Cricketgirl 21:54, 21 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  75. Locked In Time --Otheus 14:34, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Tohru Honda13 22:51, 21 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  76. Sofia Kovalevskaya This is my first major biography copyedit, feedback appreciated. --killing sparrows 16:17, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done not much left to do. Cricketgirl 23:19, 21 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  77. Ray Stevens --Otheus 14:19, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Not much was left to fix, but this does need sources. Tohru Honda13 18:57, 22 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  78. University of Vienna --Otheus 21:55, 12 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done although the very last paragraph doesn't quite seem right to me - ideas? Cricketgirl 20:24, 22 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  79. Adnan Sami --Otheus 14:25, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Cricketgirl 20:43, 22 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  80. Abdet substantially reworked. Short.Cricketgirl 22:34, 21 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Tohru Honda13 00:38, 23 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  81. Kate Bush This is a current featured article nominee and the only current objection is that the article needs to be edited for tone by a third party. Thanks in advance. Epbr123 16:21, 24 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Cricketgirl 16:17, 25 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  82. AND1 --Otheus 14:35, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done - Nothing left to fix, except removing some vandalism. The Hippie 19:28, 28 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  83. Alternative media (U.S. political right) --Otheus 14:29, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done - Changed refs to use cite templates, wikilink disambig. —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 14:13, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  84. Plagiarism#Self-plagiarism only that section was tagged and so I did only that section. --Otheus 14:16, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done - Looks good to me. —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 14:19, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  85. Westside, Long Beach, California I had a go at this, but while the article is dominated by census statistics, it's going to be a bit clunky. Someone with a good eye needs to look at this before the copyedit tag comes off. Cricketgirl 17:59, 2 April 2007 (UTC).[reply]
    Another go and should take one more eye. Fairly short piece. --Otheus 00:03, 18 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Very much unreferenced, but better prose now. —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 14:28, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  86. Fulpmes Austrian municipality. Very short. Cricketgirl 17:15, 22 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Article doesn't make the greatest of sense, but I did the best with what I had to work with. —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 14:37, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  87. Émile Basly needed a little fixing from French. Short. Cricketgirl 23:36, 21 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 14:48, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  88. Port Angeles, Washington --Otheus 14:22, 16 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Mostly good already, I changed the verbs in Demographics from past to present (they are the "current" values) —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 15:04, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  89. Helmut Metzner I tidied this up from the German, now I think it's ready for a quick proof. Short. Cricketgirl 19:49, 21 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done —Daniel Vandersluis(talk) 15:14, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  90. Charlie O'Connell Brother of Jerry O'Connell. A tricky one for me. Excuse me if I missed a lot of things. The Hippie 22:32, 29 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Done —Daniel Vandersluisup>(talk) 15:24, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  91. Mozambican War of Independence FAC review, copy edit for prose, punctuation and sentence structure is the only main object remaining. An independent copyedit was suggested on the FAC review page, so I came to you! SGGH 09:00, 12 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    I struck the object, since Zleitzen (a capable writer) went through it. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 13:59, 12 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Not done Moved here since there is no longer a need for c/e, according to SandyGeorgia. Galena11 18:07, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  92. Albert Einstein Caution: there seems to be small community of heavily invested people living on and around this article. Between 2/28 and 3/13 I got the size way down and some kind of organization going, also checked and standardized the references that were there. The article was so active I couldn't tighten up the language very much - almost any change prompted a reversion or else sentences were added/moved around. It may help to tell them you're a physicist.~ Otterpops 14:22, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
     Not done Moving here because there doesn't seem much use in burning calories on it, due to its very active and proprietary editors. Galena11 18:18, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  93. Marriage - could do with a copyedit, with focus especially on prose style, there are some very strange turns of phrase... Dev920 (Have a nice day!) 21:59, 4 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    • I added some comments about issues in the prose and I left the POV tag; check the talk page under "Assessments of article quality and progress" to see if the editors agree that it can be removed. Galena11 22:26, 20 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
      •  Not done I'm removing this from the list, because this article is hotly contested and has had over 500 changes to the lead alone in the last few months. Its possible that few or none of my original edits are even there, so this is a lost cause until the editors arrive at agreement. Galena11 21:47, 11 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  94. Gwoyeu Romatzyh (mentioned more fully here). For aficionados of Chinese, linguistics & writing systems: a fresh pair of eyes would be most useful. --NigelG (or Ndsg) | Talk 11:27, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    Promoted FA on 3 April 2007. Many thanks. --NigelG (or Ndsg) | Talk 11:09, 30 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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